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(2025·皖豫名校联盟检测)I stared curiously at the brown
notebook my brother David had handed me.“It was Dad’s,” he
explained.Inside the notebook was some paper with Dad’s handwriting
on it.Beneath the title — Things I Would Like to Do in My Lifetime — was
a list of 60 goals.
My heart sank when I saw he’d only checked off five.Dad had died
in a car crash 13 years earlier.He’d been hit by an absent-minded driver
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who’d run a red light.I was 25 then and had never fully processed his
death.I missed his incredible sense of humor and curiosity.
The bucket list (遗愿清单) gave me some inspiration: I’m
going to finish his list, I decided.Completing his bucket list seemed like
the perfect way to celebrate his life.
The first of Dad’s goals I tackled was to “run 16 km straight”.A
few kilometers into the 16 km course, my legs were heavy and I was
exhausted.Then a voice said: Your life, your choices.It felt like Dad
was with me, reminding me it’d been my decision to do this.This
pushed me to keep going.
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As I continued to achieve Dad’s goals, some made me doubt
myself, especially scary ones like skydiving.But it often felt like Dad
was urging me on.Standing at the plane’s open door, I was
terrified.“Let’s go,” the voice urged.As I leapt into the sky, I felt a sense of freedom even when I threw up mid-air! I was sure Dad would
burst into laughter when seeing that happened! “I survived!” I cried
afterwards, thrilled.I jumped from a plane, and ticked off another item
on Dad’s bucket list.
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The more of Dad’s goals I checked off, the more courageous and
carefree I felt.My husband, Steven, noticed my confidence boost.Now
for the most challenging of Dad’s goals — drive a race car.
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I’d felt anxious behind the wheel ever since Dad’s death.
The final item to check off was to “record five songs”.
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I’d felt anxious behind the wheel ever since Dad’s death. But I
knew I had to do this. I was shaking in panic as I got into the driver’s
seat, and then I realized Dad would have loved this, pressing the
accelerator. I lowered my head, grabbed the wheel tightly and
whispered, “Dad, let’s go for a ride!” At first, so tense was I
that my palms were sweating. But my emotions ran high as I sped up.
With that feeling, I felt completely safe driving for the first time in these
years. After that, I continued to achieve a series of Dad’s goals.
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The final item to check off was to “record five songs”. Dad loved
music, so I picked songs I had fond memories of him singing to me when
I was little. I recorded the songs with my husband’s help. “Good
night, sleep tight,” I sang. The instant I finished the last tune, tears
of relief welled up in my eyes. After completing Dad’s bucket list, I
felt a great sense of peace. Dad always knew how to have fun and make
the most of life. And now, thanks to him, I’ve learnt to do the same.
Tears ran down my cheeks as I realized that in the process, I had not only
honored Dad’s memory but also discovered a part of myself that I never
knew existed.
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语篇解读:本文以人物行动为线索,讲述作者在父亲因车祸离世 13
年后,发现其遗愿清单,遂踏上替父完成目标之路。过程中,作者
克服重重困难与内心恐惧,渐趋勇敢自信,终完成清单,收获生活
感悟与自我成长。
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【写作思路】
1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容可知,第一段可描写作者从最初坐进驾驶座时的
紧张、恐惧状态,到在回忆父亲鼓励下,逐渐克服心理障碍,最终成
功完成驾驶赛车的过程。
②由第二段首句内容可知,第二段可描写作者选择与父亲相关歌曲的
原因,录制歌曲的过程,以及完成录制后内心的情感释放和对父亲的
怀念,还有完成整个遗愿清单后的感悟。
2. 续写线索:发现遗愿清单→决定替父完成→克服困难与恐惧→实现
成长面对开车的恐惧→完成整个遗愿清单后的感悟与成长。
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