读后续写-人与动物生活趣事类-深夜“访客”？一家人如何用奥利奥暖心“护送”迷途大猪回家！ 讲义-2026届高三英语二轮复习专项

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 2025年浙江省杭州二中、温州中学、慈溪中学、金华一中、绍兴一中、舟山中学、衢州二中七校联盟高三12月联考英语学科试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was lounging on the sofa, enjoying a cozy T'V session with the kids(现在分词短语做伴随动作), when my wife Lindsey burst into the room. "Jake, there's a pig on our driveway!" she exclaimed. Our driveway was on the opposite side of the house, so we'd installed a security camera for just such occasions. Sure enough, it revealed a massive, four-legged creature wandering around(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Moments later, we caught sight of it gently touching the window with his snout (口鼻部) and grunting softly(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “He's adorable!" my 10-year-old daughter, Ella, squealed, “I'm going to say hello!" I cautioned her that we didn't know if the pig was friendly, but before I could stop her, she was already out the door. To our relief, the colossal pig(伏笔) seemed perfectly content to be petted and fawned over (讨好). Ella pleaded to keep him, but I gently explained that we didn't have enough space. Disappointed though Ella was,(强调倒装句) Lindsey and I decided to send the pig back. I called a local farmer to see if the pig belonged to him. When I described the animal's size and distinctive markings, he chuckled, confirming(现在分词短语做伴随动作)that it was definitely Kevin Bacon, who was probably just out looking for some company. The Hollywood actor's name gave us all a good laugh. The farmer also told us Kevin enjoyed playing with kids(伏笔). We learned that the farmer was away on business and wouldn't be able to return until the next day(伏笔，衔接点). He asked if we could walk Kevin home. “I'm not sure we'll be able to get him to move," I replied, “You could try luring (引诱)him with food," the farmer suggested. He then mentioned that Kevin had a soft spot for Oreos (奥利奥饼干).Fortunately, we had some Oreos in the biscuit tin. I hoped it would be enough. Then Lindsey managed to fit Kevin with a dog leash (狗绳)(伏笔). 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: After checking the route to the farm, we set off with a bag of treats. Paragraph 2: Suddenly, we realized there was only one Oreo left and it was impossible to find more food. 2025年浙江省杭州二中、温州中学、慈溪中学、金华一中、绍兴一中、舟山中学、衢州二中七校联盟高三12月联考英语学科试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was lounging on the sofa, enjoying a cozy T'V session with the kids, when my wife Lindsey burst into the room. "Jake, there's a pig on our driveway!" she exclaimed. Our driveway was on the opposite side of the house, so we'd installed a security camera for just such occasions. Sure enough, it revealed a massive, four-legged creature wandering around. Moments later, we caught sight of it gently touching the window with his snout (口鼻部) and grunting softly. “He's adorable!" my 10-year-old daughter, Ella, squealed, “I'm going to say hello!" I cautioned her that we didn't know if the pig was friendly, but before I could stop her, she was already out the door. To our relief, the colossal pig seemed perfectly content to be petted and fawned over (讨好). Ella pleaded to keep him, but I gently explained that we didn't have enough space. Disappointed though Ella was, Lindsey and I decided to send the pig back. I called a local farmer to see if the pig belonged to him. When I described the animal's size and distinctive markings, he chuckled, confirming that it was definitely Kevin Bacon, who was probably just out looking for some company. The Hollywood actor's name gave us all a good laugh. The farmer also told us Kevin enjoyed playing with kids. We learned that the farmer was away on business and wouldn't be able to return until the next day, He asked if we could walk Kevin home. “I'm not sure we'll be able to get him to move," I replied, “You could try luring (引诱)him with food," the farmer suggested. He then mentioned that Kevin had a soft spot for Oreos (奥利奥饼干).Fortunately, we had some Oreos in the biscuit tin. I hoped it would be enough. Then Lindsey managed to fit Kevin with a dog leash (狗绳). 