内容正文:
甘肃
英 语
主题写作册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与社会
主题5 良好的人际关系与人际交往(2020省卷)
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中考话题角度解读
1. 甘肃近6年中考:2020年省卷——“如何与我们的父母沟通”
2. 全国视野:①人际交往的经历和感受;
②人际交往的困扰和建议;
③团队协作精神
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教材单元链接
人教 七(上)Unit 1 结交新朋友 七(上)Unit 2 家庭
七(上)Unit 5 与朋友共度时光
七(下)Unit 8 邻里之间 八(上)Unit 9 邀请
八(下)Unit 4 人际沟通
冀教 七(上)Unit 5 家人和家 八(上)Unit 4 我的邻居
九年级Unit 7 为和平工作 九年级Unit 9 交流
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一阶 课本句型促写作
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开头句 1. It’s very important for us to know how to get along well with other people. 知道如何与他人友好相处对我们来说非常重要。
2. Nowadays, many teenagers have difficulty in getting on well with their parents. Here is my advice.如今,许多青少年在与父母和睦相处方面存在困难。以下是我的建议。
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中间句 角度1
和家人
相处 1. If your parents are having problems, you
should offer to help. Maybe you could do more
jobs around the house so that they have more
time for proper communication. 如果你的父母遇
到问题,你应该主动提供帮助。或许你可以多做
些家务,这样他们就能有更多时间进行有效的沟
通。[人教八(下)U4]
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中间句 角度1
和家人
相处 2. I get into trouble because my parents do not allow me to play outside after 6 p.m. I do not understand why they are so strict with me.我因为父母不允许我晚上 6 点后在外面玩而陷入了困扰。我不明白他们为什么对我这么严格。
[译林牛津九(上)U3]
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中间句 角度1
和家人
相处 3. I think we should first ask parents for help
because they have more experience and are
always there to help us. 我认为我们应该首先向
父母求助,因为他们拥有更丰富的经验,而且总
会帮助我们。
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中间句 角度1
和家人
相处 4. When I feel stressed about my lessons and
exams, I often communicate with my parents.
当我因功课和考试感到压力大时,我经常和父母
交流。
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中间句 角度2
和朋友
/同学
相处 1. I think a good friend is like a mirror. You
can understand people by knowing their friends.
我认为好朋友就像一面镜子。通过了解一个人的
朋友,你就能了解这个人。[新人教八(上)U3]
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中间句 角度2
和朋友
/同学
相处 2. I think we should respect each other’s
differences and learn from each other.
我认为我们应该尊重彼此的差异,并且互相学
习。[新人教八(上)U3]
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中间句 角度2
和朋友
/同学
相处 3. If I find my classmates going through a hard time, I will offer help to them without
thinking twice. 如果我发现同学们正处于困难时
期,我会毫不犹豫地向他们提供帮助。
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中间句 角度2
和朋友
/同学
相处 4. When my friends and I have different
opinions on something, I will listen to them
patiently and respect their points. 当我和朋友们在某件事上有不同意见时,我会耐心倾听他们的想法,并尊重他们的观点。
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中间句 角度3
团队
协作 1. Listen carefully and show interest in
others. One of the most important things is to
listen to the person you speak to. 认真倾听并对
他人表现出兴趣。最重要的事情之一就是倾听与
你交谈的人。[新人教八(上)U8]
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中间句 角度3
团队
协作 2.There is no doubt that communication can
help us know more about our teammates.
毫无疑问,沟通能帮助我们更了解自己的队友。
3. After that, I realized that I should work
together with other teammates. 在那之后,我意识到自己应该和其他队友一起合作。
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结尾句 1.I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy in your new school. 希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。愿你在新学校里过得开心。
2. Hopefully, we’ll all learn to get along better
with each other! 希望我们都能学会更好地与彼此相处!
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俗语/谚语 1. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难见真情。
2. Many hands make light work.
众人拾柴火焰高。
3. One tree does not make a forest.
独木不成林。
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◆句子翻译
1. 有些害羞的学生很难和同学们处好关系。(Tip: have difficulty
in doing sth.)
________________________________________________________
_________________
Some shy students have difficulty in getting on well with
their classmates.
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2. 青少年们应该和父母聊聊自己的烦恼。
(Tip: communicate with)
________________________________________________________
__________
Teenagers should communicate with their parents about their troubles.
