内容正文:
Unit 1
Time to Relax
Section A (4a-4d)
Time to Relax
BY YUSHEN
Learning Objectives
1. 通过阅读关于兴趣爱好的短文,从中提取关键信息,完成思维导图(如爱好开始时间、当前频率、地点、喜欢的原因等);
2. 能根据范文分析结构,写作要点,并用提供的引导句型(如 My favourite free-time activity is … / I like to do it because … / It lets me …)介绍自己最喜欢的课余活动,完成一篇回帖介绍自己的业余活动;
3. 能赏析和互评其他同学的文章,学习和积累素材,二次完善自己的帖子。
Free talk
What is your favourite free-time activity?
Look and say
What’s the girl’ s hobby?
Her hobby is riding a horse.
She likes riding horses.
Let’s read and find how does she get into his hobby.
Scan
What’s the type of the passage?
Posts
Who posted it? Who replied to the post?
’d like to do sth. = would like to do sth. 想要做某事
hope to do sth. 希望做某事
Shuyin
China I have many free-time activities , like painting , writing poems , and reading. But my favourite free-time activity is horse riding.
When I was six, I visited my grandfather’s farm , and he took me to ride a horse. It was such an amazing experience!
Now I do it at his farm every weekend with my favourite horse , Nini.
I love horse riding because I enjoy being in nature. Horse riding also helps me stay fit. But most importantly , it lets me spend time with Nini! She’s my best friend. She’s happy to see me whenever I visit , especially when I bring her some carrots for a snack! I’m lucky to have her in my life.
此处作介词,意为“比如”,其后动词用-ing 形式
nature“自然界”,此处为不可数名词,前不加 the
bring sb. sth. =bring sth. to sb. 给某人带来某物
最重要地
Careful reading and get main idea
Read the posts. Complete the mind map with the information about Shuyin’s favourite free-time activity.
Her granapa guided/taught her to ride a horse.
She does it every weekend
She does it at her grandfather’s
farm.
She enjoys being in nature.
Most importantly , it lets her spend time with Nini,her best friend.
When she was six, she visited her grandfather’s farm , and he took her to ride a horse.
Analyze the Structure of Shuyin’s Post
Para 1 Introduce her favourite activity.
Para 2 Describe how she started horse riding
a, when and where she does it now.
Para 3 Explain why she loves horse riding.
● My favourite free-time activity is...
● I started this activity when I was...
● I like to do it because...
● It lets me...
● I find it fun to...
● It makes me really happy when...
● I enjoy... when I...
Write a reply to Jason’s post by introducing
your favourite free-time activity. You can use the expressions to help you.
3c
While-writing
Underline some useful expressions to describe free-time activities.
I have many free-time activities, like ...
My favourite activity is ...
It was such an amazing experience!
Now I do it at ... every weekend.
I love ... because ...
... also helps me stay fit. But most importantly, it lets me spend time with ...
While-writing
My favourite free-time activity is playing basketball. I started this activity when I was 10 years old after watching an NBA game.
I find it fun to practice dribbling(运球) and shooting (投篮) with my friends. We play in the school playground three times a week. It makes me really happy when our team wins a match!
I like to do it because it keeps me healthy and helps me work as a team. I enjoy laughing with friends when we take breaks.
点明最喜欢的活动是什么
如何开始
什么时候做&在哪里做
喜欢的原因
Analyze the Sample Writing
仿写层:
Hi Jason,
My favourite free-time activity is _________________________ (你的爱好,eg: playing basketball / painting / hiking).
I started this activity when I was _______________________ (开始时间,eg:8 years old / in Grade 5).
I like to do it because _______________________________________________________________ (原因1,eg: it helps me stay healthy / it lets me express my feelings/ it can make me relaxed).
It also lets me ____________________________________________________________ (原因2,eg: make new friends / relax after busy study).
I find it fun to _______________________________________________ (具体乐趣,eg: play with my teammates / create colorful pictures).
I enjoy ____________________________________ (具体场景,例如scoring a goal(进、赢球)/ painting in the park) when I ________________________________ (填写动作,例如:play basketball / paint outdoors).
It makes me really happy when ________________________ (填写开心的时刻,例如:we win a game / I finish a nice painting).
I have lots of free-time activities, such as playing basketball, listening to music, and drawing. But my favourite free-time activity is skateboarding.
Last summer holiday, I saw some kids skateboarding in the park. They looked so cool, so I tried it. It was really fun! Now I do it on weekends. I usually go to the skate park. Sometimes, I also skate on smooth sidewalks near my home.
I love skateboarding because it improves my balance. When I stand on the skateboard, I have to keep myself steady. Also, it helps me make friends. There are many other skateboarders at the park, and we often talk about skateboarding skills. What's more, when I learn new tricks, I feel a great sense of achievement. Skateboarding makes my free time wonderful!
自主创作层:
Here is a good sample essays for you . You can imitate(模仿) some classic or excellent sentences from it.
Evaluation Form 评价表
Items 评价项目 Standard Scores
标准
分值 Scores
得分
Format 格式 1
Person 人称 2
Simple present tense 一般现在时为主 2
Content 内容
1. What 2.How 3. When/How often
4. Where 5.Why 少一处-2分
Hand-writing 书写 2
语法或单词拼写错误一处-0.5分;经典句老师给 +1分
Total 总分 15
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14
Summary
是形容词important(重要的)的副词形式,通常用于修饰整个句子。
Most importantly, you must keep a record of everything you do. 最重要的是,你必须把你所做的事一一记录下来。
More importantly, people’s life becomes more convenient.
更重要的是,人们的生活变得更加方便了。
importantly adv.重要地
But most importantly, it lets me spend time with Nini!
但最重要的是,它让我和妮妮共度时光!
Homework
1. 同层对子互评,勾画3处以上好句(AB层至少赏析2份以上同层作品);组长给CD层批阅和点评作文;
2.完善修改后上交老师再评
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