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Section
Unit 7 A Day to Remember
Section
第 5 课 时
(2a—3c)
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B
Let’s review
Sam’s School trip
Where
______
How
It was ______ but great ____!
Farm
tiring
fun
Explored the farm → Learnt how food goes from the _____ to our ______ → ______ some strawberries → Cut ________ and ________ from tomato plants → _______ plants → _______ vegetables at home → Wrote a _____ _____ for the day
fields
tables
Picked
branches
leaves
Watered
Cooked
diary
What
Farming _____ _____! We should
not waste any food,
because every grain comes from _____ _____.
isn’t
easy
hard
Learnt
entry
work
Friday, 30 May
Today we went on … great fun!
In the morning, we explored ... with my hands.
One thing I … really a day to remember.
How many parts can Sam’s diary be divided into?
Date
Beginning
Body
Ending
4 parts
Today we went on a school trip to a farm!
It was tiring but great fun!
What are the main points of each part?
Beginning
= What did he do?
+ Where did he go?
+ How did he feel?
Body
=
When
+
What did he see?
+
What did he do?
+
What did he learn?
+
How did he feel?
In the morning, we explored the farm.
There were large tents with ...
The farmer told us about …
I was very interested because …
Then we got straight ...
The work … get it right.
Slowly, we filled …
In the afternoon, the farmer taught us …
Finally, we watered …
Plants need … working with my hands.
One thing I learnt …
It made me think of the saying …
My mum … they were fresh and delicious!
They certainly taste … work for them!
Today was really a day to remember.
Ending
= What did he learn?
+ How did he feel?
How do we write a diary about school trip?
Beginning
Body
Ending
School
trip
Where did you go?
How did you feel?
When was the activity?
What did you do/ see?
What did you learn?
How did you feel?
What did you learn?
How did you feel?
2a
Make notes about your last school trip.
My School Trip
1. Where did you go?
_____________________________________________
2. What did you do / see?
_____________________________________________
3. How did you feel?
_____________________________________________
4. What did you learn?
______________________________________________
Write an outline.
Beginning
Our class went on a school trip to a farm last Sunday. It was really a tiring but interesting trip.
Body
In the morning, we went to … and watched … Then we visited … We took quite a few photos there. Finally …
Ending
I truly enjoyed every moment of this trip, and it reminded me of …
2b
Write a diary entry about the school trip. Use your notes in 2a and the expressions to help you.
I had a(n) amazing/ good/ bad/ terrible day today.
Our class went on a school trip to …
What a day!
One possible version
Friday, 6 June
I had a really good day today. Our class went on a school trip to an art museum. There was an art exhibition. I saw different kinds of art works, like some paintings of excellent artists. All of the paintings are so wonderful, and we were interested in them. Through the trip, I learnt many things about art. I felt tired but happy. Today was really a day to remember.
Diary format
Date: Day of the Week, Day Month, (Year)
Person: the first person
Tense: Simple past tense
Diary content
Date
Beginning = What did you do? + Where did you go?
+ How did you feel?
Body = When + What did you see/do?
+ What did you learn? + What did you feel?
Ending = What did you learn? + How did you feel?
In groups, think of a place or situation where the story took place. Share any interesting or special experiences. Use the questions to help you.
What did you see or do there?
How did you feel?
Did you learn anything?
Write a chain story about a memorable day
3a
vivid characters
descriptive language
conflict and resolution
clear setting
What does a good story feature?
interesting plots
satisfying ending
unexpected twists
What does a good story include(包含)?
Beginning
Setting/Background
Characters
Body
Rising action(故事发展)
Climax (故事高潮)
Falling action(冲突解决)
Ending
resolution
3b
Write a chain story together. Take turns to add one or two sentences each. You can use your experiences from 3a to help you. Read the example below.
Last summer, we had a very memorable day! We were on holiday in the mountains.
At first it was a nice day, but then the weather changed, It started raining.
We heard thunder and saw lightning flash across the sky. Just then, we saw someone in trouble.
…
Last summer, we had a very memorable day! We were on holiday in the mountains.
At first it was a nice day, but then the weather changed. It started raining.
We heard thunder and saw lightning
flash across the sky. Just then, we saw someone in trouble.
Background
Example:
He got lost in the mountains. What was worse, he didn’t take an umbrella and got all wet.
We asked him to come into our tent to hide from the rain.
Then we made a fire to keep us warm and cook food.
We sat by the fire, ate food and talked with each other.
Rising action
Climax
Falling action
Resolution
Frame and content(结构与内容)
Good language(语言)
Correct grammar(语法)
Handwriting(书写)
The tips for writing a good story:
3c
Read your story to the class. Vote on the most interesting or special story.
Exercise
在空白处填入一个适当的单词,使句子通顺、意思完整。
1.(地域特色)Many people go on a trip ________ Mount Baishi in Baoding. It is famous for its sunrise and sunset views.
2. Could you please remove your bag ________ my seat?
3.(教材改编题)The wastewater plant can turn dirty water ________ clean water.
4.(地域特色)Hebei has many well-known fruits, such ________ sweet peaches of Shenzhou and grapes of Changli.
to
from
into
as
5. Cartoon characters ________ the Monkey King are still popular in China.
6. Every morning I got ________ the school bus right near my home.
7. When we talk about traditional Chinese operas, we often think ________ Hebei Bangzi.
8. Could you pass me a pen?I’d like to write ________ a phone number.
like
on
of
down
Homework
Review the new contents in Unit 7.
Complete your group’s chain story and come up with as many plots as possible.
Read more English books to discover how to write a good article.
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