内容正文:
一战成名目
子主题2职业启蒙,职业精神
主题词句积累
dream梦想
artist艺术家;画家
officer官员;军官
teacher教师
athlete运动员
pilot飞行员
worker工人
expert专家
police警察
doctor医生
boss老板;领导;上司
policeman(男)警察
nurse护士
coach教练;私人教师
policewoman(女)警察
singer歌手
director导演;主管;经理
postman邮递员
dancer舞蹈演员
driver驾驶员;司机
president经理;总统;主席
actor男演员
farmer农民;农场主
worker工人;工作者
职
actress女演员
业
guard卫兵;警卫
dentist牙医;牙科医生
scientist科学家
guide导游
fireman消防员
我
engineer工程师
poet诗人
lawyer律师
常用表达l:He/She is a/an+职业名词:actor,teacher,dentist,doctor.…
常用表达2:He/She works in/,at+地点;.want(s)/hope(s)to be a(n)
常用表达3:I want to be a/an+职业名词:engineer,.scientist,dancer,musician..He/She wants to be a/
an+职业名词:nurse,pilot,astronaut,writer,.artist.
常用表达4:when..grow(s)up.;.dream(s)of/about being a(n)..in the future.
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future未来
business公司;生意;工作
impossible不可能的;(事情)办
job工作;职业
chance机会;可能性
不到的
achieve达到;实现
hard努力地;艰难地
come true实现
prove证明;证实
creative有创造力的;创造性的
take action采取行动
aim目标;目的
begin开始
set a goal设定目标
ability能力;才能
succeed成功;达到目标
go to college/university上大学
duty责任;义务;本分
victory胜利;成功
keep on doing sth.坚持做某事
love爱;热爱;喜爱
talent天才;天赋
stick to doing sth.坚持做某事
目标
interest兴趣;爱好
design设计
improve myself提升我自己
able能够…的
general大致的;总体的;普遍的
ight for为…而奋斗
try one's best to do sth.尽某人的最大努力做某事
do homework carefully every day每天认真做作业
make a weekly plan for schoolwork制定每周学业计划
find more time to study找更多的时间来学习
finish high school and college完成高中和大学学业
study harder and get better grades/,scores/marks更努力学习并取得更好的成绩
常用表达:In order to achieve/realize my dream,I will/am going to/decide to/plan to..
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主题写作提升练·英语
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主题阅读促写作
Read the passage and finish the following tasks.[2025湖南长沙周南教育集团二模改编]
Right now,you probably spend most of your time in school.Do you wonder what you are going to do after
junior high school?Will you continue to go to school?Will you learn a trade?Perhaps it is time to think about your
choices and to prepare for them.Someday work will be a big part of your life.
What kind of job would be right for you?Think about your interests and your skills.You may like to listen to
music,dance,play basketball,or work with computers.You may know how to drive a car or how to get along with
people.Knowing both your interests and skills will help make a better plan for your future job.
To get an idea of what work you would like to do,make a list of your interests and skills.Think about what
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you have done to be successful in your interests.After that,brainstorm a list of job choices that might match your
interests and skills.You can later keep your lists with the projects and records that can help you get the job you
want.They can help you know more clearly about your achievements in school and in the world of work.
Laura Zhang,an art designer,finds her work satisfying because it allows her to use her interests and skills.
She enjoyed imagining something in her mind while she was in school.She took art,design,and computer
lessons,and also learned about taking photos on her own.
Here is what she says about the meaning of work."If you have a job you like,work means much more than
just making money.It means using your talents,making a contribution,and getting a real sense of satisfaction
from doing a job.”
Task 1:Read the passage and answer the questions.
1.How does the writer introduce the topic at the beginning of the passage?
A.By listing facts.
B.By asking questions.
C.By giving examples.
2.What's the passage mainly about?
A.The real meaning of work.
B.Laura's interests and skills.
C.How to make a better plan for your future job.
Task 2:How do you judge the job is right for yourself according to the passage?
Task3:Circle the linking words and underline the useful sentences.(圈出连接词并在有用的句子下画线)
Task4:mitative writing.(仿写)
1.是时候为你的理想职业制定计划了。(用it is time to do sth.仿写句子)
2.当你使自己的梦想成真时,你将体会到满足感。(用a sense of satisfaction仿写句子)
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主题写作提升练·英语
一战成名目
主题写作指导
®典例剖析
[2025天津]请你根据以下内容提示,以“A Special Experience of Li Hua'”为题,为校报英语专栏写一篇
短文,介绍你班同学李华的一次特殊经历。
1.去年暑假,李华去天津科学技术馆当小讲解员。
2.李华为孩子们讲解科学知识,让他们对科学更感兴趣。
3.当孩子们提出问题时,李华认真解答。
4.李华告诉孩子们参观时注意安全。
5.你认为…
参考词汇:天津科学技术馆Tianjin Science and Technology Museum
人与自我
小讲解员little guide
要求:1.词数:80~100个。
2.题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3.要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
A Special Experience of Li Hua
Last summer holiday,
细审题
1.主题:
2.文体:
3.人称:讲述李华的特殊经历用
表达个人观点和感受用
4.时态:讲述李华的特殊经历用
,表达个人观点和感受用
要点解析
【提示句翻译】
1.去年暑假,李华去天津科学技术馆当小讲解员。
2.李华为孩子们讲解科学知识,让他们对科学更感兴趣。
3.当孩子们提出问题时,李华认真解答。
4.李华告诉孩子们参观时要注意安全。
主题写作提升练·英语
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搭框架写句子
简要介绍李华的这次特殊经历
参考句型:have a special experience at.,work as.,that's an unforgettable experience for sb.,
开头
have a chance to be...
写句子:去年暑假,李华在天津科技馆有了一次特别的经历。在那里他当了一名小讲解员。
具体介绍李华做讲解员的工作细节
人与自我
参考句型:first of all,tell sb.to do sth.,explain sth.tosb.,enjoy doing sth.,be interested in,
help others,personal value,make contributions to,remind sb.to do sth.,be willing to
do sth.
写句子:①首先,他用简单的英语向孩子们解释科学知识,这可以让他们对科学变得更感兴趣。
②他这样的讲解方式很受孩子们的欢迎。
中间
③当孩子们提出问题时,他会微笑着耐心地回答问题。
④他甚至提醒大家参观时要注意脚下安全。
⑤因为他总是热心肠,所以他乐于在别人需要帮助时,施以援手。
表达个人的想法和观点
参考句型:I truly think that..,I personally realize that.,do a good job,not only..but also.,
help sb.(to)do sth.,make sb./sth.adj.,stick to,make every effort,realize one's
dream,work hard
结尾
写句子:①我认为李华真的做得很好。
②这段经历不仅帮助了他人,也让他变得更自信。
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主题写作提升练·英语
一战成名目
连句成篇
A Special Experience of Li Hua
Last summer holiday,Li Hua had a special experience at Tianjin Science and Technology Museum.He
worked as a little guide there.
First of all,he explained science knowledge to children in simple English,which could make them become
more interested in science.His way of explaining was very popular among children.Then,when children asked
questions,he answered them patiently with a smile.He even reminded everyone to watch their steps and stay safe
while visiting.Because he is always warm-hearted,he is willing to lend a helping hand when others are in need.
I think Li Hua really did a great job.This experience not only helps others but also makes him more
confident.
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范文升级
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A Special Experience of Li Hua
Last summer holiday,Li Hua had a special experiencewhich he worked as a little guide at Tianjin Science
and Technology Museum.
First of all,he explained science knowledge to children in simple English,making them become more
interested in science.His way of explaining was very popular among children.Then,when children asked
guestions,he answered them patientlywith a smile.He even reminded everyone to watch their steps and stay
safe while visiting.Because he is always warm-hearted,he is willing to lend a helping hand when others are in
need.
I personally think that Li Hua really did a great job.This experience not only helps others but also
makes him more confident.
【亮点赏析】
亮点①:巧用which引导限制性定语从句,突出李华此次特殊的当小讲解员的经历;
亮点②:善用.ig形式作结果状语,反映了学生们很喜欢李华的讲解方式;
亮点③:用介词短语“with a smile'”作伴随状语,表现出李华的热心肠、乐于助人;
亮点④:用because引导原因状语从句,体现出了李华的个人性格特征;
亮点⑤:用that引导宾语从句,表达作者对李华做讲解员工作的肯定;
亮点⑥:巧用“not only.but also..”连词短语,强调这次特殊经历给李华带来的收获与成长。
@实战演练
Writing1[2024山东临沂改编]
假定你是李平,请根据该邮件内容,用英语给Eic回复。
Hi Li Ping,
You mentioned your dream job in your last letter.I'm really interested in it.Why did you choose it?What/
Who influenced you to make the decision?Tell me your experience,please.I look forward to hearing from you
soon
Eric
主题写作提升练·英语
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一战成名目
要求:1.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息。
Dear Eric,
Thanks for your e-mail.
人与自我
Best wishes!
Li Ping
Writing2[2025湖南五十校教育联盟一模改编]
假定你是李华,上周你校举办的“未来职业体验日”活动中,你和同学们尝试了不同工作(如医生、厨
师、教师、工程师等)。请按提示要求写邮件给英国好友Bian,描述你的体验、感受和对未来职业的畅想。
·try different jobs..
·have the chance to.
learn about...
It helped me understand..
Future Career Exploration Day
·It opened my eyes to..
Ifelt...
·I dream of.…
·I will.
要求:1.文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名;
2.词数为80词左右,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Brian,
How are you?Last week,our school held a "Future Career Exploration Day",and I want to share this
exciting event with you!
What about you?Do schools in the UK organize similar activities?I'd love to hear about your ideas!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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主题写作提升练·英语reading comprehension.
It's fighting that makes us better and better.Fighting is the
brightest color of youth.
Writing 2
Be Good Teenagers in the New Era
As we are born in the great new era,it is necessary for us to
improve ourselves.Here are my opinions about it.
First,we should focus on life-learning by improving our
leaming skills.Reading more books and practicing regularly can
help us grow.Second,keeping healthy bodies is important.We
need good habits like exercising daily and staying happy.Third,we
must be creative and leam about new technologies,such as Al,to
prepare for the future.Finally,we should develop moral qualities
like team spirits and love for our motherland.
Let's work hard to become excellent teenagers and contribute to
our country!
Writing 3
One thing I keep doing every day
Good morning,everyone!
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today.The topic
of my speech is "one thing I keep doing every day".
I love running and I have kept running for three years.When I
was in Grade 7,I was not good at sports and running was always my
weakness.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with
my classmates,I began to practice running every day after school.
Sometimes,I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept
telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulty
I faced,I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in
running.I'm very proud of myself and I'm ready for any challenge in
the future.
That'sall.Thank you!
子主题2职业启蒙,职业精神
主题阅读促写作
Task 1:1.B 2.C
Task 2:Think about my interests and skills.
Task3:略
Task 4:
1.It's time to make plans for your dream career.
2.When you make your dreams come true,you will experience a
sense of satisfaction.
主题写作指导
典例剖析
【细审题】
1.职业经历
2.记叙文
3.第三人称:第一人称
4.一般过去时;一般现在时
【要点解析】
1.Last summer holiday,Li Hua worked as a little guide at Tianjin
Science and Technology Museum.
2.Li Hua explained scientific knowledge to children,making them
more interested in science.
3.When children asked questions,Li Hua carefully answered them.
参考答案与重子
一战成名目
4.Li Hua told the children to be careful during the visit.
【搭框架写句子】
开头:
Last summer holiday,Li Hua had a special experience at Tianjin
Science and Technology Museum.He worked as a little guide there.
中间:
DFirst of all,he explained science knowledge to children in simple
English,which could make them become more interested in
science.
2His way of explaining was very popular among children.
3When children asked questions,he answered them patiently with a
smile.
4He even reminded everyone to watch their steps and stay safe
while visiting.
5Because he is always warm-hearted,he is willing to lend a helping
hand when others are in need.
结尾
DI think Li Hua really did a great job.
2This experience not only helps others but also makes him more
confident.
实战演练
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Writing 1
Dear Eric,
写
Thanks for your e-mail.Im very glad to tell you something
提
about my dream job
I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child,because
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I think teaching is a great profession and I enjoy staying with
children.Besides,I want to be a teacher because of the power of an
example-Miss Li,my English teacher.She often helps me with my
English,which has a great influence on me.I still remember that
once I failed in an important English exam and was upset.She
cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English.
With her help,I made great progress in English.I have made up my
mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up.
Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher,I will make
continuous efforts to realize my dream.
Best wishes!
Li Ping
Writing 2
Dear Brian,
How are you?Last week,our school held a "Future Career
Exploration Day",and I want to share this exciting event with you!
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On that day,I experienced being a teacher.I stood in front of
the class and taught my students a lesson about English grammar.It
was challenging but really interesting.I enjoyed answering their
questions and seeing the happy faces when they understood
something new.This experience made me realize that I would love to
be a teacher in the future.I think it's a great job to help others learn
and grow.
What about you?Do schools in the UK organize similar
activities?I'd like to hear about your ideas!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
题解析·英语
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