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: After checking the route to the farm, we set off with a bag of treats. Paragraph 2: Suddenly, we realized there was only one Oreo left and it was impossible to find more food. 一、读后续写类型判定与整体构思分析 1. 续写类型判定 类型：生活趣事类 + 温情幽默型读后续写（人与动物） 题材特征： 日常生活场景（家庭、农场、孩子） 非对抗性冲突（“如何把猪送回家”） 情绪基调轻松幽默，结局温暖 高考常见母题： 意外来客 → 小冲突 → 合作解决 → 情感升华 2. 续写构思的基本思路 （1）先判断冲突核心 明线冲突： Kevin Bacon（猪）是否能顺利回到农场 食物不足 → 无法继续引诱 暗线冲突： 孩子的不舍 父母的责任与善意 人与动物的信任关系 （2）明确两段功能分工 段落 功能定位 写作重点 Paragraph 1 推进冲突 牵猪上路 + Oreo诱导 + 行进中的困难 Paragraph 2 冲突升级 → 解决 → 升华 Oreo用尽 → 创新解决方式 → 情感升华 （3）故事山 Exposition：猪突然出现在家门口 Rising Action：决定送猪回农场 Climax（续写重点）： Oreo即将/已经用完，猪不肯走 Falling Action： 孩子/家人想出办法（信任、陪伴、声音） Resolution： 猪安全回家 + 情感收束 二、原文与续写的衔接分析 1. 可直接承接的关键信息 原文要素 续写价值 Kevin likes Oreos 冲突设计核心 Enjoys playing with kids 解决冲突的重要线索 Dog leash 行为描写工具 Ella’s affection 情感线延续点 2. 原文中的情绪 / 动作 / 转折点 情绪描写 “He’s adorable!” “Disappointed though Ella was…” 动作描写 touching the window be petted and fawned over fit Kevin with a dog leash 关键转折点 农夫不在 → 必须自己送猪回家 三、伏笔、冲突点与隐含线索 ✔ 伏笔处 “Kevin enjoyed playing with kids.” “soft spot for Oreos” 暗示解决冲突不只靠食物，也可靠情感与陪伴 ✔ 冲突点 Oreo数量有限 猪体型巨大、不易控制 ✔ 隐含线索 孩子的参与 动物对善意的回应 ✔ 可能的解决方案 用声音/陪伴/信任代替食物 Ella牵绳、说话、安抚 家人齐心协力 四、原文分析 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 父亲理性、孩子天真 “I cautioned her…” 情感层次 惊讶 → 喜爱 → 不舍 “He’s adorable!” 关键情节点 决定送猪回家 “we decided to send the pig back” 语言特色 幽默、口语化 “Kevin Bacon” 关键词分析 Oreo, leash, adorable “soft spot for Oreos” 心理描写 父亲的担忧 “I hoped it would be enough.” 动作描写 抚摸、牵引 “be petted”, “fit Kevin with a dog leash” 环境描写 家庭生活场景 “lounging on the sofa” 隐含主题 善意与责任 全文温情基调 情感转折 不舍但选择送回 “Disappointed though Ella was…” 空间转换 家 → 路上 → 农场 “set off with a bag of treats” 时间过渡 当天 → 次日之前 “until the next day” 五、动作 / 心理 / 环境描写 动作描写 Kevin slowed his pace, planting his hooves firmly on the ground. Kevin放慢了脚步，把蹄子牢牢地踩在地上。 I tightened my grip on the leash, afraid he might bolt. 我攥紧了牵绳，生怕他突然挣脱。 Ella knelt down beside him, gently stroking his back. Ella跪在他身旁，轻轻抚摸他的背。 The pig sniffed the air, searching for the familiar smell of Oreos. 猪嗅着空气，寻找熟悉的奥利奥气味。 Kevin hesitated for a moment before taking a reluctant step forward. Kevin犹豫了一下，才勉强向前迈了一步。 We exchanged anxious glances as the treats grew fewer. 随着零食减少，我们不安地对视了一眼。 Ella tugged the leash softly, whispering encouragements. Ella轻轻拉着牵绳，小声鼓励着。 Kevin let out a low grunt, clearly expressing his displeasure. Kevin发出低沉的哼声，明显表示不满。 The pig suddenly stopped, refusing to move another inch. 猪突然停下，一步也不肯再走。 At last, Kevin waddled toward the farm gate on his own. 最终，Kevin自己摇摇晃晃地走向了农场大门。 心理描写 A wave of worry washed over me as I checked the empty bag. 当我查看空空的袋子时，一阵担忧涌上心头。 I began to doubt whether we could make it without more food. 我开始怀疑，没有食物我们是否能成功。 Ella’s hopeful eyes reminded me not to give up so easily. Ella充满希望的眼神提醒我不要轻易放弃。 My heart sank when I realized the last Oreo was gone. 当我意识到最后一块奥利奥没了，我的心一沉。 To my surprise, Kevin seemed calmer than I expected. 出乎意料的是，Kevin比我想象中更平静。 Relief flooded through me when he followed Ella’s voice. 当他跟着Ella的声音走时，我如释重负。 I felt a growing sense of responsibility for the gentle animal. 我对这只温顺的动物产生了越来越强的责任感。 Anxiety slowly gave way to confidence. 焦虑渐渐被信心取代。 I realized trust could be more powerful than treats. 我意识到信任比零食更有力量。 A warm satisfaction filled my heart as we reached the farm. 当我们到达农场时，一种温暖的满足感涌上心头。 环境描写 The quiet country road stretched ahead of us. 安静的乡间小路在我们面前延伸。 The evening sun cast long shadows on the ground. 夕阳在地面投下长长的影子。 A gentle breeze carried the scent of grass and soil. 微风带着青草和泥土的气息。 Houses gradually faded into fields and barns. 房屋逐渐被田野和谷仓取代。 The path grew narrower as we approached the farm. 靠近农场时，道路变得越来越窄。 Crickets chirped softly in the distance. 远处传来蟋蟀的轻鸣。 The farm gate stood quietly under the fading light. 农场大门静静地伫立在渐暗的光线中。 Dust rose beneath Kevin’s heavy steps. Kevin沉重的脚步扬起了尘土。 The peaceful surroundings seemed to calm everyone down. 宁静的环境让所有人都平静下来。 The familiar sight of the barn finally came into view. 熟悉的谷仓终于映入眼帘。 “高级替换” 1. happy delighted（情绪外露） pleased（内心满足） thrilled（非常兴奋） overjoyed（强烈喜悦） content（平静的满足） 2.afraid anxious（担忧未来） uneasy（隐隐不安） nervous（紧张） alarmed（受到惊吓） apprehensive（对结果担心） 3. walk stroll（悠闲） trudge（沉重吃力） wander（漫无目的） march（坚定有目的） waddle（摇摇晃晃，动物专用） 4. look glance（快速一看） stare（盯着看） gaze（长时间凝视） peer（费力看） scan（快速扫视） 5. stop halt（突然停下） freeze（僵住） pause（短暂停顿） come to a standstill（完全停住） refuse to move（拒绝前进） 地道搭配 have a soft spot for sth → “对……情有独钟” soft（形容词）+ spot（名词）构成固定搭配 高考高频情感类短语 set off with… → “带着……出发” set off（不及物短语）强调“开始行程” be content to do sth → “满足于做某事” content作形容词，后接不定式 give sb a good laugh → “让某人开心一笑” 常用于轻松幽默结尾 exchange glances → “交换眼神” 可积累生词 1. reluctant 词性：adj. 词义：不情愿的 近义词：unwilling, hesitant 反义词：eager, willing 例句： He took a reluctant step forward. She was reluctant to say goodbye. 2.lure 词性：v./n. 词义：引诱 近义词：tempt, attract 反义词：repel, discourage 例句： They tried to lure the pig with food. Bright lights can act as a lure. 3. content 词性：adj. 词义：满足的，满意的 近义词：satisfied, pleased 反义词：dissatisfied, restless 例句： Kevin seemed content to follow them. She felt content with the simple life. 4. hesitate 词性：v. 词义：犹豫 近义词：pause, waver 反义词：decide, act 例句： He hesitated before moving forward. Don’t hesitate to ask for help. 5. relief 词性：n. 词义：宽慰，释然 近义词：comfort, reassurance 反义词：anxiety, stress 例句： Relief washed over me. It was a relief to reach the farm. “食物失效→情感解决”的高级冲突化解 动作+心理并行描写 动物类写作的拟人化与克制表达 6、 Possible Versions（4） Version 1 Paragraph 1 After checking the route to the farm, we set off with a bag of treats. Kevin moved along with surprising enthusiasm, his heavy body bouncing lightly(独立主格) as his ears flapped with every step. Each Oreo disappeared(无灵主语句) the moment Ella offered it, making her burst into laughter again and again(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Lindsey and I switched hands on the leash, relaxed and amused by how naturally Kevin followed us(adj做主语补语). The pig paused now and then, sniffing flowers along the roadside or rolling happily in the grass(现在分词短语做伴随动作), completely unbothered by the curious stares around us(现在分词短语做伴随动作). A simple wave of an Oreo was always enough to guide him forward. People slowed down to watch, some smiling in disbelief.(独立主格) What began as a responsibility slowly turned into a joyful walk, filled with laughter, curiosity, and the warm feeling(过去分词短语做后置定语) that Kevin had somehow become part of our family. Paragraph 2 Suddenly, we realized there was only one Oreo left and it was impossible to find more food. Ella raised the cookie high, teasing Kevin with a playful smile(现在分词短语做伴随动作). He tilted his head, snorted softly, and followed for a few steps before stopping in confusion. Realizing the treat was out of reach(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Kevin refused to move. Ella immediately crouched beside him, gently stroking his snout and whispering encouragement(现在分词短语做伴随动作). She leaned forward and gave him a light kiss on the forehead. After a brief pause, Kevin stepped forward, then another, trusting her voice instead of the cookie(现在分词短语做伴随动作). When the farm gate finally came into sight(无灵主语句), Ella handed him the last Oreo. Kevin answered with a satisfied grunt(拟人。。), as if promising to remember us. Version 2 Paragraph 1 After checking the route to the farm, we set off with a bag of treats. At first, Kevin walked eagerly, clearly motivated by the familiar smell of Oreos(过去分词短语做原因状语). Ella skipped beside him, laughing each time(现在分词短语做伴随动作) he grabbed a cookie with his snout, while Lindsey and I followed closely, taking turns holding the leash(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Kevin seemed delighted by all the attention, stopping occasionally to sniff the grass or roll happily on the ground(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Each pause drew curious looks from passersby(无灵主语句), but a quick shake of the treat bag always sent him moving again. The relaxed pace and shared laughter made the journey feel less like an errand and more like a pleasant family outing. For a while, the destination hardly mattered, as Kevin walked proudly beside us like a