摘要:
该初中英语中考复习课件聚焦“五育并举”主题,紧密对接广西中考及全国考查趋势,系统梳理劳育(劳动实践经历与感受)、美育(审美情趣培养)、德育(新时代好少年要求)等高频考点,通过教材单元链接、课本句型积累及中考真题角度分析,归纳写作常考题型,体现备考针对性与实用性。
课件亮点在于“三阶写作指导+分阶范文对比+实战训练”模式,如以“Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life”典例示范写作框架,通过句式升格和句子翻译培养语言能力与思维品质,助力学生掌握结构搭建与表达优化技巧。教师可依托此资料设计分层教学,帮助学生高效突破写作考点,提升中考得分率。
内容正文:
广西
英 语
写作册
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第二部分 课标高频主题三阶写作指导
主题4 促进中学生“五育并举”的发展&勤于动手,
乐于实践,敢于创新
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中考主题角度
1.广西近6年中考:2022广西样卷考查学习做家务
2.全国视野&近三年全国考查角度:①德育:乐于助人,如何做
一名新时代的好少年;②美育:美育知识,艺术课程,引导审美
情趣;③劳育:劳动实践的经历与感受,学习劳动精神,倡导参
加劳动实践活动
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主题教材链接
版本 单元主题 版本 模块主题
人教
版 八(上)U5
Entertainment 外研
版 七(下)M12 Recreation
八(上)U8 Cooking 八(上)M5 Recreation:
plays and films
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版本 单元主题 版本 模块主题
人教
版 八(下)U3 Chores
and permission 外研
版 八(下)M5 Recreation:
cartoons
九(全)U9 Music and
movies
续表
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课本句型促写作
1. I suppose tree planting is very important work. It’s also a
great way to learn about nature.
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2. There are all kinds of music in the world. Music makes
people happy. Good music brings people comfort and peace
of mind. Everyone loves music but different people have
different tastes.
3. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to
learn more new life skills.
角度1 劳动实践
1. I often do some cleaning at home and I like a clean and
tidy house.[外研七(下)M2改编]
2. Students are able to learn necessary life skills by taking
cleaning or cooking lessons in school.[人教七(上)U9]
3. Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and
teaches them how to look after themselves. [人教八(下)U3]#3
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4. I think it is important for children to learn how to do
chores. [人教八(下)U3改编]
5. Since students live in one house with their parents, they
should know that everyone should do their part in keeping
it clean and tidy. [人教八(下)U3]
6. It seems that doing some housework such as cooking and
cleaning is good for us.#6
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7. Some students are interested in taking part in social
practice activities while others plan to do housework.
8. It’s important to learn some basic life skills, like cooking,
washing clothes and tidying up our rooms.#8
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角度2 美育知识
1. I like smooth music that helps me relax after a long
week at work. [人教九(全)U9]
2. It’s our duty to value and spread Chinese culture.
3. The reason why we plan a visit to a tea house is that we
can learn a lot about tea culture there.
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角度3 智育(学习方法)
1. Daniel always thinks carefully when he works. He plans
everything well.[译林牛津七(下)M7]
2. We should deal with the difficulties we meet wisely. They
can help us become better persons.
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(发出号召、表达感受或收获)
1. Carrying out labor education makes school life more
colorful and meaningful.
2. Learning life skills is necessary for us, because what we
depend on is what we learn.
3. I’m sure the earlier we learn to be independent, the better
our future will be.
4. Instead of being afraid of challenges, we should try our
best to solve the problems in our study and life.
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◆句子翻译
1.通过小组学习也是了解合作的好方法。(Tip: It’s also a
great way to learn about…)
________________________________________________________
_____________________
It’s also a great way to learn about working together
through group study.
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2.学生们应该参加劳动活动,比如打扫教室或种树。
(Tip: be supposed to do sth.)
________________________________________________________
___________________________________________
Students are supposed to take part in some labor activities, like cleaning the classroom or planting trees.
3.参加志愿活动帮助我们能够学会更关心他人和社会。
(Tip: be able to do sth.)
________________________________________________________
______________________________
Taking part in volunteer activities helps us be able to care
more about others and society.
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4.学着管理自己的时间和事务能培养我们的独立性。(Tip:
develop one’s independence)
________________________________________________________
__________________
Learning to manage our own time and things can develop
our independence.
5.我认为对我们学生来说,在家做家务很重要。(Tip: I think
it is important for sb. to do sth.)
________________________________________________________
_______
I think it is important for us students to do housework at
home.
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6.学生们应该在保持教室整洁方面尽自己的一份力。(Tip: do
one’s part in)
________________________________________________________
_______
Students should do their part in keeping the classroom clean.
7.尊重老师、帮助有困难的同学是我们的责任。(Tip: It’s our
duty to do sth.)
________________________________________________________
_______
It’s our duty to respect our teachers and help classmates in need.
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8.我们应该在美术课上尽力创作优美的作品。(Tip: try one’s
best to do sth.)
________________________________________________________
________
We should try our best to create beautiful works in art
classes.
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◆句式升格
9.We should take art classes seriously. Art classes teach us
to find beauty.(Tip: The reason why…is that)
________________________________________________________
____________________________
The reason why we should take art classes seriously is that they teach us to find beauty.
10.We should try different methods. We solve math problems.
(Tip: when)
________________________________________________________
__________
We should try different methods when we solve math
problems.
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典例探究明思路
热爱劳动是中华民族的传统美德。作为中学生,我们要积极
参加劳动实践。你校英语报发起了以“Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life”
为题的征文活动,请你写一篇英语短文投稿,介绍你经常做的劳
动,你从劳动中取得的收获和你的建议。内容包括:
1. 你在学校、家里或社区做的劳动(打扫教室、做 饭洗碗、
帮助老人等);
2. 你从劳动中取得的收获(学习技能、自豪感等);
3. 你的建议。
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审题四要素:
审体裁:说明文
审人称:第一人称
审时态:一般现在时
审要点:在学校、家里或社区做的劳动,劳动中取得的收获及建议
Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life
It is well-known that loving labor is a traditional
Chinese virtue.____
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一、构思框架
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二、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life
It is well-known that
loving labor is a traditional
Chinese virtue. Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life
It is well-known that
loving labor is a traditional
Chinese virtue.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
I often take part in
some labor activities in
daily life. At school, I
clean the classroom and
playground with my
classmates. _______________________________
_______________________________
________________________
(用as表“作为”). For example, I
clean the classroom and
playground with my classmates at
school.
As a middle school student, I
often take part in some labor
activities in everyday life
续表
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初阶范文 高阶范文
At home, I help cook,
wash clothes and tidy
my room. In the
community, I help the
old and the disabled. I do some cooking, wash clothes
and tidy rooms at home. And in
the community, ________________
_______________________________
________(用do volunteer work丰
富).
I do volunteer
work to help the old and the
disabled
续表
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初阶范文 高阶范文
Doing labor
activities teaches me
basic life skills to look
after myself. I have got
a strong feeling of pride.
I have become more and
more independent and
responsible. By doing these, I’ve learnt
some basic life skills to take care
of myself. Besides, ______________
_______________________________
_______________________________
____________________________
(用not only…but also…).
I have not
only got a strong feeling of pride
but also become more and more
independent and responsible
续表
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初阶范文 高阶范文
Labor is important
for us. I hope all
teenagers try to do more
labor activities. Let’s do
daily labor activities
actively. All in all, I believe that labor
education is important for our
development and I encourage all
teenagers to actively experience
labor activities. _________________
___________________________
(用take an active part in sth.丰
富).
Let’s take an
active part in labor activities
续表
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写作实战提能力
一、“恰同学少年,风华正茂;书生意气,挥斥方遒。” 为践行
教育部提出的“五育并举”,培养“德、智、体、美、劳”全面发展
的时代新人,学校开展争当“五星少年”的活动。假如你是李华,
请你用英文写一份自荐报告。内容包括:
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1. 你已得到德、智、体三颗星,请说明理由(如严于律己,
友爱互助;努力学习;健康饮食等);
2. 还有美、劳两颗星你仍需努力,你将怎么做(如你准备
学习一门艺术、学会做家务等)。
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注意:1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:morality(n.道德), intelligence(n.才智)
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How to Become a Five-Star Student
I’m Li Hua. I want to be a five-star student. Here is my report.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
I have already got three stars. First, I am strict with myself and always
help others, so I have the star of morality. Second, I study hard, read many
books and make progress, so I get the star of intelligence. Third, I eat
healthily and do sports every day, so I am strong and get the star of health.
However, I still need to work hard for the stars of art and labor. I am
going to learn painting to improve my sense of beauty. I will also do more
housework at home, such as cooking and cleaning.
I will try my best to be a five-star student.
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二、自主学习不仅是获取知识的重要方式,更是一种终身学习的态度。为
了帮助同学们了解自主学习的重要性,激发学习的热情,你校英语社团将
组织以“The Power of Self-Directed Learning”为题的经验交流会,你将
作为班级代表发言,请你用英语写一篇发言稿。内容包括:
1.你对自主学习的看法(根据兴趣选择要学习的知识);
2.你自主学习的经历;
3.自主学习的意义。
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注意:1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 标题已给出,不计入总词数。
The Power of Self-Directed Learning
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
In my opinion, self-directed learning means choosing
what to learn by ourselves, rather than having someone
make us learn it. It’s all about seeking knowledge according
to our own interests.
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______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
I have an experience of self-directed learning. I was really
interested in making model planes. Since there was no such class
at school, I decided to learn it by myself. I read lots of books
about how planes work, watched many online videos, and tried
making models time after time. During this period, I ran into
many problems, but I kept finding ways to solve them on my own.
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________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Self-directed learning helps us become better learners
and prepares us for future challenges. Let’s start self-
directed learning and find out how much we can do!
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Reflecting#1
Check list: how well can you do
these things? ____________
Very
well ____________
OK ____________
Needs
work
●I can keep my writing paper clean.
(2分)
●I can use correct English
expressions in writing.(5分) □
□ □
□ □
□
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Check list: how well can you do
these things? ____________
Very
well ____________
OK ____________
Needs
work
●I can write all the points.(5分)
●My article is clearly structured and
well organized.(3分) □
□ □
□ □
□
续表
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Check list: how well can you do
these things? ____________
Very
well ____________
OK ____________
Needs
work
Overall comment Self-assessment
Peer review
Teacher’s
assessment
Total score:____/15
续表
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