Unit3写作讲义：Text Messages (Inviting Friends) -2025-2026学年沪外教版英语七年级下册

沪外教七下Unit3写作精讲 Text Messages (Inviting Friends) 适用水平：七年级下册 字数要求：短信正文60—100词 教材依据：Unit 3 短信邀请写作 + 选择疑问句/不定代词 + 友好语气表达 第一步：审（审题） 1. 审任务：写一条短信邀请朋友参加线下活动，需要包含问候、活动介绍、时间地点、交通方式，并使用友好语气；同时要能看懂并写出接受/拒绝邀请的回复。 2. 审体裁：手机短信，格式简洁：称呼+正文，不用复杂长句。 3. 审人称：以**第二人称（you）和第一人称（I/we）**为主，直接和朋友对话。 4. 审时态： · 一般将来时（will / be going to）：描述将要发生的活动（如：There will be a... / We are going to...）。 · 一般现在时：用于问候和提出建议（如：Hi there! / Can you come?）。 5. 审技能：要学会使用友好语气，清晰说明活动细节。 第二步：列（列提纲） 短信结构（4个核心部分） 邀请短信结构 1. 问候：用轻松的打招呼开头（如：Hi guys! / @ALL Hi there!）。 2. 活动介绍：说明活动是什么、有什么亮点（如：a book fair / a basketball game，用there's going to be...）。 3. 邀请+时间地点：发出邀请，并明确集合时间和地点（如：meet at the school gate at 2 p.m.）。 4. 交通建议：告诉朋友怎么去（如：take the bus / walk there）。 回复短信结构 · 接受邀请：表达开心 + 感谢（如：I'd love to! Thanks! / Count me in!）。 · 拒绝邀请：礼貌道歉 + 说明原因 + 约定下次（如：Sorry, I can't. I have to... Maybe next time!）。 完整提纲示例（以“科技展”为例） 部分 详细要点 关键词 问候 @ALL Hi there! Hi there, @ALL 活动 本周六下午市中心有科技展，有最新的电子产品和互动体验 Technology Fair, downtown, latest phones, pads, fun activities 邀请+时间地点 想一起去吗？下午1:30在校门口集合 Would you like to come? meet at the school gate at 1:30 p.m. 交通 我们可以坐公交去，大概20分钟就到 catch the bus there, 20 minutes' ride 接受回复 我想去！谢谢！我对新电子产品很感兴趣，迫不及待了！ I'd love to. Thanks! I'm interested in new gadgets. I can't wait! 拒绝回复 抱歉我去不了，我要去姐姐的生日派对，有很多准备工作要做，下次吧 Sorry, I can't. It's my sister's birthday. I have lots to prepare. Maybe next time! 第三步：连（连句成篇） 用口语化的连接词把要点连成通顺的短信，符合七下水平。 常用连接词（短信友好语气） · 并列：and · 建议：We can... / Let's... · 邀请：Would you like to...? / Can you come? 连句示范 1. 要点：Hi guys. There is a Technology Fair. I want to go. → 升级：@ALL Hi there! Guess what? There's a super cool Technology Fair downtown this Saturday afternoon! 2. 要点：Meet at 1:30. School gate. Take the bus. → 升级：We can meet at the school gate at 1:30 p.m. and catch the bus there. It's only a 20-minute ride. 3. 要点：I want to go. Thank you. → 升级：I'd love to. Thanks for asking! I'm really interested in the latest gadgets. I can't wait! 第四步：美（美化语言） 在保证语法正确的基础上，用友好语气让短信更生动，符合教材要求。 1. 词汇升级（友好语气） 普通词 升级词 例句 Do you want to...? Would you like to...? / Can you come? Would you like to come with me? very good super cool / really fun It's super cool! I will go Count me in! / I'm in! Count me in! I can't go Sorry, I can't. / I'm afraid I can't. Sorry, I can't. 2. 句型升级（短信友好表达） · 基础句：There is a fair. → 高分句：Guess what? There's a super cool Technology Fair downtown! It has all the latest phones and fun activities. · 基础句：Meet me at the gate. → 高分句：We can meet at the school gate at 1:30 p.m. and catch the bus there. It's only a 20-minute ride. · 基础句：Yes, I will go. → 高分句：I'd love to. Thanks for asking! I'm really interested in the gadgets. I can't wait! · 基础句：No, I can't. I have a party. → 高分句：Sorry, I can't. It's my sister's birthday and we're having a big party. I have lots to prepare! Maybe next time! 3. 格式美化 · 短信简洁：每句不要太长，用短句更自然。 · 称呼清晰：可以用@ALL或朋友名字。 第五步：查（检查纠错） 写完后逐项检查，避免扣分： 1. 格式检查： · 确认有问候、活动、时间地点、交通四个部分。 · 确认语气友好，符合短信语境。 2. 语法检查： · 确认人称一致（I/you/we）。 · 确认时态正确（将来时讲活动，现在时提建议）。 · 确认拼写和标点正确。 3. 内容检查： · 确认字数在60—100词之间。 · 确认信息清晰（朋友能看懂什么时候、在哪、做什么、怎么去）。 · 确认回复符合要求（接受要感谢，拒绝要说明原因）。 完整范文 邀请短信范文 @ALL Hi there! Guess what? There's a super cool Technology Fair downtown this Saturday afternoon! It has all the latest phones, pads and fun interactive activities. Would you like to come with me? I'm sure we'll have a great time! We can meet at the school gate at 1:30 p.m. and catch the bus there. It's only a 20-minute ride. 接受回复范文 I'd love to! Thanks for asking! I'm really interested in the latest gadgets and the activities there. I can't wait to join you! See you at the school gate on time! 拒绝回复范文 Sorry, I can't. It's my sister's birthday this Saturday and we're having a big family party. I have to help with the preparations. Maybe we can go to another fair together next time! 中文对照 邀请短信： @ALL 大家好！ 你猜怎么着？这周六下午市中心有个超酷的科技展！里面有最新款的手机、平板，还有好玩的互动体验。想和我一起去吗？我们肯定会玩得很开心！我们下午1:30在校门口集合，坐公交过去，只需要20分钟。 接受回复： 我想去！谢谢你邀请我！我对最新的电子产品和里面的活动特别感兴趣。迫不及待要和你一起去了！周六准时在校门口见！ 拒绝回复： 抱歉我去不了。这周六是我姐姐的生日，我们要办一个大型家庭派对，我得帮忙准备。要不我们下次一起去别的展览吧！ 核心素材 好词 · 活动类：Technology Fair, book fair, basketball game, picnic, movie night, interactive activities · 邀请类：Would you like to..., Can you come?, Count me in!, I'm in! · 回复类：I'd love to., Thanks for asking!, I can't wait!, Sorry, I can't., Maybe next time! 好句 1. @ALL Hi there! Guess what? There's a super cool ... this ...! It has ... and ... 2. Would you like to come with me? I'm sure we'll have a great time! 3. We can meet at ... at ... and ... there. It's only a ...-minute ride. 4. I'd love to. Thanks for asking! I'm really interested in ... I can't wait! 5. Sorry, I can't. It's ... I have to ... Maybe we can ... next time! 学生填空练习版 邀请短信填空 @ALL Hi there! Guess what? There's a super cool ________ this ________! It has ________ and ________. Would you like to come with me? I'm sure we'll have a great time! We can meet at ________ at ________ and ________ there. It's only a ...-minute ride. 接受回复填空 I'd love to! Thanks for asking! I'm really interested in ________. I can't wait to join you! See you at ________ on time! 拒绝回复填空 Sorry, I can't. It's ________. I have to ________. Maybe we can ________ together next time! ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $