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Part 4 Writing
保护濒危动物
写作题目
假定你是李华,为响应学校“世界动物日(World Animal Day)”活动的号召,你和组员设计了一张以“保护濒危动物”为主题的海报。请你代表小组用英文发表演讲,介绍你们的作品,内容包括:
1.海报设计(标题及图片);
2.动物濒危的原因及保护措施;
3.呼吁采取行动。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以增加适当细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and classmates,
Thank you for listening!
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.& vt.伤害;损害
2. n.种;物种
3. vi.消失
4. n.野生动植物,野生生物
5. n.栖息地,生活环境
6. 由于,因为
答案 1.harm 2.species 3.disappear
4.wildlife 5.habitat 6.due to
Ⅱ.本单元结构、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:介绍海报的设计
(1) (我非常荣幸地展示我们的海报) for World Animal Day entitled “Protect Endangered Species, Protect Our Future”.
第二段:动物濒危的原因及保护措施
(2)The design features a lonely polar bear on melting ice, which (提醒我们濒危物种面临的紧急危机) worldwide.
(3)Countless animals are disappearing (由于栖息地的丧失) and environmental pollution caused by human activities.
(4)To address these problems, not only we should reduce plastic use and build wildlife reserves, but also we need to make efforts (提高人们的环保意识).
第三段:呼吁采取行动
(5)Small steps can (产生很大的影响).
(6)Let's remember that (当我们拯救他们时), we're also saving our own future.
答案 (1)I am greatly honored to present our poster (2)reminds us of the urgent crisis facing endangered species (3)due to habitat loss
(4)to raise people's environmental awareness (5)make a big difference (6)when we save them
2.句式升级
(7)用非谓语动词改写句(2)
(8)运用倒装改写句(4)
答案 (7)The design features a lonely polar bear on melting ice, reminding us of the urgent crisis facing endangered species worldwide.
(8)To address these problems, not only should we reduce plastic use and build wildlife reserves, but also we need to make efforts to raise people's environmental awareness.
写作积累
关于保护动植物的表达
单词、短语
1.extinction n.灭绝
2.damage n.& vt.破坏,损害
3.decrease v.(使)减少,(使)减小,降低 n.减少;减少的量
4.threaten v.威胁
5.preserve vt.保护,保留,保存
6.protect vt.保护→protection n.保护
7.result in/lead to导致
8.to make matters worse使情况更糟糕的是
9.take measures/steps to do sth.采取措施做某事
10.pay attention to...注意……
11.attach great importance to...十分重视……
12.reduce the use of...减少……的使用
13.protect...from...保护……免受……
14.arouse one's awareness of...唤起某人的……意识
句型
1.It is reported/estimated that...据报道/据估计……
2.It's generally accepted that...(人们)普遍认为……
3.There is no denying that...无可否认……
4.It's time sb. did sth.是某人做某事的时候了。
5.It's sb.'s responsibility to do sth.做某事是某人的责任。
6.We should call for/on people to do...我们应该呼吁人们做……
7.We'd like to do...to punish those who do harm to wildlife.我们想要做……来惩罚那些伤害野生动物的人。
8.I hope you will take my suggestions into account.我希望你会考虑我的建议。
实战演练
(2024广西贺州阶段练习)
森林对人类的意义不言而喻,每年十月到次年四月为森林防护期。你校将举行英语征文比赛,请你以保护森林为主题,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.森林的重要性;
2.保护森林的建议;
3.保护森林的倡议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
读后续写
写作题目
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Ladies and gentlemen, a star is born!” Rob and Anne turned to look at Barney in surprise. “Our teacher gave me the main part in our school play!” Barney explained. “Oh, that's great,” I said. “Who will you be playing?” “The Easter bunny of course!” he answered. “Could you make me a costume(服装), Mum?” “Of course,” I said.
I put great effort into the costume on his first rehearsal(排练)day. “Mum, you're spending so much time on the costume,” Barney said. “Are you sure you don't mind?” “No, not at all!” I said. Barney looked a little bit uncomfortable. “Is everything OK?” I asked. “Well, I'm just not sure whether you will be able to come,” he said. I told him, “Of course we're coming to watch.”
Over the next few days I kept working on the costume. “Barney will be so happy, Mum,” said Anne one afternoon. Barney was watching from the doorway and his face turned red. I did think at the time that he was acting very strangely,but perhaps he had a little bit of stage fright.
Then the big day was coming. Rob, Anne and I were really looking forward to Barney's performance. After a couple of minutes he walked onto the stage. “I am the Easter bunny!” he said loudly. He disappeared and the rest of the children sang a song. The play began. Rob, Anne and I waited for Barney to appear again. But soon it was all over. “He only had one line(台词)!” said Anne.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
After the performance,we went straight to find Barney.
Instead of being annoyed with the poor boy after knowing the truth,I patted him gently.
文本分析
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:演出结束后,我们直接去找Barney→找到Barney并表扬他→Barney解释情况并表现出懊悔。
第二段:知道真相后,我没有对这个可怜的男孩生气,而是轻轻地拍了拍他→“我”给了他安慰和鼓励→Barney内心感到宽慰并下定决心为下次校园剧努力训练。
遣词造句
1.完成句子
Para. 1演出结束后,我们直接去找Barney。
“我们”在哪里找到了Barney?
(1)With no great effort, we spotted the “star” himself (静静地坐着) in a corner.
Barney有何表现?
(2)Barney was (如此惊讶以至于) he just couldn't control himself anymore.
(3)With his head nearly (埋进了) his chest and eyes (充满了泪水), Barney was seemingly waiting for my severe scolding.
Para. 2知道真相后,我没有对这个可怜的男孩生气,而是轻轻地拍了拍他。
Barney听了“我”的话作何反应?
(4) (听了我的话), Barney felt relieved and (下定决心) train harder for the next school play day.
(5)On the next school play day, we would be so delighted (欣赏) a wonderful performance given by a real star.
答案 (1)sitting quietly (2)so surprised that
(3)buried into;filled with tears (4)Hearing my words;made up his mind to (5)to appreciate
2.句式升级
(6)用倒装句改写句(2)
(7)用定语从句合并句(4)和句(5)
答案 (6)So surprised was Barney that he just couldn't control himself anymore.
(7) Hearing my words, Barney felt relieved and made up his mind to train harder for the next school play day when we would be so delighted to appreciate a wonderful performance given by a real star.
连句成篇
写作积累
与外貌描写相关的表达
单词
1.bearded有胡须的
2.bald光头的
3.chubby胖乎乎的
4.well-built强壮的
5.straight(头发)直的
6.curly(头发)卷的
语块
1.脸
round face圆脸
oval face鹅蛋脸
square face方脸 baby-faced娃娃脸的
thin/lean face瘦削的脸 haggard face憔悴的面容
wrinkled/lined face有皱纹的脸
freckled face长有雀斑的脸
tear-stained face布满泪痕的脸 pink cheeks粉红的脸颊
rosy cheeks红润的脸颊 pale cheeks苍白的脸颊
high cheekbones高颧骨 pointed chin尖尖的下巴
double chin双下巴 pale complexion面色苍白
2.皮肤
fair-skinned皮肤白皙的
dark skin黝黑的皮肤
3.身材
buff/muscular figure肌肉发达的身材
strapping figure魁梧的身材
plump figure丰满的身材 stocky figure矮壮的身材
neat figure娇小玲珑的身材 medium height中等个子
lean figure清瘦的身材 slim figure苗条的身材
slender figure苗条的身材 slight figure瘦小的身材
4.发型
wavy hair卷发
crew cut平头
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 1 Nature in the balance
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
It's generally accepted that forest has the functions of cooling off global temperature, refreshing the air, preserving soil and water, and so on. The forest is also the key to solving the severe environmental problems.
We should do something to protect the forest. First, stop cutting down trees blindly. If we really have to, plant more trees. Second, the government should take measures to enhance people's awareness of forest protection. Last but not least, we can reduce the use of paper.
To protect the forest is to protect ourselves. Without the forest, we could not live on the earth either.
1.重点词汇
①function n.功能,职责
②cool off使变凉
③cut down砍倒;减少
④blindly adv.盲目地
⑤awareness n.意识
2.亮点句型
①It's generally accepted that forest has the functions of cooling off global temperature, refreshing the air, preserving soil and water, and so on.(It作形式主语,真正的主语是that引导的主语从句)人们普遍认为森林具有降低全球温度、清新空气以及保持土壤和水等功能。
②Without the forest, we could not live on the earth either.(含蓄虚拟语气)没有森林,我们也不能在地球上生活。
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