Unit 2 04-Part 4 Writing（同步练习）-【学而思·PPT课件分层练习】2025-2026学年高一英语必修第三册（人教版）

该高中英语课件聚焦“寓言评论写作”核心知识点，以“两羊争草”寓言为导入，通过词汇填空（如“fable”“virtue”）、句子完成（如“rather than competition”“lead to”）、句式升级（定语从句改写）等学习支架，帮助学生从基础语言要素到篇章构建逐步掌握写作逻辑。 其亮点在于采用分层梯度式训练，结合单元词汇与语法（如“cooperate with”“benefit from”）提升语言能力，通过寓言寓意分析与个人感悟培养思维品质，实战演练融入“愚公移山”等中华传统美德故事增强文化意识。学生能系统提升写作能力与思辨能力，教师可直接利用结构化资源提高教学效率。

UNIT 2　MORALS AND VIRTUES Part 4　Writing 关于寓言评论的写作 写作题目 　　请阅读下面这则寓言,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。 　　On a sunny day a shepherd(牧羊人) walked his two hungry sheep along a winding country path. He managed to have them tied to each other just in case they should go separately. It was quite a long time before they arrived at a place where there was merely a small amount of fresh grass on each side of the path. Both of the sheep were so hungry that they hurried to the grass but in the separate directions. Unfortunately the rope fastening(系牢) them was not long enough. No matter how hard they struggled, neither was able to reach the grass in front of them. 　　The shepherd was about to help them when he was surprised to find that one of them should voluntarily abandon the struggle, and went along with the other. Consequently, together the two sheep enjoyed the fresh grass on one side happily, and then the grass on the other side. 　　(1)用大约30个单词概述上面这则寓言的主要内容; 　　(2)用100—120个单词就此则寓言谈谈你的想法,内容包括: 　　①从这则寓言中,你获得了哪些启示; 　　②结合该寓言给你的启示,谈谈你在生活中是如何做的。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  思路点拨 遣词造句 Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词填空 1.　　　　n.寓言;寓言故事   2.　　　　adv.因此;所以   3.　　　　n.高尚的道德;美德;优秀品质   4.　　　　v.帮助;援助   答案　1.fable　2.therefore　3.virtue　4.assist Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 第一段:对寓言的简单叙述 (1)The fable shares a story about two sheep with readers. Both of them chose cooperation 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(而不是竞争) in order to eat the grass on both sides of the path.  第二段:寓言的寓意 (2) 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(事实上), the fable demonstrates that different attitudes may 　　　　 　　　　(导致) different results.   (3)Therefore, cooperation can create a win-win situation. In this situation, both sides can　　　　 　　　　(得益于) the virtue of joint efforts.  第三段:生活中如何践行合作 (4)In my daily life, I often　　　　 　　　　(与……合作) my classmates when playing basketball and 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(参加) races or community service activities.  (5)Meanwhile, I also 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(尽我最大的努力去帮助) them in return.  (6)Teamwork is 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(如此重要以至于) it helps us win numerous victories.  答案　(1)rather than competition　(2)As a matter of fact;lead to/result in/contribute to　(3)benefit by/from　(4)cooperate with; taking part in　(5)do/try my best to assist　(6)so important that 2.句式升级 (7)将句(1)改写为含有定语从句的句子 The fable shares a story about two sheep with readers, 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 chose cooperation rather than competition in order to eat the grass on both sides of the path.  (8)将句(3)改写为含有定语从句的句子 Therefore, cooperation can create a win-win situation, 　　　　/　　　　 　　　　both sides can benefit by/from the virtue of joint efforts.  答案　(7)both of whom　(8)where;in which 连句成篇 写作积累 关于寓言评论的相关表达 增色 词汇 ①展示论点:discussion; debate; heated; opinion; necessary; be supposed to do; the importance of ②进行论证:generally speaking; hold the view; on the one hand...on the other hand...; otherwise; therefore; on the contrary; as a result; more importantly; last but not least; in addition; in a word ③发表个人观点: in my opinion/view; as far as I'm concerned; in this way; as long as; respect; appreciate; admire 精彩 句型 ①There is an ancient Chinese fable called...中国古代有则寓言,叫作…… ②What we learn from the fable is that...我们从这则寓言中学到的是…… ③The fable tells us a truth that real knowledge comes from practice.这则寓言告诉我们一个真理:实践出真知。 ④The fable tells us that one good turn deserves another.这则寓言告诉我们,善有善报。 ⑤Well begun is half done.好的开始是成功的一半。 ⑥The longest journey begins with the first step.千里之行,始于足下。 ⑦Actions speak louder than words.行动比言语更为响亮。 ⑧A friend is best found in adversity.=A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。 实战演练 (2025广东广州三校期中联考) 　　你校英语社正在举办“用英语讲好中华传统美德故事”的征文活动,请你选择一则熟悉的中华传统美德历史典故或寓言,撰写一篇故事评论投稿。内容包括: 　　1.故事内容; 　　2.故事寓意; 　　3.个人感悟或启示。 注意:写作词数应为100个左右。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  答案与分层梯度式解析 Part 4　Writing 实战演练 One possible version: A Tale of Perseverance: The Foolish Old Man Removes the Mountains 　　The story tells of an elderly man who decided to remove two huge mountains blocking his village. Despite being mocked by others, he persevered, believing that his efforts would benefit future generations. His determination eventually moved the gods, who helped him achieve his goal. 　　The story highlights the power of perseverance and determination. It shows that no matter how difficult a task may seem, consistent effort and a strong will can lead to success. 　　This story inspires me to face challenges with courage and determination. It teaches me that hard work and perseverance are essential for achieving long-term goals, and that we should never give up in the face of adversity. As Victor Hugo once said, “People do not lack strength; they lack will.” 1.重点词汇 ①perseverance n.毅力;韧性;不屈不挠的精神 ②block v.堵住;挡住 ③mock v.嘲笑;嘲弄 ④determination n.决心;果断;坚定 ⑤be essential for对……来说必不可少 ⑥adversity n.困境;逆境 2.亮点句型 ①The story tells of an elderly man who decided to remove two huge mountains blocking his village.(who引导定语从句,修饰先行词an elderly man; “blocking his village”为现在分词短语作后置定语,修饰mountains)这个故事讲述了一位老人决定移除阻挡他的村庄的两座大山。  ②It shows that no matter how difficult a task may seem, consistent effort and a strong will can lead to success.(that引导宾语从句;no matter how引导让步状语从句)这表明,无论一项任务看起来有多么艰巨,只要坚持不懈地努力并拥有坚定的意志,就一定能够取得成功。  12 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $