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写作一 应用文写作(关于环境问题的报告)
假定你是新华中学的学生李华,请根据以下提示,针对某地近两年频繁遭受沙尘暴袭击的情况,写一篇关于环境问题的报告向某英语报社投稿。内容包括:
1.过去某地环境宜人;
2.如今人们毁林种地、建房,导致严重的环境问题;
3.当地政府和居民的应对措施。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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审题谋篇
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巧妙对接单元词汇
1.______________ adj. 适合居住的
2.______________ n. 政策
3.______________ 与……和谐相处
4.______________ 代表某人
5.______________v. 恢复
6.______________ n. 保护
7.______________ 许多
遣词造句
habitable
policy
in harmony with
on behalf of
restore
conservation
dozens of
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巧用单元句式、语法
[第一段] 点明报告主题
1.我代表我的学校写这份报告是为了表达自己对环境保护的看法。
____________________________, I'm writing this report ________________________________________________________.
2.去年我去了附近的一个地方。这地方以前很漂亮。
Last year I went to a place nearby. The place ________________________________.
On behalf of my school
to express my views concerning the environment conservation
used to be a beautiful place
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[第二段] 提出环境问题
3.然而,如今,那里的人们为了建造房屋和种植更多农作物而砍伐树木、铲除草皮。
However, nowadays, people there have been cutting down trees and digging up grass __________________________________________.
4.沙尘暴经常袭击这个地方,给人们造成很大的损失。(“介词+which”引导定语从句)
Sandstorms often strike this place, _________________________.
in order to build houses and plant more crops
from which people suffer a lot
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5.毫无疑问这个地方已经不适合居住了。(There is little/no doubt that...)______________________________________________________
There is little/no doubt that this place is no longer habitable.
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[第三段] 介绍解决措施并提出希望
6.为了与自然和谐相处,当地政府和人民制定了诸多恢复森林和草地的政策。
________________________________, the local government and people have made _________________________________________.
To live in harmony with nature
dozens of policies to restore the forests and grass
7.措施已经到位,情况正在得到改善。
These measures ______________, and the situation ________________.
8.相信它会再次成为一个美丽的地方!(It is believed that...)
________________________________________________
are in place
is being improved
It is believed that it will become a beautiful place again!
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靓化表达促提升
9.用定语从句改写句2
____________________________________________________________10.用with复合结构改写句7
____________________________________________________________
Last year I went to a place nearby, which used to be a beautiful place.
With these measures in place, the situation is being improved.
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One possible version:
On behalf of my school, I'm writing this report to express my views concerning the environment conservation.
Last year I went to a place nearby, which used to be a beautiful place. However, nowadays, people there have been cutting down trees and digging up grass in order to build houses and plant more crops. Sandstorms often strike this place, from which people suffer a lot. There is little/no doubt that this place is no longer habitable.
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To live in harmony with nature, the local government and people have made dozens of policies to restore the forests and grass. With these measures in place, the situation is being improved. It is believed that it will become a beautiful place again!
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当今,我们周围的空气质量变得越来越差,为了加强学生们的环保意识,学校打算开展以“为家乡空气污染问题出谋划策”为主题的征文活动,警示人们要保护环境。请你写一篇报告,内容要点如下:
1.写明家乡空气污染的原因;
2.为建设绿色家乡提出建议或措施(2~3点);
3.倡议大家行动起来。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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One possible version:
With the development of economy,our hometown has witnessed severe air pollution for several years. This report looks at the causes of air pollution and some useful actions.
The severe air pollution alarms us of the heavy load we have exerted on Earth by our inappropriate usage of fuel wastes. Therefore,urgent steps should be taken to alleviate this issue.
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Initially,industrial companies should adopt new forms of energy as substitutes for fossil fuels. Also, the government can carry out inspections regularly. As for individuals,we should raise environmental awareness and try more environment-friendly transportation means instead of private cars. With these measures, it is believed that the fresh air of our hometown will be preserved for generations to enjoy.
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累 [环境描写] 1.There is little doubt that Earth is getting warmer and warmer.
2.A warming ocean and atmosphere along with melting ice and rising sea levels provide evidence of a dramatic change in the global climate.
3.The beautiful Li River and its amazing surrounding scenery is one of the most well-known tourist destinations in China's Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region.
写作二 积累教材语料
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累 [情感描写] 1.In 2013, a lot of people were shocked by a news photo of a dead polar bear that was found on Norway's Arctic island of Svalbard.
2.Local officials were concerned that the pollution was damaging the natural environment and felt that urgent steps should be taken to restore the river's original beauty.
[主旨升华] It is our responsibility to seize every opportunity to educate everyone about global warming, along with its causes and impacts, because this is the most serious issue affecting all of us on this planet.
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句 1.We should reduce the use of plastic bags to protect the environment.
我们应该减少塑料袋的使用来保护环境。
2.Saving water is crucial for environmental protection as water resources are limited.
因为水资源是有限的,所以节约用水对环境保护至关重要。
3.We need to promote the use of renewable energy to reduce greenhouse gas emissions.
我们需要推广可再生能源的使用来减少温室气体排放。
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句 4.If everyone could make a contribution to environmental protection, our home will become much more beautiful. 如果每个人为环境保护做出一点贡献,我们的家园将会变得更加美丽。
5.If we fail to take immediate action to protect endangered species, we risk losing biodiversity that is crucial for maintaining ecological balance. 如果我们不立即采取行动保护濒危物种,我们将面临失去对维持生态平衡至关重要的生物多样性的风险。
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句 6.Although many people are aware of the importance of reducing plastic use, a significant amount of plastic waste is still generated every day, which poses a serious threat to marine life. 尽管许多人意识到减少塑料使用的重要性,但每天仍然有大量的塑料垃圾产生,这对海洋生物构成了严重威胁。
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点明报告
主题
1.This report focuses on the serious environmental problems we face today, especially air pollution and plastic waste.
这份报告聚焦我们面临的严峻环境问题,尤其是空气污染与塑料垃圾。
2.With the issue of environmental protection becoming more and more important, this report focuses on plastic pollution and climate change.
随着环境保护问题变得越来越重要,本报告聚焦塑料污染与气候变化。
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介绍环境问题
1.The water of the Qingjiang River was clear to the bottom, calm without waves in the past. 过去的清江水清澈见底,平静无浪。
2.Many beautiful rivers and lakes have been polluted by the waste water from factories,and the polluted water even does harm to people as well as other living things.
许多美丽的河流和湖泊已经被工厂的废水污染, 被污染的水甚至对人和其他的生物有害。
3.With the global warming becoming more and more serious,some Arctic species will probably die out.
随着全球变暖变得越来越严重,一些北极物种可能会灭绝。
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介绍应对措施并表达希望
1.There is little/no doubt that some factories which pour waste water and the visitors who throw garbage into the lake will get fined.
毫无疑问, 一些排放污水的工厂和向湖中扔垃圾的游客将被罚款。
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介绍应对措施并表达希望
2.It's time to raise people's awareness of environmental protection and appeal to more people to care for wildlife.
是时候提高人们的环境保护意识, 呼吁更多的人关心野生动植物了。
3.And we should recycle, reduce and reuse some things, for this saves money and reduces pollution.
我们应该回收、减少和重复使用一些东西, 因为这样能节省开支并减少污染。
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介绍应对措施并表达希望
4.We should balance advantages against disadvantages of development and keep the balance of nature.
我们应该平衡发展的利弊并维持自然的平衡。
5.If everyone starts recycling and saving energy today, a greener future is within our reach.
若每个人从今日起回收利用、节约能源,绿色未来触手可及。
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