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Unit2 Wildlife Protection Reading for Writing 倡议信 LEAD-IN Giant panda South China tiger Blue whale Polar bear African elephant Golden monkey What do they have in common? They are endangered animals. Guess who I am! 假如你是学生会主席李华,你校正在进行野生动物保护宣传周活动,请你代表学生会用英语写一封倡议书,呼吁同学们关爱保护野生动物。内容包括: 1.简述野生动物的现状; 2.野生动物减少的原因以及采取的措施; 3.呼吁大家保护野生动物。 一、必备词语: 1.in danger of extinction 濒临灭绝的危险 2. make profits 获取利润 3. habitat loss 栖息地丧失 4. illegal hunting 非法狩猎 5. raise one’s awareness of 提高…的意识 6.speak up for endangered animals为濒危动物发声 7..save…from… / keep…safe from… 保护…免受… 8.call on sb. to do sth. /appeal to sb. to do sth.号召\呼吁某人做某事 attach great importance to 重视 Useful expressions related to wildlife protection 1. endangered wildlife animals (species) 濒危野生动物(物种) 2. set up/establish nature reserves 建立自然保护区 3. make laws concerning animals protection 制定动物保护法 4. take effective steps/measures to do… 采取有效措施做… 5. live in harmony with nature 和自然和谐相处 6. with the animals’ habitat destroyed 动物的栖息地被破坏了 7. keep/maintain/sustain ecological balance 保持生态平衡 8. play an important role in wildlife protection 在野生动物保护中发挥重要作用 9. protect and improve the living and ecological environment 保护和改善生活和生态环境 10. create a pleasant ecological environment 创造良好的生态环境 11. popularize environmental protection knowledge 普及环保知识 段落结构 第一段:发出倡议的背景(野生动物的现状)。 (what) 第二段:倡议的具体内容和要求 (灭绝的原因和措施) 第三段:结尾要表示倡议者的决心和希望。(a call to action) 开篇Para. 1 交代背景和原因,引出倡议的目的 我是李华, 是学生会的主席。 I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union. AI 翻译 我写信呼吁所有学生保护野生动物。 I’m writing to call on/appeal to all the students to protect the wild animals. AI 翻译 随着……的临近,我想号召大家…… With sth approaching/around the corner, I’d like to call on everyone to... 开头(第一段): 简述野生动物的现状 1.如今,随着社会的发展,野生动物的数量正在急剧减少,其中一些正濒临灭绝。 随着……的发展 ...的数量 减少 处于……的危险中 灭绝 急剧地 越来越多 with the development of… the number of ... decrease/reduce be in danger of die out/ be in danger of extinction sharply; at an alarming rate an increasing number of Nowadays, with the development of society, the number of wild animals is decreasing sharply, some of which are in danger of dying out. Recently, there exists /is a problem that…(问题内容),leading to many bad effects. Therefore, we call on people to do… (最近, 存在一个关于…的问题,导致了不良后果,因此,我们号召人们…) Why are they endangered? Brainstorming 头脑风暴 are being hunted without mercy to make profits habitats are destroyed habitat loss environmental pollution the environment is polluted 1.其灭绝原因有很多。 There are many reasons for their extinction. 2.首先,一些人为了赚钱仍然在猎杀野生动物 3.其次,野生动物的栖息地正在被人类破坏。(destroy v.破坏) 4.最后,人们不太关注环境污染,这也导致了野生动物的死亡。 (pollution n.污染 lead to导致 death n.死亡) First of all, some people are still hunting wild animals to make profits. In addition, the habitats of wild animals are being destroyed by human beings. Eventually, people pay no attention to environmental pollution. It also leads to the death of wild animals. 如何升级 第二段:野生动物灭绝的原因 contributing to 导致;促成 contribute to 导致;促成;为...做贡献;投稿 As teenagers Make posters Reduce environmental pollution and live an eco-friendly life Refuse to buy products made from wild animals Share knowledge about protecting wildlife with people around us Volunteer for wildlife protection groups speak up for wildlife protection the government/authorities Establish/Set up nature reserves Promote international cooperation on wildlife protection; Educate the public about the importance of endangered species Make/Enforce relevant laws and regulations Establish wildlife rescue centers Provide conservation funding Measures to preserve wildlife Help! concerning the terrible situation of wildlife raise people’s awareness of wildlife protection every small act makes a huge difference. When the buying stops, the killing can too; keep/maintain ecological balance call on more people to get involved in wildlife protection. reduce human’s impact on their survival; live in peace and safe place sth under national protection;ban illegal hunting provide medical care for those severely injured support the restore of habitats and the rescue work 第二段:保护野生动物的措施 1.为了保护野生动物,我们应该采取一系列措施。 With the intention of protecting wild animals,we are supposed to carry out a series of measures. make some laws draw people's attention on take on responsibilities to do... do less harm to... raise one’s awareness of live a/an green/eco-friendly lifestyle Government should make some laws to draw people's attention on environmental protection. Companies are supposed to take on their responsibilities so as to do less harm to their habitat. As individuals,It is vital for all of us to raise our awareness of environmental protection and live an eco-friendly lifestyle. Para2(Body) 政府应该制定相关的法律来吸引人们对保护野生动物的关注。 企业应该承担他们的职责以便减少对栖息环境的伤害。 作为个人,提高我们的野生动物保护意识,过绿色生活是非常重要的。 篇中句:亮点出彩篇中句 In order to do…, sb is/are encouraged / supposed / required /expected to… (为了达成…目的,...被鼓励做…) It is suggested that we do… (倡议我们做…) It would be better if we could do… (如果我们做…,结果会更好。) It is highly recommended that…, which aims to do / enables us to do (使我们能).... (强烈推荐…,目的使为例让我们能够…) sb. is supposed to attach great importance to... As we know,...is of great significance/importance/benefit for us. 正如我们所知,……对我们来说非常重要/有益。 (2)Besides,doing...is also beneficial/harmful to...此外,做……对……来说也是有益/害的。 (3)To meet the challenge of...,it’s high time that we should take action to...为迎接……的挑战,是我们采取行动……的时候了。 (4)As an individual,we are supposed to...作为个人,我们应该…… (5)It’s everyone’s responsibility to...If we can...,we can make a big difference to...……是每个人的责任。如果我们能……,我们可以对……产生很大的影响。 3.结尾句 (1) Only if we do... can we...只有我们做……,我们才能…… (2) It is high time that we did/should do...Let’s take action right now!是时候该我们做……了。 让我们立即采取行动吧! (3) Let’s join our hands and take action immediately, striving for a more harmonious and sustainable environment/society.让我们携起手来,立即采取行动, 为更和谐、可持续的环境/社会而努力。 (4) I am convinced that,with our joint efforts,the phenomenon of...will disappear. 我相信,在我们的共同努力下,……的现象将会消失。 (5) Let’s take action right now! I’m convinced that, with our joint efforts,our hard work will eventually pay off.让我们现在就行动起来吧!我相信我们的辛苦付出最终会有回报的。 (6) I strongly call on us to act immediately. Only in this way can we...我强烈呼吁我们立即采取行动。只有这样,我们才能…… (7) As the saying goes, every small act makes a huge difference. It is high time that each individual made a joint effort, striving for a more ..... and ...... (harmonious and sustainable environment/society). Take action now! The sooner, the better! Linking (连句成篇) 添加合适的过渡词: 1. 表顺序: 首先:Initially,... To begin with,… First and foremost,… In the first place,… What comes first is that... 其次:In addition,... Additionally,... What's more,.. Moreover,... What comes next is that... Aside from that,... 最后:Ultimately,... Last but not least,... 2. 表逻辑: 表原因:since... as... because... due to... owing to... on account of... 表目的:in order to... so as to... in order that... so that... make some laws publish relevant laws improve people's understanding of... raise/enhance people's awareness of... 02 03 get worse and worse get increasingly bad 01 Polishing(锤炼词汇) try one's best to... spare no effort to... 05 06 keep ecological balance maintain/ sustain ecological banlance 04 remember that bear in mind that Polishing(锤炼词汇) 01 1. With World Environment Day coming, We are supposed to call on people to pay attention to environmental protection. with复合结构: with+宾语+宾补(doing/done/to do等) 2. With the air pollution getting worse, We are urged to take immediate measures to improve the air condition. approaching, Polishing(锤炼句式1 - 非谓语动词) 1. The World Environment Day is coming. We are supposed to call on people to pay attention to environmental protection. 2. The air pollution is getting worse. We are urged to take immediate measures to improve the air condition. 02 定语从句合并简单句 Polishing(锤炼句式2 - 定语从句) 1. Global warming is getting incrasingly bad. It also leads to extreme weather. 2. People should enhance their awareness of environmental protection. It can help them live a green lifestyle. 1. Global warming is getting incrasingly bad, which also leads to extreme weather. 2. People should enhance their awareness of environmental protection, which can help them live a green lifestyle. 03 1. not only..., (but) also... 2. so + adj. 位于句首 3. 否定词位于句首 4. only + 状语位于句首 Polishing(锤炼句式3 - 部分倒装) 1. Government should lay down relevant laws and companies need to take on their responsibilities. 2. Maintaining ecological balance is so crucial for human beings that we need to live in harmony with nature. 1. Not only should government lay down relevant laws, companies also need to take on their responsibilities. 2. So crucial is maintaning ecological balance for human beings that we need to live in harmony with nature 04 时间 + has witnessed that... Polishing(锤炼句式4 - 巧用witness) 2. The past few centuries has witnessed that our environment has been greatly damaged. 1. The past decades has witnessed that many marine animals are dying out. 1. Many marine animals are dying out during the past decades. 2. Our environment has been greatly damaged in the past few centuries. Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. I'm writing to appeal to all the students to protect the wild animals. Nowadays, with the development of society, the number of wild animals is decreasing at an alarming rate, some of which are in danger of dying out. There are many reasons contributing to their extinction. Firstly, some people are still hunting wild animals to make profits. In addition, the habitats of wild animals are being destroyed by human beings. Finally, environmental pollution also leads to the extinction of wild animals. With the aim of protecting wild animals, we are supposed to carry out a series of effective measures. Initially, the government should lay down relevant laws to place the wildlife under national protection. Aside from that, measures should be taken to stop environmental pollution, which enables the wildlife to live peacefully. What's more, we can educate people around us to raise their awareness of wildlife protection. Last but not least, a nature reserve is the shelter of animals, which should be set up to reduce human’s impact on their survival. All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting wild animals, striving for a more harmonious and sustainable environment. I’m convinced that, with our joint efforts, our hard work will eventually pay off. Let’s take action now! Yours, Li Hua Dear Sir/Madam, I am _,_(身份). I am writing this letter to call on _(写信目的). Nowadays, _ (描述现状分析). It is necessary for us to _(做某事). With the aim of _(目的),_(措施). First of all,_. In addition,_. Last but not least,_.(具体采取的行动). All in all, it is high time that _(做某事). _(意义). Let’s take action now! Yours, XXX 作文评分 四档 16-20分 “分不在高,16就行” 五档 21-25分 “太难了,差一点就满分了” 二档 6-10分 “ 楼上也只能低调了” 三档 11-15分 “我稍微一出手就是他们的极限” 1-5分 “低调低调” 一档 第一档:(1~5分) 未完成任务,遗漏主要内容,写了无关内容,语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。 第二档:(6~10分) 未恰当完成任务,语法结构单调、词汇项目有限,有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解,较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。 第三档(11~15分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务,虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容,有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解,简单的语句间的连接成分基本达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档(16~20分) 完全完成了任务,虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 第五档:(21~25分) 完全完成了任务,覆盖所有内容要点,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,具备较强的语言运用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑,完全达到了预期的写作目的。 null 2021-02-19T09:57:39+08:00 809.79565 null 2021-02-19T09:57:39+08:00 809.79565 888.0 eng - $