内容正文:
甘肃
英 语
主题写作册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自我
主题1 丰富、充实、积极向上的生活(2024省卷)
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中考话题角度解读
1.甘肃近6年中考:2024省卷——写出自己的假期计划
2.全国视野:①假期旅行计划与感受; ②让周末生活或者暑期生
活过得更充实且有意义的建议
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教材单元链接
人
教 七(下)Unit 2 日常事务 七(下)Unit 6 日常活动
七(下)Unit 12 周末活动 八(上)Unit 1 假期
八(上)Unit 2 闲暇活动
冀
教 七(上)Unit 6 出发! 七(上)Unit 7 日和月
七(下)Unit 4 课外活动 七(下)Unit 8 暑假到了!
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一阶 课本句型促写作
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开头句 1. I’m having a great time visiting my aunt in Canada.
我在加拿大看望姑姑(阿姨), 玩得非常开心。[人教七(下)U7]
2. We visited the science museum and it was really interesting. 我们参观了科学博物馆, 那里真的很有趣。[人教七(下)U11]
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开头句 3. Last month we asked our students about their free time activities. 上个月我们向学生们询问了他们的业余活动情况。[人教八(上)U2]
4. It’s necessary for you to plan the trip carefully so that you can make good use of your time and see all the places you want to visit. 你有必要仔细规划这次旅行, 这样才能充分利用时间, 游览所有你想去的地方。
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中间句 角度1
日常
活动 1. We had a wonderful party last night and
everybody had a good time. 昨晚我们举办了一场精彩的派对, 每个人都玩得很开心。[外研七(下)M10]
2. I always go swimming in summer because
it makes me feel cool. 我总是夏天去游泳, 因为这让我感觉很凉爽。[人教七(下)U2]
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中间句 角度1
日常
活动 3. You can go to the park. When the weather
is fine, you can fly kites and play games
with your friends. 你可以去公园。天气好的时候, 你可以与朋友们一起放风筝和做游戏。[人教七(下)U12]
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中间句 角度1
日常
活动 4. Every year, my family and I take a photo
together under the big tree in our village. I
like taking photos because they help me
remember fun times with my family. 每年,
我和家人都会在村里的那棵大树下一起拍张照
片。我喜欢拍照, 因为它们(照片)能帮我记
住和家人在一起的欢乐时光。[新人教七
(上)U7]
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中间句 角度2
假期
活动 1. I’m going to the countryside with my dad.
We are going to plant trees. 我要和爸爸一起去乡下。我们打算去种树。[冀教七(下)U4]
2. I think it’s better to have our picnic at the
top of the hill in Beihai Park.我觉得我们在北海公园的山顶上进行野餐会更好。
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中间句 假期
活动 3.You can visit some places of interest and
take beautiful photos. 你可以参观一些名胜古迹, 拍下美丽的照片。
4.We went camping last month. It was very
interesting.上个月我们去露营了。它非常有趣。
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中间句 假期
活动 5.There are lots of ways to relax and have
fun. However, the most important part of a
holiday is to rest your mind and body. 放松和
娱乐的方式有很多。不过, 假期最重要的部分
是让身心得到休息。[新人教八(上)U1]
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结尾句 1.My holiday is very colourful. The most important thing is to learn something and have fun. 我的假期非常丰富多彩。最重要的是能学到一些东西, 还能玩得开心。[人教八(上)U3]
2. No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all problems can be solved in the end. 无论我们遇到多少困难, 我相信所有问题最终都能得到解决。[人教九(全)U7]
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结尾句 3.Although all of us felt very tired, we got the happiest memory. 虽然我们所有人都感到非常疲惫, 但我们收获了最幸福的回忆。
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俗语/谚语 1.Time flies when you’re having fun. 快乐的时光总是飞逝。
2. Life is what you make it.你的生活由你创造。
3.Well begun is half done.好的开始是成功的一半。
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◆句子翻译
1. 上周末,我们在人民公园放风筝,玩得非常开心。(Tip: have
a great time)
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Last weekend, we had a great time flying kites in People’s
Park.
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2. 假期里,我喜欢爬山,因为这让我感到放松。(Tip: because;
it makes sb.feel)
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I love climbing mountains during the vacation because it
makes me feel relaxed.
3. 周末和父母一起去乡村接近自然会更好。(Tip: It’s better to
do sth.; get close to)
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It’s better to go to the countryside with parents on
weekends to get close to nature.
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4. 去年暑假,我和家人去了甘肃,参观了那里的许多名胜古迹。
(Tip: places of interest)
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Last summer vacation, I went to Gansu with my family and visited many places of interest there.
5. 参加社团活动时,最重要的是与他人友好相处。
(Tip: the most important thing is to…)
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When joining in club activities, the most important thing is to get along well with others.
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6. 寒假最后一天,我看了一部令人放松的电影。(Tip: At the
end of)
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At the end of the winter holiday, I watched a relaxing
movie.
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◆句式升格
7. Students go on a trip. The trip can help students open their
minds.(Tip: It’s necessary for…; so that)
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It’s necessary for students to go on a trip so that it can
help them open their minds.
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8. We meet many troubles on vacation. The beautiful scenery
always makes us forget troubles.(Tip: No matter how many
troubles…)
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No matter how many troubles we meet on vacation, the
beautiful scenery always makes us forget them.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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(2024甘肃省卷)假期对学生来说是一段放松自己、关心家人、
充实自我的时间。对于即将到来的暑假你有什么计划和安排?根
据以下思维导图提示,以“My ____ Holiday Plans”为题,用英语
写一篇80词左右的假期计划。#1
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要求:1.补全题目;
2.内容包括提示中所有的写作要点;
3.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
4.文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息。
My ___ Holiday Plans
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审题四要素:
审体裁:记叙文
审人称:第一人称为主
审时态:一般现在时为主
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审要点:
①假期的含义以及对于学生的意义;
②我的假期计划以及它们如何使我变得更好;
③我的希望以及我在假期的收获。
空处应填形容词,如:interesting, relaxing, wonderful,
exciting,…
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一、构思框架
It’s a chance to enjoy some free time after working hard in classes.
by having
picnics in the park, playing board games together, and cooking meals with my parents
such as washing dishes or tidying up the house
Reading makes a full man.
I look forward to creating lasting memories with my family.
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二、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
My Wonderful Holiday
Plans
A holiday is a special time for students
to take a break. Students can enjoy free time on holidays. My Wonderful Holiday Plans
A holiday is a special time for
students to take a break from school
and relax. It’s a chance to enjoy some free time after working hard in
classes.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
During my holiday,
I plan to spend wonderful time with my family. I also want to show my care for my parents by helping with household chores. Additionally, I want to do During my holiday, I plan to
spend wonderful time with my
family by having picnics in the park, playing board games together, and cooking meals with my parents.
I also want to show my care for my parents by helping with household chores, such as washing
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初阶范文 高阶范文
much reading. Besides, travelling is another good choice for such a long holiday. If I have time, I also want to volunteer in our neighborhood. dishes or tidying up the house. Additionally, I want to do much reading. Reading makes a full
man. Besides, travelling is another
good choice for such a long holiday.
If I have time, I also want to
volunteer in our neighborhood.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
I want to stay with my family, reading more, learning new things, and showing more love to the world during this holiday. I’m sure I’ll feel happy this holiday. I look forward to creating lasting memories with my family, reading more, learning new things, and showing more love to the world
during this holiday. By completing
these plans with joy, I’m sure I’ll
return feeling happy, connected, and
ready for new experiences.
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三阶 写作实战提能力
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快节奏的数字生活易让人迷失方向,而沉淀心灵、拓宽视野
的真实体验正成为当代青少年成长的关键密码。学校英语社团推
出“探索世界,成长自我”的主题征文活动,请参考图文信息,以
“A(n) ____ Travel Experience”为题,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要求:1.短文应包括下图提示中所有的写作要点;
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2.条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
4.词数:80左右。
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A(n) ____ Travel Experience
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An Unforgettable Travel Experience
Last summer, I had my most unforgettable travel
experience when I visited Guizhou with my family. It’s a
beautiful city with amazing mountains and lovely village. We
visited the Miao village. The houses there were built on hills,
and the people wore colorful clothes. They sang so happily
that their voices filled the whole village when they danced
for us.
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During the trip, I thought the most important thing is
to protect the environment. It has become a great habit of
ours to always put our rubbish into bins instead of throwing
it everywhere. I felt proud to help keep the environment
clean.
This trip made me know that travelling is not only for
having fun but also for protecting the environment. I hope
that more people will love this place when travelling.
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