Unit 3 Section Ⅵ Writing-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第二册配套课件PPT（外研版）

该高中英语课件聚焦“描述未来可能消失事物”的写作，通过教材课文导入，以电话亭消失为例，构建“开头引入主题、中间剖析原因、结尾得出结论”的文体架构，提供逻辑组材示例、亮点词汇句式及提能训练，搭建从输入到输出的学习支架。 其亮点在于以语言能力培养为核心，通过“pop into”“at the touch of a button”等高级词汇及无灵主语句型提升表达，结合思维品质训练，如用四个论据分析电话亭消失原因培养逻辑论证能力，还提供写作素材储备与专项训练，助力学生掌握写作方法，也为教师提供系统教学资源，提升教学效率。

　Writing Section Ⅵ 写作项目——Writing about a change 本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于发展变化的文章。关于发展变化的文章，其体裁可以是记叙文，也可以是议论文或说明文。描述某种现象或解释说明某种物品消失的原因的文章属于说明文。本单元我们将重点讲解如何用英语描述未来可能会消失的事物。 |由教材学写作| 一、学文体架构 根据教材课文总结出该类文体的框架： 二、学逻辑组材 Part 1：Something that will not be around in the future 作者在首句中提出问题，引出话题：电话亭的变化——电话亭很难再见到。 Part 2：Reasons & Supporting arguments 第三句至第十句分析电话亭消失的原因，同时在支持论点时，列举了四个论据： ①Phone boxes are hard to find. ②It is more convenient to take out a mobile and make a call at the touch of a button than to press a series of long numbers. ③Remembering others' telephone numbers is done by our mobile phones instead. ④It is more convenient to borrow a mobile phone from someone else than walk around looking for a phone box. Part 3：Conclusion 使用副词So引出结论，总结全文：电话亭正在成为过去。 三、学亮点表达 1．亮点词汇 (1)在“Clark Kent would pop into a phone box to change into his Superman costume”中，作者使用了高级词汇pop into，生动形象地描述了超人到电话亭换装的场景，表达了超人拯救他人生命和世界的急切心情。 (2)在“It is certainly more convenient to take out a mobile and make a call at the touch of a button than to press a series of long numbers on a telephone”中，作者使用了高级词汇certainly和at the touch of a button，强调拿出手机打电话极其便利，快速利索。 2．亮点句式 (1)文章首句中的“a thought occurred to me”为“无灵主语”句型sth.occurred to sb.。运用了拟人化的修辞手法，使语言更加生动活泼。 (2)在描述变化、解释原因时，作者使用了表语从句The main reason for this is simply that ...，言简意赅。 [提能训练|完成句子] ①___________________________ that we should not depend on others for everything. 过去的经验告诉我们，我们不能事事依赖他人。 ②The windows slide down ______________________. 按一下开关，窗玻璃便落下来。 ③______________________________________ we lack of safety consciousness. 导致这些问题的主要原因是我们缺乏安全意识。 Past experience has taught us at the touch of a button The main reason for these problems is that |具体写作指导| How to describe something that might disappear in the future ——如何描述未来可能会消失的事物 第一步：构思谋篇 Part 1 What will disappear in the future？ Part 2 ·What is the major reason for this phenomenon？·What supporting arguments should be given to make the point convincing？ Part 3 Conclusion 第二步：要点表达 第一部分　Something that will not be around in the future key, match, plastic bag, wallet, remote control, electric fan, TV set, ... 第二部分　 Reasons 1．常用词汇 ①_______ n．　　　　 十年 ②_________ adj. 经济的 ③__________ adj. 便利的，方便的 ④________ vt. 经历 ⑤__________ adj. 有说服力的 decade economic convenient undergo convincing ⑥___________ 努力 ⑦_______________ 生活条件 ⑧________________ 装备/配备…… ⑨keep pace with _______________ ⑩a thing of the past _______________ make efforts living conditions be equipped with 与……并驾齐驱 不复存在的事物 ⑪in the past ________ ⑫pop up __________ ⑬pave the way for ________________________ ⑭have a great influence on ____________________ ⑮as we all know __________ ⑯take place _____ 在过去 突然出现 为……铺平道路/创造条件 对……产生很大影响 众所周知 发生 2．常用句式 ①One reason is that electric fans ___________________ in cooling a room. 其中一个原因是电风扇制冷效果要差得多。 ②We have laptops, computers and smart phones, ___________________ _________ and search for anything we are interested in. 我们拥有笔记本电脑、台式电脑和智能手机，可以用它们上网，搜索我们感兴趣的东西。 are far less effective which enable us to go online ③Phone boxes will disappear in the future._______________________ almost everyone has a smart phone and that they don't need phone boxes any more. 电话亭将来会消失。主要原因是几乎每个人都有一部手机，他们不再需要电话亭了。 The major reason is that ④Firstly, many of us today _________________________ to traditional locks. 首先，相较于传统门锁，今天我们很多人更青睐指纹门禁。 ⑤Secondly, ___________________________________with a password than with a key. 其次，用密码开门比用钥匙开门更方便。 prefer fingerprint door locks it is more convenient to open the door 第三部分　Conclusion 常用句式(以wallet为例) ①In a word, wallets _________________________. 总之，钱包有很多缺点。 ②The day will surely come ________________________________. 总有一天我们的生活中将不再有钱包。 ③I think wallets will disappear __________________________________. 我认为钱包会因其明显的缺点而消失。 have so many shortcomings when there are no wallets in our life because of their obvious disadvantages [针对练笔] 你校英文报正在举办以“Something that might disappear in the future”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1．你认为未来会消失的一种物体； 2．你的理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考范文： As far as I'm concerned, traditional keys might disappear in the future. Firstly, with the development of technology, the smart lock is accessible to each family because it provides us with a new way to open the door, leading to the traditional role of keys gradually fading away.Secondly, traditional keys are not only inconvenient to carry but also lead to security risks if they fall into the wrong hands.Last but not least, traditional keys are made of the metal, which consumes natural resources and does harm to the environment. To sum up, compared with intelligent keys, traditional keys' shortcomings will surely result in their complete disappearance sooner or later. |写作素材储备| 1．表明观点 ①...may not be around in the future. ②These days, ...are hard to find. ③I believe there will be no ...in our future life. ④I think ...will no longer be used by people. ⑤In my opinion, ...will be out of sight. ⑥As far as I'm concerned, ...will be out of date. 2．给出理由 ①With the development of technology, ...will disappear because ... ②...are inconvenient to ... ③If we lose ..., we can't ...and safety problems may be caused. ④...are made of ..., which ...and does harm to ... ⑤...are not only inconvenient to ...but also pose security risks if ...fall into the wrong hands. 3．总结全文 ①In a word, ...have so many shortcomings. ②The day will surely come when there are no ...in our life. ③I think ...will disappear because of their obvious disadvantages. ④To sum up, ...will surely result in their complete disappearance sooner or later. ⑤In my opinion, ...have clear advantages over ..., which leads to ...disappearing ... 课时跟踪检测 一、写作专项训练 Ⅰ.靓表达升级(8分) 1．My hometown lies at the foot of the mountain, and a big river runs in front of it.(用with复合结构升级) → My hometown lies at the foot of the mountain, with a big river running in front of it. 2．The city is developing so fast that you can never imagine what it will be like tomorrow.(用倒装句升级) → 3．Life in the future will be much more wonderful than now.I think it will come true.(用定语从句升级) → So fast is the city developing that you can never imagine what it will be like tomorrow. Life in the future will be much more wonderful than now, which I think will come true. 4．We now can buy train tickets either from the station or on the Internet.It's very convenient.(用“it's convenient for sb.to do sth.”及原因状语从句升级) → It's very convenient for us to buy train tickets now because we can buy them either from the station or on the Internet. Ⅱ.微语境写作(共5空，10分) 1．With economy _______________________ (快速发展), our city has witnessed quite a few changes ______________ (最近几年)． 2．China has ___________________(取得很大进步) in economy, science and technology _____________________________________ (在过去的四十年里)． 3．The teachers won't need to go to school to work because they can ________________________________ (通过网络给学生上课)． developing at great speed in recent years made great advances in/over/during the past/last four decades teach students through the Internet Ⅲ.应用文写作(15分) 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他想了解北京近几年发生了怎样的变化。请给他回复一封邮件，内容包括： 1．变化； 2.原因；　 3.感受。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Jim， Yours， Li Hua 参考范文： Dear Jim， It's a great pleasure to share with you the changes in Beijing during the past few years. The most impressive one is the rapid development of transportation. In the past, people travelled mainly by bus. Nowadays, with more and more subway lines built, it is much faster and more convenient for people to go almost everywhere. Additionally, the spread of public bikes helps people travel any distance more easily. All these couldn't have happened without the measures taken by the government and applications of new technology. I am confident that Beijing will become more liveable in the future. Just come and have a look yourself! Yours， Li Hua Ⅳ.读后续写(25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 We were visiting our daughter when we adopted our Boston terrier, Tad. An adorable puppy, just three months old, he became the family's center of attention. Each morning, as soon as he heard my daughter Kayla moving around downstairs, he had to be taken down for playtime before she left for work. When she came home from work, we had him waiting for her at the door. After three weeks we left for home. During the drive, we let Tad talk to Kayla on the phone every night. After returning home, every time we called Kayla or she called us, we always put Tad on. He scratched the phone and listened intently and tried to look into the phone to see her. One Saturday, Kayla called while we were out. She left a message. Tad was standing beside me when I pressed the button to listen to the message. He listened to her talking and cocked his head, grinning at me. I played it again for him. A few days later, I was taking my shower when I heard the answering machine come on and Kayla leave a message. I thought it was strange when I heard her message repeat and the machine announce, “End of messages.” A few seconds later Kayla's message began yet again. Wondering what was going on, I quickly finished my shower and headed into the living room. There stood Tad, listening to the answering machine. I stopped and watched. When the message finished, he stood up with his feet against the edge of the low table, reached over with one paw (爪子) and slapped (拍打) the answering machine. The message came on again. He dropped back on the floor and listened happily. I told him “no，” and distracted him from the answering machine while I erased (抹去) the message. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 A few days later, I was in the kitchen when I heard, “You have no messages.” 　 Knowing what Tad wanted, I called Kayla that night and asked her to leave him a message. 参考范文： A few days later, I was in the kitchen when I heard, “You have no messages.” I got utterly confused and headed for the living room to figure out what was exactly going on. It was Tad who slapped the answering machine! He stood with his feet on the edge of the table, staring at the machine expectantly. However, after repeating the process for several times, Tad was running out of patience with his paws hitting the button really hard. Then it dawned on me that Tad was eager to hear Kayla talking. Knowing what Tad wanted, I called Kayla that night and asked her to leave him a message. After hearing what had happened, Kayla agreed to give Tad a surprise. The next morning, when Tad returned home after a walk outside, he ran into the living room and pressed the button of the answering machine again. His face lit up with excitement as he clearly heard the sweet and familiar voice: “I do miss you, Tad.” This was indeed a special message for him. He could listen to it whenever he wanted to hear Kayla's voice and we both longed for the next reunion with our beloved Kayla. 二、阅读拓展训练 阅读七选五 Switching from childhood to adulthood can be challenging. Oftentimes, you may still feel like a child. Work on not acting like a child by managing your emotions. 1 Accept responsibility for your actions. You should take responsibility for your actions, whether they are intentional (故意的) or unintentional. 2 Failing to accept responsibility may seem like a good idea at the time, but in the long term it will not benefit you. For example, if you accidentally back into your neighbor's car, let them know by writing them a note or knocking on their door. Then, correct your mistake by paying for the damage. Show people respect. Respect your partner, family members, friends, and strangers. 3 As you grow up and mature, you should understand the concept of respect and why it is important. Showing respect for others will also bring you more respect. 4 When you are faced with a conflict, it is important to keep your emotions in check. Control your anger and avoid becoming aggressive. Take a deep breath, listen, and work through the conflict with the other individual. Give yourself time to cool down if you are really angry. This will prevent you from saying and doing things that you shouldn't say or do in the heat of the moment. Receive feedback (反馈) positively. People learn and grow by receiving feedback and criticism from others. You should accept that you don't know everything and that feedback from an expert is not meant to hurt you. 5 For example, thoroughly read through your edits on your research paper. These edits will help improve your writing in the future. A．It is meant to help you. B．Take on responsibilities. C．Develop a way to handle a conflict maturely. D．It is a sign of maturity and respect for others. E．Children are often selfish and disrespectful. F．It is impossible for you to reach your goal like an adult. G．With a little bit of practice, you will begin to see yourself acting more like an adult than a child. 语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了从童年过渡到成年时，言行举止不要再像孩子那样。 1．选G　上文“Switching from childhood ...managing your emotions.”说明从童年过渡到成年可能具有挑战性，通过管理情绪来表现得像个成年人。空处和前文为顺接关系，说明做出这些改变的结果。所以G项“只要稍加练习，你将开始发现自己表现得更像成年人而不是孩子。”符合语境，该项中的“see yourself acting more like an adult than a child”和上文的“Work on not acting like a child”相呼应。 2．选D　上文“You should take responsibility for your actions, whether they are intentional (故意的) or unintentional.”说明要为自己的行为负责。空处和前文为顺承关系，进一步说明承担责任的意义。所以D项“这是成熟和尊重他人的表现。”符合语境，该项中的It指代前文“You should take responsibility for your actions”。 3．选E　上文“Respect your partner, family members, friends, and strangers.”以及下文“As you grow up and mature, you should understand the concept of respect and why it is important.”说明懂得尊重他人是成年人的标志。空处承上启下，通过对比孩子和成年人，说明成年人应该懂得尊重他人。所以E项“孩子们往往自私且无礼。”符合语境。 4．选C　下文“When you are ...avoid becoming aggressive.”说明本段主要讲述如何处理冲突。所以C项“培养一种成熟处理冲突的方法。”能够概括本段主旨，符合语境。 5．选A　上文“People learn and ...to hurt you.”说明要接受他人的反馈和批评。空处和前文为顺承关系，进一步说明接受反馈的好处。所以A项“它是为了帮助你。”符合语境，说明专家的反馈并非有意伤害你，而是为了帮助你。 本课结束 更多精彩内容请登录：www.zghkt.cn $