Unit 5 Section 8 Writing Workshop-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第二册配套课件PPT（北师大版）

Writing Workshop Section 8 课时目标 1.阅读文章，归纳关于宣传手册的写作风格及特点。 2.学会写关于灾难求生的宣传手册。 新知深化学习 写作专项提能 课时检测 Contents 目录 01 02 03 3 01 新知深化学习 1．HOLD ON to your shelter until the shaking stops. 在晃动停止前，不要离开你的避难所。 ★shelter n．避难所；遮蔽物 vt.& vi.保护，掩蔽，躲避(风雨或危险) |用|法|感|知| ·(“细节描写”佳句)They found a small cave that could serve as a shelter from the heavy rain. 他们找到了一个小山洞，可以当作躲避大雨的庇护所。 ·(“动作描写”佳句)The kind woman sheltered the lost child who was shivering with fear in her warm house. 这位善良的女士将那个因害怕而瑟瑟发抖的迷路的孩子安置在她温暖的房子里。 [归纳点拨] (1)take shelter from ...　 躲避…… give sb. shelter 庇护某人 (2)shelter sb./sth. from ... 保护某人/某物不受……　　 |应|用|融|会| (单句语法填空/完成句子) ①The wall sheltered us _____ the enemy's gunfire. ②After the big earthquake, the victims had to ___________________ _______. 大地震之后，灾民们不得不住在临时避难所。 ③You are not fragile flowers and ______________________________ _____________________________. 你们不是脆弱的花朵，你们不能永远在温室里躲避风雨。 from live in the temporary shelters you can't take shelter from wind and rain in a greenhouse forever 2．Observe carefully before you move away. 移动前要仔细观察。 ★observe vt.观察；注意；看到；注视，监视；遵守(规则、法律等)；庆祝，庆贺 |用|法|感|知| (写出下列句中observe的含义) ①Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. _____ ②Over the next few days, Grandfather was able to observe the kindness, which Matt had not only for animals but for people as well. _____ ③Could you tell me how you usually observe New Year's Day in your country？ _____ 遵守 观察 庆祝 归纳点拨 (1)observe sb.do/doing sth. 看到某人做了/正在做某事 observe sth.done　 看到某事被做 observe a rule 遵守规则 (2)observer n. 观察者 (3)observation n. 观察；观察力；观察结果 under observation 在观察中；在监视下 名师点津 observe作“观察；注意”讲时，可用省去to的动词不定式或v.-ing形式作宾语补足语；但如果用于被动语态，省去的动词不定式符号to要还原。 |应|用|融|会| (单句语法填空/完成句子) ④I observed her ______ (walk) away with a smile. ⑤She observed a man ________ (walk) on the opposite side of the way. ⑥Every ____________ (observe) we make involves the exchange of energy. walk walking observation ⑦The thief was observed _______ (open) the window and run away. ⑧We _____________ it had turned cloudy. 我们观察到天气转阴了。 ⑨The mother _________________________________ and felt cheerful. 母亲看到儿子正在做作业，感到很高兴。 to open observed that observed her son doing his homework 02 写作专项提能 写作项目——Write a brochure about surviving a disaster　 本单元的写作任务是写一个有关灾难逃生的宣传手册，属于介绍要点式说明文。此类文章的写作重心是对事物要点特征的介绍。介绍说明要有顺序层次，让读者清楚明了，对关键核心部分要重点说明，详略得当。 |由教材学写作| 一、学文体架构 阅读课文，总结该文体的框架结构如下： 二、学要点构思 救生手册写作需要遵循一定的逻辑顺序，可根据灾难发生后采取措施的步骤，按顺序安排好材料，也可按照所处的不同位置或场景，按情况给出不同建议，在相应的建议后说明原因。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。写作时可按照 Things to do before .../Things to do during .../ Things not to do during ...进行叙述，也可按照firstly/secondly/ ...的方式进行叙述。如本文利用小标题的形式，从三个方面(室内、户外以及车内等)描述了地震发生时人们常处的环境，每个方面都分段提出了建议及原因，如“Move to open areas. Buildings, trees, streetlights and power lines can fall down during an earthquake.”逻辑清晰、语言简练，能够使读者快速明确地震求生的一些情况。 三、学语言特色 1．救生手册常使用简单有力的祈使句表达紧急情况下的强烈要求或建议。如课文中“Don't try to run out of the building during an earthquake；Move to open areas; Observe carefully before you move away; Avoid bridges that have been damaged or may be damaged by the aftershocks”等。 2．救生手册中常使用一些关键动词来表示重要的动作，体现动作的连贯性，使描写具有画面感。如课文中“DROP down onto your hands and knees；COVER your head and neck; HOLD ON to your shelter”等。 |具体写作指导| Write a brochure about surviving a disaster ——写一个关于在灾难中求生的宣传手册 第一步：构思谋篇 Tense Present simple tense Person Second person Main points Part 1: Briefly point out some rules to remember when a disaster occurs. Part 2: Describe the precautions to be taken during the disaster. Part 3: Emphasize faith in the face of the disaster. 第二步：要点表达 第一部分　开头应点明灾难发生时要记住一些规则 If an earthquake happens,_____________________________.　 如果发生地震，请牢记以下规则。 keep the following rules in mind 第二部分　详细介绍灾难中需要注意的事项 1．点明不同的场景 ①If you are _______________________ 如果你在家里/在外面/在车里 ②If you are _____________________________________ 如果你正在农场工作/行走在路上 indoors/outdoors/in a car working on the farm/walking on the road 2．灾难发生时该做什么？ ①_____________________________ 找些安全的地方待着。 ②You should ________________________________, such as a desk, a table or even a bed. 你应该躲藏在坚硬的物体下面，比如书桌、桌子甚至床。 Find some safe places to stay in. hide yourself under something hard ③If you are in the open air,________________. 如果你在户外，找一个空旷的地方。 ④We should ______________ when we are in trouble. 当遇到困难时，我们应该互相帮助。 find an open place help each other 3．灾难发生时不该做什么？ ①You ______________ in a hurry. 你不应该匆匆忙忙地跑。 ②You ____________________ to go downstairs. 你不应该乘电梯下楼。 ③You __________________________________. 你不应该靠近汽车或水。 should not run should never take a lift should never get close to cars or water 第三部分　结尾强调面临灾难，要勇于坚持，有战胜危险的信念 No matter how strong the earthquake is,______________________ _______________________________, we can overcome any difficulty in front of us. 无论地震有多强烈，只要我们有战胜它的信念，永不放弃，我们就能克服面前的任何困难。 as long as we have the belief to defeat it and never give up [针对练笔] 如果家里发生火灾怎么办？如何在大火中逃生？请写一个片段，给出你的建议。 参考范文： How to survive a house fire? I'd tell you that first and foremost, you should stay calm and dial 119 immediately. Second, you'd better cover your mouth and nose with a wet cloth and manage to leave the house. Last but not least, if you are trapped, it is important to wave something out of the window to attract the attention of the passers-by. |写作素材储备| 一、介绍灾难求生措施的常用句式 1．Dos (1)Cover ... with ...　　 　 用……遮住…… (2)Move away from ... 离开…… (3)Find ... to shelter yourself 找到……来掩护自己 (4)Open the window to ... 打开窗户以便…… (5)Hold on until ... 坚持直到…… 2．Don'ts (1)Don't run. 不要跑。 (2)Don't turn on lights and other electric appliance. 不要开灯及其他电器。 (3)Never jump off the building unless ... 除非……否则不要从建筑物上往下跳。 (4)You'd better not shout loudly in case ... 不要大声呼救以防…… (5)Don't run back to fetch ... 不要跑回去拿…… 二、主题语段 1．Flood When a terrifying flood comes, the roaring water is rushing in all directions. If you are in the house, you should quickly go to the high place. And remember to take necessary supplies, such as food and water. 当一场可怕的洪水来临时，咆哮的洪水向四面八方汹涌奔流。如果你在房子里，你应该迅速去到高处。并且记得带上必要的物资，比如食物和水。 2．Earthquake An earthquake strikes with a violent force that makes the ground shake and the walls tremble. If you're indoors, quickly hide under a sturdy table that can provide some protection. Hold on tightly to its legs, curling your body up closely, and stay calm until the tremors gradually stop. 地震带着猛烈的力量袭来，使得地面摇晃、墙壁颤抖。如果你在室内，迅速躲在一张坚固的桌子下面，它能够提供一些保护。紧紧抓住桌腿，将身体蜷缩得紧紧的，并保持冷静直到震动逐渐停止。 3．Fire At last, you successfully made it to the exit unharmed. But do you recall how this all began? When a horrifying fire burst out, the thick smoke swiftly spread throughout the room. Hastily, you snatched up a wet cloth and firmly covered your nose and mouth. Next, bending your body extremely low to the ground, you inched forward slowly yet steadily towards the exit. 终于，你毫发无损的成功抵达出口。但你还记得这一切是如何开始的吗？当一场恐怖的大火爆发时，那浓厚的烟雾迅速在房间蔓延。你急忙抓起一块湿布，紧紧地捂住鼻子和嘴巴。接着，将身体极度低弯向地面，你缓慢却坚定地朝着出口一点点前进。 03 课时检测 Ⅰ.靓表达升级(共5空，10分) 1．A severe earthquake destroyed almost everything and left badly damaged buildings. ①A severe earthquake destroyed almost everything, __________ ______________________.(用现在分词升级) ②A severe earthquake destroyed almost everything, __________ _______________________.(用定语从句升级) badly damaged buildings badly damaged buildings which left leaving 2．After they realized the great harm that was caused by the haze and the importance of protecting the environment, people all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather.(用现在分词和过去分词升级) →____________________________________________ and the importance of protecting the environment, people all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather. Having realized the great harm caused by the haze 3．If they are not dealt with properly, waste batteries will seriously pollute the underground water.(用省略句升级) →_______________________, waste batteries will seriously pollute the underground water. 4．Due to global warming, the ice in the Arctic is melting faster and this seriously destroys the habitat of North Polar Bears.(用定语从句升级) →Due to global warming, the ice in the Arctic is melting faster,___________________________________________________. If not dealt with properly which seriously destroys the habitat of North Polar Bears Ⅱ.微语境写作(共13空，26分) 1．The earthquake ①_____________________ (对……造成巨大损害) most of the buildings in the town.People there ②_____________ ___________ (急需帮助). By now, people all over the country have provided food and clothes for the ③______________ (无家可归的人们) in the disaster-stricken areas. caused great damage to are in great need of help homeless people 2．The drought in the southwest of China has lasted for several months, which makes people face ④______________ (水资源缺乏). ⑤___________________ (众所周知) the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe ⑥____________________ (由于全球变暖). So it is vital that we should ⑦_______________________________ _____(增强人们节约用水的意识)． 3．⑧_________ (大量的) rubbish and waste water are being poured into the rivers. ⑨_____________________ (结果), water sources have ⑩____________________ (被严重污染)． water shortage It is well-known that due to global warming raise people's awareness of saving water Plenty of As a consequence/result become badly polluted 4．⑪_____________ (除了) humans' ⑫_____________ (砍伐) forests, fires also ⑬__________________________ (导致) the destruction of the forests nowadays. In addition to cutting down contribute to/result in/lead to Ⅲ.应用文写作(15分) 假定你是李华。夏季来临，雨水增多，你们学校的学生会委托你写一份宣传手册，介绍洪水来临时的避险建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： Before the flood ·Flash floods can strike with almost no warning. ·A Flood Warning means that floods are already occurring and you should be prepared to leave. During the flood 1．If you are indoors ·As soon as you receive word of a flash flood, make your way to higher ground, which is any ground that's higher than other ground. ·If you see flood waters, head in the opposite direction. ·Avoid all moving water if possible. ·Avoid any electrical equipment like fallen power lines, and if flood waters have reached your home, do not use the electricity. ·And grab or climb onto something as soon as you're able. 2．If you are in a car ·If you're traveling in a vehicle, never attempt a water crossing. ·In the event that water overtakes your vehicle, get out immediately. ·Break glasses if you have to. After the flood ·Wherever you find yourself, remember, get to higher ground, wait for the waters to subside, then get to safety. Ⅳ.读后续写(25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One sunny afternoon, Jane, a seven-year-old girl whose parents went to their farm to harvest corns, was left home with their dog, Yeller. Feeling rather bored, she decided to go out for an adventure alone. With a toy gun in her hand and a whistle around her neck, Jane crossed a large area of grassland into the woods before she realized that she was lost.Sitting on a rock and wondering what to do, Jane began crying. After a while, she decided to walk along a wide path lined with tall trees and thick bushes. It was getting dark, but she still couldn't find her way home. Suddenly, she heard a strange noise, which was actually the sound of wind blowing leaves. She ran quickly in the woods until there was no road ahead but a river. She lost her toy gun while running. Cold and scared, Jane sat down near the river and fell asleep against a tree. Her parents were back from work but could not find their daughter. Deeply worried about Jane's safety, they locked the door and went out to search for her. Their dog, Yeller, was left at home. He noticed something was wrong because it was dark but there was nobody home. He sensed that Jane was in danger. He tried to get out, but the door was locked. He jumped through a window, looked in the fields but couldn't find her anywhere. However, from the ground came a familiar smell as he lowered his head. He followed the smell and walked across the grassland until he found the toy gun. But Jane was not there. The dog circled around the woods, barking loudly into the air. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Jane opened her eyes and heard Yeller barking nearby.___________ ____________________________________________________________ Weak and hungry, Jane walked back home with Yeller leading the way.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： Jane opened her eyes and heard Yeller barking nearby. Excitedly, she tried to yell to make herself heard but in vain because her voice was too weak. Suddenly, it occurred to her that she brought with her a whistle. She blew it with all her strength and the whistle pierced through the night sky. Yeller heard it and rushed towards the river. They were very glad and Yeller jumped around and licked her face. Weak and hungry, Jane walked back home with Yeller leading the way. Approaching home, she found her parents waiting anxiously out of the door. They were just about to call the police when they heard Yeller's barking. Seeing their daughter and dog coming back, they burst into tears of relief. That night，Jane had a large piece of cake while Yeller had a hero's supper: a huge meal of steak. 本课结束 更多精彩内容请登录：www.zghkt.cn $