Unit 2 Travelling around the world（单元写作精练）英语新教材沪教版七年级下册

Unit 2 Travelling around the world单元写作精练 结合本单元 “描述旅行经历” 的核心目标，能写一篇短文介绍一次难忘的旅行，内容包括：旅行的时间、地点、同行人员、所见所闻及感受。 能正确使用一般过去时描述旅行中的具体事件（本单元核心时态）； 能运用本单元与旅行相关的词汇（如 travel, visit, enjoy, beautiful, exciting）撰写短文； 能遵循短文的基本结构，语言流畅、逻辑清晰，贴合七年级学生的写作场景和表达水平。 本单元相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 1、出行交通:trip 旅行,travel 旅游，train 火车，plane 飞机，bus 公交车，car 汽车，bike 自行车，ship 船, station 车站，airport 机场，taxi 出租车，subway 地铁，ticket 票，map 地图，bag 包，camera 相机 2、景点景物:mountain 山，hill 小山，lake 湖，river 河，sea 大海，beach 沙滩，park 公园，zoo 动物园, museum 博物馆，island 岛屿，village 村庄，city 城市，forest 森林，farm 农场，scenery 风景，view 景色 3、活动动作:walk 散步，climb 爬，visit 参观，enjoy 享受，swim 游泳，camp 露营，boat 划船，picnic 野餐,shop 购物，take 拍照，buy 买，eat 吃，rest 休息，stay 停留，travel 旅行，see 看见 4、人物相关:tourist 游客，guide 导游，friend 朋友，family 家人，people 人们，driver 司机，visitor 参观者，student 学生 5、描述感受:happy 开心的，excited 兴奋的，relaxed 放松的，tired 疲劳的，wonderful 精彩的，beautiful 美丽的，interesting 有趣的，exciting 令人兴奋的,delicious 美味的，comfortable 舒适的，great 极好的，fun 有趣的，nice 美好的，famous 著名的，clean 干净的，tidy 整洁的 短语 talk about 谈论 share...with 和...分享 go on a trip 去旅行　　　 go hiking 去远足 go sightseeing 去观光　　 places of interest 名胜古迹 take photos 拍照　　　　 have a good time /enjoy oneself 玩得开心 by bus /by train /by plane 乘公交/火车/飞机　 arrive at /arrive in 到达 look around 四处看看　　 try delicious food 品尝美食 learn about 了解　　　　 make new friends 结交新朋友 keep a diary 写日记　　　 take a walk 散步 climb mountains 爬山　　 row a boat 划船 enjoy the scenery 欣赏风景　 buy souvenirs 买纪念品 set off 出发　　　　　　 return home /go back home 回家 feel relaxed/excited 感到放松/兴奋　　 make wonderful memories 留下美好的回忆 句型 1. 开头：交代旅行基本信息 Last summer vacation, I went on a trip to [地点] with my [同行人员]. I traveled to [地点] with my family last month. It was an exciting trip. My most unforgettable trip was to [地点] with my best friend. 2. 中间： (1)描述所见所闻（一般过去时） We visited [景点] and saw [景物]. It was so beautiful. We took a boat trip on the lake. It was very exciting. We tried some local food. It was delicious and I enjoyed it a lot. The people there were friendly. We talked with them and learned about their life. (2)景点（城市）介绍（一般现在时） [地点] is a beautiful city.It is famous for [景点 / 特产]. The mountains and rivers are very beautiful. It is a great place for people to relax. 3. 结尾：表达感受与总结 It was a wonderful trip. I will never forget it. I enjoyed this trip very much. It taught me a lot about the world. This travel experience made me feel happy and relaxed. I want to go there again. 名言 1.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行，始于足下。 2. Life is a journey, not a destination.— Ralph Waldo Emerson人生是一场旅程，而非终点。 3.The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only one page. — St. Augustine 世界是一本书，不旅行的人只读了其中一页。 4. Travel is the best teacher. — Unknown旅行是最好的老师。 5.To travel is to live. — Hans Christian Andersen旅行即是生活。 优美句子 仿 （一）基础仿写 1. 原句：I want to talk about my unforgettable trip to Beijing. 我想说说我那次难忘的北京之旅。 仿写：_________________________________________. 我想分享我那次超棒的成都之旅。 答案：I want to share my amazing trip to Chengdu. 2.原句：I went there with my friends during the summer holiday. 暑假期间我和朋友们去了那里。 仿写：_________________________________________. 五一假期我和家人去了那里游玩。 答案：I visited there with my family during the May Day holiday. 3.原句：We set off at 8 a.m. and got there by plane. 我们早上八点出发，乘飞机去那里。 仿写：_________________________________________. 我们早上九点出发，坐高铁到达那里。 答案：We started at 9 a.m. and reached there by high-speed train. 4.原句：We visited lots of beautiful places of interest. 我们参观了许多美丽的名胜古迹。 仿写：_____________________________________. 我们参观了成都大熊猫基地，看到了许多可爱的大熊猫。 答案：We visited the Chengdu Panda Base and saw many cute giant pandas. 5.原句：The local people were very friendly and warm. 当地的人们非常友好，也很热情。 仿写：_____________________________________. 当地的人们非常善良有礼貌，在那里我交到了许多朋友。 答案：The local people were kind and polite, and I made many friends there. 6.原句：We took a lot of beautiful photos and bought some nice souvenirs. 我们拍了许多漂亮的照片，还买了一些好看的纪念品。 仿写：_________________________________________. 在那里我们拍了许多有趣的照片，还买了一些可爱的熊猫纪念品。 答案：We took many interesting photos and bought some lovely panda souvenirs there. 7.原句：We tried lots of delicious snacks, such as Beijing Roast Duck, dumplings and soybean milk. 我们品尝了许多美味的小吃，比如北京烤鸭、饺子和豆浆。 仿写：________________________________________. 我们品尝了许多美味的食物，比如火锅和麻婆豆腐。 答案：We tasted lots of delicious food, such as hot pot and mapo tofu. 8.原句：We had a great time and it was a wonderful experience. 我们玩得很开心，这是一次很棒的经历。 仿写：_________________________________________. 我们玩得很开心，这是一次难忘的经历。 答案：We had fun and it was an unforgettable experience. （二）进阶仿写 我想分享我那次超棒的巴黎之旅。暑假期间，我和家人一起去了那里。我们早上九点出发，乘飞机到达那里。 第一天，我们参观了埃菲尔铁塔，欣赏到了全城美丽的风景。我们感到非常兴奋。第二天，我们去了卢浮宫博物馆，观看了许多伟大的艺术品。我们还拍了许多有趣的照片，买了一些好看的纪念品。第三天，我们沿着塞纳河散步，并且品尝了许多美味的食物，比如面包和蛋糕。 我们玩得很开心，这是一次难忘的经历。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文： I want to share my amazing trip to Paris. During the summer holiday, I went there with my family. We set off at 9 a.m. and arrived there by plane. On the first day, we visited the Eiffel Tower and enjoyed the beautiful views of the whole city. We felt very excited.On the second day, we went to the Louvre Museum and saw many great works of art. We also took many interesting photos and bought some nice souvenirs.On the third day, we walked along the Seine River and tasted lots of delicious food, such as bread and cakes. We had a great time and it was an unforgettable experience. 写作步骤 懂 Step 1 审题立意（明确方向，不跑偏） 主题：旅行经历 文体：记叙文 时态：一般过去时（为主）、一般现在时 要点：旅行地点、人物、时间、交通、活动、感受 Step 2 谋篇布局（搭建框架，填内容） 核心要求：按“开头-中间-结尾”三段式搭建框架，合理分配内容，逻辑清晰。 段落 核心作用 内容要点（用单元句型） 词数建议 开头（1-2句） 点明主题，介绍基本信息 1. 点明旅行地点与心情2. 交代时间、人物 15–20 词 中间（3-4句） 具体描述活动与经历 1. 交通方式与出发时间2. 参观景点、感受风土人情3. 拍照、购物、品尝美食 40–50 词 结尾（1-2句） 总结感受，升华主题 1. 整体心情与评价2. 这次经历很美好 / 难忘 15–20 词 Step 3 检查修改（纠错润色，拿高分） 核心要求：检查语法、拼写和语句通顺度，修正错误，让作文更流畅。 语法检查：人称一致、时态正确、名词单复数无误。 拼写检查：所有词汇拼写精准，无字母漏写、错写。 语句检查：句子通顺，连接词使用合理，无中式英语。 细节检查：词数是否达标，结尾情感明确，内容贴合主题。题型通关 练 1.每个人都有精彩的旅游经历。哪次旅行给你留下了难忘的印象呢？请你以“A Great Trip”为题，根据以下思维导图提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的这一次难忘的旅行。 A Great Trip When: last winter holiday Where: Harbin How: by train Activities: see ice works of art, go skating, make snowmen, take photos... Feeling: ... 要求：1. 须包含以上提示内容，可适当补充，词数70左右； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计算。 A Great Trip ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： A Great Trip My family and I went to Harbin by train last winter holiday. It was very cold but fun.     We saw beautiful ice works of art and went skating. My parents and I also made a big snowman and took lots of photos.     I felt excited because it was my first time seeing so much snow. This trip was really wonderful, and I will always remember it. 【总体分析】①题材：这是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时； ③提示：需包含时间、地点、交通方式、活动及感受等要点，不要存在语法错误。 【写作步骤】第一步：开头点明时间、地点、交通方式； 第二步：按提示顺序描述活动； 第三步：表达感受。 【亮点词汇】①go skating去滑冰 ②excited兴奋的 ③remember记住 【高分句型】①We saw beautiful ice works of art and went skating. (运用了and连接并列的谓语动词) ②I felt excited because it was my first time seeing so much snow. (运用了because引导原因状语从句) 2. （24-25七年级下·广东深圳·期中）深圳过去是个小渔村，现在，发展成为了一个闻名世界的大都市。假如你是深圳阳光中学一名七年级学生，你的学校组织了“我为深圳代言”的活动，请你以“Shenzhen, a wonderful place to visit”为题，根据下面的提示，用英文写一篇介绍深圳的文章，向来自全国各地的同学们展示深圳的魅力，要点如下： 1.深圳的地理位置和城市特点 2.气候 3.出行方式 4.深圳的美食和美景 (至少介绍两个你最喜欢的地方) 5.呼吁大家来深圳游玩 写作要求： 1）必须包含以上所有提示内容，可适当发挥，条理清楚，语意连贯； 2）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：大梅沙Dameisha；世界之窗Window of the World；东门步行街Dongmen Walking Street；梧桐山Wutong Mountain；欢乐港湾OH Bay Shenzhen, a wonderful place to visit Shenzhen used to be a small fishing village, but now ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Shenzhen, a wonderful place to visit      Shenzhen used to be a small fishing village, but now it’s a world-famous city.     It’s in the south of China and very modern. The climate is nice. It’s warm in spring, hot in summer, cool in autumn and not too cold in winter, so you can visit anytime. Traveling is easy. You can take the subway, which is fast. Buses are good too.      There are great foods and sights. Window of the World is a place where you can see small-sized world wonders. Dameisha is a beach where you can play in the sea. Wutong Mountain is a place where you can enjoy beautiful city views from the top. When it comes to food, you can’t miss the delicious seafood in local restaurants.     Come to Shenzhen! You’ll love it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文用一般现在时； ③提示：介绍深圳，向来自全国各地的同学们展示深圳的魅力，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明深圳现在和过去的改变，引出下文； 第二步，介绍深圳的地理位置和城市特点以及气候，出行方式，注意用词准确，行文流畅； 第三步，介绍深圳的美食和美景，注意细节充分，三观正确； 第四步，呼吁大家来深圳游玩。 [亮点词汇] ①in the south of… 在……南方 ②city views 城市景色 ③when it comes to… 当谈到……时 [高分句型] ①Window of the World is a place where you can see small-sized world wonders.（定语从句） ②You can take the subway, which is fast.（定语从句） 3. 假设你应邀为一本旅游杂志写一篇题目为“China is calling”的文章，你会如何向读者介绍中国呢？请根据表格内容，写一篇80词左右的短文介绍中国。 概述 位于亚洲 (Asia)的东部，是一个富含历史文化底蕴的国家 北京 有长城、故宫博物馆 (the Palace Museum) 等著名景点 广州 以各种美食闻名 成都 去茶馆 (Tea House) 品尝茶文化、去熊猫基地 (the Panda Base) 看熊猫 其他 …… (至少补充一点) China is calling ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： China is calling China, located in the east of Asia, is a country rich in history and culture. Beijing, the capital, has many famous attractions. The Great Wall stands as a symbol of China’s ancient wisdom and strength, while the Palace Museum shows royal culture. Guangzhou is well-known for its various delicious foods. You can taste all kinds of local snacks there. In Chengdu, you can go to Tea Houses to experience tea culture and visit the Panda Base to see cute pandas. Besides, China has beautiful natural scenery like Guilin’s mountains and waters. China is calling. Come and explore it! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为旅游杂志的短文介绍。 ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中关于中国的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“中国位于亚洲东部且历史悠久”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“北京、广州、成都” 等几个方面重点介绍中国的具体情况，并适当补充其他信息。 第三步，书写结语。表达欢迎大家来中国游玩的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①located in 位于 ②all kinds of 各种各样的 [高分句型] ①Beijing, the capital, has many famous attractions.（同位语结构，用“名词+逗号+同位语”突出城市身份） ②The Great Wall stands as a symbol of China’s ancient wisdom and strength. （“stand as a symbol of…” 比喻句式，形象生动） 4.（24-25七年级下·广东广州·期中）今年暑假，你代表广州中学生参加AFS国际文化交流组织项目(AFS intercultural Programs)，即将到澳大利亚开展为期一个月的文化交流。请根据以下内容，向接待你的澳大利亚家中学生Jack介绍广州的风土人情，展示广州的文化特色。 注意事项： （1）短文应包括所给要点内容，可适当拓展使文章充实连贯； （2）词数 70 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中考生不得提及所在学校及姓名； （4）相关词汇：长隆野生动物园 Chimelong Safari Park，省份 Province，广州塔 Canton Tower。 Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from Guangzhou, Guangdong Province, China. Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province with a long history. It is famous for its flowers and delicious food. There are plenty of famous places of interest here. Firstly, if you want to get a bird’s-eye view of Guangzhou, you can visit Canton Tower. Secondly, you can visit Baiyun Mountain, where the trees are strong and the air is fresh. Thirdly, there is also Chimelong Safari Park. It is one of the biggest nature parks in China and is home to about 20,000 animals, including giant pandas and Chinese white tigers. The people here are also very friendly and kind. Guangzhou has something for everyone. If you come to Guangzhou, you will be sure to like it. Welcome to my hometown as a guest. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图并总体介绍广州； 第二步，介绍广州的旅游景点； 第三步，介绍自己对广州的评价及原因。 [亮点词汇] ①capital省会 ②be famous for…因……而出名 ③places of interest名胜古迹 ④fresh清新的 [高分句型] ①For example, you can visit Baiyun Mountain, where the trees are strong and the air is fresh. (where引导非限制性定语从句) ②Firstly, if you want to get a bird’s-eye view of Guangzhou, you can visit Canton Tower. (if引导条件状语从句) 5、（24-25七年级下·广东广州·期中）假如你是李华，某英文报社正在举行题为“My meaningful holiday”的英语征文比赛。请根据下面给的提示内容，写一篇短文投稿，介绍你和好朋友王瑶到西双版纳 (Xishuangbanna) 游玩的经历。可适当发挥，字数80词左右。开头已给出，不计入字数。 Who I travelled with 对人耐心和善，擅长拍照 Where I travelled and what I did 位于中国的西南部，富含自然和文化资源 乘船游览澜沧江 (Lancang River)；在雨林徒步，观赏动植物；品尝当地美食：例如竹筒饭 (Bamboo-tube Rice) What I learned and how I felt ……(请至少补充两点) During the holiday, I had an unforgettable trip to Xishuangbanna with my friend Wang Yao. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My meaningful holiday    During the holiday, I had an unforgettable trip to Xishuangbanna with my friend Wang Yao. Wang Yao, who is patient and kind, is also good at taking photos.     Located in southwest China, Xishuangbanna is rich in natural and cultural resources. We took a boat trip on the Lancang River, enjoying the beautiful views. We went hiking in the rainforest to see amazing plants and animals. Besides, we tasted local food like Bamboo-tube Rice.     This trip broadened my horizons and deepened our friendship. I felt grateful for this wonderful experience! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：材料表格所给内容需按要求完整表达，写作过程注意时态切换。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，点明主旨并简略介绍朋友特点； 第二步，详细讲述旅行地点和旅行过程中的所见所闻； 第三步，表达收获和感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②rich in富含；富有 ③go hiking去徒步旅行；去远足 [高分句型] ①Wang Yao, who is patient and kind, is also good at taking photos.（非限定性定语从句） ②We took a boat trip on the Lancang River, enjoying the beautiful views. （现在分词短语作伴随状语） 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 2 Travelling around the world单元写作精练 结合本单元 “描述旅行经历” 的核心目标，能写一篇短文介绍一次难忘的旅行，内容包括：旅行的时间、地点、同行人员、所见所闻及感受。 能正确使用一般过去时描述旅行中的具体事件（本单元核心时态）； 能运用本单元与旅行相关的词汇（如 travel, visit, enjoy, beautiful, exciting）撰写短文； 能遵循短文的基本结构，语言流畅、逻辑清晰，贴合七年级学生的写作场景和表达水平。 本单元相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 1、出行交通:trip 旅行,travel 旅游，train 火车，plane 飞机，bus 公交车，car 汽车，bike 自行车，ship 船, station 车站，airport 机场，taxi 出租车，subway 地铁，ticket 票，map 地图，bag 包，camera 相机 2、景点景物:mountain 山，hill 小山，lake 湖，river 河，sea 大海，beach 沙滩，park 公园，zoo 动物园, museum 博物馆，island 岛屿，village 村庄，city 城市，forest 森林，farm 农场，scenery 风景，view 景色 3、活动动作:walk 散步，climb 爬，visit 参观，enjoy 享受，swim 游泳，camp 露营，boat 划船，picnic 野餐,shop 购物，take 拍照，buy 买，eat 吃，rest 休息，stay 停留，travel 旅行，see 看见 4、人物相关:tourist 游客，guide 导游，friend 朋友，family 家人，people 人们，driver 司机，visitor 参观者，student 学生 5、描述感受:happy 开心的，excited 兴奋的，relaxed 放松的，tired 疲劳的，wonderful 精彩的，beautiful 美丽的，interesting 有趣的，exciting 令人兴奋的,delicious 美味的，comfortable 舒适的，great 极好的，fun 有趣的，nice 美好的，famous 著名的，clean 干净的，tidy 整洁的 短语 _________________谈论 _________________和...分享 _________________去旅行　　　 _________________ 去远足 _________________ 去观光　　 _________________ 名胜古迹 _________________拍照　　　　 _________________ 玩得开心 _________________乘公交/火车/飞机　 _________________到达 _________________四处看看　　 _________________品尝美食 _________________了解　　　　 _________________ 结交新朋友 _________________写日记　　　 _________________ 散步 _________________爬山　　 _________________划船 _________________ 欣赏风景　 _________________ 买纪念品 _________________出发　　　　　　 _________________回家 _________________ 感到放松/兴奋　　 _________________留下美好的回忆 句型 1. 开头：交代旅行基本信息 Last summer vacation, I went on a trip to [地点] with my [同行人员]. I traveled to [地点] with my family last month. It was an exciting trip. My most unforgettable trip was to [地点] with my best friend. 2. 中间： (1)描述所见所闻（一般过去时） We visited [景点] and saw [景物]. It was so beautiful. We took a boat trip on the lake. It was very exciting. We tried some local food. It was delicious and I enjoyed it a lot. The people there were friendly. We talked with them and learned about their life. (2)景点（城市）介绍（一般现在时） [地点] is a beautiful city.It is famous for [景点 / 特产]. The mountains and rivers are very beautiful. It is a great place for people to relax. 3. 结尾：表达感受与总结 It was a wonderful trip. I will never forget it. I enjoyed this trip very much. It taught me a lot about the world. This travel experience made me feel happy and relaxed. I want to go there again. 名言 1.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行，始于足下。 2. Life is a journey, not a destination.— Ralph Waldo Emerson人生是一场旅程，而非终点。 3.The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only one page. — St. Augustine 世界是一本书，不旅行的人只读了其中一页。 4. Travel is the best teacher. — Unknown旅行是最好的老师。 5.To travel is to live. — Hans Christian Andersen旅行即是生活。 优美句子 仿 （一）基础仿写 1. 原句：I want to talk about my unforgettable trip to Beijing. 我想说说我那次难忘的北京之旅。 仿写：_________________________________________. 我想分享我那次超棒的成都之旅。 2.原句：I went there with my friends during the summer holiday. 暑假期间我和朋友们去了那里。 仿写：_________________________________________. 五一假期我和家人去了那里游玩。 3.原句：We set off at 8 a.m. and got there by plane. 我们早上八点出发，乘飞机去那里。 仿写：_________________________________________. 我们早上九点出发，坐高铁到达那里。 4.原句：We visited lots of beautiful places of interest. 我们参观了许多美丽的名胜古迹。 仿写：_____________________________________. 我们参观了成都大熊猫基地，看到了许多可爱的大熊猫。 5.原句：The local people were very friendly and warm. 当地的人们非常友好，也很热情。 仿写：_____________________________________. 当地的人们非常善良有礼貌，在那里我交到了许多朋友。 6.原句：We took a lot of beautiful photos and bought some nice souvenirs. 我们拍了许多漂亮的照片，还买了一些好看的纪念品。 仿写：_________________________________________. 在那里我们拍了许多有趣的照片，还买了一些可爱的熊猫纪念品。 7.原句：We tried lots of delicious snacks, such as Beijing Roast Duck, dumplings and soybean milk. 我们品尝了许多美味的小吃，比如北京烤鸭、饺子和豆浆。 仿写：________________________________________. 我们品尝了许多美味的食物，比如火锅和麻婆豆腐。 8.原句：We had a great time and it was a wonderful experience. 我们玩得很开心，这是一次很棒的经历。 仿写：_________________________________________. 我们玩得很开心，这是一次难忘的经历。 （二）进阶仿写 我想分享我那次超棒的巴黎之旅。暑假期间，我和家人一起去了那里。我们早上九点出发，乘飞机到达那里。 第一天，我们参观了埃菲尔铁塔，欣赏到了全城美丽的风景。我们感到非常兴奋。第二天，我们去了卢浮宫博物馆，观看了许多伟大的艺术品。我们还拍了许多有趣的照片，买了一些好看的纪念品。第三天，我们沿着塞纳河散步，并且品尝了许多美味的食物，比如面包和蛋糕。 我们玩得很开心，这是一次难忘的经历。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文： 写作步骤 懂 Step 1 审题立意（明确方向，不跑偏） 主题：旅游经历 文体：记叙文 时态：一般过去时（为主）、一般现在时 要点：旅行地点、人物、时间、交通、活动、感受 Step 2 谋篇布局（搭建框架，填内容） 核心要求：按“开头-中间-结尾”三段式搭建框架，合理分配内容，逻辑清晰。 段落 核心作用 内容要点（用单元句型） 词数建议 开头（1-2句） 点明主题，介绍基本信息 1. 点明旅行地点与心情2. 交代时间、人物 15–20 词 中间（3-4句） 具体描述活动与经历 1. 交通方式与出发时间2. 参观景点、感受风土人情3. 拍照、购物、品尝美食 40–50 词 结尾（1-2句） 总结感受，升华主题 1. 整体心情与评价2. 这次经历很美好 / 难忘 15–20 词 Step 3 检查修改（纠错润色，拿高分） 核心要求：检查语法、拼写和语句通顺度，修正错误，让作文更流畅。 语法检查：人称一致、时态正确、名词单复数无误。 拼写检查：所有词汇拼写精准，无字母漏写、错写。 语句检查：句子通顺，连接词使用合理，无中式英语。 细节检查：词数是否达标，结尾情感明确，内容贴合主题。题型通关 练 1.每个人都有精彩的旅游经历。哪次旅行给你留下了难忘的印象呢？请你以“A Great Trip”为题，根据以下思维导图提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的这一次难忘的旅行。 A Great Trip When: last winter holiday Where: Harbin How: by train Activities: see ice works of art, go skating, make snowmen, take photos... Feeling: ... 要求：1. 须包含以上提示内容，可适当补充，词数70左右； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计算。 A Great Trip ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. （24-25七年级下·广东深圳·期中）深圳过去是个小渔村，现在，发展成为了一个闻名世界的大都市。假如你是深圳阳光中学一名七年级学生，你的学校组织了“我为深圳代言”的活动，请你以“Shenzhen, a wonderful place to visit”为题，根据下面的提示，用英文写一篇介绍深圳的文章，向来自全国各地的同学们展示深圳的魅力，要点如下： 1.深圳的地理位置和城市特点 2.气候 3.出行方式 4.深圳的美食和美景 (至少介绍两个你最喜欢的地方) 5.呼吁大家来深圳游玩 写作要求： 1）必须包含以上所有提示内容，可适当发挥，条理清楚，语意连贯； 2）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：大梅沙Dameisha；世界之窗Window of the World；东门步行街Dongmen Walking Street；梧桐山Wutong Mountain；欢乐港湾OH Bay Shenzhen, a wonderful place to visit Shenzhen used to be a small fishing village, but now ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 假设你应邀为一本旅游杂志写一篇题目为“China is calling”的文章，你会如何向读者介绍中国呢？请根据表格内容，写一篇80词左右的短文介绍中国。 概述 位于亚洲 (Asia)的东部，是一个富含历史文化底蕴的国家 北京 有长城、故宫博物馆 (the Palace Museum) 等著名景点 广州 以各种美食闻名 成都 去茶馆 (Tea House) 品尝茶文化、去熊猫基地 (the Panda Base) 看熊猫 其他 …… (至少补充一点) China is calling ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.（24-25七年级下·广东广州·期中）今年暑假，你代表广州中学生参加AFS国际文化交流组织项目(AFS intercultural Programs)，即将到澳大利亚开展为期一个月的文化交流。请根据以下内容，向接待你的澳大利亚家中学生Jack介绍广州的风土人情，展示广州的文化特色。 注意事项： （1）短文应包括所给要点内容，可适当拓展使文章充实连贯； （2）词数 70 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中考生不得提及所在学校及姓名； （4）相关词汇：长隆野生动物园 Chimelong Safari Park，省份 Province，广州塔 Canton Tower。 Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5、（24-25七年级下·广东广州·期中）假如你是李华，某英文报社正在举行题为“My meaningful holiday”的英语征文比赛。请根据下面给的提示内容，写一篇短文投稿，介绍你和好朋友王瑶到西双版纳 (Xishuangbanna) 游玩的经历。可适当发挥，字数80词左右。开头已给出，不计入字数。 Who I travelled with 对人耐心和善，擅长拍照 Where I travelled and what I did 位于中国的西南部，富含自然和文化资源 乘船游览澜沧江 (Lancang River)；在雨林徒步，观赏动植物；品尝当地美食：例如竹筒饭 (Bamboo-tube Rice) What I learned and how I felt ……(请至少补充两点) During the holiday, I had an unforgettable trip to Xishuangbanna with my friend Wang Yao. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $