Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature（单元写作精练）英语新教材人教版八年级下册

Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 本单元的写作话题是“自然奇观”，属于“人与自然”范畴， 通过介绍一处自然奇观，引导学生探索与自然和谐共处的方式。此类写作文体多为说明文，要求学生能够使用本单元的核心词汇与句型，同时合理运用大数、比较级与最高级，按照“奇观介绍→探索价值→保护倡议”的逻辑完成写作，进而贴合“连接自然、敬畏自然”的单元主题。时态主要以一般现在时为主，写作时可采用“总-分-总”三段式的结构。 本单元相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 ① 景观类 Huangshan Mountain 黄山，The Yellow River 黄河，Guilin Landscape 桂林山水，The Three Gorges 三峡， Zhangjiajie 张家界，waterfall 瀑布， mountain 山，lake 湖，rock 岩石， valley 峡谷/山谷, reef 礁石 peak 山峰, cliff 悬崖, dessert沙漠， coast海岸 ②描述类 tall-taller-tallest 高的，long-longer-longest 长的，deep-deeper-deepest 深的， beautiful-more beautiful-most beautiful 美丽的，high-higher-highest 高的， famous-more famous-most famous 著名的，depth 深的， wonderful 绝妙的， amazing 令人惊叹的，great 伟大的，magic 神奇的, natural 自然的， curious 好奇的 ③地理术语 located in 位于, square kilometre 平方千米， covers an area of 占地面积, meters/ high/deep/long, population 人口, northern北部的，southern 南部的，northeastern 东北的 短语 ①be located / situated in 位于…… ②one of the + 最高级 + 名词复数 最……之一 ③be famous/ known for 因……而著名 ④be worth visiting 值得参观 ⑤look like 看起来像 ⑥more…than… 比……更…… ⑦the most wonderful… 最绝妙的…… ⑧have a history of... years 有着......年的历史 ⑨attract thousands of tourists 吸引成千上万的游客 ⑩be different from... 与......不同 ⑪feel peaceful / excited 感到平和/兴奋 ⑫at the bottom of... 在......底部 ⑬at the top of... 在......顶部 ⑭be important to... 对......重要 ⑮be amazed at/by... 对......感到惊叹 ⑯take in the beauty of nature 欣赏自然之美 ⑰explore the great outdoors 探索大自然 ⑱feel connected to nature 感受与自然的连接 ⑲tower over... 高耸于......之上 ⑳witness a sunrise/sunset 看日出/日落 ㉑breathe fresh air 呼吸新鲜空气 ㉒preserve natural resources保护自然资源 ㉓stretch as far as the eye can see 一望无际 句型 ①引出话题：Have you ever heard of ...? / Today, I’d like to introduce .../It is so wonderful that many people come to visit it every year. ②描述位置：It lies in ... / It is in the ... part of ... ③描述特征： It is ... meters high. / It looks like .../The higher you climb, the more beautiful scenery you will see. ④表达感受：It makes me feel ... / It’s really a wonderful place to visit./Without doubt, it is the greatest natural wonder in our country. ⑤使用比较/最高级： It is much longer than any other river in the country. It is one of the most beautiful waterfalls in the world. It is older than ... but not as old as ... No other mountain is as famous as it. 名言 ①Nature is the greatest painter. 大自然是最伟大的画家。 ②China has the most wonderful natural wonders in the world. 中国拥有世界上最绝妙的自然奇观。 优美句子 仿 （一）基础仿写 1. 原句：The Yellow River is 5,464 kilometres long and is the second longest in China. 仿写：The Amazon River __________________________________________ (亚马逊河约6400千米长，是世界第一长河。) 2. 原句：The Grand Canyon is located in the United States. 仿写：__________________________________________ （维多利亚瀑布位于非洲）. 3. 原句：Qomolangma is about 8849 meters high. 仿写：__________________________________________ （这条峡谷大约有446公里长）. 4. 原句：Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. 仿写：Guilin Landscape is _________________________________________ (中国最美的自然奇观之一). 5. 原句：The Yellow River is longer than many other rivers in China. 仿写：This lake is ____________________________________(比中国其他任何湖泊都清澈). 6. 原句：It is the most amazing place in Anhui Province. 仿写：It is ____________________________________(我见过最神奇的岩石). 7. 原句：This river is much cleaner than that one. 仿写：__________________________________________ （这座山比那座山高得多）. 8. 原句：As we went close to the falls, the noise of the water slowly grew louder and louder. 仿写：____________________________________________________________ (当我们走近森林时，鸟鸣渐渐变得越来越清晰。) （二）进阶仿写 1. 原句：It is so beautiful that thousands of visitors visit it every year. 仿写：The waterfall is ____________________________________(如此壮观以至于每个人都很兴奋). 2. 原句：The higher we stand, the clearer the clouds we can see. 仿写：The more we look, ____________________________________(我们就越能发现自然之美). 3. 原句：It is the greatest natural wonder that I have ever known. 仿写：Guilin Landscape is ____________________________________(中国最迷人的自然景观). 4. 原句： When I saw the Great Barrier Reef, I felt I was in a dream. 仿写：_______________________________________________ （ 当我站在峡谷边缘的时候，我感到自己非常渺小）. 5. 原句：Located on the northeastern coast of Australia, the Great Barrier Reef is one of the most amazing places to visit. 仿写：_________________________________________________________________ (位于冰岛南部的蓝湖是最值得一游的绝美之地之一。) 6. 原句：If you visit it, you will see the largest living structure on earth. 仿写：_________________________________________________________________ (如果你参观这里，你将会看到地球上最独特的地热景观geothermal landscape。) 