welcomed companion. Paragraph 2 Suddenly, we realized there was only one Oreo left and it was impossible to find more food. Ella froze for a second before lifting the final cookie into the air. Kevin followed it eagerly, took a few steps, and then stopped when he realized it wouldn’t be given to him. He planted his hooves firmly on the ground, refusing to move(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Ella knelt down beside him, speaking softly(现在分词短语做伴随动作) as she rubbed his snout. Her calm voice seemed to work better than the treat. Slowly, Kevin began to walk again, one careful step at a time. When the farm gate finally appeared, Ella smiled with relief and gave him the last Oreo. Kevin responded with a happy grunt and waddled inside. Version 3 Paragraph 1 After checking the route to the farm, we set off with a bag of treats. Kevin followed us happily, each Oreo strengthening his trust(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Ella treated the walk like an adventure, laughing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) whenever Kevin eagerly reached for another cookie. Lindsey and I shared the leash, enjoying the rare chance to slow down and walk together(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Kevin stopped from time to time, distracted by flowers, grass, and unfamiliar smells(现在分词短语做伴随动作), yet he always returned when tempted by a treat. Curious strangers stared at us in amazement, but we hardly noticed. The laughter, the easy pace, and Kevin’s cheerful presence turned the task into a warm family moment, making it feel as though he truly belonged with us(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Paragraph 2 Suddenly, we realized there was only one Oreo left and it was impossible to find more food. Ella lifted the last cookie, then hesitated. Kevin stepped forward eagerly but soon stopped when it stayed out of reach. Instead of insisting, Ella crouched beside him, gently stroking his snout and whispering words of encouragement(现在分词短语做伴随动作). She leaned in and kissed his forehead softly. Kevin watched her quietly before taking a slow step forward. That step became several more. When the farm gate finally appeared, Ella placed the Oreo into his mouth. Kevin grunted contentedly, as if thanking us, before heading home. Version 4 Paragraph 1 After checking the route to the farm, we set off with a bag of treats. Kevin followed us at first, clearly motivated by the familiar smell of Oreos(过去分词短语做原因状语). Each time we stopped, Ella crouched beside him, whispering softly(现在分词短语做伴随动作) while I offered another cookie. However, the farther we walked, the heavier his steps became. The bag felt lighter in my hand, and my confidence faded with every crunch(无灵主语句). Kevin soon slowed down, planting his hooves firmly on the road and letting out a low grunt of protest.(现在分词短语做伴随动作) We exchanged worried glances, realizing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that food alone might not be enough to get him home. As I reached into the bag once more, my fingers touched nothing but crumbs, and a sudden silence fell over us. Paragraph 2 Suddenly, we realized there was only one Oreo left and it was impossible to find more food. Ella held the last cookie in her palm, hesitating (现在分词短语做伴随动作)before breaking it in half. Instead of offering it, she gently stroked Kevin’s back and began talking to him, as if to an old friend. To my surprise, Kevin lifted his head and listened. Slowly, he took a step forward, then another, following her voice rather than the treat.(现在分词短语做伴随动作) Relief washed over me as we continued toward the farm. When the gate finally came into view(无灵主语句), Kevin waddled ahead on his own. Watching him disappear inside(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I realized that patience and trust had guided him home better than any Oreo ever could. set off with a bag of treats plant one’s hooves firmly exchange worried glances relief washed over me disappear inside 替换建议 relief washed over me → a wave of relief swept through me set off → head out / start the journey 情绪描写 confidence faded worried glances relief washed over me 动作描写 crouched beside him planting his hooves waddled ahead 升级替换 worried → uneasy / anxious / apprehensive follow → trail behind / move after 例句 A wave of relief swept through me when the problem was finally solved. She hesitated for a moment before making a decision. He trailed behind us, still unsure of what lay ahead. Version 5 Paragraph 1 After checking the route to the farm, we set off with a bag of treats. At the beginning, Kevin seemed more than willing to cooperate, eagerly following each Oreo I offered. Ella walked proudly beside him, holding the leash like a seasoned trainer(现在分词短语做伴随动作). But before long, Kevin’s interest faded. He stopped repeatedly, sniffing the ground and refusing to move unless bribed(现在分词短语做伴随动作). With every step, the bag grew lighter(无灵主语句), and my earlier optimism slowly turned into concern. When Kevin finally came to a complete standstill, I reached into the bag once again, hoping for a miracle(现在分词短语做伴随动作), only to realize that we were running out of options. Paragraph 2 Suddenly, we realized there was only one Oreo left and it was impossible to find more food. Lindsey and I looked at each other helplessly, but Ella stepped forward without hesitation. She held the leash firmly and spoke with surprising confidence, calling Kevin by name and encouraging him to walk(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Perhaps sensing her determination(现在分词短语做伴随动作) Kevin let out a soft grunt and began moving again. We followed him the rest of the way without any treats at all. When we reached the farm, Kevin trotted inside happily. Watching Ella wave goodbye(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I felt a quiet pride, knowing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that teamwork—and a child’s courage—had saved the day. 地道搭配 & 替换 more than willing to come to a complete standstill without hesitation let out a soft grunt save the day 替换 without hesitation → without a second thought saved the day → made all the difference 情绪 optimism turned into concern helplessly quiet pride 动作 sniffing the ground holding the leash firmly trotted inside 替换积累 concern → worry / anxiety firm → steady / determined 例句Her optimism gradually turned into concern. He came to a complete standstill, refusing to move. The experience filled him with quiet pride. 官方： Paragraph 1: After checking the route to the farm, we set off with a bag of treats. Kevin trotted along happily, his ears flopping with each step(独立主格). Ella giggled every time he snatched a cookie with his snout, his eyes gleaming with delight.(独立主格) Lindsey and I took turns holding the leash, while the kid skipped alongside, petting Kevin from time to time(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The pig seemed to enjoy the attention, occasionally stopping to sniff flowers or roll in the grass(现在分词短语做伴随动作), but a quick wave of an Oreo always got him back on track. People on the street stared at us in amazement. The walk felt like a family outing, filled with laughter and curiosity(现在分词短语做伴随动作) and Kevin had become a temporary member of our family. Paragraph 2: Suddenly, we realized there was only one Oreo left and it was impossible to find more food. Just then I saw Ella holding the last cookie high, teasing Kevin with it(现在分词短语做伴随动作)., “Come on, Kevin, just a little further!" she coaxed. The pig tilted his head, snorting playfully(现在分词短语做伴随动作), and took a few hesitant steps forward. But when he realized the cookie was always out of reach, he refused to move. Ella crouched down beside him, gently stroking his snout(现在分词短语做伴随动作), “You can do it, Kevin," she encouraged. She leaned in and planted a soft kiss on his forehead. Slowly, he took a step forward, then another, his snout twitching(独立主格) as if to say, “Alright, I’ll trust you." When we finally reached the farm gate, Ella offered him the last Oreo. Kevin responded with a contented grunt(拟人一路), as if to say, “See you next time!” 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $