内容正文:
Task 3:1.the old people's home 2.as soon as 3.at last
4.remember to do sth.5.have a good time
6.We will plant more trees so that our school will
be more beautiful.7.As soon as we arrived at the
park,we started to pick up the rubbish on the
ground.
Task 4:1.I have a good friend who always helps me with
my English.2.Last weekend,we did some
volunteer work that was meaningful.
主题写作指导
Step1审好题,定方向
1.社区志愿活动2.说明文3.一般将来时4.第
人称5.①在社区中心的活动②在社区医院的活动
③在社区公园的活动
Step2搭框架,写句子
开头:I plan to do some volunteer work in my community.
中间:要点l:①At the community center,I plan to help
the old by singing and telling stories.2I will go to the
community center in order to help the old by singing old
songs for them and telling them funny stories.
要点2:①I'm going to visit the community hospital to cheer
up the children.2At the community hospital,I will try
my best to cheer up the sick children by talking and playing
with them.
要点3:n order to do something for our environment,I
decide to go to the community park to pick up rubbish and
help water the plants.
要点4:At the community library,I plan to work as a
volunteer to help the readers borrow and return books.
结尾:①I think it will be a wonderful experience.
2I believe I can learn a lot from these activities.
Step3成语篇,润词句
以
DI can sing songs and tell stories which might help them
relax.2I hope to visit the sick children in the community
促
hospital where I will try my best to cheer them up by talking
and playing games with them
主题7和谐家
主题核心词句
主题情境小练
1.warm family 2.clean-up activity 3.tiring
4.(to)clean the park 5.In fact/Actually
主题范文阅读
Task 1:3/Three suggestions.
Task 2:(1)how to say thanks to parents (2)feel the
warmth (3)small surprises (4)deep love
Task 3:1.help sb.with sth.2.in one's spare/free time
3.make a great difference 4.have a chat with
5.prepare sth.for sb.6.be grateful to sb.
7.Why not/Why don't you talk to your family
8.It's a good idea to smile and say hello to the
people in your community.
38
参考答案
主题写作演练
第1篇
第一节
1.Please stay friendly and smile at your new classmates
2.Introducing yourself is a good way to start a conversation
3.Try to find and talk about your common interests and hobbies
4.You should always be kind and ready to help your classmates
5.By doing these,you will be able to get along well with
your classmates
第二节
Dear John,
I'm sorry to hear that you are worrying about how to get
on with your classmates.It is common for new students to
have such problems.Here are some suggestions for you.
At first,keeping smiling is a great way to show you're
friendly.What's more,you can give a helping hand when
others are in need.Everyone wants to make friends with
people who always help others.Finally,try to find someone
who shares the same interest with you.It is a helpful way for
you to promote friendship with your classmates because you
will have more topics to talk about.
In conclusion,I really hope you will get on well with
your classmates and live a happy school life.
Li Tao
第2篇
Hello,everyone,
May I have your attention,please?This Friday
afternoon,our class is going to the school library to organize
books.
The purpose of this activity is to create a cleaner and
more comfortable environment for everyone to read.We will
meet at the library gate at 2 o'clock in the afternoon.
Firstly,we will put the books on the shelves in order.
Then,we will repair those broken books.Lastly,we will
clean the tables and chairs,and make sure that everything is
tidy.Remember to wear comfortable clothes and bring your
own gloves if you have any.
Let's work together to make our school library a better
place to read.I am looking forward to seeing you all there!
The Students'Union
庭与社区生活
Task 4:1.Why not give your parents a hand with
housework in your spare time?
2.We're supposed to express thanks to our
community volunteers.
主题写作指导
Step1审好题,定方向
1.父亲节的活动计划2.说明文3.一般将来时
4.第一、三人称5.①你想对父亲说的话②你打算为
父亲做的事③你想那样做的原因
Step2搭框架,写句子
开头:①Iwan/would like to do something meaningful to
express my thanks to my father.2I can't wait to do
something meaningful for my father.
陕西英语
中间:要点l:I really want to say,“Thank you for your
hard work and for always supporting me."
要点2:①I will cook a simple but delicious meal for him.
2I plan to make a card for him,writing down all my feelings.
要点3:①I will cook a meal for him because he often makes
delicious food for me.2I'm going to do these things
because I want to show my love and thanks.
结尾:I want to say thanks again to my father.
Step3成语篇,润词句
DAlthough my father is very busy,he often makes delicious
food for me.
②make up my mind to
主题写作演练
There are a great number of unforgettable things
happening in my family.Let me tell you about one of them.
主题8日常体育
主题核心词句
主题情境小练
1.play an important role/part 2.get sick/ill 3.good for
4.stress/pressure 5.In a word/All in all
主题范文阅读
Task 1:Playing sports has made a big difference to my life.
Task 2:(1)ball games (2)a football player (3)on the
football field (4)more colorful and meaningful
Task 3:1.play an important part/role in 2.as well as
3.dream of doing sth.4.make a big difference to
5.release pressure/stress 6.thanks to
7.Thanks to daily morning runs 8.Teamwork is
as important as personal skills in a football match.
Task 4:1.For one thing;For another 2.Training for a
marathon is very hard.However,I never give up.
3.He is not only a great player but also a good
team leader.
主题写作指导
Step1审好题,定方向
2.应用文3.一般现在时4.第三人称;第一人称
5.①Frank喜爱的运动及好处②Cindy喜爱的运动及
好处③“我”喜爱的运动及好处④总结及表达总体
感受
Step2搭框架,写句子
开头:①Here is the result of our group's discussion.
2Let me report our discussion on sports.
中间:要点l:Frank likes bike riding best because it makes
him feel free and full of energy.
要点2:Cindy's favorite sport is volleyball,and she believes
it is the best sport to make her body strong.
要点3:I prefer playing soccer because I think it's not only
good exercise but also teaches me teamwork.
结尾:①We all agree that by doing sports,we become
stronger,healthier and happier.2There is no doubt that
sports make us better in many ways.
参考答案
一花成名新中考
I still remember that day when something unforgettable
happened.On that day,as soon as the class was over,I
hurried home for lunch.I would have an exam in the
afternoon,so I wanted to go back to school early to prepare
for the exam.But when I got home,the lunch was not ready
yet.I felt a little angry,so I ran out of the house.When I
got into the classroom,I saw a lunch box on my desk.One
classmate told me that it was my mother who had brought it to
me.Then my eyes were filled with tears.
I have learned an important lesson from this experience.
It is very important for us to communicate with our family.
Every time we have trouble,we should talk with them in
time.What's more,we must learn to put ourselves in our
family's shoes.
活动,体育精神
Step3成语篇,润词句
DPlaying volleyball makes her become stronger and
stronger.2For one thing,it helps to strengthen my body.
For another,it lets me learn teamwork.3In a word/All in
all/...
主题写作演练
第1篇
As we all know,doing sports can make us strong and
healthy.More and more students take an active part in the
ball games,running and jumping on the playground.
Among all sports,I like playing football best.In my
daily life,I usually play football with my classmates on the
school playground.I also spend a wonderful time playing
football with my friends in the park at weekends.I build up
good friendship and learn to get on well with others.I love
doing sports and enjoy it a lot.
As you can see,doing sports has influenced me a lot.It
has greatly improved my physical health.I have also made a
lot of new friends who share the same interests with me.
Thanks to sports,my life has been so colorful and
读促
meaningful
第2篇
Nowadays,people pay much more attention to physical
health.For me,I take several steps to keep fit and improve
my physical health.
First,I usually do different kinds of exercise.I enjoy
jogging in the morning because it helps me stay energetic
throughout the day.Sometimes,I play basketball with my
friends,which improves my teamwork and coordination.
Second,I exercise regularly.I set a schedule and stick to
it,such as running three times a week.Besides exercise,I
also pay attention to my diet.I eat more vegetables and fruit
instead of junk food,which provides enough nutrients for my
body.
In conclusion,by exercising regularly and eating
healthily,I can improve my physical health effectively.
陕西英语
39一战成名新中考
主题7
和谐家庭与社区生活[2023:2018]
【主题角度探究】①家庭生活[2023;2018];②家居环境与社区设施;③邻里关系与社区活动
【教材主题链接】
角度
人教版教材单元&话题
家庭生活
七上U2家庭
家居环境与社区设施
七上U4房子周围的事物
八上U4城镇
邻里关系与社区活动
七下U8邻里之间
/
主题■
核心词句
A温馨提示:该主题优质写作范文见《晨读册》P19
以读促写·陕西英语
Listening to their ideas patiently is the first step to understanding them.
Try to talk to them openly and honestly,and you will build a stronger relationship.
Why not share a small part of your day with them?This could be a great start for a deeper conversation.
Although we sometimes have different opinions,we should try to see things from each other's side.
When I argue with my dad,I always try to calm down first because shouting can never solve the problem.
Instead of getting angry,I try to share my feelings with Mom so that she can understand me better.
If I realize I'm wrong,I will say "sorry"to my parents bravely,which makes the conflict end quickly.
What is the warmest "traditional program"in your home?
go camping去露营
do some cleaning大扫除
climb mountains爬山
have a family dinner家庭聚餐
take a walk after dinner饭后散步
go on a family trip去家庭旅行
watch a movie together一起看电影
cook a big dinner together一起做一顿丰盛的晚餐
visit grandparents看望(外)祖父母
go to the park for a picnic去公园野餐
spend the weekend together共度周末时光
Nothing makes me happier than watching a funny movie with my family on a Saturday night
Cooking a big meal together on Sundays has been a tradition in my family for many years.The food always tastes better
because we make it together.
On weekends,my family and I enjoy riding bicycles along the river,feeling the wind on our faces.
角度2)家居环境与社区设施(home environment and community facilities)
What furniture and electrical appliances()do you have in your home and where are they?
room房间
living room客厅
bedroom卧室
kitchen厨房
bathroom浴室
table桌子
desk书桌
chair椅子
bed床
bookshelf书架
fridge冰箱
television电视机
washing machine洗衣机
Which is your favorite place in your neighborhood?What do you usually do there?
★My favorite place is
and I often go there to
school学校
hospital医院
park公园
supermarket超市
bank银行
restaurant餐馆
post office邮局
library图书馆
cinema电影院
bookstore书店
go shopping去购物see a doctor看医生
watch a movie看电影eat out出去吃饭
next to紧邻
beside在旁边
near在附近
behind在…后面
in front of在…前面
across from在…对面
between..and..在…和…之间
on the left/right of在…的左/右边
My favorite place here is the community library,which is a quiet and bright space with tall bookshelves filled with all
kinds of books.I usually go there to read novels or do my homework after school.
What can you do to keep your homes and communities clean and beautiful?
★We can
to make our homes and communities cleaner and more beautiful.
tidy up the room整理房间
do the dishes洗餐具
take out the rubbish倒垃圾
sweep the floor扫地
clean the windows擦窗户
make the bed整理床铺
keep desks tidy保持书桌整洁
water the plants给植物浇水
pick up litter捡垃圾
clean up the park清理公园
take good care of public property爱护公物
40
以读促写·陕西英语
一战成名新中考
take part in the community clean-up参加社区大扫除
keep off the grass不踩踏草坪
remind others not to litter提醒他人不要乱扔垃圾
sort garbage into correct bins把垃圾分进正确的垃圾桶
It is our duty to do some small things to keep the community clean.
If we sort garbage into correct bins every day,we can stop the community from getting dirty.
Every weekend,I help pick up litter left on the community paths to keep them clean.
We can make simple environmental protection signs and put them up so that more neighbors will pay attention to
protecting the environment.
I usually clean my bedroom every Sunday to keep it tidy because a clean room makes me feel happy when I study.
角度3》邻里关系与社区话动(neighborhood relations and community activities】
How do you get along with your neighbors?
share home-made food分享自制食物
smile at neighbors对邻居微笑
greet neighbors politely礼貌问候邻居
keep quiet at night晚上保持安静
borrow things politely礼貌借东西
return things on time按时还东西
help carry heavy things帮忙搬重物
offer help to neighbors主动向邻居提供帮助
chat with neighbors sometimes偶尔和邻居聊天
invite neighbors to a party邀请邻居参加聚会
We'd better keep quiet at night so that neighbors who work hard during the day can have a good rest.
Every time I meet my neighbor Aunt Li in the hallway,I greet her politely,which makes her smile happily.
When living close to others,nothing is more important than respecting each other's space and privacy().
We must remember to keep the shared areas,like the hallway,clean and tidy.
Sharing our home-made cookies with neighbors not only makes them happy but also brings us closer.
If everyone tries to be a good neighbor,our community will become a big harmonious(family.
What activities are usually held in your community?
community clean-up社区大扫除
charity book sale慈善售书活动
community sports day社区运动会
neighborhood food party邻里美食派对
summer outdoor movie night夏日户外电影夜
children's toy exchange activity儿童玩具交换活动
I think the summer outdoor movie night is the most interesting because we sit on blankets,eat snacks and laugh with
neighbors together.
Last weekend,I attended a neighborhood food party with my parents.We brought home-made cakes,which made us
feel closer to our neighbors.
心主题情境小练川
意以下句子可连成一篇小作文
1.我的社区不仅仅是一个居住的地方,也是一个温暖的大家庭。
My community is not just a place to live but also a big
2.上个月,我们社区举行了一次大扫除活动,我和父母一起参加了。
Last month,our community held a(n)
and I joined it with my parents.
3.起初,我以为捡垃圾会很累,但结果很有趣。
At first,I thought picking up rubbish would be
but it turned out to be fun.
4.在活动中,我帮忙打扫公园,并从王叔叔那里学会了分类垃圾。
During the activity,I helped
and learned to sort the rubbish from Uncle Wang.
5.事实上,我们社区经常举行这样的活动,这些活动让所有邻居更亲近了。
our community often holds such activities,which make all neighbors closer.
以读促写·陕西英语
41
主题
范文阅读
Dear Mike,
亮点赏析了
I'm happy to tell you something about how to say thanks to parents.I hope
①主语从句r's well known that...引
these suggestions will help you.
出普遍认可的观点;谚语“行胜于
It's well known that actions speak louder than words.Therefore,
why
言”的应用精彩贴切。
not hel your parentth the houer in yourspare time?
②使用疑问句式why not.?提出具
seem like a simple matter,it can make a great difference and your parents will
体建议,语气亲切自然,极具感染力。
surely feel the wamth..Then,tgood idea to thank your parents by司引导让步找语从句,突
spending more time with them.You can find a quiet place and have a good chat出小小行动的重要意义。
with them often.This will help to bring you closer together.Lastly,you can
④使用固定句型it's a good idea to..
prepare small surprises for them on special days,like giving them gifts on their
提出第二条建议,增加句式多样性。
⑤动名词短语作主语:巧用高级表
birthdays to express your thanks and best wishes.
Toacoingparents isyimportant.
达be grateful to sb.,替代简单表达
When we are grateful to ou parents,wewill better understand their deep love
be thankful to sb.
⑥巧用地道的高级表达take.for
for us rather than taking everything they do for granted.
granted(认为…是理所当然),准
Yours,
确描述了一种普遍却有害的心理状
Li Hua
态,用词精准老练。
Task 1:How many suggestions are mentioned in Paragraph 2?
Task2:请根据上面的短文完成以下思维导图
Para.l:开门见山,直接表
I'm happy to tell you something about(1)
明写作目的。
How to
Para.2:从三个方面
AHelp with housework:parents will (2)
Say
提出具体感谢父母
ASpend more time with parents:have a good chat with them often
Thanks to
的建议。
▲Prepare(3)
give gifts to parents on their birthdays
Parents
Para.3:总结全文,强调感
ABeing grateful to parents is always important
恩父母的重要性并升华主
ABeing grateful to parents helps understand their(4)
题,表达感恩的深刻意义。
for us.
Tsk3:写作素材积累
1.在某方面帮助某人
2.在某人的空闲时间
3.起很大作用
4.与…聊天
5.为某人准备某物
6.感激某人
7.晚餐时,为什么不和你的家人聊聊你的一天呢?
about your day at dinner?
