十句五定法读后续写课件-2026届高三英语二轮复习

十句五定法·读后续写教学思路 以“Grandma’s Violin”为例 READING AND WRITING TEACHING STRATEGY 1.7.2013 大家好，今天我们来学习一种非常实用的读后续写方法——“十句五定法”。我们将以“Grandma’s Violin”这个故事为例，详细拆解如何运用这个方法快速构思、完成一篇优秀的续写作文。希望通过今天的学习，大家能掌握这个技巧，提升自己的写作能力。 ‹#› My sister Clara and I had always shared everything-from our favorite books to our biggest dreams. We were best friends, until we disagreed about Grandma's old violin. That violin was, special. Grandma used to play it every night, filling our house with beautiful music and happy memories. Last winter, before she passed away, she gave it to us. "This is for both of you," she said, holding the shiny wooden instrument. "Let its music remind you that family matters most." Things got complicated when I moved tomy own apartment. "I'd like to put it in my new living room," I told Clara one day. She looked upset. "But I have my music school audition(试演) next week," she said, her voice excited but nervous. "My teacher said I need a good violin.Grandma would want me to play it!" We started arguing, our voices gettinglouder, "You?" I said angrily. "You can never keep your music papers in order! That violin needs to be taken care of properly." 1.7.2013 本次课程将分为四个部分。首先，我们会学习如何从原文中快速提取关键信息，这是续写的基础。接着，我们将详细讲解“十句五定法”的具体应用步骤。然后，我们会分析讲解的重点和语言亮点。最后，展示一个完整的十句版范文，让大家有更直观的理解。 ‹#› She looked really hurt. "You just want tohang it on the wall like decoration!" she shouted back. "You don't really care about Grandma's memory. You just want something nice for your apartment!" Without thinking, I took the violin case and left, alarming the door behind me with a loud bang. I heard something break inside-probably the music stand she loved since she was little. Two weeks went by without us speaking.Then, while cleaning out my closet, I found Grandma's special box. Under some old concert tickets was a letter for Clara. "My dear Clara,"Grandma had written, "if you're reading this, you must be following your music dream. Play this violin with love. And please tell your sister-no object is worth damaging your closerelationship." The words made me think deeply. I remembered how happy Clara was when she got into music school, how her face lit up when she talked about her dreams-dreams I had been too selfish to support. 1.7.2013 本次课程将分为四个部分。首先，我们会学习如何从原文中快速提取关键信息，这是续写的基础。接着，我们将详细讲解“十句五定法”的具体应用步骤。然后，我们会分析讲解的重点和语言亮点。最后，展示一个完整的十句版范文，让大家有更直观的理解。 ‹#› 人物 1. The two main characters are the writer and her ______ . 2. The third important character is their ______ 物品 The key object of the story is Grandma’s old ______ 人物关系与情感 1. At first, they were ______ and shared everything. 2. After the argument, they ______ for two weeks. 核心冲突 1. The writer wanted to put the violin in the living room as a ______ 2. Clara wanted to use it for her ______ 转折点 The writer found a letter from Grandma in a special box, which told her no object is worth damaging the ______ 1.7.2013 本次课程将分为四个部分。首先，我们会学习如何从原文中快速提取关键信息，这是续写的基础。接着，我们将详细讲解“十句五定法”的具体应用步骤。然后，我们会分析讲解的重点和语言亮点。最后，展示一个完整的十句版范文，让大家有更直观的理解。 ‹#› 核心 主题 The theme of the story is that ______ is more important than material things. 1.7.2013 本次课程将分为四个部分。首先，我们会学习如何从原文中快速提取关键信息，这是续写的基础。接着，我们将详细讲解“十句五定法”的具体应用步骤。然后，我们会分析讲解的重点和语言亮点。最后，展示一个完整的十句版范文，让大家有更直观的理解。 ‹#› 愧疚→明白Grandma的心愿→升华小提琴的意义→解读妹妹梦想的深层价值→自我反思 + 下定决心 1.7.2013 本次课程将分为四个部分。首先，我们会学习如何从原文中快速提取关键信息，这是续写的基础。接着，我们将详细讲解“十句五定法”的具体应用步骤。然后，我们会分析讲解的重点和语言亮点。最后，展示一个完整的十句版范文，让大家有更直观的理解。 ‹#› 看着奶奶的信，我终于明白了她真正的心愿 用Looking at...现在分词作状语 Looking at Grandma's letter, I finally understood her true wish. 1.7.2013 本次课程将分为四个部分。首先，我们会学习如何从原文中快速提取关键信息，这是续写的基础。接着，我们将详细讲解“十句五定法”的具体应用步骤。然后，我们会分析讲解的重点和语言亮点。最后，展示一个完整的十句版范文，让大家有更直观的理解。 ‹#› 这把小提琴不该被锁起来或争抢—— 它应该被奏响，用音乐填满我们的生活，就像奶奶曾经做的那样 The violin shouldn’t be locked away or fought over—it should be played, to fill our lives with music just like Grandma had done. 1.7.2013 本次课程将分为四个部分。首先，我们会学习如何从原文中快速提取关键信息，这是续写的基础。接着，我们将详细讲解“十句五定法”的具体应用步骤。然后，我们会分析讲解的重点和语言亮点。最后，展示一个完整的十句版范文，让大家有更直观的理解。 ‹#› Clara成为音乐家的梦想不仅仅是她个人的抱负；更是让奶奶的精神永存的美好方式。 Clara's dream to become a musician wasn't just her personal ambition; it was a beautiful way to keep Grandma's spirit alive. 1.7.2013 本次课程将分为四个部分。首先，我们会学习如何从原文中快速提取关键信息，这是续写的基础。接着，我们将详细讲解“十句五定法”的具体应用步骤。然后，我们会分析讲解的重点和语言亮点。最后，展示一个完整的十句版范文，让大家有更直观的理解。 ‹#› 忽视她的热爱是错误的。是时候弥补过错了 I was so wrong to ignore her passion. It was time to make things right. 1.7.2013 本次课程将分为四个部分。首先，我们会学习如何从原文中快速提取关键信息，这是续写的基础。接着，我们将详细讲解“十句五定法”的具体应用步骤。然后，我们会分析讲解的重点和语言亮点。最后，展示一个完整的十句版范文，让大家有更直观的理解。 ‹#› 走向妹妹房间→互动道歉→读信共鸣→和解拥抱→音乐治愈 + 升华 1.7.2013 本次课程将分为四个部分。首先，我们会学习如何从原文中快速提取关键信息，这是续写的基础。接着，我们将详细讲解“十句五定法”的具体应用步骤。然后，我们会分析讲解的重点和语言亮点。最后，展示一个完整的十句版范文，让大家有更直观的理解。 ‹#› 她打开门时，眼睛红红的。“对不起，” 我轻声说着，把小提琴盒递了过去 When she opened the door, her eyes were red. "I'm sorry," I whispered, holding out the violin case. 1.7.2013 本次课程将分为四个部分。首先，我们会学习如何从原文中快速提取关键信息，这是续写的基础。接着，我们将详细讲解“十句五定法”的具体应用步骤。然后，我们会分析讲解的重点和语言亮点。最后，展示一个完整的十句版范文，让大家有更直观的理解。 ‹#› “奶奶会希望你拥有它的。” 我把信拿给她看。她读信时，眼泪涌了出来。 "Grandma would want you to have this." I showed her the letter. As she read it, tears welled in her eyes. 1.7.2013 本次课程将分为四个部分。首先，我们会学习如何从原文中快速提取关键信息，这是续写的基础。接着，我们将详细讲解“十句五定法”的具体应用步骤。然后，我们会分析讲解的重点和语言亮点。最后，展示一个完整的十句版范文，让大家有更直观的理解。 ‹#› “我也错了，” 她说着，紧紧抱住了我。 "I was wrong too," she said, hugging me tightly. 1.7.2013 本次课程将分为四个部分。首先，我们会学习如何从原文中快速提取关键信息，这是续写的基础。接着，我们将详细讲解“十句五定法”的具体应用步骤。然后，我们会分析讲解的重点和语言亮点。最后，展示一个完整的十句版范文，让大家有更直观的理解。 ‹#› 然后她打开琴盒，奏响了奶奶最爱的旋律。音乐充满了房间，消除了我们的隔阂 Then she opened the case and played Grandma's favorite melody. The music filled the room, bridging the gap/ break down the barriers 1.7.2013 本次课程将分为四个部分。首先，我们会学习如何从原文中快速提取关键信息，这是续写的基础。接着，我们将详细讲解“十句五定法”的具体应用步骤。然后，我们会分析讲解的重点和语言亮点。最后，展示一个完整的十句版范文，让大家有更直观的理解。 ‹#› From then on, I realized that love between family members is the most precious treasure in life, which can never be replaced by any material thing. 从那时起，我才明白，家人之间的爱才是生命中最珍贵的财富，是任何物质都无法替代的。 1.7.2013 本次课程将分为四个部分。首先，我们会学习如何从原文中快速提取关键信息，这是续写的基础。接着，我们将详细讲解“十句五定法”的具体应用步骤。然后，我们会分析讲解的重点和语言亮点。最后，展示一个完整的十句版范文，让大家有更直观的理解。 ‹#› $