内容正文:
专题08 应用文写作
主题01 人与社会 —— 文化传承与节日庆典
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·广东·期中)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Mike发来邮件想了解中国的一个传统节日,并询问你上次是怎么度过这次节日的。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)简要介绍该节日 (2)描述你是怎样度过该节日的 (3)你的感受
注意:词数80左右(已给出的开头结尾不计入字数);请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
I’m writing to tell you something about
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I’m writing to tell you something about the Mid-Autumn Festival, which is a traditional Chinese festival celebrated in autumn.
People usually gather with families, enjoying mooncakes and admiring the full moon, symbolizing reunion and happiness. Last Mid-Autumn Festival, I spent it with my family at home. We prepared a big dinner together, and after dinner, we sat in the yard, eating mooncakes while chatting. I also told my family some interesting stories about the moon, which made everyone laugh.
I felt really happy during the festival. It was a great time to relax and strengthen family bonds.
I hope you can experience it one day!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Mike写一封回信,介绍中国的一个传统节日,描述自己上次是如何度过该节日的,并表达自己的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
传统的:traditional → conventional
庆祝:celebrate → observe
欣赏:admire → appreciate
加强:strengthen → enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:People usually gather with families, enjoying mooncakes and admiring the full moon, symbolizing reunion and happiness.
拓展句:People usually gather with families, enjoying mooncakes and admiring the full moon, which symbolizes reunion and happiness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I also told my family some interesting stories about the moon, which made everyone laugh.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I hope you can experience it one day!(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高一下·广东广州·期中)假定你是李华。你的交换生朋友Adam对岭南文化非常感兴趣,计划五一期间来广东进行省内游。请你给他推荐一座城市。
内容包括:
1.推荐的地方;
2.推荐的理由
要求:
1.120词左右;
2.可适当增删细节,使内容连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Adam,
I’m excited to know you’re planning a trip to Guangdong during the May Day holiday to explore Lingnan culture. I highly recommend Foshan.
Foshan is a city rich in Lingnan traditions. The Ancestral Temple of Foshan is a must-visit. It’s a remarkable complex of ancient Lingnan architecture, with delicate carvings and solemn halls, showing the superb craftsmanship of the past. The Qinghui Garden, one of the four famous gardens in Guangdong, features elegant pavilions, clear ponds, and beautiful rockeries, representing the unique charm of Lingnan garden design.
Moreover, Foshan is the birthplace of Cantonese opera. You can enjoy a live performance, immersing yourself in the melodious tunes and vivid stories. And don’t forget the local cuisine! Dishes like double-skin milk and fish ball noodles will surely satisfy your taste buds.
Foshan offers an unforgettable experience of Lingnan culture. I’m sure you’ll love it!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给交换生朋友Adam写一封信,推荐广东省的一座城市。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited→thrilled
探索:explore→probe
此外:moreover→in addition
提供:offer→provide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Foshan is a city rich in Lingnan traditions
拓展句:Foshan is a city which is rich in Lingnan traditions
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I’m excited to know you’re planning a trip to Guangdong during the May Day holiday to explore Lingnan culture.(运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
It’s a remarkable complex of ancient Lingnan architecture, with delicate carvings and solemn halls, showing the superb craftsmanship of the past.(运用了现在分词作状语)
Passage 3
(24-25高一下·广东茂名·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom对中国文化很感兴趣。上星期六你校举办了一场以“文化传承,魅力节日” (Cultural Inheritance, Charming Festivals)为主题的庆祝活动,学校邀请了学生和家长共同参与。请你给他写一封邮件,介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1.活动的时间、地点和参与人员;
2.活动的具体内容(如表演、展示等);
3.你对这次活动的感受。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文:
Dear Tom,
I know you’re interested in Chinese culture, so I’m writing to tell you about a fantastic event in our school.
Last Saturday, a celebration themed “Cultural Inheritance, Charming Festivals” was held in our school hall. All the students and their parents were warmly welcomed to join. There were various performances like lion dances and traditional music shows. Also, students’ handicrafts about festivals were on display.
I really enjoyed the event. It not only let us experience the fun of festivals but also made us more aware of the importance of cultural heritage. I’m sure you’d love it too!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Tom写一封邮件,介绍上星期六学校举办的以“文化传承,魅力节日”为主题的庆祝活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
对……感兴趣:be interested in→be keen on
极好的:fantastic→wonderful
举办:hold→throw
各种各样的:various→a variety of
2. 句式拓展:
同义句
原句:It not only let us experience the fun of festivals but also made us more aware of the importance of cultural heritage.
拓展句:Not only did it let us experience the fun of festivals, but it also made us more aware of the importance of cultural heritage.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Last Saturday, a celebration themed “Cultural Inheritance, Charming Festivals” was held in our school hall.(运用了过去分词作后置定语)
【高分句型 2】I know you’re interested in Chinese culture, so I’m writing to tell you about a fantastic event in our school.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25高一下·广东广州·期中)为了介绍和推广中国文化,某报社正在征集英文稿件,拟向外国朋友介绍中国传统节日。请你写一篇英语短文介绍中国的传统节日——端午节。内容包括:
1.端午节(the Dragon Boat Festival)的时间;
2 端午节的来源;
3 端午节的活动。
注意:1.写作词数应为100左右;2 注:粽子(zong zi);龙舟(dragon boat)
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar year. For thousands of years, the festival has been marked by eating zongzi and racing dragon boats. Zongzi is mainly made of rice, but the fillings vary a lot in different regions. Chinese people eat zongzi in memory of Qu Yuan, a famous Chinese poet. Dragon boat races are popular in the southern provinces where there are many rivers and lakes.
Today, the Dragon Boat Festival is still a very popular festival in China.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇英语短文介绍中国的传统节日—端午节,向某报社投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
庆祝:celebrate→observe
主要地:mainly→primarily
不同:vary→differ
有名的:famous→renowned
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar year.
拓展句:The Dragon Boat Festival, which is also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar year.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar year. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2] Dragon boat races are popular in the southern provinces where there are many rivers and lakes. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
主题02 人与社会 —— 校园生活与社会实践
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·广东茂名·期中)随着“五一劳动节”的临近,你校上周组织了校园劳动周(Campus Labour Week)活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇简短的英文报道。内容包括:
1.活动的时间、地点、目的;
2.活动的过程;
3.你的感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Campus Labour Week at Our School
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Campus Labour Week at Our School
Aiming to strengthen students’ awareness of the importance of labor, our school launched an activity themed “Campus Labor Week”.
The Labor Week was held from May 7th to 11th in our school. Some lectures concerning labor skills were given on the first day, which benefited us a lot. Cutting trees and watering flowers were attractions to Senior one. Varieties of other labor projects gave us unforgettable experience.
There is no doubt that not merely can this event enrich our school life but also offer us opportunities to have more acquaintance with daily practical skills.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为学校英语报记者就学校上周组织的校园劳动周活动写一篇简短的英文报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
加强:strengthen→enhance
各种各样的:varieties of→various
提供:offer→provide
机会:opportunity→chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Aiming to strengthen students’ awareness of the importance of labor, our school launched an activity themed “Campus Labor Week”.
拓展句:Our school launched an activity themed “Campus Labor Week”, which aimed to strengthen students’ awareness of the importance of labor.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Some lectures concerning labor skills were given on the first day, which benefited us a lot. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】There is no doubt that not merely can this event enrich our school life but also offer us opportunities to have more acquaintance with daily practical skills.(运用了that引导同位语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高一下·广东佛山·期中)为了庆祝一年一度的班主任节(Homeroom Teacher’s Day),上周你所在的班级举行了一场班会活动。请你写一篇短文,给学校英文报专栏“My Class Story”投稿,分享本次经历。内容包括:
1.活动内容;
2.师生感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Special Celebration for Our Beloved Homeroom Teacher
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
A Special Celebration for Our Beloved Homeroom Teacher
To celebrate Homeroom Teacher’s Day, our class held a special class meeting last week.
We first showed a video made by students, which recorded funny moments and touching stories with our teacher. Then each of us shared a thank-you note, telling her how she has helped us grow. Our teacher was moved to tears when she heard our words, saying it was the best gift she had ever received.
The activity was a big success. We felt proud to express our love, and our teacher said she was lucky to have such a warm class. What touched us most was seeing her smile, which made us realize how much she cares.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生分享班级庆祝班主任节的活动经历,包括活动内容和师生感受,以投稿的形式呈现给学校英文报专栏。
【详解】1.词汇积累
庆祝:celebrate → observe
特别的:special → extraordinary
记录:record → document
感人的:touching → moving
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:What touched us most was seeing her smile, which made us realize how much she cares.
拓展句:What touched us most was that we saw her smile, which made us realize how much she cares.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We first showed a video made by students, which recorded funny moments and touching stories with our teacher.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Then each of us shared a thank-you note, telling her how she has helped us grow. (运用了how引导的宾语从句)
主题03 人与自我 —— 个人成长与能力提升
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·广东·期中)假如你叫李华,17 岁,是我校一名高二的学生。深圳市明年要举办国际旅游节,现向全市招募志愿者,请你根据以下要点向组委会写一封申请信,应征旅游节志愿者的工作。
1.你的个人信息;
2.你的兴趣爱好与特长或相关经历等;
3.你的承诺。
国际旅游节 the International Tourism Festival
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头、结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Committee,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Committee,
I’m Li Hua, a 17-year-old student from Class 3, Grade 11. Learning that volunteers are needed for the International Tourism Festival next year, I’m eager to contribute.
As an outgoing teenager, I love exploring new cultures and have volunteered at Shenzhen Cultural Expo, where I assisted foreign guests. Fluent in English and skilled in cross-cultural communication, I can bridge gaps between visitors and locals. I’m also familiar with Shenzhen’s history and attractions, making me a suitable guide.
If selected, I’ll offer professional, patient service, ensuring every guest feels welcome. I’m ready to work flexibly and handle challenges. Please consider my application!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于深圳市明年要举办国际旅游节,现向全市招募志愿者这一情况,根据以下要点向组委会写一封申请信,应征旅游节志愿者的工作。
【详解】1.词汇积累
渴望做某事:be eager to do→ desire to do
帮助:assist→ help
提供:offer→ provide
应对,处理:handle→ deal with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, a 17-year-old student from Class 3, Grade 11.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is a 17-year-old student from Class 3, Grade 11.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that volunteers are needed for the International Tourism Festival next year, I’m eager to contribute.(运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。)
【高分句型2】As an outgoing teenager, I love exploring new cultures and have volunteered at Shenzhen Cultural Expo, where I assisted foreign guests.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。)
Passage 2
(24-25高一下·广东深圳·期中)假定你是校英语角负责人李华,为庆祝“世界读书日”,将举办“经典小说英文海报设计比赛”。请你用英文写一则通知,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.参赛要求;
3.提交方式及截止日期。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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English Corner
【答案】
Notice
To celebrate World Book Day, the English Corner is thrilled to announce an English poster design competition on classic novels! This event aims to inspire creativity and deepen appreciation for literary masterpieces.
Firstly, choose a classic novel (e. g. , Pride and Prejudice) and feature its title, author, and key characters. Secondly, include a brief English summary and one meaningful quote. Additionally, use A3-sized paper and creative visuals to bring the story to life. Finally, ensure your design is original and visually appealing.
Email your entries to englishcorner @ school. combyApril22. Winners will be awarded prizes and their posters will be displayed in the school library!
English Corner
Notice
Calling all book enthusiasts! Join our “Classic Novels in Art” competition to mark World Book Day. This event encourages you to blend literature with creativity.
First, select a classic novel(e. g., The Great Gatsby)and design an A3 poster. Next, include the plot summary, themes, and your personal reflection in English. Additionally, both hand-drawn and digital designs are welcome. Finally, ensure your work is neat and reflects the novel's essence.
Submit your posters to Room 305 by April 23. Top 3 designers will win gift cards and have their posters exhibited!
English Corner
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生用英文写一则通知,介绍学校将举办“经典小说英文海报设计比赛”的相关情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:thrilled→excited
宣布:announce→declare
有意义的:meaningful→significant
最终:finally→eventually
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To celebrate World Book Day, the English Corner is thrilled to announce an English poster design competition on classic novels!
拓展句:To celebrate World Book Day, the English Corner is thrilled to announce an English poster design competition which is related to classic novels!
【点睛】[高分句型1] To celebrate World Book Day, the English Corner is thrilled to announce an English poster design competition on classic novels!(运用了动词不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] Finally, ensure your design is original and visually appealing.(运用了省略了连接词that的宾语从句作ensure的宾语)
Passage 3
(24-25高一下·广东深圳·期中)假定你是李华,你校正在招募“校园音乐节”(Campus Music Festival)英文主持人,你在竞选的过程中遇到了困难,请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封求助信,要点如下:
1.你的困难;
2.寻求帮助;
3.表达感谢。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing to ask for your help as I’m currently preparing for the audition to host the upcoming Campus Music Festival in our school, but finds it extremely challenging to stand out from all the candidates.
One problem I’m facing is that I’m not good at writing English hosting scripts, often not knowing how to smoothly connect different parts of the show and introduce the performers. Being worried about my pronunciation also adds to my anxiety, which sometimes makes me unsure if I’m saying words correctly. Moreover, without previous hosting experience, I’m completely at a loss when it comes to interacting with the audience. Given your expertise, would you please offer me some guidance on these issues?
I truly appreciate your time and guidance in advance. Your help will undoubtedly boost my confidence and improve my chances of success. Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写一封求助信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
担心:worried→concerned
此外:moreover→besides
促进:boost→improve
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Given your expertise, would you please offer me some guidance on these issues?
拓展句:Since you are expert, would you please offer me some guidance on these issues?
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to ask for your help as I’m currently preparing for the audition to host the upcoming Campus Music Festival in our school, but finds it extremely challenging to stand out from all the candidates.(运用了as引导原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Being worried about my pronunciation also adds to my anxiety, which sometimes
Passage 4
(24-25高一下·广东深圳·期中)假如你是李华,你校正在招募“国际文化节”志愿者。请用英文给活动负责人Mr. Smith写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学Mike加入。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.推荐理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
参考表达:国际文化节the International Culture Festival
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, writing to recommend my classmate Mike for the volunteer position at the International Culture Festival.
I’m sure he will be an excellent choice, as he possesses both the ability and enthusiasm needed for the role. Mike is fluent in English and has a strong interest in global cultures, which makes him perfect for communicating with international guests. Last year, he organized a school event where he successfully introduced Chinese traditional arts to foreign students, which showed his excellent organizational skills. What’s more, he is always ready to help others, and his patience and friendliness make him popular among classmates. I believe that he can not only perform his duties well but also make the festival more enjoyable for everyone.
I hope you will consider my recommendation. If you need more information about Mike, please feel free to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给Mr. Smith写信推荐Mike当“国际文化节”的志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
职位:position → post
优秀的:excellent → outstanding
能力:ability → capability
职责:duty → responsibility
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Mike is fluent in English and has a strong interest in global cultures, which makes him perfect for communicating with international guests.
拓展句:Mike is fluent in English and has a strong interest in global cultures, making perfect for communicating with international guests.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sure he will be an excellent choice, as he possesses both the ability and enthusiasm needed for the role.(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句、as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Last year, he organized a school event where he successfully introduced Chinese traditional arts to foreign students, which showed his excellent organizational skills.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句)
主题01 人与社会 —— 科技发展与人文关怀
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·广东广州·期中)你校英语俱乐部近期将举办一次英文演讲比赛,主题是“AI辅助作文批改的利与弊”,请你选取其中一个角度写一篇英文演讲稿。内容包括:
1. 你的看法;
2. 你的理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100个左右;
2. 题目已给出。
Should we support AI-powered essay correction?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Possible versions 1:
Should we support AI-powered essay correction?
Good morning everyone. While AI tools claim to enhance writing skills, I firmly believe they do more harm than good by creating dependency and killing creativity.
Firstly, AI fosters lazy thinking. Students now rely on instant grammar fixes instead of deeply understanding rules. Last week, a classmate blindly accepted all AI suggestions, turning his vivid story into robotic sentences. The teacher called it “grammatically perfect but soul-crushing”. Secondly, AI cannot handle cultural depth. When I wrote about Chinese Mid-Autumn traditions, the AI failed to understand “family reunion” as “unemployment”. Machines will never grasp the human stories behind words. Worst of all, AI creates hollow victories. My friend celebrated her “error-free” AI-edited essay, only to fail a handwritten exam. Reliance on technology leads to false confidence.
Let’s come back to authentic learning — errors and all!
Thank you for listening.
Possible version 2:
Should we support AI-powered essay correction?
Good morning everyone. I am convinced that AI-powered essay correction is a revolutionary improvement for English learners, and its benefits far outweigh the limitations.
Firstly, AI offers 24-hour service. Unlike teachers who have limited office hours, AI systems provide instant feedback anytime. Last month, I revised my essay at midnight using the AI tool and submitted a polished version before dawn — something impossible with human grading alone. Secondly, AI ensures objective analysis. Human teachers may unconsciously favor certain writing styles, but AI evaluates essays based on clear criteria. For instance, when our club compared AI and teacher feedback on 50 essays, AI detected 15% more subtle grammar errors.
Admittedly, AI cannot replace human insight into creativity, but it excels as a foundational tool. By handling routine tasks like grammar checks, it frees teachers to focus on cultivating critical thinking. Let’s embrace this technology to make learning more efficient and equitable!
Thank you for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇英文演讲稿,从“利”或“弊”的角度探讨AI辅助作文批改。
【详解】1.词汇积累
革新的:revolutionary → groundbreaking
胜过:outweigh → surpass
反馈:feedback → response
确保:ensure → guarantee
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:AI offers 24-hour service.
拓展句:Since AI offers 24-hour service, it provides great convenience for English learners.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am convinced that AI-powered essay correction is a revolutionary improvement for English learners, and its benefits far outweigh the limitations.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】For instance, when our club compared AI and teacher feedback on 50 essays, AI detected 15% more subtle grammar errors.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
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(24-25高一下·广东深圳·期中)假如你是李华,你们班在上周的篮球赛中输了。Ben认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的,对此他感到遗憾和难过,有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你给Ben写一封英文邮件,谈谈你对此事的看法,并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ben,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ben,
I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. It’s not easy being in your situation, and it’s normal to have these feelings. Anyway, don’t be too hard on yourself.
You know, basketball is about team effort. It’s never just one person’s fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time.
As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don’t you sit down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. If all of you pull together, you’re sure to win the next one.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给给Ben写一封英文邮件,谈谈你对班级输掉比赛的看法,并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛:game→match
重要:matter→count
此外:besides→what’s more
应该:should→be supposed to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Why don’t you sit down and communicate with them?
拓展句:I suggest that you sit down and communicate with them.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes.(运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
主题02 人与社会 —— 文化传承与国际交流
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·广东·期中)假如你是李华,你的英国好友Chris正在进行一项有关中国传统节日食品的调查。请写一封邮件,推荐一种你最喜欢的传统节日食品,内容包括:
1.简介该食品以及与之相关的节日;
2.该食品的象征意义。
注意:
1.字数约 100 字左右(请尽量写满所给的行数空间);
2.书信的开头和结尾段落已经给出,不计入总字数;
3.请注意合理分段,且写作要点必须详略得当。结构不合理(没有分段、详略不得当)、书写潦草,各扣 2 分。
Dear Chris,
Knowing that you
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Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Knowing that you have been conducting a survey on Chinese traditional food for festivals, I’m writing to recommend to you my favorite, the mooncakes.
Mooncakes are round pastries with various fillings such as lotus seed paste, nuts or salted egg yolks. They are closely related to the Mid-Autumn Festival, which is celebrated on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. Their round shape represents the full moon, symbolizing family reunion. Sharing mooncakes under the moonlight, families express love and enjoy the festival’s warm atmosphere.
I am more than glad if my introduction can help you better know about our custom. For further information, feel free to contact me.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Chris写一封邮件,推荐一种你最喜欢的传统节日食品,简介该食品以及与之相关的节日,并介绍该食品的象征意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
各种各样的:various → a variety of
象征:symbolize → stand for
表达:express → convey
开心的:glad → pleased
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Their round shape represents the full moon, symbolizing family reunion.
拓展句:Their round shape represents the full moon, which symbolizes family reunion.
【点睛】【高分句型1】They are closely related to the Mid-Autumn Festival, which is celebrated on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I am more than glad if my introduction can help you better know about our custom. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高一下·广东江门·期中)你校英文报将开设新栏目“多元文化”(Diverse Cultures),现面向全校征稿。请你写一篇短文推荐一项值得分享的中国文化传统,内容包括:
1. 简要介绍该传统;
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:
(1) 词数80左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Share Your Culture, Share the World!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Share Your Culture, Share the World!
Among China’s countless cultural treasures, calligraphy stands out as a unique art form that combines visual beauty with profound philosophy. What appears as simple writing actually embodies the rhythm of nature and the writer’s inner world.
This ancient art offers multiple benefits worth exploring. First, it serves as excellent mental training — the focused brush movements require discipline and patience, qualities essential for students. Second, it’s a living history lesson; each style (like Kaishu or Xingshu) reflects different dynasties’ aesthetic values. Most importantly, in our digital age, calligraphy offers a rare chance to slow down and appreciate the tactile joy of creating art by hand.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。考生所在校英文报将开设新栏目“多元文化”(Diverse Cultures),现面向全校征稿。请考生写一篇短文推荐一项值得分享的中国文化传统
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的:essential→vital
提供:offer→provide
体现:embody→reflect
探索:explore→probe
2.句式拓展:
同义句
原句:What appears as simple writing actually embodies the rhythm of nature and the writer’s inner world.
拓展句:Simple as it appears, writing actually embodies the rhythm of nature and the writer’s inner world.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】 Among China’s countless cultural treasures, calligraphy stands out as a unique art form that combines visual beauty with profound philosophy.(运用了 that 引导的定语从句)
【高分句型 2】 What appears as simple writing actually embodies the rhythm of nature and the writer’s inner world.(运用了 what 引导的主语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25高一下·广东江门·期中)假设你所在的城市为吸引国外游客,拟制作英文版旅游宣传手册,并公开征稿,请用英语写一篇短文应征,征文包含以下信息:
1.介绍你所在的城市。
2.欢迎游客前来参观。
注意:1.要求80词左右。
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】
Welcome to my city - Hangzhou, a place renowned for its enchanting beauty. Nestled by the picturesque West Lake, the city offers a harmonious blend of natural splendor and rich cultural heritage. Ancient pagodas stand tall, echoing with stories of bygone eras, while the surrounding gardens are a riot of colors.
Hangzhou is also a food lover's paradise, with local delicacies like West Lake Fish in Vinegar Gravy. We warmly invite you to come and explore this magical city. It promises an unforgettable journey!
【导语】这是一篇应用文。假设考生所在的城市为吸引国外游客,拟制作英文版旅游宣传手册,并公开征稿,请用英语写一篇短文应征。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
著名的:renowned→famous
迷人的:enchanting→fascinating
坐落于:nestle→locate
难忘的:unforgettable→memorable
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Nestled by the picturesque West Lake, the city offers a harmonious blend of natural splendor and rich cultural heritage.
拓展句:The city, which is nestled by the picturesque West Lake, offers a harmonious blend of natural splendor and rich cultural heritage.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Nestled by the picturesque West Lake, the city offers a harmonious blend of natural splendor and rich cultural heritage.(运用了过去分词短语作状语)
【高分句型 2】Ancient pagodas stand tall, echoing with stories of bygone eras, while the surrounding gardens are a riot of colors.(运用了while引导的并列句
Passage 4
(24-25高一下·广东广州·期中)假定你是学生会主席李华,学校下个月将在学生活动中心举办为期3天的校园传统文化艺术节,你校外教Robert一直对中国传统文化感兴趣,请你代表学生会给他写封邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
1. 活动举办的目的;
2. 活动的具体时间和地点;
3. 活动内容简介。
注意:1. 字数应为100字左右;
2. 学生活动中心:The Student Activity Hall
Dear Robert,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Robert,
I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students’ Union. Knowing you’re interested in traditional Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to our school’s Traditional Culture and Art Festival.
The festival, aimed at promoting traditional Chinese culture and enhancing students’ cultural awareness, will be held in the Student Activity Hall from June 1st to 3rd. During the festival, there will be various activities, including folk music performances, Chinese calligraphy and painting exhibitions, and traditional handicraft workshops. You can also join in the hands-on activities to experience the charm of traditional culture closely.
We sincerely hope you can come and enjoy this cultural feast with us. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生代表学生会给外教Robert写封邮件,邀请他参加下个月将在学生活动中心举办为期3天的校园传统文化艺术节。其内容包括:活动举办的目的、活动的具体时间和地点以及活动内容简介。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in → be keen on
提高:enhance → raise
各种各样的:various → a variety of
举行:be held → take place
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students’ Union.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is chairman of the Students’ Union.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing you’re interested in traditional Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to our school’s Traditional Culture Art Festival. (运用了现在分词作状语和省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 The festival, aimed at promoting traditional Chinese culture and enhancing students’ cultural awareness, will be held in the Student Activity Hall from June 1st to 3rd. (运用了过去分词作非限制性定语)
主题03 人与自我 —— 成长体验与文化认同
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·广东深圳·期中)假定你是李华,你校即将举行一场主题为“传承与发扬:做传统文化与习俗的守护者”的英语演讲比赛。请写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:
1. 保护传统文化与习俗的意义;
2. 保护传统文化与习俗的做法。
注意:
1. 词数 80 词左右;
2. 开头已给出,不计入词数。
Hello, everyone!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Hello everyone! My name is Li Hua, and I’m thrilled to be here discussing a topic — the importance of preserving traditional cultures and customs.
As the younger generation, we bear the responsibility to uphold and cherish our ancestors’ legacy. Our traditions are far more than mere rituals — they are the very foundation of our identity and history, binding us together, instilling a sense of belonging and cultural continuity. Without them, our unique cultural voice risks fading into the tides of time.
To safeguard these invaluable traditions, we can begin by actively participating in cultural events and deepening our understanding of them. Education plays a pivotal role in this effort, as integrating traditional knowledge into curricula fosters deeper awareness and appreciation among younger generations. Moreover, leveraging social media to share our customs can amplify their reach and inspire others to join in preserving them.
Let’s work together to protect and pass down our precious traditions. Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校即将举行的一场主题为“传承与发扬:做传统文化与习俗的守护者”的英语演讲比赛写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要性:importance→significance
参加:participate in→take part in
此外:moreover→what’s more
鼓励:inspire→encourage
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To safeguard these invaluable traditions, we can begin by actively participating in cultural events and deepening our understanding of them.
拓展句:We can begin by actively participating in cultural events and deepening our understanding of them so that we can safeguard these invaluable traditions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Our traditions are far more than mere rituals — they are the very foundation of our identity and history, binding us together, instilling a sense of belonging and cultural continuity.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Education plays a pivotal role in this effort, as integrating traditional knowledge into curricula fosters deeper awareness and appreciation among younger generations.(运用了as引导的状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高一下·广东·期中)假定你是李华,你的美国网友Alice想了解你们年级最近活动情况。你打算给她发一封电子邮件,叙述上周六你们年级的诗歌朗诵比赛活动,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动简介;
3.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.参考词汇:课外的extracurricular;诗歌朗诵poetry recitation;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alice,
How are you doing at present?
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Alice,
How are you doing at present? Last Saturday, our grade organized a poetry recitation competition to enrich the students’ extracurricular life.
The competition featured various poems, including classic poems by famous poets and original works created by the participants. After a poem had been recited by a contestant, then they were judged on their ability to deliver the poems with emotion, clarity, and proper pronunciation. One of the highlights was a recitation of Li Bai’s “Autumn Frost” with charming background music and a graceful dance.
The event received positive feedback. A lot of students who listened to the poems being recited said they gained a lot from the activity. Many participants expressed their gratitude for such a meaningful activity and shared that it could boost their confidence in public speaking and inspire them to explore more poems. Has your grade held any meaningful activities recently?
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国网友写信介绍年级诗歌朗诵比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
组织:organize → arrange
获得:gain→ attain
激励:inspire→encourage
举办:hold→ throw
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last Saturday, our grade organized a poetry recitation competition to enrich the students’ extracurricular life.
拓展句:Last Saturday, our grade organized a poetry recitation competition so that we could enrich the students’ extracurricular life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】A lot of students who listened to the poems being recited said they gained a lot from the activity. (运用了who引导的定语从句和省略引导词的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Many participants expressed their gratitude for such a meaningful activity and shared that it could boost their confidence in public speaking and inspire them to explore more poems. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
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必练
主题01人与社会
一文化传承与节日庆典
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(24-25高一下广东期中)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Mke发来邮件想了解中国的一个传统节日,并询
问你上次是怎么度过这次节日的。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)简要介绍该节日(2)描述你是怎样度过该节日的(3)你的感受
注意:词数80左右(己给出的开头结尾不计入字数);请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike.
I'm writing to tell you something about
Yours,
LiHua
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(2425高一下·广东广州期中)假定你是李华。你的交换生朋友Adam对岭南文化非常感兴趣,计划五一
期间来广东进行省内游。请你给他推荐一座城市。
内容包括:
1推荐的地方;
2.推荐的理由
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(24-25高一下·广东茂名期中)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom对中国文化很感兴趣。上星期六你校举
办了一场以“文化传承,魅力节日”(Cultural Inheritance,Charming Festivals)为主题的庆祝活动,学校邀请了
学生和家长共同参与。请你给他写一封邮件,介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1.活动的时间、地点和参与人员;
2活动的具体内容(如表演、展示等);
3.你对这次活动的感受。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Best wishes!
Yours,
LiHua
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(2425高一下·广东广州期中)为了介绍和推广中国文化,某报社正在征集英文稿件,拟向外国朋友介绍
中国传统节日。请你写一篇英语短文介绍中国的传统节日一端午节。内容包括:
l.端午节(the Dragon Boat Festival)的时间;
2端午节的来源;
3端午节的活动。
注意:1.写作词数应为100左右;2注:棕子(zong zi);龙舟(dragon boat).
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
主题02人与社会
校园生活与社会实践
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·广东茂名期中)随着“五一劳动节”的临近,你校上周组织了校园劳动周(Campus Labour
Wek)活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇简短的英文报道。内容包括:
1活动的时间、地点、目的;
2.活动的过程;
3你的感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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(24-25高一下广东佛山~期中)为了庆祝一年一度的班主任节(Homeroom Teacher'sDay),上周你所在的
班级举行了一场班会活动。请你写一篇短文,给学校英文报专栏“y Class Story投稿,分享本次经历。内
容包括:
1.活动内容:
2.师生感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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主题03人与自我一
个人成长与能力提升
Passage 1
(2425高一下·广东期中)假如你叫李华,17岁,是我校一名高二的学生。深圳市明年要举办国际旅游节,
现向全市招募志愿者,请你根据以下要点向组委会写一封申请信,应征旅游节志愿者的工作。
1.你的个人信息;
2你的兴趣爱好与特长或相关经历等;
3.你的承诺。
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注意:1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头、结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Committee,
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
Passage 2
(24-25高一下·广东深圳期中)假定你是校英语角负责人李华,为庆祝“世界读书日”,将举办“经典小说英
文海报设计比赛”。请你用英文写一则通知,内容包括:
1.活动月的:
2.参赛要求;
3提交方式及截止日期。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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Passage 3
(24-25高一下·广东深圳期中)假定你是李华,你校正在招募“校园音乐节"(Campus Music Festival)英文主
持人,你在竞选的过程中遇到了困难,请你给外教M.Smith写一封求助信,要点如下:
1.你的困难;
2.寻求帮助;
3.表达感谢。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr.Smith,
Best wishes,
LiHua
Passage 4
(2425高一下·广东深圳期中)假如你是李华,你校正在招募“国际文化节”志愿者。请用英文给活动负责
人M.Smith写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学Mke加入。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.推荐理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯:
参考表达:国际文化节the International Culture Festival
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am Li Hua,
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进阶提升
主题01人与社会
科技发展与人文关怀
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·广东广州期中)你校英语俱乐部近期将举办一次英文演讲比赛,主题是“AI辅助作文批改
的利与弊”,请你选取其中一个角度写一篇英文演讲稿。内容包括:
1.你的看法;
2.你的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100个左右;
2.题目已给出。
Should we support AI-powered essay correction?
Passage 2
(24-25高一下·广东深圳期中)假如你是李华,你们班在上周的篮球赛中输了。Ben认为是他未能投进最
后一球所造成的,对此他感到遗憾和难过,有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你给Bn写一封英文邮件,谈谈
你对此事的看法,并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。
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2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
3可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ben,
Yours,
LiHua
主题02人与社会一
文化传承与国际交流
Passage 1
(2425高一下.广东期中)假如你是李华,你的英国好友Cris正在进行一项有关中国传统节日食品的调查。
请写一封邮件,推荐一种你最喜欢的传统节日食品,内容包括:
1.简介该食品以及与之相关的节日;
2.该食品的象征意义。
注意:
1.字数约100字左右(请尽量写满所给的行数空间);
2.书信的开头和结尾段落己经给出,不计入总字数;
3.请注意合理分段,且写作要点必须详略得当。结构不合理(没有分段、详略不得当)、书写潦草,各扣2
分。
Dear Chris,
Knowing that you
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Passage 2
(24-25高一下广东江门·期中) 你校英文报将开设新栏目“多元文化”(Diverse Cultures) , 现面向全校征稿。
请你写一篇短文推荐一项值得分享的中国文化传统,内容包括:
1.简要介绍该传统;
2.说明推荐理由。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Share Your Culture, Share the World!
Pa
s sage 3
(24-25高一下广东江门期中)假设你所在的城市为吸引国外游客,拟制作英文版旅游宣传手册,并公开
征稿,请用英语写一篇短文应征,征文包含以下信息:
1.介绍你所在的城市。
2.欢迎游客前来参观。
注意:1.要求80词左右。
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
Passage 4
(24-25高一下广东广州期中)假定你是学生会主席李华,学校下个月将在学生活动中心举办为期3天的
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校园传统文化艺术节,你校外教Robert一直对中国传统文化感兴趣,请你代表学生会给他写封邮件,邀请
他参加,内容包括:
1.活动举办的月的:
2.活动的具体时间和地点;
3.活动内容简介。
注意:1.字数应为100字左右:
2.学生活动中心:The Student Activity Hall
Dear Robert,
Yours,
LiHua
主题03人与自我
一成长体验与文化认同
Passage 1
(2425高一下·广东深圳期中)假定你是李华,你校即将举行一场主题为“传承与发扬:做传统文化与习俗
的守护者”的英语演讲比赛。请写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:
1.保护传统文化与习俗的意义;
2.保护传统文化与习俗的做法。
注意:
1.词数80词左右:
2.开头已给出,不计入词数。
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