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Part 4 Writing
推荐文化旅游胜地
写作题目
假设你是红星中学的高二学生李华。你校交换生Jim 打算寒假出去旅游,发来邮件请你推荐一座中国历史文化名城。请给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你推荐的城市;
2.推荐理由;
3.食宿建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.证据;证明
2. 接触……;体验……
3. 为……带来生机;使……更生动
4. 引起共鸣
答案 1.testimony 2.be exposed to
3.bring...to life 4.strike a chord
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:引出推荐的城市
(1)Having learnt that youre (打算去) travel to another city, I highly recommend Xian.
(2)The city (是……的证明) the (悠久的历史和丰富的文化) of China.
第二段:写出推荐的理由及食宿等方面的建议
(3) (它被证实是) the capital city of 13 dynasties.
(4)You can (接触到无数的历史遗迹) here, such as the Terracotta Warriors and Dayan Pagoda.
(5)Xian is also a wonderland, the fascinating art and culture of the East (赋予……生命力).
(6)The bustling snack street in the downtown is (游客必去的地方).
第三段:总结
(7)Im convinced the wonderful and historic Xian will (引起你的共鸣)!
答案 (1)planning to (2)is testimony to; long history and rich culture (3)Its proved to be (4)be exposed to countless historic sites
(5)which brings; to life (6)a must for tourists (7)strike a chord with you
2.句式升级
(8)将句(1)和句(2)合并为含有定语从句的句子
(9)将句(3)和句(4)合并为含有定语从句的句子
答案 (8)Having learnt that youre planning to travel to another city which is testimony to the long history and rich culture of China, I highly recommend Xian.
(9)Its proved to be the capital city of 13 dynasties, where you can be exposed to countless historic sites, such as the Terracotta Warriors and Dayan Pagoda.
连句成篇
Dear Jim,
history and rich culture of China, I highly
Its proved to be the capital city of 13 historic sites, such as the Terracotta Warriors and Dayan Pagoda. Xian is also a wonderland,
East to life. You can choose to live someplace near the ancient city wall. Whats more, the bustling snack street in the downtown is a must
Im convinced the wonderful and historic Xian will strike a chord with you!
Yours,
Li Hua写作积累
推荐旅游地点的常用表达
开头:
表明写
作目的
1.hot places of interest:the Great Wall (长城), the Forbidden City (故宫), the Terracotta Army (兵马俑), Li River (漓江), Mount Huangshan (黄山), the West Lake(西湖), the Landscape of Guilin(桂林山水)
2.Having learned/Delighted to learn that youll..., I am writing to recommend...
得知/很高兴得知你将……, 我写信是为了推荐……
3.Having learned that youre planning to visit Nanjing, I am writing to put forward my suggestions about your tour.得知你计划来南京旅游,我写信对你的旅行提出我的建议。
主体:
阐述推
荐理由
(历史文化、
名胜古迹、
美食等)
1.Situated in/on..., its acknowledged as one of the top tourist attractions throughout China.
它位于……, 被公认为全中国最受欢迎的旅游景点之一。
2.Its a charming city with rich culture and a long history, where you can enjoy various...
它是一个拥有丰富文化和悠久历史的迷人城市,在这里你可以欣赏到各种……
3.It houses numerous ancient temples and historic sites, making it a must-visit attraction.
它拥有许多古老的寺庙和历史遗迹,使之成为一处必游之地。
4.Equally impressive are its special snacks, which will give you a feast for your appetite.
同样令人印象深刻的是其特别的小吃,它们会让你胃口大开。
5.The reason why I recommend...is that it presents a unique blend of ancient and modern.
我推荐……的原因是它展现了一种独特的古代与现代的融合。
结尾:
评价或祝愿
1.I can assure you will be amazed by the beautiful scenery there.我确信你会对那里的美景惊叹不已。
2.May you have a wonderful travelling experience!祝你有一段美好的旅行经历!
实战演练
(2024湖北省宜荆荆随恩月考)
假定你是李华,你的英国网友David计划在他毕业旅行时到中国来亲身体验和感受中国文化,请你用英文写信向他推荐你眼中最具代表性的城市。内容包括:
1.城市概况;
2.推荐原因。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear David,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear David,
Im thrilled to hear about your plans to visit China for your graduation trip! Among the many cities, I highly recommend Beijing, the capital of China.
Beijing,which is a city with a rich historical and cultural heritage, presents a unique blend of ancient and modern. Here, you can witness the majesty of the Forbidden City, the tranquility of the Summer Palace, and the magnificence of the Great Wall. Moreover, the lively hutong areas provide a glimpse into traditional Beijing life.
Im sure Beijing will leave a lasting impression on your journey to China. Looking forward to hearing about your adventures!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重点词汇
①thrilled adj.非常激动的
②historical and cultural heritage 历史文化遗产
③witness v.目睹
④magnificence n.壮观
⑤a glimpse into对……的初步的感受
⑥leave a lasting impression on 给……留下持久印象
2.亮点句型
Beijing, which is a city with a rich historical and cultural heritage, presents a unique blend of the ancient and modern.(which引导非限制性定语从句)北京是一个有着丰富的历史文化遗产的城市,它展现了一种独特的古代与现代的融合。
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