内容正文:
陕西
英 语
主题写作培优册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与社会
主题7 良好的人际关系与人际交往&和谐家庭&交流与
合作,团队精神
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中考命题角度探究
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教材单元主题链接
人教版
七(上)U1 Making new
friends 八(上)U9 Invitations
七(上)U2 The family 八(下)U4 Interpersonal
communication
七(上)U5 Spending time
with friends
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一阶 课本句型促写作
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开头句 1. It’s very important for us to know how to get
along well with other people.
2. Nowadays, many teenagers have difficulty in
getting on well with their parents. Here is my advice.
3. Looking back on the old days of my junior high
school, I remember plenty of wonderful and warm
moments shared with my teachers and classmates.
4. I would like to invite you to take part in our
School-Leaving party.
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中
间
句 和家
人相
处 1. If your parents are having problems, you should
offer to help. Maybe you could do more jobs around
the house so that they have more time for proper
communication.[人教八(下)U4]
2. I get into trouble because my parents do not
allow me to play outside after 6 p.m. I do not
understand why they are so strict with me.
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中
间
句 和家
人相
处 3. I think we should first ask parents for help
because they have more experience and are always
there to help us.
4. Parents should allow children to make their own
choices.
5. Home is always the first place for us to get help
and support.
6. When I feel stressed about my lessons and exams, I often communicate with my parents.
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中
间
句 和朋
友/同
学相
处 1. I think a good friend is like a mirror. You can
understand people by knowing their friends.[新人教
八(上)U3]
2. I don’t really care if my friends are similar to
or different from me. My favorite saying is, “A
true friend reaches for your hand and touches
your heart.”[新人教八(上)U3]
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中
间
句 和朋
友/同
学相
处 3. I think we should respect each other’s
differences and learn from each other.[新人教八
(上)U3]
4. If I find my classmates going through a hard
time, I will offer help to them without thinking
twice.
5. When my friends and I have different opinions, I will listen to them patiently and respect their
points.
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中
间
句 团
队
协
作 1. Listen carefully and show interest in others. One
of the most important things is to listen to the
person you speak to.[新人教八(上)U8]
2. If you have a good team, you should support each
other.[人教九(全)U11]
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中间句 3. Everyone should actively take part in the project and do their part.
4. After that, I realized that I should work together with other teammates.
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结尾句 1. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you
be happy in your new school.
2. Although I will graduate soon, my English teacher
will always be in my heart.
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结尾句 3. Hopefully, we’ll all learn to get along better with
each other!
4. From this experience, I realize that the real
friendship with classmates is that whenever you are in
difficulty, they are always ready to help you.
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俗语谚
语 1. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
2. Many hands make light work. 众人拾柴火焰高。
3. One tree does not make a forest. 独木不成林。
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◆句子翻译
1. 有些害羞的学生很难和同学处好关系。(Tip: have difficulty
in doing sth.)
________________________________________________________
_____________________
Some shy students have difficulty in getting on/along well
with their classmates.
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2. 我想邀请我最好的朋友来我的生日派对。(Tip: invite sb. to
do sth.)
________________________________________________________
_______
I would like/want to invite my best friend to my birthday
party.
3. 青少年可以和父母聊聊自己的烦恼。(Tip: communicate with
sb.)
________________________________________________________
______
Teenagers can communicate with parents about their troubles.
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4. 父母有时对我们严格,但这帮助我们在人际关系中学会尊重他
人。(Tip: be strict with…)
________________________________________________________
_______________________________
Parents are strict with us sometimes, but it helps us learn to respect others in relationships.
5. 尊重彼此的差异能让小组项目顺利完成。(Tip: respect each
other’s differences)
________________________________________________________
________________
Respecting each other’s differences can make group projects finish smoothly.
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6. 在讨论中对组员的想法表现出兴趣会鼓励他们更畅所欲言。
(Tip: show interest in…)
________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
Showing interest in your group members’ ideas during
discussions can encourage them to share more freely.
7. 团队活动中最重要的事情之一是认真倾听。(Tip: One of the
most important things is…)
________________________________________________________
_______________
One of the most important things in team activities is to
listen carefully.
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8. 我意识到,多分享有助于和同学们更好地相处。(Tip: I
realized that…, get along better with…)
________________________________________________________
___________
I realized that sharing more helps get along better with
classmates.
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◆句式升格
9. My deskmate gets into trouble with a math problem. I will
offer help to him without thinking twice.(Tip: if)
________________________________________________________
____________________________________________
If my deskmate gets into trouble with a math problem, I
will offer help to him without thinking twice.
10. We come from different places. Active communication helps
build close friendships.(Tip: although)
________________________________________________________
__________________________________________
Although we come from different places, active
communication helps build close friendships.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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我校英语论坛发起主题为“Live in Harmony, Grow with Joy”的
讨论,希望同学们能和睦友好相处,建设和谐校园。请你根据写
作要求,简单谈谈你的看法,认真完成写作任务。
●Do you think it is important to build a good relationship
with classmates? Why or why not?
●How can you get along well with your classmates?
(share, respect, help, …)
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●What can you do when getting into an argument with
your classmates?
School is not just a place for learning knowledge, but also
a community where we connect with classmates. ____#1.4
审题四要素:
审体裁: 说明文
审人称: 第一人称为主
审时态: 一般现在时为主
审要点: 建立良好关系的重要性与方法,解决争执的方法
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一、构思:框架导图&参考表达
It is very important to build a good relationship with our classmates.
If we share our happiness with them, we will feel happier.
If we give our classmates a hand when they are in trouble, we will feel closer to each other.
If we want to get along well with our classmates, we should treat them in a friendly way.
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二、落笔:连句成篇&独立写作
School is not just a place for learning knowledge, but also
a community where we connect with classmates. ____
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School is not just a place for learning knowledge, but
also a community where we connect with classmates. It is
very important to build a good relationship with our
classmates, because it can help us to study better and more
happily.
Here are some ways to get along well with our
classmates. Firstly, we should learn to share. If we share our
happiness with them, we will feel happier. If we share our
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sadness with them, we will feel more comfortable. Secondly,
we should respect them. This will make them feel more
valued. Thirdly, we should help them more. If we give them
a hand when they are in trouble, we will feel closer to each
other.
Getting into an argument with our classmates is
sometimes unavoidable. When this happens, we should keep
calm and try to solve the problem by communicating. In a
word, if we want to get along well with our classmates, we
should treat them in a friendly way.
三阶 写作实战提能力
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“百川汇海可撼天, 众志成城比金坚。”假如你是英语社团的
成员李华, 本周英语社团的口语交流主题是“My Teamwork
Experience”。请你根据下面的提示信息, 用英语写一篇短文, 和
大家分享你的经历。
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My Teamwork Experience
Event ●What was the task? (group, work on, …)
●What did you do? (work together, …)
●What was the result? (…)
Understanding ●We can overcome difficulties by working
together.
●…
要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考
词汇,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名);
4. 词数:不少于70。 (开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Working together can lead to unexpected success. ____
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Working together can lead to unexpected success.Last
month, my classmates were divided into groups to work on
a project about global warming. My team worked together
to collect information and prepare our report, with each
member responsible for different parts. I focused on the
effects of global warming, while the others explored useful
ways to help. Everyone gave ideas to make the project
perfect.
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This experience made me understand the power of
teamwork. By working together, we were able to overcome
difficulties. We supported and encouraged each other, which
made us stronger as a team.
Working well as a team is the key to success. Let’s
value every chance to grow together.
Reflecting
How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very
well ____________
OK ____________
Needs
work
●I can keep my writing paper
clean.(2分)
●I can use correct English
expressions in writing.(5分)
●I can write all the points.(5分)
●My article is clearly structured
and well organized.(3分) □
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How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very well ____________
OK ____________
Needs work
Overall
comment Self-assessment
Peer review
Teacher’s assessment
Total score:____/15
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