7. 原句：Visiting one of the world's most amazing waterfalls was a magical experience. 仿写：_________________________________________________________________ （参观世界上最为古老的森林之一是一次难忘的体验。） 写作步骤 懂 一、Before-writing (Brainstorming) Choose a natural wonder(a river, lake, mountain, forest, waterfall, etc) Name:_________________________ Location: ____________________________ Size/Age: ____________________________ Plants and animals: _________________________________ Special fact:_________________________________ Things to do: _________________________________ Feeling & advice: _________________________________ 2、列提纲，写句子 以 "The Amazon Rainforest" 为例： 段落 句型示例 Beginning （20词左右）： 引入主题 Name （名称） Do you know _______ _______ is one of the greatest natural wonders in the world. What makes it amazing is that _______. Body （40-60词）： special facts+ plants and animals+things to do Located in ______________, it covers an area of ______________, It spreads ______________. It has the largest number of______________. Many people dream of exploring it because _______. Exploring such natural wonders helps us _______. We can also learn about _______ from it. Conclusion （20词左右）： Feeling & advice: We should visit it to ______________. I'm sure this place will bring you ______________. Looking forward to ______________. 二、While-writing 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型。 三、Post - writing  1、自我检查清单： ①是否写清楚了奇观的名称和位置？ ②是否使用了数字（如高度、长度）来具体说明？ ③是否使用了比较级或者最高级来表达？ ④单词拼写和标点符号是否正确？ 2. 同伴互评：两人一组，根据“内容完整度、语法正确性、表达流畅度”打分，并提出修改建议 3. 教师点评：选取2-3篇优秀范文和1-2篇典型问题作文，重点讲解亮点表达和常见错误（如：描述数字时是否正确地表达？比较级和最高级是否使用恰当？）。 4. 点评后，同学对自己的作文进行修改，然后完成定稿。 写作真题 赏 假设你是王浩宇，你们班的交换生Tim想在暑假参观一处自然奇观。请你根据下列内容提示，用英语写一封80词左右的邮件，向他推荐世界上最深的峡谷——雅鲁藏布大峡谷。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。                   语篇类型：应用文； 时态：一般现在时； 人称：第三人称； 内容提示： ◆长度：约505千米； ◆深度：约6千米 (最深处) ； ◆美誉：植物博物馆 the plant museum；动物王国 the animal kingdom； ◆最佳旅游时间：春、夏 Dear Tim, I’m writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Haoyu 题型通关 练 1．“读万卷书，行万里路”。自然景观蕴含着独特的魅力，值得我们去了解和欣赏。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示问题，写一篇英语短文介绍一处著名的自然景观。 Which natural wonder will you introduce? What makes it special? Why is it so popular among people? Please write more about it. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息，词数80词左右 (开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。 Our country is home to natural wonders, each with its own beauty. 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2．大自然藏着许多令人惊叹的景观，各具独特魅力。请根据下表信息，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，讲讲尼亚加拉瀑布 (Niagara Falls) 的奇妙吧！ 位置 北美洲的东北部，美国与加拿大边界 (border n.) 景观描述 ● 被分为 (be divided into) 两部分：加拿大侧较大，高约57米，宽 (wide) 约675米；美国侧较小，高50多米，宽320多米 ● 水流全年轰鸣 (loudly) 倾泻而下；其周边的森林是许多动物的栖息地 评价 ● 世界上最伟大的自然奇观之一 ● 每年约有1，400万游客从世界各地前来参观 (百万million) The Niagara Falls 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3．当我们离开电子屏幕，倾听溪流的呢喃，触摸泥土的温度，嗅闻青草的芬芳，才能真正理解：大自然是最神奇的课堂。请你以A Wonderful Day in Nature为题描述你在大自然中度过的一天，内容包括： （1）你看到的景色； （2）你参与的活动； （3）你的感受和收获。 注意： 1）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2）短文须包括所有内容要点，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3）词数80左右。 A Wonderful Day in Nature 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4．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike来信说他对中国的自然奇观很感兴趣，想了解其中一个。请你给他回信，介绍一个中国的自然奇观 (如黄山、桂林山水、九寨沟等)。 内容包括： 1. 简单介绍这个自然奇观的地理位置和特点； 2. 说明它为什么著名 (例如：美丽的风景、独特的动植物、文化意义等)； 3. 邀请他有机会来中国亲自参观。 要求： 1. 语句通顺，逻辑清晰，包含所有要点； 2. 字数80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I’m glad to know that you are interested in the natural wonders of China. 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I hope you can visit China one day and see it for yourself! Yours, Li Hua 5．假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Peter计划来中国旅游，想了解桂林。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一封信，向他介绍一下桂林，80词左右(已给出部分不计入总词数)。 提示： 位置：广西东北部 面积：2.78万平方千米 人口：约494万 气候：宜人 资源：自然资源丰富 特色：漓江等景点享誉世界，是中国重点风景旅游城市和历史文化名城 参考词汇：natural resource 自然资源 Dear Peter, I’m glad to hear you’re planning to visit China. Let me tell you something about Guilin. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6．你的外国朋友Tom计划寒假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语给他写一封邮件，介绍并推荐你的家乡福州。词数80左右。 Location (位置): southeast of China Places of interest: Mount Gushan, Three Lanes and Seven Alleys Area (面积): 11,968 square kilometers Local food (当地小吃): fish balls, Buddha Jumps Over the Wall Environment: fresh air, green trees Your opinion: … 要求： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整、规范； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)。 Hi Tom, I’m happy to hear that you plan to travel around China during the winter vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Fuzhou for a visit.___________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I can’t wait to see you! Yours, Li Xiang 7．闽南古村落——南靖县官洋村入选世界“最佳旅游乡村”。官洋村古老的土楼、优美的自然风光和独特的民俗文化享誉世界。假定你是李华，你的外国笔友 Ben想了解官洋村。请你根据以下图示，用英语写一封信向他介绍官洋村。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Ben, I’m glad to hear that you want to learn about Guanyang Village. Guanyang Village is a wonderful place to visit. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8．2025年3月，在YouTube上有3700万粉丝的美国网红甲亢哥 (Darren Watkins Jr.) 来到了河南，进行了一次成功的文化交流，也向世界展示了一个真实、富有魅力的河南。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike计划暑假来河南旅游，写信询问你的建议，请根据以下表格内容，给他回复邮件。推荐地点二选其一即可。 推荐地点及理由 少林寺 (Shaolin Temple) 位于登封市嵩山 1500多年的历史；功夫的发源地 (birthplace)；丰富的文化遗产 (cultural heritage)；每年接待超300万游客 龙门石窟 (Longmen Grottos) 位于古都洛阳 1500多年的历史；10万余尊风格各异的佛像 (Buddha statues)；可夜游香山寺 (Xiangshan Temple) 出行建议 出行方式 衣着建议 (结合季节、天气、活动等) 要求：1. 文中须包含以上提示的信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I’m excited you’re visiting Henan this summer! _____________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 9．今年暑假，你和家人一起去了著名的九寨沟旅游。九寨沟以其美丽的湖泊、瀑布和雪山闻名。请你以“A Trip to Jiuzhaigou”为题写一篇游记，描述你在九寨沟的所见所闻以及你的感受。内容包括：九寨沟的自然风光、你参与的活动 (如爬山、拍照等)、以及你对这次旅行的感受。 参考词汇：colorful lakes五彩斑斓的湖泊    waterfalls瀑布   snow mountains雪山 要求：1. 词数80左右； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。 A Trip to Jiuzhaigou ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．近年来，新疆旅游热度不断上升，越来越多的游客想到新疆来感受其迷人的魅力。假如你是旅游服务志愿者李华，有一批来自外省的同学即将抵达新疆，开启他们的旅程。请你以“Welcome to Xinjiang”为题，从天气、景点、美食等方面写一篇英文旅游攻略，用邮件提前发给同学们，让他们对新疆之行充满期待。 提示词：天池Tianchi Lake、喀纳斯湖Kanas Lake、那拉提草原Nalati Grassland、大盘鸡Big Plate Chicken、馕Naan Bread 要求： （1）可适当增加细节；以使行文连贯； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； （3）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总字数。 Welcome to Xinjiang Dear friends, Welcome to Xinjiang! I’m Li Hua, your volunteer guide, excited to show you around. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 本单元的写作话题是“自然奇观”，属于“人与自然”范畴， 通过介绍一处自然奇观，引导学生探索与自然和谐共处的方式。此类写作文体多为说明文，要求学生能够使用本单元的核心词汇与句型，同时合理运用大数、比较级与最高级，按照“奇观介绍→探索价值→保护倡议”的逻辑完成写作，进而贴合“连接自然、敬畏自然”的单元主题。时态主要以一般现在时为主，写作时可采用“总-分-总”三段式的结构。 本单元相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 ① 景观类 Huangshan Mountain 黄山，The Yellow River 黄河，Guilin Landscape 桂林山水，The Three Gorges 三峡， Zhangjiajie 张家界，waterfall 瀑布， mountain 山，lake 湖，rock 岩石， valley 峡谷/山谷, reef 礁石 peak 山峰, cliff 悬崖, dessert沙漠， coast海岸 ②描述类 tall-taller-tallest 高的，long-longer-longest 长的，deep-deeper-deepest 深的， beautiful-more beautiful-most beautiful 美丽的，high-higher-highest 高的， famous-more famous-most famous 著名的，depth 深的， wonderful 绝妙的， amazing 令人惊叹的，great 伟大的，magic 神奇的, natural 自然的， curious 好奇的 ③地理术语 located in 位于, square kilometre 平方千米， covers an area of 占地面积, meters/ high/deep/long, population 人口, northern北部的，southern 南部的，northeastern 东北的 短语 ①be located / situated in 位于…… ②one of the + 最高级 + 名词复数 最……之一 ③be famous/ known for 因……而著名 ④be worth visiting 值得参观 ⑤look like 看起来像 ⑥more…than… 比……更…… ⑦the most wonderful… 最绝妙的…… ⑧have a history of... years 有着......年的历史 ⑨attract thousands of tourists 吸引成千上万的游客 ⑩be different from... 与......不同 ⑪feel peaceful / excited 感到平和/兴奋 ⑫at the bottom of... 在......底部 ⑬at the top of... 在......顶部 ⑭be important to... 对......重要 ⑮be amazed at/by... 对......感到惊叹 ⑯take in the beauty of nature 欣赏自然之美 ⑰explore the great outdoors 探索大自然 ⑱feel connected to nature 感受与自然的连接 ⑲tower over... 高耸于......之上 ⑳witness a sunrise/sunset 看日出/日落 ㉑breathe fresh air 呼吸新鲜空气 ㉒preserve natural resources保护自然资源 ㉓stretch as far as the eye can see 一望无际 句型 ①引出话题：Have you ever heard of ...? / Today, I’d like to introduce .../It is so wonderful that many people come to visit it every year. ②描述位置：It lies in ... / It is in the ... part of ... ③描述特征： It is ... meters high. / It looks like .../The higher you climb, the more beautiful scenery you will see. ④表达感受：It makes me feel ... / It’s really a wonderful place to visit./Without doubt, it is the greatest natural wonder in our country. ⑤使用比较/最高级： It is much longer than any other river in the country. It is one of the most beautiful waterfalls in the world. It is older than ... but not as old as ... No other mountain is as famous as it. 名言 ①Nature is the greatest painter. 大自然是最伟大的画家。 ②China has the most wonderful natural wonders in the world. 中国拥有世界上最绝妙的自然奇观。 优美句子 仿 （一）基础仿写 1. 