Unit 1 Writing课件 2025-2026学年沪教版英语八年级下册

Unit 1 Helping those in need 沪教牛津版八年级下册 Why is it important to help others? Key question 主题范畴：人与社会 Writing 1 Who do you want to help if our school is going to hold a money raising activity? Why ? Who to help? Children? The old? The poor? The disabled? The sick? 真奉献爱心、助力公益，是青少年成长路上的重要一课。假设你是某国际中学八年级三班的李华，你们班计划举办一场旧物改造义卖活动，为患病儿童筹款。请你给校长Mr Brown写一封邮件，申请批准此次活动。 要求： 1. 80词左右； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 Dear Mr Brown, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 本篇写作要求写一封邮件，向校长申请在学校组织慈善义卖活动。 ☆主题：志愿服务与公共服务 ☆主要人称：第一人称、第二人称 ☆主要时态：一般现在时、一般将来时 首先，开门见山地表明写作目的——请求批准在学校组织一场慈善义卖，并简要说明活动初衷(为患病儿童筹款)以及组织人员。 【谋篇布局】 Pre-writing 其次，详细阐述活动规划与意义。 ①活动具体安排：先说明前期准备(投入时间将旧物改造为实用或美观的新物品)，再明确活动时间、地点以及资金去向；(what, who，when) ②活动意义：从资源利用(减少浪费)和品德培养(传递善意)两个层面谈谈活动的积极意义。(why) 最后，再次提出申请请求，表达对获得支持的感谢和收到回复的期待。 开门见山： ( Para.1 writing purpose ) I am writing to you about ... I am writing to ask for permission to... 主体（Para. 2-3 aim and activity details ） Our goal is to ... In order to ..., we plan to... First, ... Second,... Third,.... 结尾 （Para. 4 ask for permission and thanks） Could you please give us permission ? We sincerely look forward to your reply. ... 【思路点拨】 Step 1： 构建思维导图，完成写作提纲。 sick old waste kindness permission Step 2：遣词造句 suffer from serious raise money take part in hold the importance of … B. 例句仿写。 1. 例句：In order to stay healthy, Mark goes swimming twice a week.为了保持健康，马克每周游泳两次。 仿写：__________________________________________ __________________________________________ 为了给他们筹集善款，我们计划在学校组织一场义卖。 2. 例句：Many volunteers are willing to help clean up the community park on weekends. 许多志愿者愿意在周末帮助清扫社区公园。 仿写：__________________________________________ 八年级三班的十五名学生愿意帮忙。 In order to raise money for them, we plan to organize a charity sale in our school. 15 students from Class 3, Grade 8 are willing to help. 3. 例句：We not only brought joy to the elderly but also came to understand the importance of caring for others. 我们不仅给老人带来欢乐，也让他们明白关爱他人的重要性。 仿写：_____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ 我们不仅帮助了他人，自己也学到了宝贵的经验。 4. 例句：It’s meaningful to develop a sense of responsibility. 培养责任感是很有意义的。 仿写：_____________________________________________ 帮助那些需要帮助的人是有意义的。 It is meaningful to help those in need. We not only helped others but also learned valuable lessons . 5. 例句：She devotes her spare time to teaching children science online. 她把业余时间投入到了线上教孩子们科学这一事情上。 仿写：_____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ 首先，我们将投入空闲时间将旧物改造成有用或美观的物品。 6. 例句：Through this activity, we had a better understanding of teamwork. 通过这次活动，我们更深刻地理解了团队合作。 仿写：_____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ 我们希望更多的学生能对传播善行有更好的理解。 First, we’ll devote our spare time to turning some old things into useful or beautiful items. We hope more students can have a better understanding of spreading kindness. While-writing Post-writing Check and revise 检查和修改 Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it. 根据下面的清单检查和修改作文。 I used polite language in my email. I explained the purpose at the beginning of the email. I used certain expressions to explain our plans clearly I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit. I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. 【参考范文】 $