8.对你社区里的人微笑并问好是个好主意。[汉译英]
42
以读促写·陕西英语
一战成名新中考
Tsk4:写作微技能训练(针对亮,点赏析⑤、⑥)
1.Why not help your parents with housework in your spare time?give...a hand]
2.We should express thanks to our community volunteers.be supposed to
写作微技能点拨
巧用高级表达
在写作时,有意识地将那些最常用的基础词汇替换成意思相近但表达更丰富、更具体的高级词汇,你的文
章会立刻显得与众不同。
基础词汇
高级词汇
基础词汇
高级词汇
help
give...a hand
sometimes
once in a while/from time to time
hope
look forward to
besides
what's more/moreover
influence
make a great difference to
should
be supposed/expected to
love
fall in love with
first(ly)
to begin(start)with/first of all
like
be fond of/be interested in
second
what's more/moreover
remember
keep...in mind
be bad for
do harm to/be harmful to
use
make good/full use of
decide to do sth.
make up one's mind to do sth.
important
play an important role/part
try to do sth.
make every effort to do sth./spare no effort to do sth.
suddenly
all of a sudden
want to do sth.
would like to do sth./feel like doing sth.
主题
写作指导
[2023陕西]假如你是李涛,你们学校英语社团正在开展以“感恩”为主题的征文活动。请你认真阅读以
下通知,并按要求用英语写一篇短文,参加此次活动。
Notice
Dear students,
Fathers play a very important role in our life.Today is Father's Day.How will you thank him?Please write
a short passage about your plan.
Here are some questions to help you.
What do you want to say to him?
What are you going to do for him?
Why are you going to do that?
We are looking forward to your passage.
School English Club
参考词汇:cook a meal,make a gift,take a walk with him,delicious,special,…
要求:
1.短文必须包括所给要点,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥:
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整:
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)》
以读促写·陕西英语
43
Today is Father's Day.
Step1审好题,定方向
1.定主题:介绍
2.定文体:介绍节日计划与安排,文体属于
3.定时态:根据通知里“Please write a short passage about your plan.”可知,应用
4.定人称:根据通知里的三点提示问题可知,要以
为主;
5.定要点:①
②
;③
Step2搭框架,写句子
“感恩”父亲
Today is Father''sDay.(已给出)
开头:开篇
参考词汇:do something meaningful for.;show..to..;express.…to..
点题,引出
参考句型:①I want to.②I would like to..③I can't wait to.
父亲节计划
造句:①
这件事
②
要点①:你想对父亲说的话(What do you want to say to him?)
参考词汇:thank you for;be thankful for;love;hard work;always support me
参考句型:①I really want to say..②I would like to tell him.
造句:
要点②:你打算为父亲做的事(What are you going to do for him?)
参考词汇:cook a meal;:make a gift;make a card for him;help him wash his feet;make tea;wash his
中间:介绍
car
为父亲做的
参考句型:①I'm going to...②I plan/want/decide to...③I will..
事的具体
造句:①
计划
②
要点③:你想那样做的原因(Why are you going to do that??)
参考词汇:be busy with his work;often make delicious food for me;often buy gifts for me;help me
with...;let him rest;show my love and thanks;make him feel my love
造句:①
②
结尾:再次
参考词汇:say thanks;love you..
表达感谢
造句:
44
以读促写·陕西英语
一战成名新中考
Step3成语篇,润词句
组句成篇
润色美文
Today is Father's Day.I can't wait to do something meaningful for my father.
(针对划波浪线的句子)
Firstly,Iwill cook a meal for him.yfater is very bubut hef
①用让步状语从句升格
makes delicious food for me.So I want to thank him and let him have a rest.
Secondly,I plan to make a special gift by myself because he always buys gifts for
me,but I haven't even given him ag Sodecide to give himais ts
②用高级词汇改写划线短语:
time.What's more,I am going to take a walk with him.Then we can know each
other better.
All in all,I really love my father.And I really want to say,"Dad,I'm very
thankful for everything you have done for me and our family.I love you."
A温馨提示:润色完成后,请通篇检查一遍后在练习本上誊写下最终范文。
主题写作演练
在中国传统文化中,“家”是一个永恒的话题。家人相聚一堂,才是完整的家。假定你是李明,你校校
报正在开展以“我难忘的家庭记忆”为主题的征文活动,请你结合下图,写一篇英文短文投稿,与大家分享
一次你关于家的记忆。
mcmor
express your
日
feelings or
opinions
9
FAMILY
MEMORIES
密
What happened?
When did it happen?
What do you think of it?
Who was in the memory?
Why do you think so?
参考词汇:unforgettable,mother//father/.,love,encourage,communicate with,learn an important lesson,…
要求:
1.短文必须包括所给要点,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
There are a great number of unforgettable things happening in my family.
以读促写·陕西英语
45