原句：The Yellow River is 5,464 kilometres long and is the second longest in China. 仿写：The Amazon River __________________________________________ (亚马逊河约6400千米长，是世界第一长河。) 【答案】The Amazon River is about 6,400 kilometres long and is the longest in the world. 2. 原句：The Grand Canyon is located in the United States. 仿写：__________________________________________ （维多利亚瀑布位于非洲）. 【答案】Victoria Falls is located in Africa. 3. 原句：Qomolangma is about 8849 meters high. 仿写：__________________________________________ （这条峡谷大约有446公里长）. 【答案】This valley / canyon is about 446 kilometers long. 4. 原句：Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. 仿写：Guilin Landscape is _________________________________________ (中国最美的自然奇观之一). 【答案】Guilin Landscape is one of the most beautiful natural wonders. 5. 原句：The Yellow River is longer than many other rivers in China. 仿写：This lake is ____________________________________(比中国其他任何湖泊都清澈). 【答案】This lake is clearer than any other lake in China. 6. 原句：It is the most amazing place in Anhui Province. 仿写：It is ____________________________________(我见过最神奇的岩石). 【答案】It is the most amazing lock I have ever seen. 7. 原句：This river is much cleaner than that one. 仿写：__________________________________________ （这座山比那座山高得多）. 【答案】This mountain is much higher than that one. 8. 原句：As we went close to the falls, the noise of the water slowly grew louder and louder. 仿写：____________________________________________________________ (当我们走近森林时，鸟鸣渐渐变得越来越清晰。) 【答案】As we went close to the falls, the noise of the water slowly grew louder and louder. （二）进阶仿写 1. 原句：It is so beautiful that thousands of visitors visit it every year. 仿写：The waterfall is ____________________________________(如此壮观以至于每个人都很兴奋). 【答案】The waterfall is so magnificent that everyone is very excited. 2. 原句：The higher we stand, the clearer the clouds we can see. 仿写：The more we look, ____________________________________(我们就越能发现自然之美). 【答案】The more we look, the more we can find the beauty of nature. 3. 原句：It is the greatest natural wonder that I have ever known. 仿写：Guilin Landscape is ____________________________________(中国最迷人的自然景观). 【答案】Guilin Landscape is the most attractive natural wonder in China. 4. 原句： When I saw the Great Barrier Reef, I felt I was in a dream. 仿写：_______________________________________________ （ 当我站在峡谷边缘的时候，我感到自己非常渺小）. 【答案】When I stood on the edge of the canyon, I felt very small. 5. 原句：Located on the northeastern coast of Australia, the Great Barrier Reef is one of the most amazing places to visit. 仿写：_________________________________________________________________ (位于冰岛南部的蓝湖是最值得一游的绝美之地之一。) 【答案】Located in the south of Iceland, the Blue Lagoon is one of the most amazing places to visit. 6. 原句：If you visit it, you will see the largest living structure on earth. 仿写：_________________________________________________________________ (如果你参观这里，你将会看到地球上最独特的地热景观geothermal landscape。) 【答案】If you visit it, you will see the most unique geothermal landscape on earth. 7. 原句：Visiting one of the world's most amazing waterfalls was a magical experience. 仿写：_________________________________________________________________ （参观世界上最为古老的森林之一是一次难忘的体验。） 【答案】Visiting one of the world’s oldest forests was an unforgettable experience. 写作步骤 懂 一、Before-writing (Brainstorming) Choose a natural wonder(a river, lake, mountain, forest, waterfall, etc) Name:_________________________ Location: ____________________________ Size/Age: ____________________________ Plants and animals: _________________________________ Special fact:_________________________________ Things to do: _________________________________ Feeling & advice: _________________________________ 2、列提纲，写句子 以 "The Amazon Rainforest" 为例： 段落 句型示例 Beginning （20词左右）： 引入主题 Name （名称） Do you know _______ _______ is one of the greatest natural wonders in the world. What makes it amazing is that _______. Body （40-60词）： special facts+ plants and animals+things to do Located in ______________, it covers an area of ______________, It spreads ______________. It has the largest number of______________. Many people dream of exploring it because _______. Exploring such natural wonders helps us _______. We can also learn about _______ from it. Conclusion （20词左右）： Feeling & advice: We should visit it to ______________. I'm sure this place will bring you ______________. Looking forward to ______________. 二、While-writing 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型。 三、Post - writing  1、自我检查清单： ①是否写清楚了奇观的名称和位置？ ②是否使用了数字（如高度、长度）来具体说明？ ③是否使用了比较级或者最高级来表达？ ④单词拼写和标点符号是否正确？ 2. 同伴互评：两人一组，根据“内容完整度、语法正确性、表达流畅度”打分，并提出修改建议 3. 教师点评：选取2-3篇优秀范文和1-2篇典型问题作文，重点讲解亮点表达和常见错误（如：描述数字时是否正确地表达？比较级和最高级是否使用恰当？）。 4. 点评后，同学对自己的作文进行修改，然后完成定稿。 【范文】 The Amazon Rainforest Do you know the “lungs of the earth”? It is the Amazon Rainforest, one of the most wonderful natural wonders on the earth. Let’s learn about it together. The Amazon is the biggest rainforest in the world, with an area of 5.5 million square kilometres. It spreads across Brazil, Peru, Colombia and five other countries. It has the largest number of plants and animals on our planet. I think the Amazon is truly amazing. It is not only beautiful but also important for our environment. We should visit it to enjoy its natural beauty and learn to protect this great wonder. 写作真题 赏 假设你是王浩宇，你们班的交换生Tim想在暑假参观一处自然奇观。请你根据下列内容提示，用英语写一封80词左右的邮件，向他推荐世界上最深的峡谷——雅鲁藏布大峡谷。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。                   语篇类型：应用文； 时态：一般现在时； 人称：第三人称； 内容提示： ◆长度：约505千米； ◆深度：约6千米 (最深处) ； ◆美誉：植物博物馆 the plant museum；动物王国 the animal kingdom； ◆最佳旅游时间：春、夏 Dear Tim, I’m writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Haoyu 【答案】例文 Dear Tim, I’m writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon. It’s in Xizang, China. It is about 505 kilometers long. And it is the deepest canyon in the world. The deepest depth of it reaches around 6 kilometers. As a place that all nature lovers want to visit, the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon is home to thousands of plants and animals. It’s called “the plant museum” and “the animal kingdom”. The best time to visit it is spring and summer. I’m sure you will have a great time there. Yours, Wang Haoyu 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。作者向朋友Tim介绍一处自然奇观； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。向朋友Tim详细介绍雅鲁藏布大峡谷的情况； 第三步，书写结语。希望朋友Tim能来参观雅鲁藏布大峡谷并玩得开心。 [亮点词汇] ①home to 是……的所在地/栖息地 ②the best time to do sth. 做某事的最佳时间 [高分句型] ①The deepest depth of it reaches around 6 kilometers. (形容词最高级) ②I’m sure you will have a great time there (省略that的宾语从句) 题型通关 练 1．“读万卷书，行万里路”。自然景观蕴含着独特的魅力，值得我们去了解和欣赏。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示问题，写一篇英语短文介绍一处著名的自然景观。 Which natural wonder will you introduce? What makes it special? Why is it so popular among people? Please write more about it. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息，词数80词左右 (开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。 Our country is home to natural wonders, each with its own beauty. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Our country is home to natural wonders, each with its own beauty. I’d like to introduce the Yellow Mountain. It is famous for its strange pines, unique rocks, sea of clouds and hot springs. What makes it special is that the scenery changes with seasons and weather. For example, after rain, clouds float like a white ocean around peaks. In winter, it is covered in snow, like a silver world. It attracts many visitors because it offers peace and amazing views. Many photographers come here to capture its stunning beauty. People also enjoy hiking there to get close to nature. I believe everyone should visit it once to feel its magic. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：需介绍景观名称、特色、受欢迎原因，并适当补充细节。   [写作步骤] 第一步：点明介绍的景观及其主要特点； 第二步：用具体例子说明其独特之处； 第三步：解释受欢迎的原因并给出个人建议。   [亮点词汇] ①strange pines奇松 ②unique rocks怪石 ③sea of clouds云海   [高分句型] ①What makes it special is that the scenery changes with seasons and weather. (what引导的主语从句) ②It attracts many visitors because it offers peace and amazing views. (because引导的原因状语从句) 2．大自然藏着许多令人惊叹的景观，各具独特魅力。请根据下表信息，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，讲讲尼亚加拉瀑布 (Niagara Falls) 的奇妙吧！ 位置 北美洲的东北部，美国与加拿大边界 (border n.) 景观描述 ● 被分为 (be divided into) 两部分：加拿大侧较大，高约57米，宽 (wide) 约675米；美国侧较小，高50多米，宽320多米 ● 水流全年轰鸣 (loudly) 倾泻而下；其周边的森林是许多动物的栖息地 评价 ● 世界上最伟大的自然奇观之一 ● 每年约有1，400万游客从世界各地前来参观 (百万million) The Niagara Falls __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Niagara Falls Niagara Falls is a wonderful natural wonder lying on the border between the US and Canada in northeastern North America. It is divided into two parts. The Canadian part is about 57 meters high and 675 meters wide, while the American part is over 50 meters high and 320 meters wide. The water falls down loudly all year round. The forests around it are home to many animals. As one of the greatest natural wonders in the world, it attracts about 14 million visitors from all over the world every year. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇介绍类材料作文； ②时态：主体时态为“一般现在时”，用于客观介绍景观特征与现状； ③提示：需完整涵盖位置、景观描述、评价三类核心信息，合理运用连接词使行文逻辑连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，直接介绍尼亚加拉瀑布的地理位置； 第二步：详细描述瀑布的构成、水流特点及周边生态环境； 第三步：总结其世界地位与旅游影响力，收束全文。 [亮点词汇] ① lie on位于 ② be divided into被分为 ③ be home to是……的栖息地 ④ from all over the world来自世界各地 [高分句型] ① Niagara Falls is a wonderful natural wonder lying on the border between the US and Canada in northeastern North America. (现在分词短语作后置定语) 3．当我们离开电子屏幕，倾听溪流的呢喃，触摸泥土的温度，嗅闻青草的芬芳，才能真正理解：大自然是最神奇的课堂。请你以A Wonderful Day in Nature为题描述你在大自然中度过的一天，内容包括： （1）你看到的景色； （2）你参与的活动； （3）你的感受和收获。 注意： 1）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2）短文须包括所有内容要点，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3）词数80左右。 A Wonderful Day in Nature _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A Wonderful Day in Nature Last weekend, I spent a day in the forest near my home. The moment I stepped in, I saw green trees everywhere and colorful wildflowers dancing in the breeze. Birds were singing sweetly, and a clear stream flowed quietly beside the path. I walked along the stream, picking up pretty stones and watching small fish swim. Later, I lay on the soft grass, looking up at the blue sky with white clouds floating by. I also took many photos of the beautiful scenery. I felt so relaxed and happy. Nature taught me to slow down and enjoy simple things. It was truly a wonderful day that I’ll never forget! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，需包含看到的景色、参与的活动、感受和收获，需确保内容完整、条理清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引入主题，说明时间和地点。 第二步：详细描述看到的景色，并叙述参与的活动。 第三步：表达感受和收获。 [亮点词汇] ①dance in the breeze在微风中摇曳 ②picking up捡起 ③slow down放慢脚步 [高分句型] ①The moment I stepped in, I saw green trees everywhere and colorful wildflowers dancing in the breeze. (The moment引导的时间状语从句) ②It was truly a wonderful day that I’ll never forget! (that引导的定语从句) 4．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike来信说他对中国的自然奇观很感兴趣，想了解其中一个。请你给他回信，介绍一个中国的自然奇观 (如黄山、桂林山水、九寨沟等)。 内容包括： 1. 简单介绍这个自然奇观的地理位置和特点； 2. 说明它为什么著名 (例如：美丽的风景、独特的动植物、文化意义等)； 3. 邀请他有机会来中国亲自参观。 要求： 1. 语句通顺，逻辑清晰，包含所有要点； 2. 字数80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I’m glad to know that you are interested in the natural wonders of China. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can visit China one day and see it for yourself! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Mike, I’m glad to know that you are interested in the natural wonders of China. Let me introduce Huangshan Mountain to you. It lies in the south of Anhui Province. It’s famous for its strange pine trees, unique rock formations, sea of clouds and hot springs. The scenery changes with the seasons, which is truly magical. Many tourists from home and abroad come here every year to enjoy its amazing views. It’s also one of the most famous mountains in China and a UNESCO World Heritage Site, attracting millions of visitors each year. I hope you can visit China one day and see it for yourself! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；结尾邀请使用一般将来时。 ③提示：信件需包含自然奇观的地理位置和特点、著名原因、邀请来访，结构完整，语气友好自然。 [写作步骤] 第一步：回应笔友兴趣，引出要介绍的自然奇观； 第二步：介绍该奇观的位置、特点及著名原因； 第三步：发出邀请，呼应开头。 [亮点词汇] ①lies in位于 ②be famous for因……而闻名 ③from home and abroad来自国内外 [高分句型] ①The scenery changes with the seasons, which is truly magical. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②It’s also one of the most famous mountains in China and a UNESCO World Heritage Site, attracting millions of visitors each year. (现在分词作状语) 5．假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Peter计划来中国旅游，想了解桂林。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一封信，向他介绍一下桂林，80词左右(已给出部分不计入总词数)。 提示： 位置：广西东北部 面积：2.78万平方千米 人口：约494万 气候：宜人 资源：自然资源丰富 特色：漓江等景点享誉世界，是中国重点风景旅游城市和历史文化名城 参考词汇：natural resource 自然资源 Dear Peter, I’m glad to hear you’re planning to visit China. Let me tell you something about Guilin. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I’m glad to hear you’re planning to visit China. Let me tell you something about Guilin. It’s in the northeast of Guangxi, covering about 27,800 square kilometres. About 4.94 million people live in the beautiful city. The climate here is quite pleasant, and it’s rich in natural resources. With world-famous spots like Li River, it’s a key tourist city with a long history and culture. As the saying goes, “East or west, Guilin’s landscape is best.” I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time. I’m looking forward to seeing you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一封书信作文； ② 时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作提示已给出，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明要给对方介绍一下桂林的情况； 第二步，介绍桂林的地理位置、面积、人口、气候、资源以及特色等； 第三步，书写结语。期待对方的到来。 [亮点词汇] ①in the northeast of在……的东北部 ②rich in富含 ③with a long history and culture有着悠久的历史和文化 ④As the saying goes俗话说 ⑤have a wonderful time度过美好时光 [高分句型] I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time. (省略that的宾语从句) 6．你的外国朋友Tom计划寒假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语给他写一封邮件，介绍并推荐你的家乡福州。词数80左右。 Location (位置): southeast of China Places of interest: Mount Gushan, Three Lanes and Seven Alleys Area (面积): 11,968 square kilometers Local food (当地小吃): fish balls, Buddha Jumps Over the Wall Environment: fresh air, green trees Your opinion: … 要求： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整、规范； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)。 Hi Tom, I’m happy to hear that you plan to travel around China during the winter vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Fuzhou for a visit.___________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I can’t wait to see you! Yours, Li Xiang 【答案】例文 Hi Tom, I’m happy to hear that you plan to travel around China during the winter vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Fuzhou for a visit. Fuzhou, which is in the southeast of China, covers an area of 11,968 square kilometers. It has fresh air and green trees, making it a comfortable place to live. There are many places of interest here, such as Mount Gushan, Three Lanes and Seven Alleys. You can also taste delicious local food like fish balls and Buddha Jumps Over the Wall. I think Fuzhou is a wonderful city with both natural beauty and tasty food. I can’t wait to see you! Yours, Li Xiang 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主； ③提示：需包含福州的位置、面积、环境、景点、当地小吃及个人评价，语句通顺，注意邮件格式。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接邮件开头，简要介绍福州的核心地理位置和面积，让Tom对福州有初步认知； 第二步：依次介绍福州的环境、特色景点、当地小吃，融入个人评价，突出福州的魅力。 第三步：再次发出邀请，表达期待，衔接邮件结尾，使内容完整连贯。 [亮点词汇] ① southeast of China中国东南部 ② places of interest名胜古迹 ③ local food当地小吃 ④ fresh air and green trees清新的空气和绿树 [高分句型] ① Fuzhou, which is in the southeast of China, covers an area of 11,968 square kilometers.（which引导非限制性定语从句，用于解释说明） 7．闽南古村落——南靖县官洋村入选世界“最佳旅游乡村”。官洋村古老的土楼、优美的自然风光和独特的民俗文化享誉世界。假定你是李华，你的外国笔友 Ben想了解官洋村。请你根据以下图示，用英语写一封信向他介绍官洋村。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Ben, I’m glad to hear that you want to learn about Guanyang Village. Guanyang Village is a wonderful place to visit. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Ben,      I’m glad to hear that you want to learn about Guanyang Village. Guanyang Village is a wonderful place to visit.      With a history of more than 700 years, it’s like a living museum. The environment here is truly refreshing: tall old trees shade the paths, the air smells clean, and the clear water in the streams sparkles in the sun. You can wander along the ancient stone path and admire the unique tulou buildings, which are iconic local structures.      What’s more, there are lots of interesting activities to try: you can watch vivid puppet shows, learn the skill of bamboo weaving, or join the joyful embroidered ball throwing game.      I think you’ll love it! Yours， Li Hua 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信； ②时态：一般现在时（描述村落的客观状态与特色）； ③提示：需覆盖历史、环境、景物、特色活动四类信息，同时加入细节描写增强画面感。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接开头，点明官洋村的游览价值； 第二步：先介绍历史，再通过细节描写环境、景物，突出村落特点； 第三步：列举特色活动，结尾表达对笔友喜爱此地的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①living museum活的博物馆 ②refreshing令人心旷神怡的 ③wander漫步 ④iconic标志性的 ⑤vivid生动的 [高分句型] ①With a history of more than 700 years, it’s like a living museum.（with 短语开头，简洁引出事物背景） ②You can wander along the ancient stone path and admire the unique tulou buildings, which are iconic local structures.（非限定性定语从句补充说明事物属性） 8．2025年3月，在YouTube上有3700万粉丝的美国网红甲亢哥 (Darren Watkins Jr.) 来到了河南，进行了一次成功的文化交流，也向世界展示了一个真实、富有魅力的河南。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike计划暑假来河南旅游，写信询问你的建议，请根据以下表格内容，给他回复邮件。推荐地点二选其一即可。 推荐地点及理由 少林寺 (Shaolin Temple) 位于登封市嵩山 1500多年的历史；功夫的发源地 (birthplace)；丰富的文化遗产 (cultural heritage)；每年接待超300万游客 龙门石窟 (Longmen Grottos) 位于古都洛阳 1500多年的历史；10万余尊风格各异的佛像 (Buddha statues)；可夜游香山寺 (Xiangshan Temple) 出行建议 出行方式 衣着建议 (结合季节、天气、活动等) 要求：1. 