3. 父母有时对我们严格,但这能帮我们学会在人际交往中尊重他
人。(Tip: be strict with)
________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
Parents sometimes are strict with us, but this can help us
learn to respect others in interpersonal communication.
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4. 尊重彼此的差异能让小组作业顺利进行。(Tip: respect each
other’s differences)
________________________________________________________
___________
Respecting each other’s differences makes group projects run smoothly.
5. 在讨论中对组员的想法表现出兴趣,会鼓励他们更畅所欲言。
(Tip: show interest in)
________________________________________________________
____________________________________
Showing interest in your group members’ ideas can
encourage them to speak more freely.
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6. 团队活动中最重要的事情之一是认真倾听。(Tip: One of the
most important things is…)
________________________________________________________
_______________
One of the most important things in team activities is to
listen carefully.
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◆句式升格
7. My deskmate has trouble with a math problem. I offer to help
him/her without thinking twice.(Tip: if)
________________________________________________________
___________________________________________
If my deskmate has trouble with a math problem, I will
offer to help him/her without thinking twice.
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8. We come from different places. Active communication helps
us build close friendships.(Tip: although)
________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________
Although we come from different places, active
communication helps us build close friendships.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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(2025陇南二模)假如你是李华,你发现有些父母在该陪伴孩子
的时候,却选择沉迷于手机。请你根据下面的内容提示,写一篇
短文,谈谈你对这种现象的看法。
内容要点:
1. 家长花大部分时间玩手机以至于不关注孩子;
2. 家长应该为孩子树立榜样,少玩手机;
3. 家长应该抽出更多空闲时间陪伴孩子;
4. 良好的沟通可以加强亲子关系,有利于孩子的成长。
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审题四要素:
审体裁:说明文
审人称:第一人称与第三人称
审时态:一般现在时
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审要点:
①家长应该为孩子树立榜样,少玩手机;
②家长应抽出更多时间陪伴孩子;
③进行良好的沟通。
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写作要求:
1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2. 内容包含以上要点,词数不少于80词;
3. 语言准确,行文连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:accompany v.陪伴 strengthen v.加强
parent-child relationship 亲子关系 do good to有益于
Today, many parents spend a lot of time playing games and
watching short videos on their smartphones.____
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一、构思框架
I think parents should shut their phones off or spend less time on them so that they can set good examples for their children.
such as playing games, watching movies or playing sports
Good communication can not only help strengthen parent-child relationship but also help children’s development.
All in all, parents should use smartphones in a good way and care more about their children’s lives.
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二、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
Today, many parents
spend a lot of time playing
games and watching short
videos on their smartphones.
They pay less or even no attention to their kids. Today, many parents spend a
lot of time playing games and
watching short videos on their
smartphones. They pay less or even no attention to their kids.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
I think parents should
shut their phones off or
spend less time on them.
Parents can set good
examples for their children.
If so, parents will have more I think parents should shut
their phones off or spend less
time on them so that they can set
good examples for their children.
If so, parents will have more
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初阶范文 高阶范文
spare time to accompany their children and do lots of things with their children, spare time to accompany their
children and do lots of things
with their children,
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初阶范文 高阶范文
which can provide good
chances to communicate
with their children. Good
communication can help
strengthen parent-child
relationship and help
children’s development. such as playing games, watching
movies or playing sports, which
can provide good chances to
communicate with their children.
Good communication can not only
help strengthen parent-child
relationship but also help
children’s development.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
All in all, parents
should use smartphones in a
good way and care more
about their children’s lives. All in all, parents should use
smartphones in a good way and
care more about their children’s
lives.
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三阶 写作实战提能力
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友谊是青春最珍贵的礼物。真正的友谊能带给我们支持、快
乐和成长。你校英文报正在以“The True Friendship”为题征稿,
请你参考以下图示信息,写一篇英语短文投稿。
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要求:
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点;
2. 条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
4. 词数:80左右。
The True Friendship
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The True Friendship
In my opinion, true friendship is like a warm light that
helps us go through hard times. It means having someone
who knows you well and grows with you.
I will never forget what happened last year when I did
poorly in a big test. I felt very sad and doubted myself. But
my best friend, Lily, stayed with me and encouraged me to
keep trying. She helped me review my lessons and even
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shared her notes with me. Then I did better and better in
the following tests.
To make the friendship stronger, I think being honest
and communication are very important. We should always be
true to each other and share our thoughts openly. Also,
spending time together and being thankful to each other can
make the friendship stronger.
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