Unit 1 Section Ⅵ Writing-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第三册配套课件PPT（人教版）

Writing Section Ⅵ 写作项目——Write about a festival experience 本单元的写作任务是介绍自己的一次节日经历，属于叙事类记叙文。此类文章多以事件为中心，以时间和空间为线索，按事件的发生、发展、结局展开叙述。它通常记录个人经历、见闻、感悟等内容，具有丰富的情感表达和生活细节。 由教材学写作 一、学文体架构 根据教材课文可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下： 二、学衔接过渡 文章第二至五段中出现的时间状语On the first day、After the opening ceremony and some amazing performances以及finally等，使得整篇文章叙事线索清晰，顺承自然。 三、学情感表达 1．本文第四段在描写赛马比赛的时候，enjoyed, surprised, worried和understand等措辞扬抑结合，情感真实，唤起了读者的共鸣。 2．本文还使用了exciting, amazing, moved, absolutely, favourite, tired, was totally worth, can't wait等词汇，体现了作者在节日期间丰富的情感体验。 四、学亮点表达 1．亮点词汇 第一段第二句中的fall用词精妙，形象、生动地点明蒙古族传统节日那达慕大会来临的日期。第五段使用副词finally, really, totally写出了作者对此次节日经历的感受。 2．亮点句式 第二段第三句运用了排比句Some ...some ...and others ...，不仅使表达具有韵律感，还能增强气势，通过对人物动作的描写呈现出了一幅美好的节日画面。第四段第二句“However, I was surprised to see that the riders were boys and girls！”用感叹句表达了作者强烈的惊讶之情。第五段中用感叹句“I can't wait！”形象地表达了作者迫不及待的心情。 针对练笔/完成句子 ①It is said that the Tomb－Sweeping Day,________________________ _____, has a history of several thousand years. 据说，清明节在4月4日到6日，已有几千年的历史了。 ②Some people were singing, _________________________________ __________________. 一些人在唱歌，一些人在跳舞，还有一些人在打篮球。 ③What was wrong? _________________________________! 怎么了？他为这次活动工作如此努力！ which falls on April 4th～ some were dancing, and others were 6th playing basketball He had worked so hard for this event 写作项目指导 Write about your festival experience ——写你的节日经历 第一步：构思谋篇 Part 1 Lead to the topic. Part 2 Describe what happened. Part 3 Describe personal feelings or the meaning or impact of events. 第二步：要点表达 第一部分　导入主题(常用的导入主题的方式) 1．直入主题 _________________________________________this year, I went back to the countryside with my parents and _________________________________my grandparents. 今年农历八月十五，我和父母回到乡下，和爷爷奶奶一起过中秋节。 On August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar spent the Mid－Autumn Festival with 2．由意义引出事件 The Chinese New Year's Eve dinner symbolizes family reunion and the arrival of _____________________________. As a member, I actively participated in the preparations together with my parents. 年夜饭象征着家庭团聚和来年好运的到来。作为一名成员，我和父母一起积极参与了准备工作。 good fortune for the coming year 3．结合目的引出活动 With the intention of ______________________________________ ______________________, our school hall witnessed Chinese Culture Festival featuring traditional art on October 12. 为了丰富我们的学校生活，增强我们的文化自信，10月12日我们在学校大厅举行了以传统艺术为特色的中国文化节。 enriching our school life and enhancing our cultural confidence 第二部分　具体描述活动过程，注意详略得当 1．和节日活动相关的常见表述有哪些？ (1)描述性词语　 ①________ 各种各样的　 ②__________　 美味的 ③ ________ 文化的 ④ ___________ 传统的 ⑤ ________ 最喜欢的 ⑥ __________ 兴奋地 ⑦vivid ___________ ⑧enthusiastically ________ various delicious cultural traditional favorite excitedly 栩栩如生的 热情地 (2)标志性动作　 ①_______　　 聚集　　 ② ________　　　烹饪；煮 ③_________ 装饰 ④ _______ 观看 ⑤pay visits ___ 拜访 ⑥give best ______ 致以美好祝愿 ⑦ ______ 跳舞 ⑧ ______ 张贴 gather cook decorate watch to wishes dance put up (3)关联事物　 ① _____ 前夕 ② _________ 水饺 ③ _______ 正餐；晚宴 ④ ________ 笑声 ⑤________ 团圆 ⑥dragon boat _____ ⑦lantern ______ ⑧couplet ______ eve dumpling dinner laughter reunion 龙舟 灯笼 对联 (4)简单句式　 ①_________________________, my entire family ______________ _________________. 在这个新年的前夕，我们全家人都兴奋地聚集在厨房里。 ②We_____________________________________________. 我们用红灯笼和对联装饰我们的家。 ③We _____________relatives and friends and ________________ ____each other. 我们走亲访友，互相祝福。 On the eve of this New Year gathered in the kitchen excitedly decorated our home with red lanterns and couplets gave best wishes paid visits to to 2．如何突出重点活动？ ①There were 200 lantern riddles, _________________________ ___mountains, rivers, animals, science, education, health, traditional culture and so on.(which引导非限制性定语从句) 灯谜共200个，涉及山川、河流、动物、科学、教育、卫生、传统文化等主题。 which involved the subjects of ② ____________________required a lot of effort,______________ ___________________.(动名词作主语；并列句) 我们都参与了制作饺子的过程，这需要付出很多努力，但这是一个有趣且引人入胜的过程。 ③After all, _____________the moon on that day is the biggest and brightest. 毕竟，据说那天的月亮是最大最亮的。 Making the dumplings but it was a fun and engaging process it is said that 第三部分　描述个人感受，突出节日意义 ①________________________________________________made the celebration truly special. 使得这次庆祝活动真正与众不同的正是与家人分享的爱和联系。 ②This experience _____________________________________ traditional Chinese festivals and culture. 这次经历大大加深了我对中国传统节日和文化的了解。 It was the love and connection shared with family that has greatly deepened my understanding of ③In my heart, this family activity _____________________________ ________fills my hearts with joy and leaves me with wonderful memories to cherish for a lifetime. 在我心中，这次家庭活动不仅加强了家庭纽带关系，而且让我的内心充满了欢乐，给我留下了一生难忘的美好回忆。 not only strengthens family bonds but also [随堂针对练笔] 关于某一传统节日的庆祝活动，给你印象最深的是什么？选择一个节日，写一个片段，注意详略得当。______________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ 参考范文： First, we all gathered around having a big dinner. Then began the Spring Festival Gala. As was reported, the Spring Festival Gala was wonderful. Many performers turned up on the stage, bringing us so much pleasure that we were all drowned in admiring their performances. At dawn, we ate dumplings and then we all dressed up and paid a visit door to door. 写作素材储备 (一)和“节日活动”有关的描写 ①On the first day, we visited our relatives and expressed our best wishes for the new year. 在第一天，我们拜访了我们的亲戚，并表达了我们对新的一年的最好的祝愿。 ②We enjoyed a variety of activities, such as watching lanterns and setting off fireworks. 我们享受各种各样的活动，例如赏花灯和放烟花。 ③“Happy new year！” he greeted us in a cheerful voice. “新年快乐！”他用欢快的声音向我们打招呼。 ④We merrily danced to the joyful music, singing, laughing and wishing each other good luck.我们随着欢快的音乐欢乐地跳舞，边唱边笑，互相祝福。 ⑤Looking around, I could see people were busy decorating their houses happily.环顾四周，我可以看到人们正兴高采烈地忙着装饰房子。 (二)和“节日精神”有关的描写 ①He said happily that he would share some of the gifts of his and allow me to choose one from them.他高兴地说，他会分享他的一些礼物，让我从中挑选一件。 ②Traditional festivals not only carry our national heritage but also provide us with a deeper understanding of our history and customs. 传统节日不仅承载着我们的民族遗产，也让我们对我们的历史和习俗有了更深的了解。 ③She was finding an even greater joy in her party because giving truly is better than receiving. 她在她的聚会中找到了更大的快乐，因为给予真的比接受更好。 ④That day I got enough hugs and kisses from Mum to last two lifetimes. 那天，妈妈给了我足够的拥抱和亲吻，足以让我度过两辈子。 (三)和“节日感受”有关的描写 ①Last week I had an amusing experience. 上周我有一次有趣的经历。 ②People around us began to cheer up, which made me feel very pleased. 我们周围的人开始欢呼起来，这让我感到非常高兴。 ③I believe this is the best gift for the new year, understanding and forgiveness. 我相信这是送给新年最好的礼物，理解和宽恕。 ④Although it happened three years ago, I never forget the evening party. 虽然它发生在三年前，但我从未忘记那次晚会。 ⑤I have always remembered that day, which had such a great impact on me. 我一直忘不了那一天，它对我的影响是如此之大。 课时跟踪检测 一、写作专项训练 Ⅰ.完成句子(10分) (1)As is known to us, the Mid－Autumn Festival is ______________ _________________________. 众所周知，中秋节是中国的主要传统节日之一。 (2)_______________________________, he took a deep breath and stepped in. 他气喘吁吁地站在门前，深吸了一口气，走了进去。 one of the major traditional Chinese festivals Standing ahead of the door in gasp (3)The other tradition of the Mid－Autumn Festival is ____________ ___________________________________________________.中秋节的另一个传统是在赏月的同时享用美味的月饼。 (4)It is ___________________________________relatives and friends gather together to share happiness and joy. 它不仅是一个节日，也是亲戚朋友聚在一起分享幸福和喜悦的时刻。 (5) ___________________________! 多么难忘的节日啊！ enjoying delicious mooncakes while appreciating the beautiful moon not only a festival, but also a time when What an unforgettable festival Ⅱ.完成语段(12分) The Spring Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, ①________________________________ ______________(于中国农历的第一个月到来). Before the Chinese Spring Festival, people usually have a thorough cleaning and ②___________________________ (在门上贴对联). As time goes by, the Chinese Spring Festival ③___________________________________ (已经成为一个家庭团聚的节日).④______________________________ (无论人们相距多远), they'll try to return to bond with their beloved. falls on the first month of the Chinese lunar calendar put up couplets on their doors has become a family reunion festival No matter how faraway people are On the Chinese New Year's Eve, my whole family had a hearty dinner and watched the Spring Festival Gala. The midnight saw us ⑤___________ _______________________________________________(放烟花庆祝新年的开始). On the first day of the new year, we all ⑥_______________________ _______________ (盛装打扮，去拜访我们的亲戚) in another city. setting off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year dressed up and paid a visit to our relatives Ⅲ.读后续写( )(25分) 阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Last month, it was my friend Emily's birthday, and she invited us to her house to celebrate.I'm really excited because Emily always gives me special birthday gifts, so I want to do something good in return.I decided that, instead of just buying her a gift, I'd bake (烤) her a cake.I'm not a master in the kitchen, but how hard could it be to bake a simple chocolate cake? The day before the party, I went to the store to pick up everything I needed: flour (面粉), sugar, eggs, and, of course, chocolate.I even bought a nice toy to make the cake look beautiful.I was feeling pretty confident. When I got home, I started mixing everything together.It was going smoothly and the kitchen was filled with the sweet smell of baking.But then, disaster struck.I was rushing to get the cake finished, and in a hurry, I took the wrong bag.Without even thinking, I put in what I thought was sugar, but it was actually salt! The cake looked perfect when it came out — golden brown with a shiny top.The smell was so amazing that I couldn't wait to show it at the party.I imagined everyone was surprised at my baking skills and how impressed Emily would be.But little did I know, my cake was about to become the most memorable birthday cake ever. The next day, I arrived at Emily's party with the cake.The moment came when we cut the cake.Emily, being the birthday girl, was the first to taste the cake.She carefully cut a piece, and with a big smile, she took the first bite.But then ...her expression changed.Her eyes widened for a second, she looked at me, clearly puzzled. “Uh ...are you sure this is a cake？” she asked, trying hard not to laugh. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 I immediately took a bite myself, and my heart dropped. ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ But instead of making me feel worse, Emily just laughed harder. __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 参考范文： I immediately took a bite myself, and my heart dropped.The moment the flavor hit my tongue, I knew something had gone horribly wrong.It was so salty! Not the rich, sweet chocolate cake I had imagined! I turned bright red, and the entire room went dead silent.Then, as if planned, everyone burst out laughing.Emily, trying to keep it together, finally managed to say, “Well, this is definitely a new flavor I wasn't expecting! A salty chocolate cake ...that's an interesting choice.” I felt my face get even hotter.“I－uh－I think I used salt instead of sugar！” I stammered, hardly able to look anyone in the eye.“I'm so sorry, everyone.I totally messed up！” But instead of making me feel worse, Emily just laughed harder.“Honestly, it's not the worst cake I've ever had，” she said, still giggling.“And hey, at least it's something we'll never forget！” At that point, everyone joined in, and the room was filled with laughter.We joked the cake as “legendary birthday cake” and it became the highlight of Emily's birthday, which relieved my embarrassment to a large degree.I was soon involved in the cheerful atmosphere and we all had a pleasant time at Emily's birthday party.It may have been a baking disaster, but it was surely the most unforgettable moment of the celebration! 二、阅读拓展训练 阅读七选五 The Qingming Festival is celebrated with a three－day national holiday, whose name originates from the saying “Plants start to revive and prosper at Qingming in a clean and bright way.” Thus, the festival is called Qingming, which means clean and bright. 1 Tomb sweeping aims to commemorate family ancestors while going on a spring outing allows everyone the chance to enjoy the beautiful scenery and the season. Traditional customs Tomb sweeping. 2 On this day, the whole family gathers in front of their ancestral tombs.They offer fruit and wine to their ancestors and clean the weeds from around the tomb.Finally, they kowtow and pray, hoping for their ancestors' blessing for the rest of the year. Spring outing.The time around the Qingming Festival is one of the most suitable seasons for a spring outing, as plants are thriving and flowers are blooming.People can have a great time outdoors with their friends and family. 3 Traditional food.Qingtuan, a green rice ball tiny enough into your hand, is also called Qingmingguo or Aiguo. 4 It is a mixture of sticky rice powder and green vegetable juice, stuffed with sweetened beanpaste.Qingtuan tastes sweet with the fresh fragrance of Aicao, a green spring vegetable.In celebration of Qingming, people from Shaanxi make steamed buns, known as Huamo, made into different shapes. 5 Some are for peaceful family life while others represent the wish for health. A．With each distinct look comes a good blessing. B．Playing football and flying kites are popular activities. C．It is popular in the southern regions of the Yangtze River. D．Family members gather together to celebrate and taste the food. E．The tradition of tomb sweeping originates from the Qing Dynasty. F．Many traditional customs are practiced to show respect for our ancestors. G．The two main activities over the festival include tomb sweeping and going on a spring outing. 语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了我国的传统节日——清明节及其传统习俗和传统美食。 1．选G　上句中关键词为“the festival”，下句中关键词为“Tomb sweeping”与“going on a spring outing”，因为空格句需要连接上下句，只有G选项中的“the festival”与“two main activities”可分别与上下句关键词呼应。 2．选E　本段中心是介绍清明节习俗之一：扫墓。E选项中的关键词“The tradition of tomb sweeping”与本段中心一致。 3．选B　本段中心是介绍清明节习俗之一：春游。B选项中的“Playing football”与“flying kites”与其上一句中的“outdoors”呼应，且与本段中心一致。 4．选C　C选项中的“It”与上一句中的“Qingtuan, a green rice ball”是指代关系，且与下一句中的“It”指代一致。 5．选A　根据下文的解释例证“Some are for peaceful family life while others represent the wish for health.”以及上文的“steamed buns，known as Huamo, made into different shapes”可知，设空处阐明做出来的食物不同的形状代表着不同的祝福，故A项承上启下，符合语境。 本课结束 更多精彩内容请登录：www.zghkt.cn $