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主题6劳动实践与劳动品质
【命题角度归纳】①劳动经历及感受[2023]:②对劳动实践/劳动课程的看法及建议。
主题
词汇积累
家务劳动
常用表达:As for me,I often help..after I finish my homework such as...
L.clean打扫;干净的
8.make the bed整理床铺
2.clear清澈的;透明的;清楚的
9.take out the rubbish倒垃圾
3.clean up打扫(或清除)干净
l0.sweep the floor扫地
4.repair the computer修电脑
1l.wash clothes洗衣服
5.do chores/housework做家务
I2.water flowers浇花
6.cook meals做饭
l3.look after pets照顾宠物
7.do the dishes洗餐具
14.tidy up the room整理房间
学校劳动及社会实践
L.plant trees植树
l0.look for a part-time job找一份兼职
2.grow vegetables种植蔬菜
Il.labor practice activities劳动实践活动
3.clean the classroom打扫教室
I2.learn a lot about farming学到许多关于农业的
劳动
4.do farm work干农活
知识
经历
5.milk cows挤牛奶
及感
l3.take part in social practice activities参加社会实
6.pick strawberries摘草莓
践活动
受
7.pull up the weeds拔草
14.work as a guide at the Natural History Museum
8.feed chickens/the cows喂鸡/奶牛
在自然历史博物馆当导游
9.talk with farmers与农民交谈
收获及感悟
常用表达l:Through these activities,I can improve./I have become..
常用表达2:It helps me learn how to.…
常用表达3:More importantly,we realize that it'sour responsibility to..
L.meaningful activity有意义的活动
7.develop labor habits养成劳动习惯
2.tired but happy累但快乐着
8.leamn some life skills学习一些生活技能
3.a sense of achievement成就感
9.realize the importance of意识到…的重要性
4.become independent变得独立
l0.We've learned a lot from..我们从.中学到
5.reduce study pressure减轻学习压力
了很多。
6.be good for our health有益于我们的健康
对劳
动实
l.meaningful有意义的
6.labor skills劳动技能
践/劳
2.helpful有帮助的
7.hard-working spirit吃苦耐劳的精神
动课
3.independent独立的
8.develop the ability of independence培养独立的
程的
4.labor education劳动教育
能力
看法
5.labor courses劳动课程
9.look after ourselves better更好地照顾我们自己
及建
议
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主题写作讲练·安微英语
一战成名新中考
住题
写作指导
[2023安徽]假定你是李辉,你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站展示并获得好评。请结合下面
图示信息,用英语写一篇短文,向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。
注意:1.短文须包含上图所有信息,可适当增
When
Who
Where
加细节,以使行文连贯;
My Experience of
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
Making a Poster
3.词数80~100(短文题目和首句已为
Why
How
你写好,不计人总词数)。
What
参考词汇:poster(n.海报);design(u.&n.设计)
purpose of doing it
feelings after doing it
things you did
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week,I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.
Step1细审题
1.主题:自己制作海报的经历。
2.文体:简述自己的制作经历,文体为
3.时态:简述自已制作海报的过程,时态用
;介绍自己做这件事情的感受,用
4.人称:简述自已的制作经历及感受,用
5.要点:①制作海报的目的:②制作的过程:③你的感受。
Step2搭框架
My Experience of Making a Poster
参考词汇:make a poster;change;hometown.;aim to do sth.;the purpose of doing sth.
开头:直接点明
写句子:①上周,我制作了一张关于家乡巨大变化的海报。
主题“自己制作
Last week,I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.(已给出)
了关于家乡变化
②其目的是为了展示我家乡近年来的巨大变化。
的海报”
参考词汇:interview;complete;collect information;be familiar with;design the poster;work
together;post online;so that...
写句子:①我和同学在图书馆上网搜集关于它的信息。
②我们还采访了一些人,他们对我家乡的过去非常了解。
中间:具体描述
③然后我们一起设计了海报。
制作海报的过程
④我们中的一些人写文本,还有一些人画出关于变化的画。
⑤通过我们的努力工作,海报完成了。
⑥我们把它发布在网上,这样就有更多人能够了解到我家乡的变化。
主题写作讲练·安微英语
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续表
参考词汇:Through the experience,I feel that/I leamed that..;be/feel proud of..
结尾:描述自己
写句子:通过这次经历,我为我的家乡感到自豪,也希望它有更好的未来。
做完这件事的感
受,并表达期望
Step3成语篇
My Experience of Making a Poster
初阶范文
进阶范文
Last week,I made a poster of the great
Last week,I made a poster of the great changes in my
changes in my hometown.
hometown.DIt aims to show the great changes my hometown
My classmates and I surfed the Internet in the
has made in recent years.
library to collect information about it.We also
My classmates and I surfed the Internet in the library to
interviewed some people.They know the past of my
collect information about it.2We also interviewed some people
hometown clearly.They all think highly of the
who are familiar with the past of my hometown.They all think
better life now.
highly of the better life now.
Then we got together to design the poster.
Some of us wrote the text and others drew pictures
Then we got together to design the poster.3Some of us
about the changes.With our hard work,the poster
wrote the text while others drew pictures about the changes.
was finally completed.We posted it online.In this
With our hard work,the poster was finally completed.4We
way,more people could get to know the changes of posted it online so that more people could get to know the
my hometown.
changes of my hometown.
Through this experience,I feel proud of my
Through this experience,I feel proud of my hometown.
hometown,and I hope it will have a brighter future.
Hopefully,it will have a brighter future.
亮点赏析:
①用aim to do sth.,直接点明制作海报的目的;
②巧用who引导定语从句,并用be familiar with进一步修饰people,.丰富句子的语境;
③用while引导时间状语从句,表明大家各自分工明确,海报制作有序进行;
④用s0hat引导结果状语从句,增强前后句子的逻辑性和连贯性。
主题写作演练
劳动是一种美德。参与家务劳动是劳动实践的重要方式。某英文网站正在开展以“Housework Makes Me
Better'”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英文写一篇短文投稿。要点如下:
1.对做家务的看法:
2.常做的家务:
3.你的收获。
注意:
1.短文须包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80~100(题目和首句已为你写好,不计人总词数)。
Housework Makes Me Better
Labor is a great virtue.
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主题写作讲练·安微英语一战成名新中考
第3篇
about one hour a day reading my favorite books and I often
One Thing I Keep Doing Every Day
share what I have read with my friends.Honestly speaking,
Good morning,everyone!
reading not only brings me knowledge,but also teaches me
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today.The how to get on well with others and how to be a better person.
topic of my speech is "One thing I keep doing every day".
Keeping reading helps me open my eyes to the outside
As we know,what we keep doing every day is very
world.The more I read,the wiser I will be.
important for us to achieve our goals.That's why I keep
That's all.Thank you!
reading every day no matter how busy I am.I usually spend
主题6劳动实践与劳动品质
主题写作指导
hometown,and I hope it will have a brighter future.
Step1:2.记叙文3.一般过去时:一般现在时4.第
主题写作演练
一人称
Housework Makes Me Better
Step 2:
Labor is a great virtue.I believe doing chores is
开头:②The purpose is to show the great changes my
necessary for everyone.It not only keeps our home clean but
hometown has made in recent years.
also teaches us responsibility.As teenagers,learning life
1My classmates and I surfed the Internet in the skills through housework helps us grow into independent
library to collect information about it.
adults.
2We also interviewed some people.They know the past of
In my daily life,I often sweep the floor to keep rooms
my hometown clearly.3Then we got together to design the tidy and take out the rubbish every evening.On weekends,I
poster.4Some of us wrote the text,and others drew sometimes wash dishes or fold clothes for my family.
pictures about the changes.5With our hard work,the
By doing chores,I've gained a strong sense of
poster was finally completed.6We posted it online.In independence.I've learned time management by balancing
this way,more people could get to know the changes of my
schoolwork and house duties.Most importantly,I feel proud
hometown.
to contribute to my family,which brings us closer.Let's do
结尾:Through this experience,I feel proud of my housework---it shapes us into better persons!
主题7人际交往、沟通与合作
主题写作指导
Then you have time to communicate and understand each
Step1:2.记叙文3.一般过去时;一般过去时;一般现other well.If possible,,you should put yourself in your
在时4.第一人称:第三人称:第一人称
parents'shoes.Perhaps,you'll find everything is different
Step 2:
from on your side.Finally,you can also ask your teachers
开头:②I once worked with a team to raise money for the
for help.They must have some useful advice for you,
poor children.
because they have met and known a lot more than you.
中间:①Everyone in our team had their own task.②Some
I hope my advice can work well for you!
写
of us collected the books we didn't need,while some sold
Yours,
作
them in their own communities.3Others asked teachers
Li Hua
for help to get more ways to raise money.As a result,we
第2篇
练
finished every task in the end with hard work.
Many Hands Make Light Work
结尾:①Through this experience,I realized that teamwork is
As an old saying goes,"Many hands make light work."
important and working together has great power.2I think
In the team,we can share our good ideas with others and get
there will be no difficult task that can't be finished by better ones.Here are some suggestions.
teamwork.
First of all,good communication is the basis of
主题写作演练
teamwork.Team members should communicate in time to
第1篇
avoid misunderstanding.Secondly,team members should
Dear Judy
help each other.Only by working together and supporting
I'm sorry to hear that you can't get on well with your each other can we truly form an excellent team.Most
parents.Now I offer you some advice.
importantly,the team should have a common goal.This goal
You can try to find some time to do some housework at can ensure that each member works in the same direction to
home when you are free.This can help to build the closer
achieve more success.
relationship between you and your parents.And you can
In a word,we should value the chance of teamwork and
invite your parents to join in some activities or exercise.actively take part in it.
参考答案·安徽英语
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