文中须包含以上提示的信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I’m excited you’re visiting Henan this summer! _____________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Mike, I’m excited you’re visiting Henan this summer! I strongly recommend a very famous ancient temple named Shaolin Temple. It stands on Songshan Mountain in Dengfeng City. With a history of over 1,500 years, it’s the birthplace of Chinese Kung Fu and holds rich cultural heritage. It attracts over 3 million visitors every year. You can take the high-speed train there. It is convenient and can save your time. As for clothes, Henan is hot in summer, so wear light and breathable outfits. Also, out of respect for the temple, long pants or skirts are polite choices. I’m really looking forward to your trip to Henan. I’m sure you’ll not only be amazed by Henan’s charm and but also learn more about Chinese history and culture. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：选择一个景点进行写作，要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍少林寺的位置和推荐理由； 第二步，介绍出行建议； 第三步，表达期待对方来河南旅游。 [亮点词汇] ①with a history of有着……历史 ②out of respect for出于对……的尊重 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] I’m sure you’ll not only be amazed by Henan’s charm and but also learn more about Chinese history and culture. (“not only...but also...”结构) 9．今年暑假，你和家人一起去了著名的九寨沟旅游。九寨沟以其美丽的湖泊、瀑布和雪山闻名。请你以“A Trip to Jiuzhaigou”为题写一篇游记，描述你在九寨沟的所见所闻以及你的感受。内容包括：九寨沟的自然风光、你参与的活动 (如爬山、拍照等)、以及你对这次旅行的感受。 参考词汇：colorful lakes五彩斑斓的湖泊    waterfalls瀑布   snow mountains雪山 要求：1. 词数80左右； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。 A Trip to Jiuzhaigou ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A Trip to Jiuzhaigou This summer, I visited Jiuzhaigou with my family. The scenery was breathtaking! The colorful lakes, like mirrors reflecting the sky, amazed me. Waterfalls roared down the mountains, creating a spectacular view. Snow-capped peaks stood tall in the distance, shining under the sun. We hiked along wooden trails, breathing in the fresh air. I took many photos to capture the breathtaking scenery. My favorite moment was sitting by a tranquil lake, listening to the sounds of nature. It was one of the most beautiful places I have ever seen. I will never forget this trip, and I hope to visit Jiuzhaigou again in the future! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示信息写作，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示信息描述在九寨沟的所见所闻及参与的活动； 第三步，书写感受。 [亮点词汇] ①spectacular壮观的 ②stand tall傲然耸立 ③in the distance在远处 ④take photos照相 [高分句型] ①It was one of the most beautiful places I have ever seen. (one of句型，表示“最……之一的”) 10．近年来，新疆旅游热度不断上升，越来越多的游客想到新疆来感受其迷人的魅力。假如你是旅游服务志愿者李华，有一批来自外省的同学即将抵达新疆，开启他们的旅程。请你以“Welcome to Xinjiang”为题，从天气、景点、美食等方面写一篇英文旅游攻略，用邮件提前发给同学们，让他们对新疆之行充满期待。 提示词：天池Tianchi Lake、喀纳斯湖Kanas Lake、那拉提草原Nalati Grassland、大盘鸡Big Plate Chicken、馕Naan Bread 要求： （1）可适当增加细节；以使行文连贯； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； （3）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总字数。 Welcome to Xinjiang Dear friends, Welcome to Xinjiang! I’m Li Hua, your volunteer guide, excited to show you around. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Welcome to Xinjiang Dear friends, Welcome to Xinjiang! I’m Li Hua, your volunteer guide, excited to show you around. The best time to visit Xinjiang is from June to September. The weather is warm and sunny, great for outdoor fun. Just bring light clothes and sunscreen. There are amazing sights here, such as Tianchi Lake, with clear water and snow-capped mountains, which is like a fairyland. Kanas Lake’ s color is fascinating. Nalati Grassland offers vast green meadows. Food here is wonderful. While walking on the street, you can enjoy different kinds of delicious specials in Xinjiang. Big Plate Chicken is one of the most popular specials. It is a must-try. Naan Bread, crispy outside and soft inside, is a local staple. Look forward to exploring Xinjiang with you! Best regards, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是以“旅游攻略”为主题的英文邮件； ②时态：主要使用一般现在时（介绍景点、美食、天气）和一般将来时（表达期待）； ③提示：根据题目提示内容，按“天气—景点—美食—期待”结构有序展开，语句通顺连贯，语言表达清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引入主题，表达欢迎与期待（开头已给出）； 第二步：介绍最佳旅游时间和天气情况，并提出建议； 第三步：推荐旅游景点（如天池、喀纳斯湖、那拉提草原等），用恰当形容词营造画面感； 第四步：介绍美食（如大盘鸡、馕等），表达推荐意愿； 第五步：结尾再次表达欢迎与期待。 [亮点词汇] ① from...to... 从……到…… ② such as 例如 ③ look forward to 盼望 [高分句型] ① The best time to visit Xinjiang is from June to September.（动词不定式作定语强调最佳时间） ② Tianchi Lake, with clear water and snow-capped mountains, is like a fairyland.（with复合结构 + 比喻句） ③ While walking on the street, you can enjoy different kinds of delicious specials.（while引导时间状语从句） ④ Big Plate Chicken is one of the most popular specials. It is a must-try.（强调推荐） ⑤ Look forward to exploring Xinjiang with you!（简洁自然的结尾句） 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $