内容正文:
陕西
英 语
主题写作培优册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自我
主题6 自我认识,自我管理,自我提升&职业启蒙,职
业精神
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中考命题角度探究
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教材单元主题链接
人教版
七(下)U9 Physical
appearance 八(上)U6 Life goals
八(上)U3 Personal traits 九(全)U4 How we have
changed
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一阶 课本句型促写作
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开头句 1. As I grow older, I have noticed several changes in
my life.
2. Everyone has a dream. Some hope to be doctors to
help others, while others dream of being teachers.
3. The life goal is just like a light which guides us in
darkness and helps us overcome difficulties. My life
goal is to be a scientist.
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中
间
句 外貌/
性格
特点 1. I usually wear jeans, a T-shirt and sports shoes.
[人教七(下)U9改编]
2. I’m quite tall, with short hair, and I wear a pair
of glasses.
3. I’m always ready to help others when they are
in trouble.
4. I am very popular in our school because I am
polite to everyone.
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中
间
句 兴趣
爱好 1. I love reading books because I think it’s a good
way to open my mind.
2. I spend much of my spare time practicing
playing the piano and I can play it very well now.
3. Besides, I’m very interested in playing
basketball.
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中
间
句 生活
目标
与梦
想 1. Maths is very useful in our life, and I want to
be a scientist in the future.[新人教七(上)U4]
2. I want to be a teacher. I’m going to study hard
and get good grades.[人教八(上)U6]
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中
间
句 生活
目标
与梦
想 3. There are different kinds of resolutions. Some
are about physical health. For example, some
people promise themselves they are going to start an
exercise program or eat less fast food.[人教八
(上)U6]
4. Many young people look up to these basketball
heroes and want to become like them. These stars
encourage young people to work hard to achieve
their dreams.[人教九(全)U6]
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中
间
句 生活
目标
与梦
想 5. I think I should be allowed to make this choice
myself. Only then will I have a chance to achieve
my dream.[人教九(全)U7]
6. As for me, I’m going to choose the most
interesting and exciting job in the world. I’m going
to be an astronaut.
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中
间
句 生活
目标
与梦
想 7. I will also learn to communicate with others,
because communication skills are important for a
teacher.
8. To make my dream come true, first, I will
study harder and try to read more books.
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结尾句 1. I’m sure I will make myself better and better.
2. I will learn to enjoy my life, and I’ll try my best
to do better.
3. All in all, I’m happy with these changes, because
they have brought me the happiness of growth.
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俗语谚
语 1. God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。
2. Do one thing at a time, and do it to the best. 一次
只做一件事,做到最好。
3. The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your
best today. 对明天做的最好的准备就是今天做到最好。
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◆句子翻译
1. 我希望计划好学习时间,按时完成作业。(Tip: hope to do
sth.)
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I hope to plan study time well and finish homework on time.
2. 我梦想将来成为一名科学老师。(Tip: dream of doing sth.)
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I dream of becoming/being a science teacher in the future.
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3. 我随时准备为我的摄影爱好学习新技巧。(Tip: I’m always
ready to do sth.)
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________
I’m always ready to learn new skills for my photography
hobby.
4. 我在学校绘画社很受欢迎,因为我经常分享简单的画画技巧。
(Tip: be popular in…)
________________________________________________________
___________________________
I’m popular in the school painting club because I often
share simple drawing skills.
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5. 她对象棋社的每位成员都很有礼貌。(Tip: be polite to…)
______________________________________________
She is polite to every member in the chess club.
6. 我每天晚上花一小时练拉小提琴,因为我想成为一名小提琴家。
(Tip: spend time doing sth.)
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I spend an hour practicing playing the violin every evening because I want to be a violinist.
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7. 努力奋斗并且永不放弃,会帮助我们实现梦想。[Tip: make
sb.’s dream(s) come true]
________________________________________________________
___________________
Working hard and never giving up will help us make our
dreams come true.
8. 她对传统舞蹈感兴趣,所以她经常在空闲时观看教学视频。
(Tip: be interested in…)
________________________________________________________
_____________________________________
She’s interested in traditional dances, so she often watches
teaching videos in her free/spare time.
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9. 我希望能被允许选择自己的梦想。(Tip: be allowed to do sth.)
______________________________________________
I hope to be allowed to choose my own dreams.
10. 如果我们努力,或许会有机会快速实现目标。(Tip: have a
chance to do sth.)
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______________
If we work hard, we might have a chance to achieve our
goals quickly.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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习近平总书记在新年贺词中说道:“梦虽遥,追则能达;愿虽艰,
持则可圆。”校英文报现正以“Fighting for Dreams”为题征稿,请
你写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你的梦想,选择该梦想的原因及如
何实现。
●What is your dream and why do you choose this dream?
(a teacher, a doctor…)
●What ways do you plan to take to realize your dream?
●What feelings do you have about realizing your dream?
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Fighting for Dreams
Everyone has a dream. My dream is ____
审题四要素:
审体裁: 记叙文
审人称: 第一人称为主
审时态: 一般现在时为主
审要点: 你的梦想,选择这个梦想的原因,实现梦想的途径,你
的信念与感悟
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一、构思:框架导图&参考表达
This experience made me realize that teachers have the ability to change students’ lives.
I’ve volunteered to help my classmates with their homework, which has improved my communication skills and deepened my understanding of teaching.
I truly believe that as long as I keep studying hard, I will make my dream come true one day.
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二、落笔:连句成篇&独立写作
Fighting for Dreams
Everyone has a dream. My dream is ____
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Fighting for Dreams
Everyone has a dream. My dream is to become a teacher.
Last year, my math teacher helped me solve problems
patiently, and I was deeply inspired by her kindness. This
experience made me realize that teachers have the ability to
change students’ lives.
To make my dream come true, I should study school
subjects hard and read educational books in my free time.
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Besides, I’ve volunteered to help my classmates with their
homework, which has improved my communication skills and
deepened my understanding of teaching.
All in all, I truly believe that as long as I keep
studying hard, I will make my dream come true one day.
As the oldsaying goes, “Keep trying, and dreams will come
true.”
三阶 写作实战提能力
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一、“广大青年要厚植家国情怀、涵养进取品格,以奋斗姿态激
扬青春,不负时代,不负华年。”习近平主席对青年一代提出殷
切希望,为当代青年的成长指引航向,为此,校英文报发起了
“How to Be a Sunshine Teenager”的主题征文。请根据以下提
示写一篇关于自己的征文。
●Have you read any classics?
●Have you ever been to some meaningful places?
●Do you often do chores at home?
●Do you have a healthy lifestyle?
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要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地
名);
4. 词数:不少于70。 (开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
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How to Be a Sunshine Teenager
To be a sunshine teenager, we should have a healthy
lifestyle. Let me tell you what I’ve learned in the past year and
what I will do in the coming summer holiday. ____
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How to Be a Sunshine Teenager
To be a sunshine teenager, we should have a healthy
lifestyle. Let me tell you what I’ve learned in the past year
and what I will do in the coming summer holiday.
I have read a lot of classics which have helped me
understand the importance of family and the country. At the
same time, I have visited different kinds of museums and
enriched my experience. I often do chores at home, such as
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cooking dinner, washing clothes and so on. I exercise
everyday and I have a healthy lifestyle.
I plan to improve my life skills and take part in
volunteer activities during the summer holiday. I will work
hard to be a sunshine teenager.
二、每个人都是独一无二的,都会发出自身特有的光芒。请结合
自己的爱好、喜欢的颜色、性格和生活经历,以“What I Like
About Myself”为主题,写一篇英语小短文。请你根据写作要求,
简单描述你喜欢自己的哪些方面和原因,认真完成写作任务。
●What do you like about yourself? [positive(积极的),
colorful, …]
●Why do you like them? [broaden(开阔), …]
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要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考
词汇,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地
名);
4. 词数:不少于70。 (开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词
数。)
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What I Like About Myself
Everyone is special, and so am I. What I like about myself
is ____
What I own has brought me lots of benefits, and I will
continue to work hard to make me a better person.
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What I Like About Myself
Everyone is special, and so am I. What I like about
myself ismy love for reading, my positive personality, and
the colorful experiences I’ve had.
I’m really fond of reading. It not only broadens my
knowledge but also takes me to different worlds. Whenever I
read a good book, I feel like I’m having a conversation with
wise people from the past or present. My favorite color is
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red, which I think represents passion, just like my
personality. I’m an active person. Even when facing
difficulties, I always look on the bright side.
Once, I failed an important exam. Instead of feeling
depressed, I found out my mistakes and made a study plan.
With hard work, I got good grades in the next exam. This
experience made me more confident in dealing with
challenges.
What I own has brought me lots of benefits, and I will
continue to work hard to make me a better person.
Reflecting
How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very
well ____________
OK ____________
Needs
work
●I can keep my writing paper
clean.(2分)
●I can use correct English
expressions in writing.(5分)
●I can write all the points.(5分)
●My article is clearly structured
and well organized.(3分) □
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How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very well ____________
OK ____________
Needs work
Overall
comment Self-assessment
Peer review
Teacher’s assessment
Total score: ___/15
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