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标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 定制[题目标注版] 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 This summer, I changed schools. Not because I disliked my old one -- in fact, I loved it. It was where I spent every day with my band together. But my Dad’s job required us to move to another city. I was really upset. Saying goodbye to my band mates(现在分词短语做伴随动作) broke my heart. We started it two years ago and named it Rainbow. Lucy was the lead singer; her voice was clear, warm, and full of emotion. Jason played the bass, Tim the drums, and I the guitar. We had been preparing for a street performance this autumn and had practiced for long. But before summer even fully ended, I had to leave(背景信息及冲突交代). “Don't be sad,” Lucy tried to comfort me. “Maybe you'll start a new band.” But her words made me even sadder. How could any other band replace Rainbow? Actually, my new school was nice. The teachers and classmates were welcoming, and the campus was modern and well-equipped. I met some kids who played different instruments with pretty good skills(伏笔), but they just reminded me of the happy old days with Rainbow. Lucy told me they still hadn't found a new guitarist. Maybe it was not easy to replace me either. Winter approached. One day I got Lucy's message, telling me(现在分词短语做伴随动作) she was coming to my city to see me. I jumped for joy. We planned to meet at a downtown café on Sunday morning. She asked me to bring my guitar -of course I would. The week passed incredibly slowly until Sunday finally came. I took my guitar and rushed to the café. You can imagine how we hugged and screamed and cried. Suddenly, I heard familiar drumming around the corner of the street, accompanied by the low-end bass(过去分词短语做后置定语). I followed the sound and, couldn't believe my eyes -it was Jason and Tim! They winked and smiled at me, cheerfully inviting me to join(现在分词短语做伴随动作). 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Lucy grabbed my arm and said, “Come on! Rainbow’s first street show!” Paragraph 2: When the show came to an end, none of us wanted to leave. 定制 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 This summer, I changed schools. Not because I disliked my old one -- in fact, I loved it. It was where I spent every day with my band together. But my Dad’s job required us to move to another city. I was really upset. Saying goodbye to my band mates broke my heart. We started it two years ago and named it Rainbow. Lucy was the lead singer; her voice was clear, warm, and full of emotion. Jason played the bass (贝斯), Tim the drums, and I the guitar. We had been preparing for a street performance this autumn and had practiced for long. But before summer even fully ended, I had to leave. “Don't be sad,” Lucy tried to comfort me. “Maybe you'll start a new band.” But her words made me even sadder. How could any other band replace Rainbow? Actually, my new school was nice. The teachers and classmates were welcoming, and the campus was modern and well-equipped. I met some kids who played different instruments with pretty good skills, but they just reminded me of the happy old days with Rainbow. Lucy told me they still hadn't found a new guitarist. Maybe it was not easy to replace me either. Winter approached. One day I got Lucy's message, telling me she was coming to my city to see me. I jumped for joy. We planned to meet at a downtown café on Sunday morning. She asked me to bring my guitar -of course I would. The week passed incredibly slowly until Sunday finally came. I took my guitar and rushed to the café. You can imagine how we hugged and screamed and cried. Suddenly, I heard familiar drumming around the corner of the street, accompanied by the low-end bass. I followed the sound and, couldn't believe my eyes -it was Jason and Tim! They winked (眨眼) and smiled at me, cheerfully inviting me to join. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Lucy grabbed my arm and said, “Come on! Rainbow’s first street show!” Paragraph 2: When the show came to an end, none of us wanted to leave. 一、篇章类型分解 ▶ 类型：人与人情感成长类（亲情 / 友情 / 团队情感）+ 任务型叙事（街头表演） 重点是主角因转学失落 → 乐队重聚 → 找回自我与归属感。 文本的核心冲突不是“外部危险”，而是内心矛盾：失去团队 vs 被再次接纳。 二、续写构思思路 1. 整体布局（两段结构） 段落 任务 内容要点 段 1（高潮） 承接 Lucy 的话 → 街头表演正式开始 乐队重聚、主角加入、音乐配合、情绪爆发、街头人群反应等 段 2（结局） 表演结束 → 升华主题 友情与归属感的回归、主角情感成长、未来展望 三、故事山 故事山步骤 对应原文 在续写中应做什么 背景 主角因转学失落 冲突 Conflict 失去乐队、难以适应 可在心理描写中回闪 上升动作 Rising Action Lucy 来见他 → 乐队成员突然出现 衔接“惊喜、重逢、邀请” 高潮 Climax 见到 Jason & Tim 的瞬间 段落一重点：音乐响起、主角加入 下降动作 Falling Action 表演完成 描写人群反应、情绪落点 结局 Resolution 友情恢复、找到归属感 段落二重点：升华主题 四、原文与续写的关键 必须承接的情节线索 Lucy 拉住手 → “Rainbow’s first street show!”（段落一起点） 熟悉的 drum + bass（说明乐队三人齐了） 主角携带 guitar → 方便自然加入 街头表演是他们原本的计划 → 情节圆满回归 必须延续的情感线索 离开乐队的痛 想念与期待 重逢的惊喜 重拾自信与归属感 对音乐的热爱 五、原文中的信息 类型 内容 原文体现 伏笔 团队非常默契、有深厚情感 → 为重聚做铺垫 “we spent every day with my band together”“practiced for long” 主要冲突 主角不可替代的情感 vs 新环境的孤独感 “How could any other band replace Rainbow?” 隐含线索 乐队成员始终想念他，没有找新吉他手 “they still hadn't found a new guitarist” 转折点 Lucy 来见他 + Jason & Tim 的惊喜出现 “I jumped for joy”“familiar drumming” 解决方案 用一场街头演出重新找回联系与归属 最终街头表演的实现 六、细节项目分析 分析角度 内容说明（应续写关注的点） 原文体现句（证据） 人物刻画 主角：怀旧、敏感、重情义；Lucy：温暖支持；乐队成员：默契、重视友情 “Saying goodbye…broke my heart.” “Don't be sad.” “They winked and smiled.” 情感层次 失落 → 想念 → 期待 → 激动 → 圆满 “I was really upset.” “jumped for joy.” 关键情节点 转学 → 接触新环境 → Lucy 要来 → 街头惊喜重逢 “Lucy’s message…coming to my city.” 语言特色 情感词、听觉描写、动作描写突出音乐氛围 “clear, warm, and full of emotion”“familiar drumming” 关键词分析 Rainbow（象征希望/重聚）；guitar/bass/drums（行动线索） “Rainbow”“bring my guitar”“bass”“drumming” 心理描写 思念、心痛、惊喜、感动 “made me even sadder.”“jumped for joy.” 动作描写 拥抱、奔跑、跟随声音、乐队演奏动作 “hugged and screamed and cried.” 环境描写 冬季、街头 café、音乐氛围 “downtown caf锓familiar drumming around the corner” 隐含主题 友情、归属感、音乐的凝聚力 整篇贯穿乐队情感 情感转折 汽车移动导致离开乐队 → 重聚带来反转 “I had to leave.” → “couldn't believe my eyes.” 空间转换 老城市 → 新学校 → 咖啡馆 → 街头表演区 文中多次空间切换 时间过渡 夏天→秋天→冬天→星期天 “Winter approached.”“Sunday morning.” 七、续写注意事项 内容承接 必须体现“街头表演” 必须体现“Rainbow 重聚” 语言风格 使用感官描写（hearing / sight） 强化动作描写（strumming / tapping / swaying） 保持原文的“温暖、青春、音乐感”风格 结构 段一写“表演进行中”（高潮） 段二写“表演结束后的情感升华”（结尾） 9、 动作 / 心理 / 环境描写 ① 动作描写句 I tightened my grip on the guitar and stepped forward. 我紧握吉他，向前迈出一步。 Lucy gave my arm a quick, excited pull. 露西兴奋地拉了我一下。 Jason tapped the rhythm lightly before the music burst out. 杰森轻轻敲出节奏，音乐随即迸发。 Tim swung his drumsticks, sending a sharp beat into the air. 蒂姆挥动鼓槌，清脆的鼓点跃入空气中。 I strummed the first chord, my fingers trembling slightly. 我弹下第一个和弦，手指微微颤抖。 We exchanged a quick smile as the melody flowed. 旋律流淌中，我们相视一笑。 Lucy raised her hand to signal the start of the chorus. 露西抬手示意进入副歌部分。 A small crowd gathered, clapping along to the beat. 一小群人围了过来，跟着节拍拍手。 I leaned closer to hear the harmony better. 我稍稍靠近，以便更清晰地听到和声。 When the song ended, we took a synchronized bow. 歌曲结束时，我们同时鞠了一躬。 ② 心理描写 A wave of warmth washed over me the moment I saw them. 见到他们的那一刻，一股暖流涌上心头。 My heart thumped wildly, half in shock and half in joy. 我的心剧烈跳动，既震惊又兴奋。 For the first time in months, I felt whole again. 几个月来第一次，我再次感到完整。 The familiar sound made my chest tighten with emotion. 熟悉的声音让我胸口一紧，情绪涌上来。 A mix of nostalgia and happiness filled my mind. 怀念与幸福交织在脑海里。 I couldn’t stop smiling, even as tears blurred my eyes. 尽管泪水模糊了视线，我仍止不住微笑。 A sudden surge of confidence ran through me. 一股突如其来的自信划过全身。 The longing I had buried for months rose instantly. 我埋藏了数月的渴望瞬间涌现。 I sensed the old connection between us spark back to life. 我感觉我们之间的旧默契被重新点燃。 At that moment, I knew I belonged right there. 那一刻，我知道自己属于这里。 ③ 环境描写句 A cold winter breeze swept through the street, carrying our music farther. 冬日冷风扫过街道，把我们的音乐带向更远。 The morning light spilled through the café windows, soft and golden. 清晨的光线透过咖啡馆的窗，柔和而金黄。 The street corner buzzed with weekend energy. 街角洋溢着周末的活力。 Faint coffee aroma drifted out from the café behind us. 淡淡的咖啡香从我们身后的咖啡馆飘来。 People slowed their steps, drawn by the rising melody. 人们放慢脚步，被渐起的旋律吸引。 The city noises faded as our music blended into the air. 城市的嘈杂声渐渐消散，音乐融入空气中。 A gentle sunlight warmed the pavement where we stood. 温柔的阳光洒在我们脚下的人行道上。 Our chords echoed slightly between the tall buildings. 和弦在高楼之间轻轻回荡。 A small circle of listeners formed, their breath misting in the cold. 观众围成小圈子，呼吸在冷空气中化成白雾。 The street felt alive, as if awakened by our reunion. 街道仿佛被我们的重聚唤醒，变得鲜活。 ④ 高级替换词 （1）表示“高兴/兴奋”的高级词 thrilled elated overjoyed jubilant electrified（被音乐或情绪点燃） （2）表示“悲伤/失落”的高级词 disheartened crestfallen sorrowful blue melancholic （3）形容“声音/音乐”的高级词 resonant（共鸣的） soulful（深情的） mellow（柔和、醇厚） pulsating（有律动感） vibrant（富有生命力） （4）形容“动作/表演”的高级词 synchronized（配合一致） fluid（流畅） dynamic（富有张力） effortless（看似轻松） skillful（娴熟的） （5）形容“环境氛围”的高级词 bustling（繁忙、生动） serene（宁静） crisp（清新的冬日空气） luminous（柔亮的光） atmospheric（富有氛围感） ① grip（v./n.）抓紧；紧握 近义词：clutch, grasp, seize 反义词：release, loosen 搭配：get a grip（控制情绪）；lose one’s grip（失去掌控） 例句： He gripped the microphone tightly before the show began. I tried to get a grip on my excitement as I walked toward them. ② surge（n./v.）涌动；激增；情绪的突然爆发 近义词：rush, wave, flood 反义词：ebb, decline 搭配：a surge of joy / confidence / emotion 例句： A surge of excitement went through me as the drums kicked in. A sudden surge of warmth filled my chest. ③ resonate（v.）产生共鸣；回响 近义词：echo, reverberate 反义词：fade 搭配：resonate with sb.（引起共鸣） 例句： The familiar rhythm resonated with every memory I had of Rainbow. Her voice resonated through the street. ④ blink / wink（v.）眨眼；使眼色 近义词：flash, signal 反义词：stare blankly 搭配：wink at sb.（向…使眼色） 例句： Jason winked at me as if saying, “Are you ready?” She blinked fast, trying to stop the tears. ⑤ gather（v.）聚集；集合 近义词：collect, assemble 反义词：scatter, disperse 搭配：gather around; gather strength; gather one’s thoughts 例句： A small crowd gathered around us as the music started. I paused for a second to gather my thoughts. ⑥ anticipation（n.）期待，盼望 近义词：expectation, eagerness 反义词：indifference 搭配：in anticipation of… 例句： My hands trembled in anticipation of seeing them again. The whole week passed in anticipation of Sunday. ⑦ tremble（v.）颤抖（情绪或动作） 近义词：quiver, shake 反义词：steady 搭配：tremble with excitement / cold 例句： My fingers trembled as I played the first chord. She trembled with excitement when she saw the guitar. ⑧ vibrant（adj.）充满活力、有生命力 近义词：lively, dynamic 反义词：dull, lifeless 搭配：vibrant atmosphere; vibrant music 例句： The street felt vibrant the moment our music started. Her vibrant voice lifted everyone’s mood. 10、 Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1: Lucy grabbed my arm and said, “Come on! Rainbow’s first street show!” Her words struck me with a mixture of disbelief and excitement(无灵主语句), and before I knew it, she had half-pulled, half-dragged me toward the corner where Jason and Tim were waiting. The cold winter air stung my cheeks(无灵主语句), yet something warm surged inside me, as if every step brought me closer to the part of myself I had left behind. Jason gave a playful wink while Tim lifted his drumsticks in greeting, the familiar rhythm already pulsing in the air(独立主格刻画场景). I tightened my grip on my guitar, the smooth wood grounding me(独立主格) as memories flooded back—those late-night practices, the laughter, and the unspoken understanding that had always held us together. Taking a deep breath(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I strummed the opening chord, and the melody—slightly trembling at first—soon blended into their rhythm(无灵主语句), signaling(现在分词短语做后定语) that Rainbow had truly returned. Paragraph 2: When the show came to an end, none of us wanted to leave. The final chord lingered in the winter air(无灵主语句), as if refusing to fade, and for a moment we simply stood there, breathing hard(现在分词短语做伴随动作), our faces flushed with cold and exhilaration(独立主格). Passers-by applauded warmly, but it was the look we exchanged that mattered most—an unspoken confirmation that what we shared went far beyond a simple street performance. Lucy’s eyes shimmered with unshed tears; Jason kept drumming softly, unable to hide his excitement(adj做主语补语); Tim grinned as though the world had suddenly made sense again. Although distance still separated us(无灵主语句), it no longer felt like an ending but rather a pause. The warmth spreading through my chest(现在分词做后置定语) told me that Rainbow—our music, our bond, our story—would continue, no matter where life carried us, and I silently promised that this reunion was only the beginning. 