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英语 1 2 主题5 劳动实践， 劳动品质［2024］ 3 【主题角度探究】①劳动实践； ②劳动经历与感受［2024］ 【教材主题链接】 角度 人教版教材单元&话题 劳动实践 八上U8烹饪 八下U3家务和许可 4 温馨提示： 该主题优质写作范文见《晨读册》P16 劳动实践(labor practice) What labor skills are you good at?/What kind of labor activities do you usually take part in? ★①I often do some housework at home， such as __________________. ②I'm very good at . ________________________________________ .. 5 do housework/chores 做家务 clean the room 打扫房间 sweep the floor 扫地 do the dishes 洗餐具 wash clothes 洗衣服 make the/one's bed 整理床铺 take out the rubbish 倒垃圾 cook meals 做饭 clean the blackboard 擦黑板 tidy the book corner 整理图书角 water the school plants 给学校植物浇水 organize the classroom desks 整理教室的课桌 do farm work 干农活 do part-time jobs 做兼职工作 visit the old people's home 探访养老院 pick up litter in the park 在公园捡垃圾 volunteer at the community center 在社区中心做志愿者 What do you think of labor practice? meaningful and valuable 有意义且有价值的 develop a sense of responsibility 培养责任感 get a sense of achievement 获得成就感 understand parents' hard work 理解父母的辛苦 learn new life skills 学习新的生活技能 build teamwork spirit 培养团队合作精神 treasure the fruits of labor 珍惜劳动果实 No one can achieve anything without hard work.#2.8 7 Although labor might seem tiring， it brings us a strong sense of satisfaction. It is through these labor experiences that I have come to understand how much effort my parents have put in. Labor not only brings me a lot of pleasure but also helps me to better understand and respect all workers.#2.11 8 劳动经历与感受(labor experiences and feelings) Did you have any special labor experiences and how did you feel about them? On a sunny Sunday morning， I joined a community clean-up together with my friends， which made my weekend full of meaning. Even though it was tiring to clean the classroom that day， I felt a strong sense of achievement and pride when I saw everything was tidy and organized. 9 It was this experience that taught me the true meaning of “No pain， no gain.” Through this experience， not only did I learn some practical skills， but I also found great joy in creating something with my own hands. 以下句子可连成一篇小作文 1.去年夏天， 我加入了我家附近一个有趣的烹饪俱乐部。 Last summer， I joined a fun _____________ in my neighborhood. 2.起初， 我以为做饭很容易， 但结果却很有挑战性。 At first， I thought cooking was really _____， but it turned out to be quite challenging. cooking club easy 11 3.我必须学习如何切菜、炒菜和控制火候。 I had to learn how to ______________， stir-fry them and control the heat. cut vegetables 4.我不断练习， 厨艺也逐渐变得越来越好。 I kept practicing， and my cooking skills gradually got _______________ ______. better and better 5.到夏天结束时， 我甚至可以为我的家人做一顿简单的饭。 _______________ summer， I could even cook a simple meal for my family. By the end of 12 Labor plays an important role in our lives. ① I think it is necessary and meaningful for everyone to take part in labor. It is a must for everyone's education. As a middle school student， I do some labor activities every day in my daily life. I often do housework at home，② such as sweeping the floor， doing the dishes， making the bed and cooking meals. At school， I often help teachers or other classmates do some cleaning. Besides， I join in some garbage sorting(垃圾分类) activities in the community. 13 By doing so， I can ③ not only keep my body strong but also get a lot of new knowledge and life skills ④ which are necessary for my future life. ⑤ What is most important is that labor makes me feel very happy and proud of myself.#1.2 ①宾语从句及it is+adj.+for sb. to do sth.句式强调劳动的必要性和意义。 ②使用such as和动名词短语举例说明自己经常做的家务。 ③使用not only… but also…句型， 说明参与劳动的好处。 ④which引导定语从句， 补充说明劳动带来的知识和生活技能对未来生活 的意义。 ⑤What引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句， 增加文章的句式多样性。 15 Task 1：请根据上面的短文完成以下思维导图 16 Task 2： 写作素材积累 1.在……中扮演重要角色 _________________________ 2.做家务 ____________________ 3.扫地 ________________ 4.洗餐具 ______________ 5.整理床铺 ______________ play an important role in do housework/chores sweep the floor do the dishes make the bed 17 6.做饭 ____________ cook meals 7.我在日常生活中总是吃健康的食物， 如水果、蔬菜和鸡蛋。［汉译英］ ________________________________________________________________ ____________________ I always eat healthy food in my daily life， such as fruits， vegetables and eggs. 8.最重要的是阅读让我感到放松且快乐。 ________________________ is that reading _______________ relaxed and happy. What is most important makes me feel 18 Task 3： 写作微技能训练 1.请用不同线型划出下文的主题句、支撑句、细节句、过渡词/短语、总结 /升华句(主题句=“____”， 支撑句=“ ”， 细节句=“ ”， 过渡词/短 语=“........”， 总结/升华句=“ ”) Labor plays an important role in our life. I think it is necessary and meaningful for everyone to take part in labor. It is a must for everyone's education. 19 As a middle school student， I do some labor activities every day in my daily life. First of all， I often do housework at home， such as sweeping the floor， doing the dishes， making the bed and cooking meals. Also， at school I often help teachers or other classmates do some cleaning. Besides， I join in some garbage sorting(垃圾分类) activities in the community. By doing so， I can not only keep my body strong but also get a lot of new knowledge and life skills which are necessary for my future life. What is most important is that labor makes me feel very happy and proud of myself.#5.4 Labor plays an important role in our life. I think it is necessary and meaningful for everyone to take part in labor. It is a must for everyone's education. As a middle school student， I do some labor activities every day in my daily life. First of all， I often do housework at home， such as sweeping the floor， doing the dishes， making the bed and cooking meals. Also， at school I often help teachers or other classmates do some cleaning. Besides， I join in some garbage sorting(垃圾分类) activities in the community. 21 By doing so， I can not only keep my body strong but also get a lot of new knowledge and life skills which are necessary for my future life. What is most important is that labor makes me feel very happy and proud of myself. 2.写出主题句和支撑句 In China， there are many traditional festivals.(1) _________________ _______________________________________________________________ (写出主题句) It's also called Tomb-sweeping Day. The meaning of it is to honor the ancestors(祖先)， and it has a history of more than 2，500 years. People can do many things on the Qingming Festival. (2)__________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ (写出2个支撑句) The Qingming Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. People will go back home to visit the tombs of their relatives and friends， and usually put some flowers in front of them. Besides， they also go out to have fun， such as flying kites and going hiking. 23 如何组织段落#6.1 类型 功能 典型位置 关系比喻 主题句 概括段落或文章的核心观 点 段首或段尾 领导者：指明方向 支撑句 所有用来解释、证明、阐 述主题句的句子 主题句之后 团队：共同完成目标 细节句 提供具体的例子、数据、 步骤等 支撑句内部 团队里的实干家：提 供具体证据 24 类型 功能 典型位置 关系比喻 过渡词/ 短语 连接句子或观点，使 文章流畅 句首或句中 粘合剂：让结构紧密连贯 过渡句 承上启下，连接两个 段落或两个主要观点 段首、段尾或 独立成段 桥梁：连接不同的内容板 块 续表 总结句 回顾并重申段落或文章的主要观点 段落或文章 结尾 归纳者：总结重点，回应开头 升华句 在总结基础上，提升主题高度，强调深层意义 文章结尾 点睛之笔：深化内涵，留下深刻印象 25 从2022年秋季开始， 劳动课已正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。在 你的生活中， 你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能。假如你是李涛， 你校英 语社团正在开展以“Labor Makes Me a Better Person”为主题的征文活动。 请你根据以下要点提示， 用英语写一篇短文， 参加此次活动。 提示： ●Describe the reasons for carrying out labor education； ●Introduce the labor skill(s) that you are good at； ●Your gain(收获)and feelings. 26 要求： 1.短文应包含要点提示所给的全部信息， 可适当发挥； 2.语句正确， 意思通顺、连贯， 书写规范； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数： 不少于70。(开头已给出， 但不计入总词数。) Labor Makes Me a Better Person Labor Education has been included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China._______________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 27 Step 1 审好题， 定方向 1.定主题： 劳动使我成为一个更好的人； 2.定文体： 根据要点提示可知， 文体属于 ________； 3.定人称： 根据征文主题“Labor Makes Me a Better Person”可知， 应以 __________为主； 4.定时态： 根据写作要点可知， 三点均为介绍客观事实， 应用 ____________； 5.定要点： ① ________________________； ② ____________________； ③ ____________；④表达希望或发起号召(补充)。 说明文 第一人称 一般现在时 介绍开展劳动教育的原因 介绍擅长的劳动技能 收获与感受 28 Step 2 搭框架， 写句子 Labor Makes Me a Better Person 开头 要点①：引出主题， 介绍开展劳动教育的原因 Labor Education has been included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China.(已给出) 参考句型： ①Labor plays an important role/part in… ②Labor is good for/is helpful in… ③I think labor is necessary because… ④In order to…， we're supposed to… 造句： __________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ __________________ I think labor is necessary because it helps us to understand the value of hard work and become more responsible people. 29 Labor Makes Me a Better Person 中间 要点②：介绍“我”擅长的劳动技能 参考词汇： do chores； wash clothes； sweep the floor； walk the dog； cook meals； do some dishes 参考句型： ①I'm very good at… ②When I'm free， I often help my parents… ③As for me， I often do some chores at home， such as… 造句： __________________________________________________ ________________________ When I'm free， I often help my parents do some dishes and walk the dog. 续表 30 Labor Makes Me a Better Person 中间 要点③：“我”的感受与收获 参考词汇： develop independence； take good care of myself； provide me with new life skills 参考句型： ①By doing these， I can not only… but also… ②Through labor activities， I have learned… ③What is most important is that labor makes me… 续表 31 Labor Makes Me a Better Person 中间 造句： ①________________________________________________ _______________________ ②_______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________ Through labor activities， I have learned how to take good care of myself. By doing these， I can not only develop independence but also better understand and respect all workers. 续表 32 Labor Makes Me a Better Person 结尾 要点④：总结参与劳动的意义并发起号召 参考句型： ①There is no doubt that… ②It brings us not only… but also… ③Let's take an active part in… 造句： __________________________________________________ _____________________________ Let's take an active part in labor activities and enjoy the benefits it brings to us. 续表 33 组句成篇 润色美文 Labor Makes Me a Better Person Labor Education has been included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. As we all know， labor plays an important role in our daily lives. I think it is good for our health and makes us relaxed from hard study. I am very good at cooking. I always cook meals for my parents on weekends. In my opinion， cooking is a very important and necessary life skill， through which I have developed independence. Besides， ①▲ In a word， ②labor is very important for ourdevelopment， so we should value it and do more labor in our spare time. (针对划波浪线的句子) ①请在▲处补充一个支撑句(有关你擅长的劳动技能带给你的收获) ______________________ ______________________ ______________________ ②用so… that…结果状语从句升格 ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ the most important thing is that labor makes me feel a great sense of achievement. 续表 Step 3 成语篇， 润词句 labor is so important for our development that we should value it and do more labor in our spare time. 温馨提示： 润色完成后， 请通篇检查一遍后在练习本上誊写下最终范文。 34 校学生会正在筹备“校园劳动日”活动， 并向全体学生征求活动创意。 请你用英语写一篇短文， 向学生会分享你的想法。 Notice Dear students， Our school is preparing for School Labor Day activities. We haven't decided on which activities to choose. Now， we want to know your opinions about it. What activities do you suggest? Why? Please write down your reasons. The Students' Union 35 参考词汇： organize， gardening project， school clean-up， plant trees， cooking， teamwork(n. 团队合作)， life skills， labor education (劳动教育)， … 要求： 1.短文必须包括所给要点， 选择使用参考词汇， 可适当发挥； 2.语句正确， 意思通顺、连贯， 书写规范； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数： 不少于70。(开头已给出， 但不计入总词数。) 36 I'm expecting to take part in our School Labor Day activities. In my opinion， _______________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ students can benefit a lot from this event. As for me， it's a good choice to organize a school gardening project. To start with， students can work together to plant and develop a sense of teamwork. In addition， this project can enable us to learn something in a more pleasant environment. More importantly， by learning gardening， we can get practical skills that we can use throughout our lives. I believe the event will provide students with an excellent opportunity to learn about the importance of labor education. I do hope that my suggestions will be helpful. 37 $