内容正文:
甘肃
英 语
主题写作册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与社会
主题8 促进中学生“五育并举”的发展(2024兰州卷)
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中考话题角度解读
1.甘肃近6年中考:2024年兰州卷——我眼中的马拉松
2.全国视野:①德育:乐于助人,如何做一名新时代好少年;
②美育:美育知识,艺术课程,引导审美情趣;
③劳育:劳动实践的经历与感受,劳动精神,倡导参加劳动实践
活动;④参加体育运动,倡导健康理念
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教材单元链接
人教 八(上)Unit 8 烹饪
八(下)Unit 3 家务和许可
八(下)Unit 8 文学和音乐
九(全)Unit 9 音乐和电影
九(全)Unit 11 感受
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教材单元链接
冀教 七(下)Unit 2 表演开始
七(下)Unit 7 运动和健康
八(下)Unit 2 种植物
九年级Unit 4 故事和诗歌
九年级Unit 5 研究科学
九年级Unit 6 电影和剧院
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一阶 课本句型促写作
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开头句 1. Planting trees is a great way to learn about nature.
种树是了解大自然的好方法。
2. There are all kinds of music in the world. Music makes people happy. 世界上有各种各样的音乐。音乐能让人快乐。
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开头句 3. Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new life skills. 生活技能对我们青少年来说是必不可少的。为了更健康、更快乐地生活,我们应该学习更多新的生活技能。
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中间句 角度1
劳动
实践 1. Students are able to learn necessary life
skills by taking cleaning or cooking lessons in
school.学生们可以通过在学校上清洁课或烹饪课来学习必要的生活技能。
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中间句 角度1
劳动
实践 2. Doing chores helps to develop children’s
independence and teaches them how to look
after themselves. 做家务有助于培养孩子们的独
立性,并教会他们如何照顾自己。[人教八
(下)U3]
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中间句 角度1
劳动
实践 3. I think it is important for children to
learn how to do chores and share housework.
我认为孩子们学习如何做家务和分担家务活是
很重要的。[人教八(下)U3改编]
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中间句 角度1
劳动
实践 4. Since children live in one house with their
parents, they should know that everyone
should do their part in keeping it clean and
tidy. 既然孩子们和他们的父母住在同一个房子
里,他们就应该知道,每个人都应该为保持房
间的干净整洁尽自己的一份力。 [人教八(下)U3]
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中间句 角度2
美育
知识 1. I like smooth music that helps me relax after a long week at work. 我喜欢舒缓的音乐,它能帮助我在一周漫长的工作后放松下来。[人教(全)U9]
2. What’s more, Beijing Opera is also an
important part of Chinese culture. 而且,京剧也是中国文化的重要组成部分。
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中间句 角度3
智育
(学习
方法) We should deal with the difficulties we meet
wisely. They can help us become better
persons. 我们应该明智地应对遇到的困难。它们能帮助我们成为更优秀的人。
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中间句 角度4
体育
运动 1. I often exercise at the park because I love
the clean air and sunshine. 我经常在公园锻炼,因为我喜欢那里清新的空气和阳光。 [人教七(下)U8]
2. When we play sports such as running, playing basketball, or swimming, our hearts get stronger.当我们进行跑步、打篮球或游泳等体育运动时,我们的心脏会变得更强。
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结尾句 1. Carrying out labor education makes school life more colorful and meaningful. 开展劳动教育让学校生活更加丰富多彩且富有意义。
2. Learning life skills is necessary for us, because what we depend on is what we learn. 学习生活技能对我们来说是必要的,因为我们所依赖的正是我们所学到的东西。
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结尾句 3. I’m sure the earlier we learn to be independent, the better our future will be. 我确信我们越早学会独立,我们的未来就会越好。
4. Instead of being afraid of challenges, we should try our best to solve the problems in our study and life. 我们不应该害怕挑战,而应该尽力解决学习和生活中的问题。
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俗语/谚语 1. Life lies in movement. 生命在于运动。
2. Virtue is far fairer than beauty.美德远胜于美貌。
3. Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量。
4. No pain, no gain. 一分耕耘,一分收获。
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◆句子翻译
1. 这也是通过小组学习了解合作的好方法。(Tip: a great way to
do sth.)
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It’s also a great way to learn about working together
through group study.
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2. 学生们应该参加劳动活动,比如打扫教室或种树。
(Tip: be supposed to do sth.)
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Students are supposed to take part in some labor activities, like cleaning the classroom or planting trees.
3. 通过参加志愿活动,青少年能够培养责任感。(Tip: be able
to do sth.)
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By taking part in volunteer activities, teenagers are able to
develop a sense of responsibility.
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4. 学着管理自己的时间和事务,能培养孩子的独立性。
(Tip: develop one’s independence)
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Learning to manage their own time and things can develop children’s independence.
5. 我认为对我们学生来说,在家和父母分担家务很重要。
(Tip: it is important for sb.to do sth.)
________________________________________________________
__________________________
I think it is important for us students to share housework
with our parents at home.
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6. 学生们应该在保持教室整洁方面尽自己的一份力。(Tip: do
one’s part in)
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Students should do their part in keeping the classroom clean.
7. 我们应该在美术课上尽力创作优美的作品。(Tip: try one’s
best to do sth.)
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We should try our best to create beautiful works in art
class.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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以劳动托起中国梦!假如你是李华,身为中学生的你在社交
平台发布了劳动实践课(Labor Practice Class) 的作品——牛
肉面,美国粉丝Mike留言向你询问劳动实践课的相关情况,如下
图所示。请根据提示,回复一封邮件。
提示:1. 向Mike分享你在本学期劳动实践课中做过的三项活动;
2. 你的收获与成长;3.邀请对方分享劳动体验。
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要求:1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点;
2. 条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
4. 词数:80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
审题四要素:
审体裁:应用文
审人称:第一人称为主
审时态:一般过去时与一般现在时
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审要点:
①分享做过的三项活动;
②介绍自己的收获;
③邀请对方分享劳动体验。
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Dear Mike,
How’s it going?___
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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一、构思框架
I would like to share the interesting experience of my Labor Practice Class with you.
First, I learned to cook some delicious food, like beef noodles.
Second, I planted some vegetables with my classmates.
for the people in our community
On the one hand, it helps me become more independent. On the other hand, it makes me understand the value of labor.
I have realized that every job is of great meaning and we are supposed to respect every worker.
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二、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
Dear Mike,
How’s it going? I want
to share the interesting
experience of my Labor
Practice Class with you. This
term we had labor practice
class. We did a lot of
different things in it. First, Dear Mike,
How’s it going? I would
like to share the interesting
experience of my Labor Practice
Class with you. This term we
had labor practice class. We did
a lot of different things in it.First,
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初阶范文 高阶范文
I learned to cook some
delicious food, like beef
noodles. Second, I planted
some vegetables with my
classmates. Third, I took part
in a volunteer activity to fix
things. I learned to cook some delicious
food, like beef noodles. Second,
I planted some vegetables with
my classmates. Third, I took part
in a volunteer activity to fix
things for the people in our
community.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
I have learned many
practical skills from the labor
class. It helps me become
more independent and makes
me understand the value of
labor. I have realized that I have learned many
practical skills from the labor
class. On the one hand, it helps
me become more independent.
On the other hand, it makes
me understand the value of labor.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
every job is meaningful and
we should respect every
worker.
I’m looking forward to
your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua I have realized that every
job is of great meaning and we
are supposed to respect every
worker.
I’m looking forward to your
reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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三阶 写作实战提能力
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(2025平凉二模)中学生“五项管理”之一的“体质管理
(Health Management)”倡导我们积极参与体育运动。体育运动
不但可以帮助学生增强自信,而且有助于我们实现体育强国之梦。
《21世纪英文报》Teen Talk栏目现面向全国中学生发起征文。请
你以“Doing Sports Makes Me ____”为题,写一篇不少于80词的
短文参赛。
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3.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
4.文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息。
要求:1.先补全题目;
2.内容包括提示中所有的写作要点;
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Doing Sports Makes Me____
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Doing Sports Makes Me Strong
Recently, sports have been very popular with many
people. In my opinion, doing sports makes me strong
because it builds up both my body and mind.
Of all the sports, I like running best. I was short and
thin before, so my father always took me out for running.
At first, I usually felt tired and wanted to give up. But my
father encouraged me to stick to it. Now running has
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become an important part of my life. At the sports meeting
this year, I even won first prize in the 1,500-meter race.
Since then, with the good habits of doing sports, I have
been stronger and stronger and I don’t fear any difficulty.
In a word, I like running because doing sports makes
me strong. It can also let my brain have a good rest and
help me study better. But when you do exercise, you must
be careful. Don’t hurt yourself.
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