动作描写亮点 tightened my grip on strummed the opening chord half-pulled, half-dragged lifted his drumsticks drumming softly on his leg 情感描写亮点 a mixture of disbelief and excitement something warm surged memories flooded back an unspoken confirmation warmth spreading through my chest 高级替换词 普通词 高级替换词 happy elated / overjoyed / exhilarated cold crisp / biting surprised stunned / taken aback said remarked / whispered / murmured good remarkable / impressive 可积累语料（含例句） 1. surge (n./v.) 情绪骤增 同义词：rush, wave 例句： A surge of confidence washed over me as the music started. Joy surged through the crowd when the chorus began. 2. linger (v.) 停留、萦绕 同义词：hover, remain 例句： The last note lingered in the air. His words lingered in my mind long after he left. 3. unspoken (adj.) 不言自明的 同义词：implicit, silent 例句： Their unspoken trust made the performance smooth. There was an unspoken understanding between us. Version 2 Paragraph 1: Lucy grabbed my arm and said, “Come on! Rainbow’s first street show!” Her voice held a spark I hadn’t felt in months, and before my brain caught up, my feet were already moving. As we rounded the corner, the sight of Jason tuning his bass and Tim tapping a trial beat hit me with the force of a long-delayed dream(无灵主语句). A rush of warmth overtook the chill around us, and for a heartbeat I simply stood there, overwhelmed by the familiarity of it all(过去分词做主语补语). Lucy nudged me gently, a silent reminder that the stage—however small the street might be—was waiting. Slipping the guitar strap over my shoulder(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I felt my nerves settle into a calm determination. When I struck the first chord, the sound rang out clear and vibrant, weaving seamlessly into the rhythm(现在分词短语做后做结果状语)the three beloved bandmate set. In that moment, the months of separation shrank into nothing, and Rainbow’s music rose again. Paragraph 2: When the show came to an end, none of us wanted to leave. The applause faded slowly, but we remained standing in the circle where the final echoes still hung(无灵主语句). My fingers were numb from the cold, yet my heart felt impossibly warm. Lucy leaned on her guitar case, smiling(现在分词短语做伴随动作) like she had just reclaimed something precious. Jason kept replaying the bassline under his breath, and Tim spun a drumstick between his fingers, unwilling to break the spell(adj做主语补语). I realized then that although life had moved us to different cities, it had never truly separated us. What we created together—this sound, this connection—was something distance could not erase. As we finally gathered our instruments, I promised silently that we would meet again, not just for music, but for the part of ourselves that only Rainbow could awaken. 动作动词 tuning his bass tapping a trial beat slipping the guitar strap replaying the bassline spinning a drumstick 高级情绪表达 hit me with the force of a long-delayed dream warmth overtook the chill overwhelmed by the familiarity unwilling to break the spell reclaimed something precious 可积累语料 1. weave into（融入） 例句： His harmony wove into the melody effortlessly. The applause wove into the fading music. 