Unit1 People of achievement Using language 课件-2025-2026学年高中英语人教版选择性必修第一册

People of Achievement Unit 1 Using language 2 Brainstorm Can you guess who he is ?  a Jewish  worked in the Swiss patent office  Get Nobel Prize for Physics in 1921  E=mc²  The theory of relativity Albert Einstein Skim the text and answer: What's the genre of the text? A. Exposition (说明文) B. Biography (传记) C. Argumentation (议论文) D. Practical writing (应用文) The text mainly talks about Albert Einstein's ________ and ____________. life story achievements What would be included in a biography? Task 1: Time line Born in Germany 1879 1896 1955 1933 1895 failed to enter university entered university 1900 1905 1922 graduated took a job as a clerk in the Swiss patent office 1902 earned a doctorate in physics and published four extraordinary physics papers 1909 entered research full-time at a university was awarded the Nobel Prize for Physics fled Germany passed away Introduction (mainly about his great contributions and personal qualities) Task 2: Match the main idea with each paragraph(Try to find out some general words) Birth/Early life and Education Work experience (the road to the new Isaac Newton) Turbulent (动荡的) mid-life His odd looks, three anecdotes(逸事) (forgetfulness, love, humour)/personality Death 1 2 3 4 5 6 Title Para1: Brief Intriduction Para 2: Early life/Education Para 3: Work experience & achievement Para 4: Mid-life Para 5: Appearance & anecdotes Para 6: Death Leading Body Ending Style: Biography ➬Conclude: How to organise your own short biography? Structure para 1 para 2 para 3 Introduction ( identity, great contributions and personal qualities) Body (important life experiences) Ending ( judgement and appreciation ) Read the text and: Summarize what aspects are introduced. Underline the expressions related to the aspects. Aspects Expressions Identity & Greatness Personalities Education Achievements Appearance Identity Great-ness Einstein, who is the greatest scientists…, is considered one of the smartest men who ever lived. He made numerous contributions to… The most well-known, famous Personalities a genius, courageous, kind, loved by many people, funny, sometime forgot things, humorous Educat-ion …managed to do Out of a strong passion for… he continued… earning a doctorate in… Achieve-ments …published four extraordinary physics papers. …became famous as Isaac Newton He was awarded the Nobel Prize He continued to make great contributions in… Appear-ance Slightly odd-looking, had a thick moustache and long white hair What rhetorical devices are used in the passage? What rhetorical devices are used in the passage? Circumstances changed in 1933, when Hitler came to power in Germany. Einstein, who was Jewish, found the doors of academic institutions closed to him. As a consequence he had to flee Germany. After spending time in Europe, he finally took up a position as a researcher at the Institute for Advanced Study in Princeton,USA. Following that, he continued to make great achievements in physics and mathematicse. D metaphor A. analogy类比 B. personification拟人 C. simile明喻 D. metaphor暗喻 E. euphemism委婉语 Reading--read for language feature What rhetorical devices are used in the passage? To the public, he was seen as a slightly odd-looking but kind and funny man. He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock. Although he was a genius, he sometimes forgot things, like his friends’ birthdays. But despite his peculiarities, he was loved by his friends and neighbours. There is even a story about how he helped a little girl who knocked on his door and asked for help with her homework. In fact, Einstein often encountered people on the street who would stop him and ask him to help explain things. After many such occasions, he finally started saying, “ Pardon me! Sorry! Always I am mistaken for Professor Einstein!” B personification C simile A. analogy类比 B. personification拟人 C. simile明喻 D. metaphor暗喻 E. euphemism委婉语 Reading--read for language feature After two years of looking for work as a teacher, Einstein took a job as a clerk in the Swiss patent office. While working there, out of a strong passion for knowledge, he continued to study, carning a doctoratc in physics in 1905. That same ycar, which was later recorded as a miracle year in science, he published four extraordinary physics papcrs. Following this, he gradually became famous throughout the world as the new Tsaac Newton. .... On 18 April 1955, it was reported that Einstein had passed away, and the whole world mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientist. A.analogy E.euphemism Reading--read for language feature What rhetorical devices are used in the passage? A. analogy类比 B. personification拟人 C. simile明喻 D. metaphor暗喻 E. euphemism委婉语 An introduction to someone you admire 体裁 记叙文 内容 人的出生、家庭背景、教育、生平经历、成就和评价 时态 一般现在时、一般过去时 人称 第三人称 An introduction to someone you admire 人物简介的一般步骤可以概括为5个字: 概、貌、育、平、评。 1. 概指概况: age, family background, identity 2. 貌指外貌: appearance, character, hobby 3. 育指教育: education background 4. 平指生平: big events, achievements & influence (in time order) 5. 评指评价: evaluation An introduction to someone you admire —family background & identity 通过概述性的语言来介绍人物出生的时间、地点和家庭背景，常用同位语、分词结构或定语从句 Albert Einstein, who is perhaps the greatest scientist in modern physics, is often considered one of the smartest men who ever lived. 郎平，一名职业排球运动员和教练，被誉为排球的传奇人物，深受中外球迷的喜爱。 被誉为“万婴之母” ，林巧稚为中国妇女儿童的健康做出了巨大贡献。 郎平，一名职业排球运动员和教练，被誉为排球的传奇人物，深受中外球迷的喜爱。 Lang Ping, a professional volleyball player and coach, is considered as the legend of volleyball, loved by fans both at home and abroad. 被誉为“万婴之母” ，林巧稚为中国妇女儿童的健康做出了巨大贡献。 Lin Qiaozhi, who was honored as the "mother of ten thousand babies, made a huge contribution to the health of women and children in China. 介绍出生: 介绍出生的时间、地点和家境用分词结构, 使文章更简洁。如： ⑴姚明于1980年出生在上海，是一位世界著名的篮球运动员。 Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980 (定语), is a world famous basketball player. （用非谓语/同位语结构/定从，使文章通顺) 1) Born on _____________________, ________ became ________________________________ ____________. 出生于1989年12月28号，她后来成为一位学生喜欢的好老师 2) ___________, the daugther of a _____ family, was born on ___________________. 玲子，一个贫穷家庭的女儿，出生于1989年12月28号 December 28th,1989 she later a good teacher of whom students are fond of Ling zi poor December 28th,1989 An introduction to someone you admire —appearance 描写外貌: 巧用with短语。 他是一个 有着酷酷的外表、安静害羞的人。 He is a quiet and shy man with a cool appearance. 我的语文老师长着两只大眼睛, 留着长发 My Chinese teacher is a beautiful lady, with long hair and big eyes. 被大学录取 be admitted to 主修....... major in 获得硕士学位 /博士学位receive / get a master's / doctor's degree 出国深造have further study in .../ go aboard for the further education 毕业于.......大学......系 graduate from…department of…university 精通…… have a good command of… 从清华大学毕业之后，他前往伦敦深造，获得博士学位。 Having graduated from Tsinghua University, he went to London for further education, where he received his Doctor’s Degree. An introduction to someone you admire —education background 致力于… 决心做…… 有……的天赋 获得......奖 被誉为 作为......而著名 做......工作 An introduction to someone you admire —big events, achievements & influence devote oneself /one’s life to (doing)sth=be devoted to make up one's mind / be determined to do have a gift/ talent for = have gifted/ talented for be awarded ...prize for.../ obtain/receive ...prize for... be honoured as... be known as work as 介绍人物生平和成就时，按时间顺序和评述性语言刻画人物一生，句式结构可以选择定语从句、主语从句、并列句、非谓语动词短语和倒装等。 他将终身奉献给翻译事业，在2014年他获得了Aurora Borealis Prize，对于翻译家来说，这是最高的荣誉。（非谓语定从/同位语） Devoting his entire life to translating Chinese literature into English, in 2014, he was awarded the Aurora Borealis Prize, which is the highest honor for translators. 在他的业余时间，他为我们组织郊游、聚会等活动，我们从中受益良多。（强调句，定从） In his spare time, it is he who organizes activities such as outings and parties for us, from which we benefit a lot. An introduction to someone you admire —big events, achievements & influence 国内外著名的 为……树立好榜样 高度赞扬…… 为……作出巨大贡献 An introduction to someone you admire —evaluation be famous / well­ known at home and abroad set a good example to sb/set sb a good example speak / think highly of… make great / numerous contributions to An introduction Body Ending Structure Beginning Content Name, identity, basic information Achievement, experience Details and examples Influence and evaluation Structure of an introduction to someone you admire Homework –Introduce a person you admire Content Detail Name and Identity What does he/she do? What is his/her achievement? Appearance What's his/her most distinctive feature in terms of appearance? Personality What kind of person is he/she? ( facts & opinions) Impressive story five elements: what/when/where/who/how Reason for his/her greatness What's his/her influence/contribution? My feeling/ comments How do I feel about him/her? Structure How will I develop my writing?（order） What will I focus on in each paragraph?(topic) Language feature What words and expressions can be used? What rhetorical devices will I use? Writing Exchange your draft with a partner. 1. Use the checklist to help you review your partner's draft.  Does the writer describe the person's appearance and personality?  Does the writer tell an impressive story of the person's life?  Does the writer say why the person is great?  Does the writer sum up how he/she feels about this person? 2. Take your draft back and revise it. Share your introduction with the rest of the class. Writing www.islide.cc Summary inspiration 灵感 perspiration 汗水 www.islide.cc Summary writing time 出生：1930年9月7日，北京 爱好：听音乐、游泳 毕业院校：西南农学院Southwest Agriculture College 工作经历及成就：1.大学毕业后，袁隆平去往湖南从事农业教学和研究工作，并在1975年成功培育出了杂交水稻。 2.提高水稻产量，消除世界饥饿 3.被誉为“杂交水稻之父” “Father of Hybrid Rice” 4.2019年被授予“共和国勋章” the Medal of the Republic 5.2021年5月22日，在湖南长沙逝世 ; 900 倒计时 The Man Who Fed the World Yuan Longping, who is one of the greatest figures in modern China, is widely known as the “ father of hybrid rice”. He made huge contributions to the problem of world huger by promoting rice production.Yuan is not only an outstanding scientist, he is also a person who has a wide range of hobbies, like listening to music and swimming in daily life. Introduction Identity Contributions Personal qualities Administrator (A) - This great scientist was born in Beijing on 7 September 1930. After graduating from College, he devoted himself to agricultural education and research all along. Owing to years of hard-working, he succeeded in cultivating hybrid rice in 1975 and was awarded many times. On 22 May 2021, it was reported that Yuan had passed away, and our whole country mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientist. Yuan is a person who looks thin but has a strong mind. Yuan is a man who lives in poverty but owns spiritual richness. Life experiences judgement and appreciation Writing Writing 【背一背】（2020年全国1卷）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题, 写一篇短文参赛, 内容包括：1. 人物简介；2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 The person I respect There are many respectable people around us. 思维导图引路 www.v5ppt.com Sample writing: There are many respectable people around us. Among them, our English teacher is regarded as my favourite one. To begin with, my English teacher is a typical charming lady as you can imagine, slim figure, fair skin as well as infectious beautiful smile. But most importantly, far behind her outstanding appearance, it is her fabulous teaching ability and empathetic feature that make her respectable. She has a talent for teaching, always making her class lively. Following her steps, we can learn English with great pleasure while receiving good grades. Meanwhile, she is the one that you can rely on, www.v5ppt.com -can turn to and can share everything with. She is not only a respectable teacher who does huge benefit to you, but also a lifetime friend you ought to cherish. That is my English teacher, my most respectable person. She is the star glowing with high school experience. She is the fragrant rose that beautifies my life. (155词) 【评价】本文要点齐全，内容充实，语言流畅，多度自然，结构合理。此外，文章长短句结合，使用了fabulous、infectious、cherish等较高级的词汇以及现在分词、定语从句、强调句型等较丰富的语法结构，增强了文章的表现力，反映了该考生扎实的语言功底和较强的语言驾驭能力。文字数量超过了规定范围。本文得分：24分。 www.v5ppt.com $