Unit5写作精讲：A News Report (Good Sportsmanship 2025-2026学年沪外教版七年级英语下册

沪外教七下Unit5写作精讲 A News Report (Good Sportsmanship) 适用水平：七年级下册 字数要求：60—100词 教材依据：Unit 5 体育新闻报道 + 现在进行时 + 动作动词（action verbs）+ 体育精神描写 第一步：审（审题） 1. 审任务：写一篇简短的体育新闻报道，描述一个体现良好体育精神的瞬间，要包含标题、记者与日期、事件经过、人物采访与总结，重点使用动作动词和现在进行时（现场报道感）。 2. 审体裁：新闻报道，结构清晰：标题 → 导语（事件总起）→ 主体（经过细节）→ 结尾（采访/总结）。 3. 审人称：以 第三人称（he/she/they/the players） 为主，现场报道可加入第一人称（we/reporter）。 4. 审时态： · 现在进行时（am/is/are + -ing）：用于现场直播感的描述（如：He is falling. / She is stopping.）。 · 一般过去时：用于回顾已发生的比赛经过（如：Sarah fell and hurt her knee.）。 5. 审技能：要学会使用动作动词（如 run, stop, help, cheer）让画面感更强，并突出“公平竞争、互相帮助、尊重对手”的体育精神。 第二步：列（列提纲） 新闻报道结构（5个核心部分） 1. 标题（Headline） · 简洁有力，点明核心事件与体育精神（如：They Win Hearts with True Sportsmanship）。 2. 记者与日期（Reporter & Date） · 格式：By [Name], [Date]（如：By Li Ming, 20 April）。 3. 导语（Introduction） · 一句话总起：交代时间、地点、人物、事件（如：At the school sports meeting, two runners showed great sportsmanship.）。 4. 主体（Body） · 用动作动词描述关键经过： a. 意外发生：如 One runner fell and hurt herself. b. 对手反应：如 The other runner stopped to help her up. c. 共同完成：如 They walked to the finish line together. · 加入现场感：用现在进行时营造“正在发生”的氛围。 5. 结尾（Conclusion & Interview） · 引用人物话语：如 "I just wanted to help her finish the race," said Lisa. · 总结意义：如 They won everyone's respect with their kind act. 完整提纲示例（以“跑步比赛互助”为例） 部分 详细要点 关键词 标题 他们用真正的体育精神赢得人心 Win Hearts, True Sportsmanship 记者与日期 李明，4月20日 By Li Ming, 20 April 导语 校运会200米比赛中，两位选手展现了良好体育精神 school sports meeting, 200m race, two runners, good sportsmanship 主体 1. Sarah 摔倒受伤 2. Lisa 停下脚步，伸手扶起她 3. 两人并肩冲过终点 fell, hurt, stopped, reached out, helped up, side by side, crossed the finish line 结尾 1. Lisa 说：我只是想帮她完成比赛 2. 观众为她们欢呼，她们赢得了尊重 help her finish, cheered, won respect 第三步：连（连句成篇） 用动作动词和现在进行时把要点连成通顺的报道，符合七下水平。 常用动作动词（七下重点） · 比赛类：run, speed up, kick, pass, jump · 互助类：stop, reach out, help up, support · 情绪类：cheer, encourage, congratulate 连句示范 1. 要点：Sarah is running. She falls. Lisa stops. → 升级：Look! Sarah is running fast, but she suddenly loses her balance and is falling to the ground! Lisa, who is right behind her, is stopping immediately. 2. 要点：Lisa helps Sarah. They finish together. → 升级：She is reaching out her hand to help Sarah up. Now they are walking slowly towards the finish line, side by side. 3. 要点：People cheer. They win respect. → 升级：The crowd is cheering loudly for them. They don't win the race, but they win everyone's heart. 第四步：美（美化语言） 在保证语法正确的基础上，用动作动词和现在进行时让报道更生动，突出体育精神。 1. 词汇升级（动作动词） 普通词 升级词 例句 go run / speed up / dash He is speeding up to catch up. help reach out / help up / support She is reaching out her hand to help Sarah up. shout cheer / encourage The crowd is cheering for them loudly. finish cross the finish line They are crossing the finish line side by side. 2. 句型升级（现在进行时+体育精神） · 基础句：Sarah fell. Lisa helped her. → 高分句：Look! Sarah is falling to the ground! Lisa is stopping right away and is reaching out to help her stand up. · 基础句：They finished the race together. → 高分句：Hand in hand, they are walking slowly towards the finish line. It's not about winning—it's about finishing together. · 基础句：People like them. → 高分句：The whole crowd is cheering for them. They have won everyone's respect with their true sportsmanship. 3. 格式美化 · 标题简洁：用短语点明核心，不用长句。 · 段落分明：导语、主体、结尾各一段，读起来清晰。 · 现场感：开头用 Look! / Right now! 营造直播氛围。 第五步：查（检查纠错） 写完后逐项检查，避免扣分： 1. 格式检查： · 确认有标题、记者与日期、导语、主体、结尾。 · 确认结构符合新闻报道逻辑。 2. 语法检查： · 确认人称一致（第三人称为主）。 · 确认现在进行时结构正确（is/are + -ing）。 · 确认动作动词使用恰当，画面感强。 3. 内容检查： · 确认字数在60—100词之间。 · 确认要点齐全（事件+互助+体育精神）。 · 确认突出了“帮助、尊重、坚持”的体育精神。 完整范文 英文范文 They Win Hearts with True Sportsmanship By Li Ming, 20 April Right now at the school sports meeting, something amazing is happening in the 200-metre race! Look! Sarah is running ahead when she suddenly trips and is falling to the ground. Her knee is hurt badly. Lisa, just a few steps behind, is stopping at once. She is reaching out her hand to help Sarah stand up. Now they are walking slowly, side by side, towards the finish line. The crowd is cheering loudly for them. "I just wanted to help her finish the race," Lisa says. They don't win first place, but they win everyone's respect with their true sportsmanship. 中文对照 他们用真正的体育精神赢得人心 记者：李明 4月20日 此刻在校运会上，200米赛跑正发生着动人的一幕！看！萨拉正领先奔跑，突然她绊倒了，正摔倒在地上！她的膝盖受了重伤。 紧随其后的莉萨立刻停下脚步，伸出手扶起萨拉。现在她们正手挽手，慢慢走向终点线。观众们为她们大声欢呼。 “我只是想帮她完成比赛，”莉萨说。她们没有赢得第一名，却用真正的体育精神赢得了所有人的尊重。 核心素材 好词 · 动作类：run, speed up, fall, trip, stop, reach out, help up, walk, cross the finish line, cheer, encourage · 精神类：sportsmanship, respect, fair play, support, kindness, effort, finish together · 现场类：right now, look, suddenly, immediately, slowly, side by side, loudly 好句 1. Look! ... is ... (现在进行时营造现场感) 2. ... is stopping at once and is reaching out to help ... up. 3. Hand in hand, they are walking slowly towards the finish line. 4. "I just wanted to help her finish the race," ... says. 5. They don't win the race, but they win everyone's respect. 现在进行时示例 · He is running as fast as he can. · She is stopping to help her teammate. · The crowd is cheering for the players. · They are crossing the finish line together. 学生填空练习版 _______________ By ________, ________ Right now at the ________, something amazing is happening in the ________! Look! ________ is ________ when she suddenly ________ and is ________ to the ground. ________, just a few steps behind, is ________ at once. She is ________ to help ________ stand up. Now they are ________, side by side, towards the finish line. The crowd is ________ for them. "I just wanted to help her finish the race," ________ says. They don't win first place, but they win everyone's respect with their true sportsmanship. ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $