Unit 4 Back in time.（写作突破专项训练）英语外研版三起五年级下册（新教材）

Unit4三段式・思维导图串联法写历史故事 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 "It was a very important trade centre in ancient China."（用于介绍历史事物的属性与地位） "People from the East and West met and traded there many years ago."（用于描述古代人物的核心行为） "Fan Jinshi worked hard to protect the ancient paintings in the caves."（用于讲述历史人物的具体事迹） "This is a great part of Chinese ancient history about culture and trade."（用于说明历史事物的意义与主题） "We should learn to protect our precious Chinese history and culture."（用于表达对历史的感悟与做法） 02 写作方法指引-三段式・思维导图串联法 第一步：画思维导图，抓取 4 类核心关键词 核心事物：the ancient Silk Road / Mogao Caves /ancient Chinese food（历史写作核心对象） 关键信息：Xinjiang / Fan Jinshi /trade/protect（地点、人物、核心动作） 历史意义：important /traditional/culture /trade（评价与核心主题） 个人感悟：protect /remember/learn from（收获与具体做法） 第二步：开头点题，引出核心写作对象 句型：I want to talk about [中国历史事件 / 事物]. It is an important part of Chinese ancient history. 或 The ancient [事物 / 事件] is a great treasure of Chinese history. It was in [地点] of China. 第三步：中间详述，串联历史关键信息 句型：It was a great [属性] in ancient China. People in that time [过去式动作] and [过去式动作]. 或 [相关人物] [过去式动作] to [核心目的]. She/He [具体行为] and kept [事物] safe. 第四步：结尾升华，说明意义 + 表达感悟 句型： This is very [评价词] in Chinese history. It’s about [历史主题，如 culture/trade/protection]. 或 We can learn [收获] from it. Everyone should protect and remember our precious Chinese history. 一、核心词汇 事件 / 事物类 the ancient Silk Road（古丝绸之路）、Mogao Caves（莫高窟）、ancient dumplings（古代饺子）、Xinjiang trade centre（新疆贸易中心）、Chinese ancient food（中国古代美食） 人物 / 群体类 Fan Jinshi（樊锦诗）、Zheng He（郑和）、the Chinese Red Army（中国工农红军）、ancient Chinese people（中国古人）、history protectors（历史守护者） 动作类 protect（保护）、trade（贸易）、find（发现）、sail（航行）、take photos（拍照）、keep safe（守护）、meet（往来）、develop（发展） 感受 / 评价类 important（重要的）、precious（珍贵的）、meaningful（有意义的）、famous（著名的）、great（伟大的）、traditional（传统的） 二、参考句型 I want to talk about [中国历史事件 / 事物]. It is an important part of Chinese ancient history.（点明核心内容） It was in [地点] of China. Ancient people there [过去式动作] and [过去式动作].（简述核心信息） [相关人物] [过去式动作] to protect/develop it. They [具体做法] for it.（描述人物行为） This is very [评价词] in Chinese history. It stands for [中国文化 / 精神].（说明历史意义） We should [做法，如 protect our history/learn from it]. It’s our precious Chinese past.（总结感悟） 三、写作框架 开头（第二步：点明写作核心事件 / 事物） 句型：I want to talk about [中国历史事件 / 事物]. It is a famous part of Chinese ancient history. 或 The ancient [事物 / 事件] is a great treasure of China. It was in [时间 / 地点]. 中间（第三步：简述核心信息 / 发展细节） 句型：It was an important [属性，如 trade centre/famous cave] in ancient China. People [当时的行为，如 traded with others/loved this food]. 句型：[相关人物] [过去式动作] for it. They [具体行为，如 used new ways to protect it/travelled to other places]. 结尾（第四步：说明历史意义 + 总结感悟 / 观点） 句型：This is very [评价词] in Chinese history. It helps us know about [中国古代文化 / 贸易]. 句型：We can learn [收获] from it. We should protect and remember our precious Chinese history. 易错点提示 描述古代人物行为、历史事件时，必须使用一般过去式，正确书写不规则动词过去式：trade→traded，find→found，protect→protected，meet→met 历史专有名词首字母必须大写：the Ancient Silk Road，Mogao Caves，Fan Jinshi，Xinjiang 不可混淆介词用法：in ancient China（在古代中国）、trade with sb.（和某人贸易）、protect sth. from damage（保护某物免受破坏） 思维导图抓取关键词时，每个类别不超过 5 个核心词，避免信息杂乱导致写作跑题 结尾必须包含历史意义 + 个人做法，缺一不可，保证写作结构完整 写作一 假如你是 Tom，学习了古丝绸之路的相关知识，老师要求你写一篇介绍中国古丝绸之路的历史小作文。请根据教材内容完成写作。 要求： 1. 书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2. 语言表达流畅。 3. 不少于 50 词。 参考单词： the ancient Silk Road; Xinjiang; trade centre; border; China; East and West; meet; trade; important; culture 写作二 假如你是 Tom，学习了古丝绸之路的相关知识，老师要求你写一篇介绍中国古丝绸之路的历史小作文。请根据教材内容完成写作。 要求： 1. 书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2. 语言表达流畅。 3. 不少于 50 词。 参考单词： Mogao Caves; Fan Jinshi; protect; paintings; difficulties; take photos; show; safe; history protector; great 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： The Ancient Silk Road I want to talk about the ancient Silk Road. It is an important part of Chinese ancient history. Xinjiang was its important trade centre, because it was near China’s border. East and West people met there and did trade together. This is great in Chinese history. It’s about culture and trade. We should remember this precious Chinese history. 范文（提高版）： The Ancient Silk Road I want to talk about the ancient Silk Road, a famous part of Chinese ancient trade history. It was a great road for trade in old China, and Xinjiang was its key trade centre. Xinjiang was near the border between China and other countries. So people from the East and West met there and traded with each other. It made Chinese culture meet other cultures. This is very important in Chinese history. It stands for ancient Chinese trade and exploration spirit. We can learn the spirit of communication from it, and it’s our precious Chinese history treasure. 写作二 范文（基础版）： Fan Jinshi and the Mogao Caves The Mogao Caves are a great treasure of Chinese history. Fan Jinshi is a great history protector for them. She wanted to protect the cave paintings. She met many difficulties, but she took photos of the paintings and showed them in new ways. This story is meaningful. Fan Jinshi is great. We can learn to protect our Chinese history from her. 范文（提高版）： Fan Jinshi and the Mogao Caves I want to talk about Fan Jinshi and the Mogao Caves, a great story of protecting Chinese ancient history. The Mogao Caves have beautiful ancient paintings, and Fan Jinshi spent much time protecting them. She met many difficulties when protecting the caves. Some people damaged the caves and brought problems, but she took photos of the paintings and used new ways to show them. This kept the paintings safe. Fan Jinshi is a great history protector in China. Her story tells us to love and protect our ancient history. We should learn from her and keep our history safe forever. 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $