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一战成名新中考
主题5劳动实践,劳动品质2024
【主题角度探究】①劳动实践;②劳动经历与感受[2024]
【教材主题链接】
角度
人教版教材单元&话题
劳动实践
八上U8烹饪
八下U3家务和许可
主题
核心词句
A温馨提示:该主题优质写作范文见《晨读册》P16
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章以下句子可连成一篇小作文
1.去年夏天,我加入了我家附近一个有趣的烹任俱乐部。
Last summer,I joined a fun
in my neighborhood.
2.起初,我以为做饭很容易,但结果却很有挑战性。
At first,I thought cooking was really
but it turned out to be quite challenging.
3.我必须学习如何切菜、炒菜和控制火候。
I had to learn how to
stir-fry them and control the heat.
4.我不断练习,厨艺也逐渐变得越来越好。
I kept practicing,and my cooking skills gradually got
5.到夏天结束时,我甚至可以为我的家人做一顿简单的饭。
summer,I could even cook a simple meal for my family.
主题
范文阅读
Labor plays an important role in our lives.
I think it is necessary and
亮点赏析了
meaningful for everyone to take part in labor.It is a must for everyone's
①宾语从句及itis+ad.+for sb.todo
education.
sh.句式强调劳动的必要性和意义。
As a middle school student,I do some labor activities every day in my daily
②使用such as和动名词短语举例
life.I often do housework at home,uch weength ordonthe
说明自己经常做的家务。
dishes,making the bed and cooking meals.At school,I often help teachers or
圆使用not only.but also.句型,
说明参与劳动的好处。
other classmates do some cleaning.Besides,I join in some garbage sorting(
分类)activities in the community.
④whih引导定语从句,补充说明
劳动带来的知识和生活技能对未来
By doingIcanny keepm body ongls get a of ne
生活的意义。
knowledge and life akillswhicba for my fulure lifeWhat is
⑤What引导的主语从句和that引导的
most important is that labor makes me feel very happy and proud of myself.
表语从句,增加文章的句式多样性。
Task1:请根据上面的短文完成以下思维导图
Para.l:强调劳动的
重要性并引出主题。
It is necessary and meaningful for everyone to (1)
Para.2:从家务劳动、学校劳动
*At home:do housework,such as sweeping the floor,doing the
dishes,making the bed and cooking meals
Labor
和社区活动三个方面具体介绍
自己的劳动实践。
At school:help teachers or classmates(2)
★(3)
join in garbage sorting activities
Labor keeps me strong,provides necessary life skills,and makes
Para.3:总结参与劳动的意义。
me feel happy and(4)
Task2:写作素材积累
1.在…中扮演重要角色
2.做家务
3.扫地
4.洗餐具
5.整理床铺
6.做饭
7.我在日常生活中总是吃健康的食物,如水果、蔬菜和鸡蛋。[汉译英]
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8.最重要的是阅读让我感到放松且快乐。
is that reading
relaxed and happy.
Task3:写作微技能训练
1.请用不同线型划出下文的主题句、支撑句、细节句、过渡词/短语、总结/升华句(主题句=“”,支撑句
=“一”,细节句=“”,过渡词/短语=“”,总结/升华句=“”)
Labor plays an important role in our life.I think it is necessary and meaningful for everyone to take part in
labor.It is a must for everyone's education.
As a middle school student,I do some labor activities every day in my daily life.First of all,I often do
housework at home,such as sweeping the floor,doing the dishes,making the bed and cooking meals.Also,at
school I often help teachers or other classmates do some cleaning.Besides,I join in some garbage sorting(
分类)activities in the community.
By doing so,I can not only keep my body strong but also get a lot of new knowledge and life skills which are
necessary for my future life.What is most important is that labor makes me feel very happy and proud of myself.
2.写出主题句和支撑句
In China,there are many traditional festivals.(1)
_(写出主题句)If's also called Tomb-sweeping Day.The meaning of it is to honor
the ancestors(a祖先),and it has a history of more than2,500 years.
People can do many things on the Qingming Festival.(2)
(写出2个支撑句)》
写作微技能点拨
如何组织段落
类型
功能
典型位置
关系比喻
主题句
概括段落或文章的核心观点
段首或段尾
领导者:指明方向
支撑句
所有用来解释、证明、阐述主题句的句子
主题句之后
团队:共同完成目标
细节句
提供具体的例子、数据、步骤等
支撑句内部
团队里的实干家:提供具体证据
过渡词/短语连接句子或观点,使文章流畅
句首或句中
粘合剂:让结构紧密连贯
过渡句
承上启下,连接两个段落或两个主要观点
段首、段尾或独立成段桥梁:连接不同的内容板块
总结句
回顾并重申段落或文章的主要观点
段落或文章结尾
归纳者:总结重点,回应开头
升华句
在总结基础上,提升主题高度,强调深层意义
文章结尾
点睛之笔:深化内涵,留下深刻印象
主题
写作指导
从2022年秋季开始,劳动课已正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。在你的生活中,你可能已经掌握了很
多劳动技能。假如你是李涛,你校英语社团正在开展以“Labor Makes Me a Better Person”为主题的征文活动。
请你根据以下要点提示,用英语写一篇短文,参加此次活动。
提示:
Describe the reasons for carrying out labor education;
Introduce the labor skill(s)that you are good at;
。Your gain(收获)and feelings.
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要求:
1.短文应包含要点提示所给的全部信息,可适当发挥:
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Labor Makes Me a Better Person
Labor Education has been included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China.
Step1审好题,定方向
1.定主题:劳动使我成为一个更好的人:
2.定文体:根据要点提示可知,文体属于
3.定人称:根据征文主题“Labor Makes Me a Better Person'”可知,应以
为主;
4.定时态:根据写作要点可知,三点均为介绍客观事实,应用
5.定要点:①
;②
;③
:④表达希望或发起号召(补充)。
Step2搭框架,写句子
Labor Makes Me a Better Person
要点①:引出主题,介绍开展劳动教育的原因
Labor Education has been included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China.(
开
参考句型:①Labor plays an important role/part in.②Labor is good for/is helpful in.·
头
3I think labor is necessary because...
4In order to...,we're supposed to...
造句:
要点②:介绍“我”擅长的劳动技能
参考词?汇:do chores;wash clothes;sweep the floor;walk the dog;cook meals;:do some dishes
参考句型:①m very good at..②When I'm free,I often help my parents...
3As for me,I often do some chores at home,such as...
造句:
女
要点③:“我”的感受与收获
间
参考词汇:develop independence;take good care of myself;provide me with new life skills
参考句型:①By doing these,I can not only..but also..②Through labor activities,I have learned..
3What is most important is that labor makes me...
造句:①
②
要点④:总结参与劳动的意义并发起号召
结
参考句型:①There is no doubt that...②It brings us not only..but also.
尾
3Let's take an active part in...
造句:
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Step3成语篇,润词句
组句成篇
润色美文
Labor Makes Me a Better Person
(针对划波浪线的句子)
①请在▲处补充一个支撑句(有关
Labor Education has been included in the education of middle schools and
你擅长的劳动技能带给你的
primary schools in China.As we all know,labor plays an important role in our
收获)
daily lives.I think it is good for our health and makes us relaxed from hard
study.
I am very good at cooking.I always cook meals for my parents on
weekends.In my opinion,cooking is a very important and necessary life
②用so..hat.结果状语从句升格
skill,through which I have developed independence.Besides,
I wrdor is ver developmento
value it and do more labor in our spare time.
A温馨提示:润色完成后,请通篇检查一遍后在练习本上誊写下最终范文。
主题■
写作演练
校学生会正在筹备“校园劳动日”活动,并向全体学生征求活动创意。请你用英语写一篇短文,向学生
会分享你的想法。
Notice
Dear students,
Our school is preparing for School Labor Day activities.We haven't decided on which activities to choose.
Now,we want to know your opinions about it.What activities do you suggest?Why?Please write down your
reasons.
The Students'Union
参考词汇:organize,gardening project,school clean-up,plant trees,cooking,teamwork(n.团队合作),life
skills,labor education(劳动教育),.
要求:
1.短文必须包括所给要点,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)》
I'm expecting to take part in our School Labor Day activities.In my opinion,
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2I will read some books about managing myself so that I can
each of us.Here are some suggestions to achieve that.
get helpful suggestions from experts.
First of all,we should be polite to everyone.Saying
主题写作演练
“please”and“thank you”often is good manners..
第一节
Second,we are also supposed to be kind to each other.We
1.It is important for middle school students to have good
should get along well with our teachers and classmates.
manners.2.It is a good habit to use polite language often.
When someone is in trouble,we should offer a helping hand.
3.Being kind to others can help us make more friends.
Besides,we must be strict with ourselves.It's very important
4.We should get along well with our classmates and help
for us to follow the school rules.For example,we must get to
each other.5.It is our responsibility to strictly follow all
school on time and listen to the teachers carefully in class.
the rules.
Moreover,we should keep our school clean and tidy.
第二节
Actions speak louder than words.Let's start with small
To be a good-mannered student is very important for
things around us.
主题5劳动实践,劳动品质
主题核心词句
主题写作指导
主题情境小练
Step1审好题,定方向
1.cooking club 2.easy 3.cut vegetables 4.better and
2.说明文3.第一人称4.一般现在时5.①介绍开
better 5.By the end of
展劳动教育的原因②介绍擅长的劳动技能③收获与
主题范文阅读
感受
Step2搭框架,写句子
Task 1:(1)take part in labor (2)do some cleaning
1:I think labor is necessary because it helps us to
(3)In the community (4)proud of myself
understand the value of hard work and become more
Task 2:1.play an important role in 2.do housework
responsible people.
chores 3.sweep the floor 4.do the dishes
要点2:When'I m free,I often help my parents do some
5.make the bed 6.cook meals 7.I always eat
dishes and walk the dog.
healthy food in my daily life,such as fruits,
要点3:①Through labor activities,I have learned how to
vegetables and eggs.8.What is most important;
take good care of myself.2By doing these.I can not only
makes me feel
develop independence but also better understand and respect
Task 3:1.
all workers.
Labor plays an important role in our life.I think it is
要点4:Let's take an active part in labor activities and enjoy
the benefits it brings to us.
necessary and meaningful for everyone to take part in labor.
Step3成语篇,润词句
It is a must for everyone's education.
Dthe most important thing is that labor makes me feel a great
As a middle school student,I do some labor activities
sense of achievement.
2labor is so important for our
every day in my daily life.First of all,I often do housework
development that we should value it and do more labor in our
at home,such as sweeping the floor,doing the dishes.
spare time.
making the bed and cooking meals.Also:at school I often
主题写作演练
help teachers or other classmates do some cleaning.
I'm expecting to take part in our School Labor Day
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Besides,I join in some恩bage sorting(坟圾分类】
activities.In my opinion,students can benefit a lot from this
event.As for me,it's a good choice to organize a school
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activities in the community.
By doing so,I can not only keep my body strong but
gardening project.
also get a lot of new knowledge and life skills which are
To start with,students can work together to plant and
necessary for my future life.What is most important is that
develop a sense of teamwork.In addition,this project can
labor makes me feel very happy and proud of myself.
enable us to learn something in a more pleasant environment.
2.(1)The Qingming Festival is one of the most important
More importantly,by learning gardening,we can get
practical skills that we can use throughout our lives.I believe
traditional festivals in China.(2)People will go back home
the event will provide students with an excellent opportunity
to visit the tombs of their relatives and friends,and usually
to learn about the importance of labor education.
put some flowers in front of them.Besides,they also go out
I do hope that my suggestions will be helpful.
to have fun,such as flying kites and going hiking.
主题6人际交往与志愿服务
主题核心词句
主题范文阅读
主题情境小练
Task 1:To invite John to join in the volunteer activity
1.get on/along well with 2.In my opinion 3.arguments
Task 2:(1)the volunteer activity (2)clean their rooms
4.spend more time 5.actively share
(3)take a camera (4)learn a lot
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