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译林新版7BU7
Lesson Plan 5: Integration (D2,D3)
Textbook Reference: 7B Unit 7, Pages 89-91
I. Teaching Objectives
Language Ability: Master the structure and writing skills of a diary entry about outdoor activities; flexibly use the simple past tense and key words/phrases of the unit in writing; learn to use linking words to make the writing coherent; complete a diary entry independently.
Cultural Awareness: Integrate the connotation of outdoor activities; understand the positive impact of outdoor activities on personal growth; cultivate the awareness of loving life and exploring nature.
Thinking Quality: Organize writing materials logically according to the structure of the diary entry; refine the theme of the writing; use descriptive language to express personal feelings and experiences.
Learning Ability: Learn writing skills by analyzing the model essay; complete the writing task independently with the help of the outline; revise and polish the composition through peer review; improve writing ability.
II. Key & Difficult Points
Key: Master the three-part structure of the diary entry; flexibly use the simple past tense and key words/phrases.
Difficult: Use descriptive language to vividly show the details of the outdoor activity; express personal feelings and gains naturally; make the writing coherent and logical with linking words.
III. Teaching Procedures
Step 1: Further Study Exploration
Introduce the content of Further Study (skiing is a popular winter sport with a long history). Ask students to share:
1 What outdoor activities have you participated in?
2 What interesting or unforgettable things happened during the activity?
3 What did you learn from the activity?
Step 2: Model Essay Analysis
Show Simon’s diary entry in Part D2 and deconstruct it from structure.
(1) Beginning: Time + Weather + People + Event
(2) Main Body: Process (details, problems, solutions) + Scenery description
(3) Ending: Feelings (excited, tired, proud, happy) + Gains(learned teamwork, enjoyed nature, overcame difficulties)
Step 3: Writing Workshop (15 mins)
1. Pre-writing: Outline Preparation
Ask students to refer to the outline in Part D1.
2. While-writing: Drafting
Writing Requirements:
Follow the three-part structure of the diary entry.
1 Use the simple past tense correctly.
2 Use at least 5 key words/phrases of the unit
3 Use appropriate linking words.
4 Word count: 100-120 words.
3. Post-writing: Peer Review
Provide a peer review checklist for students to check each other’s compositions:
1 Does the diary include time, weather, people and event?
2 Is the simple past tense used correctly?
3 Are there at least 5 key words/phrases of the unit?
4 Is the writing coherent with linking words?
Step 4: Sample Essay & Highlights Analysis
1. Sample Essay
Sunday, 15 October Sunny
Last weekend, I went camping with my best friends, Tom and Lily. We set off at 7 a.m. and drove to a campsite near a lake. The view there was amazing—clear water, green trees and fresh air.
After arriving, we put up our tents first. Then we had a picnic by the lake. In the afternoon, we went hiking along a small path. The path was a little narrow, so we supported each other. We saw many beautiful birds and flowers. Unluckily, Tom’s shoe was broken. We helped him repair it together.
It was a tiring but wonderful day. We not only enjoyed the beauty of nature but also learned the importance of teamwork. I will never forget this great experience.
2. Highlights sentences:
The view there was amazing—clear water, green trees and fresh air. (那里的景色美极了 —— 清澈的湖水、翠绿的树木和清新的空气。)
The path was a little narrow, so we supported each other. (小路有点窄,所以我们互相搀扶。)
We not only enjoyed the beauty of nature but also learned the importance of teamwork. (我们不仅欣赏了大自然的美景,还学会了团队合作的重要性。)
Step 5: Summary & Homework
Summary: Review the structure and writing skills of the diary entry about outdoor activities; encourage students to actively participate in outdoor activities and record their experiences.
Homework:
Revise your composition according to the peer review suggestions and the sample essay’s highlights.
Copy the sample essay and underline the key words/phrases and linking words.
IV. Blackboard Design
Writing: A Diary Entry about Outdoor Activities
1. Structure of the Diary Entry
Beginning: Time + Weather + People + Event
Main Body: Process (details, problems, solutions) + Scenery description
Ending: Feelings + Gains
2. Highlights Sentence Templates
The view there was amazing—...
We not only... but also...
It was a tiring but wonderful day.
I will never forget this great experience.
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