2. determination settling（决心定住） 例句： A firm determination settled in her eyes. Determination settled over him as he stepped forward. Version 3 Paragraph 1: Lucy grabbed my arm and said, “Come on! Rainbow’s first street show!” Her words sent a jolt of excitement through me, as if all the months of loneliness had suddenly melted away(无灵主语句). Clutching my guitar(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I hurried with her toward the corner where Jason and Tim were already warming up. The moment they spotted me, they shifted seamlessly into the melody we used to practice day after day. It was so familiar that my fingers almost moved on their own. As the melody unfolded(无灵主语句), I felt the same old bond pulling us tightly together, stronger than distance or time(adj短语做补语). People around us slowed down, some even cheering(独立主格) as Lucy’s warm, resonant voice cut through the winter air. While we played, I realized that although I had tried hard to adapt to my new school, nothing had ever filled the empty space Rainbow left behind. Yet now, with every chord, that missing piece quietly slid back into place. Paragraph 2: When the show came to an end, none of us wanted to leave. We stood in a loose circle, breathing little clouds into the cold air(现在分词短语做伴随动作), reluctant to break the magic(adj做主语补语) the music had woven. Lucy suggested softly that maybe Rainbow didn’t have to end just because I had moved away. Her words struck me more deeply than she knew, for I had long feared being replaced or forgotten. Jason added that they had kept my place open all along, hoping(现在分词短语做伴随动作)I would come back. Hearing that(现在分词短语做伴随动作), a warmth spread through me(无灵主语句), steady and reassuring(adj做主语补语). I promised them that although I couldn't be there every day, our band would stay alive as long as we kept creating together. As we packed up, I looked at the three of them and realized that distance might stretch our paths, but it could never snap the threads tying us together(现在分词短语做后置定语). Rainbow, in its own way, would always be home. 高级搭配 & 替换词 a jolt of excitement → a rush / surge of excitement slid back into place → fit perfectly again reluctant to break the magic → unwilling to let the moment fade keep one’s place open → reserve a spot the threads tying us together → the bond that linked us （2）情绪亮点词语 melted away steady and reassuring deeply struck warmth spread through me （3）动作亮点词语 clutching my guitar hurried with her shifted seamlessly breathing little clouds packed up slowly （4）积累语料 + 同义替换（含例句） ① melt away（消散） 同义词：fade, dissolve, evaporate 例句： The tension melted away as the music began. Her worries slowly melted away under his comforting words. The crowd’s chatter melted away once the singer appeared. ② reluctant（不情愿的） 同义词：unwilling, hesitant 反义词：eager, ready 例句： He was reluctant to leave the warm room. She looked reluctant but nodded anyway. I felt reluctant to end the conversation. ③ seamlessly（无缝地 / 流畅地） 同义词：smoothly, effortlessly 例句： The dancers moved seamlessly across the stage. The two voices blended seamlessly. The scenes in the film shifted seamlessly. 官方： Lucy grabbed my arm and said“Come on! Rainbow’s first street show!” My fingers trembled on the guitar strings as we rushed to the makeshift stage. The moment Lucy's voice soared into the winter air with our opening song, the crowd stopped(观众反应描写). Strangers’ faces lit up, their breath forming little clouds of applause(独立主格). Jason's bass droned like a heartbeat while Tim’s drums echoed through the streets. I closed my eyes --it felt like magic, as if we'd never been apart. The music welded us together again, melting the months of separation(现在分词短语做结果状语). When the show came to an end, none of us wanted to leave. We sat on the curb, sharing hot chocolate and laughing about Lucy's forgotten lyrics(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “This proves Rainbow belongs together,” Tim said, tapping his sticks(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Then Lucy whispered their plan: they'd convinced their parents to let them transfer to my school next semester. Tears blurred my vision(无灵主语句) as I realized -this wasn't just a reunion. It was a new beginning, with our band and friendship stronger than ever. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $