内容正文:
Unit 6 Disaster and hope
Part 4 Writing
安全指南
写作题目
假设你是李华,你将以“Flood Safety Guidelines”为题就如何在洪水中自救写一篇洪水安全指南,内容包括:
1.洪水到来前要做的事情;
2.洪水发生时要做的事情;
3.洪水发生时不能做的事情。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当补充细节,以使行文连贯。
Flood Safety Guidelines
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词填空
1. n.灾难
2. n.预报
3. adv.即刻,马上
4. n.紧急情况
5. v.抓住
6. n.所有物;财产
7. adj.充足的
8. v.发生
答案 1.disaster 2.forecast 3.immediately
4.emergency 5.grab 6.property
7.sufficient 8.occur
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一部分:简述洪水的危害并引出要说明的主题
(1)Flood is (最危险的自然灾害之一).
(2) (这里有)some tips for keeping you safe in case of flood.
第二部分:详细说明洪水到来前和发生时应采取的措施
(3)Keep yourself informed of the (天气预报).
(4)Move to a safe place with (充足的食物和干净的水)as soon as (洪水发生).
(5) (抓住一棵树) or a wood block if you are in water or there is (一个紧急情况).
(6)It's important that you (远离电).
(7)Do not take too much (个人财物).
(8)Never (放弃希望).
答案 (1)one of the most dangerous natural disasters
(2)Here are
(3)weather forecast
(4)sufficient food and clean water;the flood occurs
(5)Grab a tree;an emergency
(6)keep away from electricity
(7)personal property
(8)give up hope
2.句式升级
(9)用immediately改写句(4)
(10)用不定式作真正的主语改写句(6)
答案 (9)Move to a safe place with sufficient food and clean water immediately the flood occurs.
(10)It's important to keep away from electricity.
连句成篇
Flood Safety Guidelines
Flood is one of the most dangerous natural disasters. Here are some tips for keeping you safe in case of flood.
Things to do before a flood:
Keep yourself informed of the weather forecast.
Things to do during a flood:
Move to a safe place with sufficient food and clean water immediately the flood occurs.
Grab a tree or a wood block if you are in water or there is an emergency.
It's important to keep away from electricity.
Things not to do during a flood:
Do not take too much personal property.
Do not drink floodwater.
Never give up hope.
写作积累
与“自然灾害”相关的写作词块
预防准备
develop an emergency plan制订一份应急计划;prepare a disaster supply kit准备一个灾难物资包;identify evacuation routes确定疏散路线;monitor weather alerts检测天气警报
地震
take cover under sturdy furniture躲在坚固的家具下; stay away from glass windows远离玻璃窗;hold onto the desk抓住桌子;go to open space去开阔的空地;whistle for help鸣哨求助
火灾
cover your mouth and nose with a wet towel用湿毛巾捂住你的口鼻;crawl on the ground匍匐前进;take the stairs instead of the elevator走楼梯而非乘电梯;be aware of the location of fire extinguishers留意灭火器的位置
洪水/海啸
move to higher ground immediately立即转移到较高的地方;seek shelters寻找庇护所;avoid power lines避开电线;drink clean water饮用干净的水
风暴类灾害
avoid driving in a storm暴风雨中避免驾车;do not go outside unless necessary非必要不外出;secure loose items固定好松散物品
灾后行动
check for injuries promptly及时检查受伤情况;post-disaster reconstruction灾后重建;food and medical supplies食物和医疗用品;emergency teams紧急救援队;emotional support情感支持
实战演练
假定你是某国际中学的学生李华,你们学校最近正在开展主题为“提高灾害预防能力,构建生命安全线”的安全教育活动。请你用英语写一份关于如何在火灾中逃生的安全指南,内容包括:
1.火灾的危害;
2.逃生方法。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案与分层梯度式解析
实战演练
One possible version:
Every year, thousands of people lose their lives in fires, so it's very necessary to know some tips on how to survive a fire. The following tips may be helpful to you.
First, you should keep calm so that you can make wise decisions in dangerous situations. Second, cover your nose with a wet towel or a piece of wet clothing. Third, while getting away from the scene, you should run downstairs instead of taking a lift. Last but not least, when you can't find any way out, go to the toilet and wet its door and windows. And at the same time, try to get in touch with people outside to ask for help.
Although fires are terrible, we can greatly increase our chances of survival as long as we stay calm and take effective action.
1.重点词汇
①keep calm保持冷静
②last but not least最后但同样重要的是
③get in touch with与……取得联系
④survival n.生存;存活
⑤effective adj.产生预期结果的;有效的
⑥take action采取行动
2.亮点句型
Although fires are terrible, we can greatly increase our chances of survival as long as we stay calm and take effective action.(Although引导让步状语从句;as long as引导条件状语从句)尽管火灾很可怕,但只要我们保持冷静并采取有效行动,就可以大大增加我们的生存机会。
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