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成一篇完整的短文。
(2025·哈尔滨三中四模)On a sunny weekend, 17-year-old
Tom joined a school camping trip to a remote island.Tom, an
enthusiastic photographer, was also a bit of a loner who often preferred
exploring on his own.He had taken a basic survival skills course but had
never truly faced a real-life emergency.
As the group stepped into the thick underbrush, the air was heavy
with the scent of damp moss and wildflowers, and Tom couldn’t
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contain his excitement.Mr Wilson, a seasoned outdoors teacher,
paused every few minutes to warn everybody to stay close.He took out a
bundle of small red flags.Every 20 steps, he tied a flag to a low-hanging
branch or a sturdy fern (蕨), saying, “The flags, along with the
gurgling stream nearby, are your lifelines.They’ll boost your chance of
survival.” Most students watched carefully, but Tom, half nodded
absentmindedly, half distracted by the calls of rumored golden-winged
parrots, gradually drifting away from the group.
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A moment later, Tom was photographing the mouth-watering Acai
berries (巴西莓) covering the mountain forests when rolling thunder
crashed.Looking around, he realized there was no one around — he was
all alone.Quickly Tom stuffed his camera into his bag and tried to retrace
his steps.But the sky darkened abruptly, and a fierce wind tore through
the trees.The heavy rain came pouring into a muddy mess, washing
away any signs of the trail.His phone already low on battery died
completely because he pressed it in a wild manner to call for help.Tom
stumbled (蹒跚而行) through the mud, his sneakers stained with dirt
and water dripping from his hair.
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As night fell, the downpour stopped but the temperature dropped
below freezing, and the cold bit through his clothes.Through the bitter
wind, he heard a chilling sound — the distant howl of wolves.Heart
pounding heavily, Tom was in a complete panic, with an overwhelming
longing to go home.
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With an empty stomach, Tom felt his strength slipping away.
After what seemed like hours, Tom heard shouts in the distance.
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With an empty stomach, Tom felt his strength slipping away.
Desperately, Tom scanned his surroundings and found some Acai
berries. After a brief rest, a sense of urgency propelled him into action.
With newfound strength, he recalled Mr Wilson’s words about the red
flags and the stream. He delved into the dense underbrush, looking
around in search of the telltale red flags. All the while, he pricked up his
ears, trying to catch even the slightest murmur of the stream, acutely
aware that it was his lifeline.
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After what seemed like hours, Tom heard shouts in the distance. His heart raced with hope as he gathered his strength to shout back, “I’m
here!” Finally, he emerged from the thick underbrush and saw his
teacher and classmates. Mr Wilson ran to him and hugged him tightly.
“Good boy,” Mr Wilson whispered, his voice thick with emotion.
Tom felt a mix of relief, gratitude and regret. This experience had not
only tested his survival skills but also made him realize that following the
rules and staying calm were not merely virtues, but the lifeline to
navigate the unpredictable wilderness.
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语篇解读:本文以人物为线索,讲述17岁的汤姆参加学校露营时独
自探险迷路,暴雨冲毁路标,手机没电。他靠回忆老师的话,凭红
色旗帜和溪流找到队伍,意识到遵守规则和保持冷静的重要性。
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【写作思路】
1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容可知,第一段可描写汤姆凭借回忆老师的话努力
求生的经过。
②由第二段首句内容可知,第二段可描写汤姆获救的经过。
2. 续写线索:感到力气消失——回忆老师的话——找路——呼救——
得救——汤姆感悟。
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