Unit 2 Section Ⅵ Writing-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第四册配套课件PPT（外研版）

　Writing Section Ⅵ 写作项目——Writing a summary 本单元的写作任务是写文学作品的剧情概要，属于概要写作的范畴。概要写作属于应用文的一种，即读者在正确理解文章的基础上，在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩主要内容和观点。写作时要首先根据文章体裁特点决定内容的取舍，然后找出主题句或关键词(组)，最后，根据阅读时获取的信息、主题句或关键词(组)等，对相关的内容进行整合，厘清各层次、要点之间的关系，用自己的语言把词(组)扩展成句，概括出文章的大意。 |由教材学写作| 一、学文体架构 (一)析教材课文 Para.1：The introduction of the main characters, setting and start of the play The Blue Bird. Para.2：The main plot and the theme of the play The Blue Bird. (二)根据教材课文呈现的概要写作，可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下： 二、学写作手法 本文采用“总－分”结构，第一段首句介绍作品名和作者，接下来概括故事情节的发展、高潮和结局，并揭示主题。  三、学顺承衔接 第二段第一句是承上启下的过渡句；第二段使用了表示转折的让步状语从句Although they ...和并列连词but与and，一步一步将故事的发展推向高潮；本段最后一句概括此作品的中心思想。故事情节发展的层层推进，衔接词的合理使用使文章浑然一体。 四、学亮点表达 1．第一段第一句使用了过去分词短语written by引出该作品的作者，第二句使用了高级词汇search for，第三句使用了高级句式be doing ...when ...，最后一句使用了in search of，体现出较强的语言表达能力。 2．第二段使用了高级词汇encounter, departed, either ...or以及现在分词短语作后置定语和结果状语，that引导的定语从句和although引导的让步状语从句，着力描写了Tyltyl和Mytyl在寻找青鸟的旅程中付出的艰辛。最后一句中使用连词短语not ...but ...，强调了幸福的真谛，揭示了该作品的主题思想。 [提能训练|完成句子] ①The following day, Lily __________________________________ she heard an unexpected knock. 第二天，莉莉正在做她的餐厅例行工作，突然听到一声意外的敲门声。 ②By the 1850s, it was selling one million copies a year, _________ _______________________________________. 到19世纪50年代为止，该书的年销售量达到一百万册，成为有史以来最受欢迎的教科书之一。 was doing her restaurant routine when making it one of the most popular school books ever ③_______________________________________________ really counts. 不是这部短片，而是短片中播放的内容才真正有价值。 It is not the short movie but what is shown in it that |具体写作指导| 1．开头段 介绍作者的姓名、书名及有关作者的简要信息。可结合作者所处的时代特点来写其生平，还可写出促使作者创作本作品的历史条件等。良好的开篇段落能抓住读者的注意力，促使他们产生读下去的热切欲望。 ①The story _______________a brave young man. 这个故事主要是关于一个勇敢的年轻人的。 is mainly about ②Dark Materials by the English writer, Philip Pullman, is______________________________. 英国作家菲利普·普尔曼的《黑暗物质》是最伟大的奇幻小说之一。 ③_________________, it has sold 18 million copies and has been translated into more than 40 languages. 该书于1995年出版，已售出1 800万册，并被翻译成40多种语言。 one of the greatest fantasy novels Published in 1995 2．主体段 如果是小说，要对情节做简要概括，要特别注意概要的客观性，内容完整且忠实于原著；如果不是小说，则要点明写作目的和主题。故事概要可使用现在时，但在为非小说类作品写概要时，则需按照原著的时态。 ①The great Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance.____________, on the way the ship became stuck in the ice,____________________.Having abandoned the ship, they escaped to Elephant Island.Shackleton was ______________he left them to look for help by himself.In the end they were able to survive _____________ ________________. 伟大的沙克尔顿和他的船员登上了名为“耐力号”的船。不幸的是，在途中，这艘船被困在冰中，沉入大海。弃船后，他们逃到了象岛。沙克尔顿非常勇敢，他离开他们独自寻求帮助。尽管困难重重，他们最终还是活了下来。 Unfortunately sinking into the ocean so brave that in spite of so many difficulties ②The heroine is a girl called Lyra and the hero is a boy called Will.In the first book, Lyra's father, a scientist, _______________that the children enter other worlds, where they have many extraordinary adventures and _________________________a war that could destroy the universe. 女主人公是一个叫莱拉的女孩，男主人公是一个叫威尔的男孩。在第一本书中，莱拉的父亲是一名科学家，他让孩子们有可能进入其他世界，在那里他们进行了许多非凡的冒险，并在一场可能摧毁宇宙的战争中发挥了重要作用。 makes it possible play an important part in 3．结尾段 对作品的评价和议论是写作的核心部分。在这一部分中，可以提出对作品的看法，评价它的优缺点，讨论它对现在及将来的影响等等。 ①________________________ cures the bad-tempered beast. 是那个贫穷女孩的爱治愈了这头坏脾气的野兽。 ②The characters in this story are such ___________________most readers like them. 这个故事里的人物是那么善解人意，大多数读者都喜欢他/她们。 It is the poor girl's love that considerate ones that ③In the face of danger, they act so bravely that they ___________ ____________________. 面对困难，他们表现得如此勇敢，以至于他们使读者深受感动。 ④This is an inspiring story,_____________________________. 这是一个非常鼓舞人心的故事，我从中学到很多。 ⑤From this story, we have learned that only by working hard_____________________. 从这个故事中，我们学到的是：一个人只有努力工作才能成功。 make the readers moved deeply from which I have learned a lot can a person succeed [针对练笔] 《百万英镑》是马克·吐温(Mark Twain)的代表作之一，深受全世界青少年读者的喜爱。它以幽默讽刺的语言向我们讲述了一个美国穷小子亨利·亚当斯在伦敦的奇遇。试根据所给提示补全下面短文，并尝试在英语课上为同学们介绍小说《百万英镑》。 Today, I am going to introduce to you a novel. This novel is called The Million Pound Bank Note, ①___________ ____________ (由马克·吐温所著)．②___________________________ _________________ (通过幽默讽刺的语言), Mark Twain successfully described the wonderful adventure of Henry Adams, a poor American guy, in London.Two rich men in London had a bet on him and wanted to see what would become of him a month later if they gave him a million pound bank note which couldn't be cashed.A month later, Henry was neither starved nor arrested, but became a millionaire.What's more, he even won the love of a pretty lady. written by Mark Twain Through humorous and sarcastic language The novel ③______________________________________ (被认为是最著名的作品之一) of Mark Twain.It ④_______________________ __________ (非常受青少年的欢迎) throughout the world. This is ⑤_____________________________ (对这个故事的简要介绍)．Hope you will enjoy reading this representative work of Mark Twain. is considered one of the most famous works is very popular with teenagers a brief introduction to the story |写作素材储备| (一)背写作词汇 1．background n．　　　　　　背景 2．heroic adj. 英雄的 3．legend n. 传奇 4．signature n. 签名 5．adventure n. 冒险 6．enthusiasm n. 热情 7．challenge n. 挑战 8．open up 打开 9．be famous as 作为……而闻名 10．a series of 一系列 (二)背写作佳句 1．Since the novel was published, it has been popular among children as well as adults.自从这部小说出版以来，就受到了孩子们和成年人的欢迎。 2．Robinson Crusoe is a novel written by the English author Daniel Defoe, which is a widely influential masterpiece. 《鲁滨逊漂流记》是英国作家丹尼尔·笛福的一部小说，是一部影响广泛的杰作。 3．Jane Eyre is a masterpiece of the famous British writer Charlotte Brontë and one of the most classic works in the British history of literature. 《简·爱》是英国著名作家夏洛蒂·勃朗特的代表作，也是英国文学史上最经典的作品之一。 4．Having read the first four chapters of Great Expectations by Charles Dickens, I'm glad to share part of the story here with you. 读完了查尔斯·狄更斯的《远大前程》的前四章，我很高兴在这里与大家分享故事的一部分。 5．This novel tells the story of Huckleberry, a boy who lost his parents when he was very young. 这部小说讲述了哈克贝利的故事，这个小男孩在很小的时候就失去了父母。 6．The central idea of the play is to look for what's good for you even in desperate situations and always be optimistic and enthusiastic about life. 该剧的中心思想是，即使在绝望的情况下，也要寻找对你有利的东西，并始终对生活保持乐观和热情。 课时跟踪检测 一、写作专项训练 Ⅰ.靓表达升级(10分) 1．Robinson Crusoe by Daniel Defoe, which is based on a true story, is one of the world's most popular adventure novels.(用过去分词作状语升级) Based on a true story, Robinson Crusoe by Daniel Defoe is one of the world's most popular adventure novels. → 2．However, on a voyage, he encounters some accidents, and is carried to a deserted island by the wind and waves.He loses touch with the outside world and spends 28 hard years.(用定语从句合并句子) However, on a voyage, he encounters some accidents, and is carried to a deserted island by the wind and waves, where he loses touch with the outside world and spends 28 hard years. → 3．Fortunately, he is found and rescued eventually, and reunited with his family, bringing the abnormal life to an end.(用so that 引导的状语从句升级) Fortunately, he is found and rescued eventually so that he is reunited with his family, bringing the abnormal life to an end. 4．The courage and perseverance to get over difficulties make him survive on the deserted island.(用强调句型对主语进行强调) It is the courage and perseverance to get over difficulties that make him survive on the deserted island. 5．He is able to find ways to solve the problem by working hard.(用“only＋状语”引导的倒装句升级) Only by working hard is he able to find ways to solve the problem. → → Ⅱ.微语境写作 (共9空，18分) 1．The big day finally came.Every actor and actress ___________ _________ (表现出了最佳水平), ____________________________(给观众留下了深刻的印象)． 2．Preparations started right after the discussion.Though most of us ______________________(不擅长戏剧), we all had the confidence to have a try.We __________________________________(为戏剧做了充分的准备)and _______________________________________________ (所有的男女演员都投入到排练中)． performed at their best impressing the audience greatly were not good at drama made good preparations for the drama all our actors and actresses were devoted to the practice 3．The members of English Drama Club will perform the highlights of Macbeth and King Lear, which are __________________ ________________________________________________ (莎士比亚的代表作，也是英国文学的瑰宝)．This is _________________________ _______ (一个欣赏经典的机会) and pay tribute to literary giants. the masterpieces of Shakespeare as well as the treasure of English literature a chance to appreciate the classics 4．As you know, the English Drama Festival will be held in our school next month.We ___________________________(计划排演一个短剧) named Alice in Wonderland, ______________________________ ___________ (它是根据一部同名电影改编的)． plan to rehearse a short play which is based on a movie of the same title Ⅲ.应用文写作(15分) 假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部即将举办文学名著读书会。请你为莎士比亚(Shakespeare)的《威尼斯商人》(The Merchant of Venice)写一篇概要，并在读书会上与大家分享。概要的内容包括： 1．作品名称及作者； 2．剧情介绍； 3．作品的意义及你的感受。 注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考范文： The Merchant of Venice is one of Shakespeare's plays.Bassanio, a noble but penniless Venetian, asks his friend Antonio for a loan so that he can undertake a journey to woo Portia.Antonio, whose money is invested in foreign ventures, borrows money from Shylock in order to assist Bassanio.However, if the loan cannot be repaid in time, Antonio will give Shylock a pound of flesh. News arrives that Antonio's ships have been lost at sea.Unable to get his money back, Shylock attempts to enforce a terrible revenge on Antonio, demanding his pound of flesh.However, Portia turns the tables on Shylock by an argument: he must take the flesh only, and Shylock must die if any blood is spilled.Thus, the contract is canceled. This play, in my opinion, focuses on several main themes, such as friendship and the strength of women.It teaches me to treat others kindly and cherish friendship. Therefore, it is definitely worth reading. Ⅳ.概要写作(25分) 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 There are many good reasons for adding recycling to your routine, ranging from a personal level to a global advantage.Recycling your waste makes you more responsible in the way you use and dispose of it.As a result, people end up saving a considerable amount of money while also saving the planet.Individuals, governing bodies and companies can take pride in minimizing their waste as they are helping to reduce global environmental damage and making this earth a better place. Apart from the environmental benefits, think of the employment that it can generate.You put your waste in different bins.The manpower involved in the logistics and processing of your waste is considerable and thus you are helping to keep people in jobs.What could be more helpful in tough economic times as now than keeping people employed? That is not all of the advantages of recycling.Many charities and community groups raise money through reusing and recycling goods.Your city has many charity shops that will take your unwanted clothes, electronics, furniture and other household items to resell as income for these nonprofit organizations and these donations are also tax deductible for you.Some other not-for-profit charities will deliver such clothing and other items to underdeveloped communities around the globe.So, think of the people in need in your local community and in other nations before you throw away all those unused or uneaten stuff into the trash can next time. When we talk about recycling household and workplace things, we tend to ignore or are less aware of how to deal with the electrical and electronic waste.E-waste is valuable as a source of secondary raw material but poisonous if disposed of improperly.Due to rapid technology development, obsolescent (过时的) items have created a fast-growing mass of electronic waste around the globe. 参考范文： Recycling is beneficial to the environment in terms of not only every individual but also the overall planet.(要点1) It can also help create jobs and keep people employed, generating employment.(要点2) In addition, charities and community groups can help those in need through people's recycling of goods.(要点3) We should also pay more attention to the problem of e-waste.(要点4) 二、阅读拓展训练 阅读七选五 Bettering yourself is a crucial ability that can help you live a happier life. 1 . Read more books There are books on virtually everything. So, reading more books can not only help you explore your current interests, but also develop new ones. 2 . Some books are written specifically with the intention of helping you start working on self-improvement and personal growth. Even a fiction novel can do wonders for you. The most vital thing is that you have to read about them. Spend more time outdoors Find opportunities to spend more time outdoors. If you have access to areas of nature, consider spending time there. A recent investigation demonstrates that even a short 15-minute walk in the forest can decrease negative moods like anxiety and depression. 3 . For example, make sure you have good hiking shoes if you begin hiking. 4 Kindness is one of the best ways to become a better you. First, it's free. It doesn't require much effort to be kind instead of indifferent or unkind. Second, it can help you feel much better about yourself. Third, it can improve other people's lives as well. Showing kindness requires you to become more aware of those around you. By doing so, you'll notice more of what people need, even when they don't say it. Write in a journal 5 . You can also practice how to become more aware of your own thoughts. An investigation reveals that writing in a journal can improve your welfare and decrease mental distress (忧虑). When you start writing in your journal, just write down what comes to your mind, and don't judge what comes out. A．Care for others B．Practice kindness toward others C．You can even learn a new skill with a book D．There are several reasons for keeping working on yourself E．Here are some tips for becoming a better version of yourself F．You can write about the things you're grateful for in your journal G．If you take up an outdoor activity, make sure you're well equipped for it 语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章围绕自我提升展开，指出自我提升能让人过上更幸福的生活，并介绍了几种自我提升的方法，包括多读书、多花时间在户外、对他人友善以及写日记。 1．选E　根据上文“Bettering yourself is a crucial ability that can help you live a happier life.”和下文对自我提升方法的介绍可知，空处需承上启下，引出具体建议。故E选项“这里有一些让你成为更好的自己的建议”符合语境。 2．选C　根据上文“So, reading more ... develop new ones.”和下文“Some books are ... and personal growth.”可知，空处需进一步说明读书的好处，衔接书籍与技能学习的关系。故C选项“你甚至可以通过一本书学习一项新技能”符合语境。 3．选G　根据上文“Find opportunities to ... anxiety and depression.”和下文“For example, make sure you have good hiking shoes if you begin hiking.”可知，空处需连接户外活动的建议与具体准备工作。故G选项“如果你从事一项户外活动，确保你为此做好了充分准备”符合语境。 4．选B　根据下文“Kindness is one ... Showing kindness requires ... those around you.”可知，空处需概括本段关于践行友善的内容。故B选项“对他人践行友善”符合语境。 5．选F　根据下文“You can also ... decrease mental distress (忧虑)．”可知，空处需与后文“also”呼应，提及写日记的具体做法及好处。故F选项“你可以在日记里写下你感激的事情”符合语境。 本课结束 更多精彩内容请登录：www.zghkt.cn $