UNIT 1 Part 4 Writing（同步练习）-【学而思·PPT课件分层练习】2025-2026学年高二英语选择性必修第四册（人教版）

Part 4　Writing 科技类写作 写作题目 　　假如你是李华,你校科研小组想发明一种家用智能机器人,来解决人们没有时间照顾老人这一亟待解决的社会问题。请你写信给国外科研好友Tom探讨此事。内容要点: 1.聊天;2.做饭;3.应对紧急状况。 注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  思路点拨 遣词造句 Ⅰ.用本单元所学短语填空 1.　　　　　　科幻小说(或影片等)  2.　　　　　　更像是;更接近  3.　　　　　　以……的基准(方式)  4.　　　　　　比……更好;更胜一筹  答案　1.science fiction　2.more like　3.on a...basis　4.superior to Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 第一段:提出问题——人们没有时间照顾老人 (1)People don't have enough time to attend to the elderly at home, and it has become an issue 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(迫切地被解决).   第二段:解决问题——介绍新型机器人 (2)We want to invent a household intelligent robot just like those 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(在科幻故事中).   (3)The robot doesn't look like a machine;it 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(看起来更像) a human.   (4)It can engage in chats with the elderly, keeping them company 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(每天).   (5)It can cook 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(美味又有营养的餐食).  (6)It can deal with emergencies, which 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(使它比……更高级) other robots.   第三段:表达愿望 (7)I hope it can 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(起作用).  答案　(1)to be solved urgently　(2)in the science fiction stories　(3)looks more like　(4)on a daily basis　(5)delicious and nutritious meals　(6)makes it superior to　(7)make a difference 2.句式升级 (8)将句(1)改为含有非限制性定语从句的句子 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  (9)用more...than...改写句(3) 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  (10)用not only...but also...连接句(4)和句(5) 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  答案　(8)People don't have enough time to attend to the elderly at home, which has become an issue to be solved urgently. (9)The robot looks more like a human than a machine.　(10)It can not only engage in chats with the elderly, keeping them company on a daily basis, but also cook delicious and nutritious meals. 连句成篇 Dear Tom, Due to the fast pace of life in modern society, life pressure is increasing. People don't have enough time to attend to the elderly at home,   We want to invent a household intelligent robot just like those in the science fiction stories. The robot looks more like a human than a machine. It can not only engage in chats with the elderly, keeping them company on a daily basis, but also cook delicious and nutritious meals. More importantly, it can deal with emergencies, which makes it superior to other robots.  This is our plan for the household robot. I hope it can make a difference.  Yours truly, Li Hua 写作积累 科技类写作增分词句 重点短语 cutting-edge technology前沿技术　　　　　wearable technology可穿戴技术 transformative effect变革性影响　play an important role in...在某方面起重要作用 the rapid development of science and technology科学技术的快速发展 an intelligent robot powered by solar energy一款由太阳能驱动的智能机器人 take the place of...代替……　have a great effect on...对……有很大影响 benefit from...得益于……,从……中获益　have easy access to...容易接触到/使用…… collect enormous amounts of information搜集大量的信息 亮点句型 ①So many powerful functions does this robot have that it can help us in various ways. 这款机器人有很多强大的功能,它可以在各方面帮助我们。 ②The robot can do all the housework, as a result of which people can be freed from heavy labour. 这款机器人可以做所有的家务,因此,人们可以从繁重的体力劳动中解脱出来。 ③You can rely on it that the robot can accept voice commands. 你可以放心,这款机器人可以接受语音命令。 ④I'm firmly convinced that the robot will be a big helper in a family, making daily life more convenient. 我坚信这款机器人会成为家中的一大帮手,让日常生活更便捷。 实战演练 (2023山东潍坊期中) 假定你是校英文报编辑李华,该报正在开展以“Technology Betters the Future”为主题的短篇科幻小说征文活动。请你写一则英文征稿启事,内容包括: 1.活动目的; 2.征文要求; 3.投稿方式。 注意:写作词数应为80个左右。 Contributions Wanted 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  读后续写 写作题目 　　阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 After an exhausting day, Jack wandered in the street, smiling while thinking of his students. Jack was a respectable and considerate teacher and his students took good care of him, too. Suddenly, a familiar figure flashed into Jack's eyes. It was Mark, his junior high school teacher. With a thrill, Jack dashed forward, greeted him enthusiastically, and said, “Mark, how are you?” Taking off his presbyopic glasses(老花镜), Mark studied the passionate young man in front of him, hesitated for a moment, and got confused, “Sorry? Have we met before?” Not disappointed at all, Jack introduced himself in delight,“Sorry, Mark. I'm Jack Smith, from Class 2, Grade 8, graduating from Kevin Junior High School in 2001. Now I'm a teacher.” Hearing the words, Mark was puzzled but also delighted, asking a series of questions. “Why can't I remember you? Are you a teacher now?” In spite of poor eyesight, Mark did have such a brilliant memory that he could even remember almost all his students. “Well, in fact, you were in charge of our class for only one day, and something happened that day. I became a teacher because of your inspiration.” Old Mark, curious, kept raising questions such as when they met, and how he had inspired him to be a teacher. “One day, a friend of mine came in with a nice new watch. I was so crazy about it that I decided to take it and I did. After a short while, my friend found it had disappeared and immediately reported it to the teacher, you, who happened to be in charge of our class that day because our teacher was ill.” A mixture of emotions floated into Jack's eyes when he recalled the shameful history. That day, Mark came and told the whole class that someone in the class could not find his watch and required that whoever took it return it quickly. Jack was too frightened to hand it in. 注意:续写词数应为150个左右。 　　Then, Mark closed the door and told all the students to get up.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　But Mark kept searching other students' pockets.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  文本分析 故事要素 深研文本 预测情节发展 Paragraph 1:马克让所有的学生站起来→马克决定挨个检查学生的口袋→杰克感到紧张和害怕→搜完杰克的口袋后,马克什么也没说,让杰克坐下了 Paragraph 2:马克继续搜其他学生的口袋→完成检查后,马克告诉同学们手表不在教室里→杰克感到很羞愧,决定把手表交给马克→马克称赞他敢于承认错误→杰克下定决心成为像马克一样受人尊敬、体贴的老师 遣词造句 1.完成句子 Para. 1 然后马克关上门,让所有的学生站起来。 马克说了什么,做了什么? (1)Mark stood on the platform and declared 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(以严肃的口吻), “I'm going to search your pockets 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(逐个地).”   杰克有何反应?心情如何? (2)Upon hearing Mark's words, Jack 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(惊恐万分), too afraid to meet the teacher's gaze.  (3)It was 　　　　 　　　　(好像) Mark could see right through him.   马克发现真相后是如何做的? (4)　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(令杰克惊讶的是), after searching his pocket, Mark remained tight-lipped and motioned for him to 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(就座).   Para. 2 但是马克继续搜其他学生的口袋。 搜寻完后马克说了什么? (5)Once the search was complete, Mark announced to the class that the watch wasn't in the classroom, but he 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(承诺找到它).   杰克有何感受,是如何做的? (6)Those words came as a blow to Jack. 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(羞愧难当), he resolved to turn in the watch after class.  (7)His hands shaking uncontrollably, he stood before Mark in the office, 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(等待惩罚).   马克如何回应?杰克决心以后怎么做? (8)I'm so glad that you 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(有勇气) to hand it in.   (9)Only then 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(杰克才意识到) that Mark was teaching him an important lesson in a gentle and wise way.   (10)Inspired by Mark's actions, he 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(下定决心) to study hard, hoping one day to become a teacher as respected and considerate as Mark.  答案(1)in a serious voice;one by one (2)was seized by terror　(3)as if/though (4)To Jack's surprise;take his seat (5)promised to find it　(6)Overcome with shame　(7)waiting for punishment　(8)have the courage　(9)did Jack realize　(10)made up his mind 2.句式升级 (11)将句(1)改为含有现在分词短语作伴随状语的句子 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  答案　(11)Standing on the platform, Mark declared in a serious voice, “I'm going to search your pockets one by one.” 连句成篇 Then, Mark closed the door and told all the students to get Mark declared in a serious voice, “I'm going to search your pockets one by one.” Upon hearing Mark's words, Jack too gaze. It was as if Mark could see right through him. To Jack's surprise, after searching his pocket, Mark remained tight-lipped and take his seat.  But Mark kept searching other students' pockets. Once the search was complete, Mark the classroom, but he promised to find it. Those words came as a blow to Jack. shame, he resolved to turn in the watch after class. After class, his hands shaking uncontrollably, he stood before Mark in the office, . However, Mark said, “I'm so glad that you have the courage to hand it in.” Mark was teaching him an important lesson in a gentle and his mind to study hard, hoping one day to become a teacher as respected and considerate as Mark.  写作积累 环境描写增分佳句 1.The lake water glittered in the sunlight.湖水在阳光下闪闪发光。 2.That day the mountain was full of flowers, and the trees had new green leaves.那天山上开满了花,树上也长出了绿色的新叶。 3.The sky became black, and rain followed thunder and lightning.天变黑了,雨紧随雷声和闪电而来。 4.The storm had stopped, and the sun was shining.暴风雨停了,太阳照耀着。 5.It happened on a cold day in December.它发生在十二月一个寒冷的日子。 答案与分层梯度式解析 Part 4　Writing 实战演练 One possible version: Contributions Wanted To inspire your imagination about the future life and fuel your enthusiasm for English writing, we are calling for contributions on the theme of “Technology Betters the Future”. All contributions are expected to center on the positive difference technology makes to the future life in the form of short sci-fi stories. Your wild imagination and vivid language would be the highlight. It is required that the entries should be original and creative and within 500 words. Please submit your work to englishworld@qq.com before May 22, 2024. Your active involvement is highly appreciated. Editorial Department of English World 1.重点词汇 ①fuel vt.增加;加强;刺激　②enthusiasm n.热情;热心 ③call for要求,需要;呼吁　④center on以……为主题 ⑤highlight n.最好的部分　⑥involvement n.参与 2.亮点句型 ①All contributions are expected to center on the positive difference technology makes to the future life in the form of short sci-fi stories.(省略关系代词that/which的定语从句,修饰先行词difference)所有的稿件都要以短篇科幻小说的形式呈现,内容聚焦于科技对未来生活产生的积极影响。   ② It is required that the entries should be original and creative and within 500 words.[It is+过去分词+that...句型;“(should+)do”虚拟语气]要求参赛作品具有原创性和创造性,并在500个词以内。   2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $