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技法3 4个修辞公式,生动多得分
在高中阶段,鲜有学生将注意力放在修辞手法的运用上。然而,在进行读后续写时,巧妙地融入修辞手法能够唤醒读者心中生动的意象,使语言文字焕发出新鲜活泼的生机,意蕴深远且优美,从而极大地增强文章的感染力和说服力,实现艺术性的表达效果。恰到好处地运用修辞手法能够使文章锦上添花,起到画龙点睛的效果,是考场作文的一大亮点。
公式1 比喻式:as+形容词+as (a/an) ...
1.Jack sprinted for the finish line as swift as an arrow, leaving all the competitors behind.
Jack敏捷得像箭一样,快速冲向终点,把所有参赛者抛在了后面。
2.All my classmates were as busy as bees, eagerly engaged in the preparation for the performance.
班里的所有同学都忙得不可开交,热情投入表演的准备中。
3.With his turn to speak coming up, Jack stood there, tongue-tied, his face turning as pale as snow.
轮到Jack说话时,他站在那里,张口结舌,脸色苍白如雪。
4.Opening the door, Mary found Susan standing there, with a smile as bright as daylight on her face.
Mary打开门,发现Susan站在那里,脸上的笑容像日光一样灿烂。
积累速记 常用比喻表达
形容人
as pleased/delighted/cheerful/joyful as a flying bird
高兴得像一只飞翔的小鸟
as angry/mad/furious as a raging storm
愤怒得像狂风暴雨
as anxious as an ant on a hot pan
急得像热锅上的蚂蚁
as busy as a bee忙得团团转
形容事物
as bright as daylight 如日光般明亮/灿烂
as easy as a piece of cake轻而易举
as dazzling/shining as diamonds像钻石般闪耀
as gentle as a breeze像微风一样温柔
公式2 比喻式:特定动词短语+表情绪的名词,sb did sth like/as if ...
1.Seized by terror and despair, David began to shake uncontrollably like being electrified.
被恐惧和绝望所困,David开始像触电一样无法控制地颤抖。
2.Overwhelmed by anxiety and uncertainty, I felt my throat tightened as if burning when I stepped onto the stage.
充斥着焦虑和不安,我一上台就觉得喉咙发紧,像着火一样。
3.Filled with relief, I felt my mom’s words were like a ray of sunshine, driving all my depression and sorrow away.
我如释重负,觉得妈妈的话就像一缕阳光,驱散了我所有的忧郁和悲伤。
4.George, overwhelmed by astonishment, eagerly accepted the unexpected opportunity like a kid desperate for his favorite toy.
George震惊不已,像一个渴望得到自己最喜欢的玩具的孩子一样,迫不及待地接受了这个意想不到的机会。
【速用提示】常见特定动词短语有filled with充满,falling into陷入,drowned in沉浸在, seized/struck by被……侵袭,overwhelmed with/by充溢着,consumed by被……吞噬。
公式3 比喻式:表情绪的名词+特定动词短语+sb like ...
1.Fear swept over him like cold, dark sea water.
恐惧像冰冷、黑暗的海水向他袭来。
2.As her fingers moved over the keys of the piano, a sense of calm gradually took hold of her like a gentle spring breeze.
当她的手指在钢琴的琴键上移动时,她逐渐感受到了一种平静的感觉,就像一阵轻柔的春风一样。
【速用提示】常见特定动词短语有wash over升腾,take hold of控制,sweep over突然袭来,surge through使强烈地感到, flood over涌上心头。公式4 比喻式:sb did sth as if/though+虚拟语气
1.Having arrived at school in a hurry, Archie looked very untidy, as though he hadn’t slept well last night.
Archie匆匆赶到学校,看上去很邋遢,好像昨晚没睡好。
2.So lifelike was the narration that the audience were attracted by the wonderful story as if they were in the world presented by the narrator.
叙述如此逼真,以至于听众被精彩的故事吸引,仿佛置身于讲述者所呈现的世界之中。
3.They talked about their hope and dreams and offered each other words of encouragement and support, as if they had never been apart since three years ago.
他们谈论着自己的希望和梦想,互相给予鼓励和支持,就好像三年前他们从未分开过一样。
4.My dog Rudy, despite feeling under the weather due to the delay, wagged his tail from side to side as if he understood the necessity for caution.
我的狗Rudy虽然因为延误而感到心情不佳,但还是左右摆动着尾巴,好像他也理解谨慎的必要性。
【速用提示】如果想表达“好像,正像”,而且需要用从句去表达时,可以考虑as if/though引导的从句。如果与事实不符,则注意需要使用虚拟语气。as if/though从句如用虚拟语气,需注意以下用法:①与现在事实相反,从句用过去时,且be动词用were不用was;②与过去事实相反,从句用过去完成时。
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