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满分策略3 描述型应用文3类满分素材
高考曾
考过 2025全国二卷“询问外教稿件进度” 2024新课标Ⅰ卷分享“在公园上美术课”经历 2023浙江高考1月报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动
描述型
应用文 要求考生描述一个活动、一件事情、一个事物或人物,主要考查信息概括和描述能力
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素材4 介绍活动
第1组
活动目的(告知信、邀请信、通知、报道、宣传稿、短文)
公式1 书信体表目的
(Learning that+写信背景,) I am writing to/I’d like to+书信体相关功 能词
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背 Learning that you want to participate in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers, I am writing to offer my advice.(2025·北京高考建议信)
得知你有意参加联合国发起的全球青少年发展倡议,我写信为你提建议。
仿 Learning that your art gallery is wanting volunteers,
_______________________________.
得知贵画廊需要志愿者,我写信申请成为其中一员。
I am writing to apply to be one
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公式2 With the aim/purpose/intention of/Aimed at doing ...,活动名称+will be held/was held※表“举行、组织”的动词(短语):hold、 host、 launch、 organize、 take place
背 With the aim of/Aimed at enhancing our awareness of the significance of plants, an activity themed “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” was launched last Sunday. (2023·浙江高考1月报道)
为提高我们对植物重要性的认识,我们于上周日发起了一项以“认识我们身边的植物”为主题的活动。
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仿 _________________________________________________________
________________, the Campus Recycling Fair took place on the central square last Friday.
为培养低碳生活理念,“校园旧物循环集市”于上周五在中心广场举 行。
With the aim of/Aimed at cultivating our awareness of a low-carbon lifestyle
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公式3 目的状语(In order to/In a bid to/In an attempt to/Aiming to ...),主办方+held/hosted/launched/organized+活动+地点+时间
背 In a bid/In an attempt/Aiming to relieve students’ stress, the Student Union organized a hiking activity themed “Footprints of Youth” last Saturday.
为缓解学生压力,学生会于上周六举办了以“青春足迹”为主题的徒步活动。
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仿 _________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________, our school held an ancient Chinese poetry recitation competition in the school hall last Saturday.
为促进学生对中国古典文学的欣赏和理解,我校于上周六在学校礼堂举行了中国古诗朗诵比赛。
In a bid to/In an attempt to/Aiming to promote the appreciation and understanding of classical Chinese literature among students
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公式4 活动名称+was held/launched等+地点+时间,+定语从句(the purpose/aim of which/whose purpose/aim was to ...)
背 The English program enjoys great popularity, whose aim is to improve students’ speaking ability, and expose them to western cultures. (新高考Ⅰ卷邀请信)
该英语节目很受欢迎,其目的是提高学生们的口语能力,并让他们了解西方文化。
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仿 Our school is holding an English writing competition with the theme of “I Write with AI”,___________________________________________ _____________________________ on writing and boost your creativity.
我校将举办“我用AI写作”为题的英语写作比赛,旨在唤起同学们对人工智能影响写作的认识,激发创造力。
the aim of which/whose aim is to arouse your awareness of the impact of AI
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第2组 活动主题、时间、地点、参与人员等
公式5 时间/地点
As scheduled, the activity took place at+地点, lasting from ... to ...或The activity is scheduled for+时间点, lasting (about) ...
背 As scheduled, the film will begin on Sunday, lasting from 5 pm to 6 pm. (通知)
电影将按计划于周日下午5点开始,6点结束。
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仿 A Short Video Contest themed “Technology and Innovation” ________ _______________________________________, inspiring students to blend technology and creativity.
我校将于下周五在校大厅举办“科技与创新”为主题的短视频大赛,激励学生融科技于创意之中。
will be held in our school hall next Friday
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公式6 时间/地点+saw/witnessed 或will see/witness+活动+地点/时间
背 Last Friday saw/witnessed an English drama performance in the school hall to enhance students’ speaking skills, providing them a platform to show their talents.
我校于上周五在学校大厅举办了旨在提高学生口语的英语戏剧表演,为学生们提供了展示才华的平台。
仿 _____________________________________________ themed “Write Spring Couplets” held last Friday.
上周五在文化公园举办了“写春联(Write Spring Couplets)”的文化活动。
The Cultural Park saw/witnessed a cultural activity
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第3组 活动过程、内容等
公式7 先“面”后“点”式主句+列举+定语从句补充
The activity features/focuses on ..., which定语从句(解释活动)
There be a wide variety of/various ..., ranging from ... to ...
The activity covers/consists of a series of ..., including/such as/like ...
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背 The exhibition featured a variety of projects, which focused on recycling and waste reduction. Other projects covered topics like renewable energy, and water conservation.
本次展览有聚焦循环再生与减少垃圾的多种项目,另有涉及可再生能源和节水等议题的项目。
背 There are a variety of themes we can choose from, ranging from calligraphy and martial arts to paper-cuts.
有各种各样的主题可供我们选择,从书法、武术到剪纸都有。
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仿 ___________________________________, including a cultural exhibition showcasing handicrafts from different countries, and interactive workshops.
本次活动将推出多种活动:既有多国手工艺品文化展,还有互动工坊。
The event will feature various activities
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公式8 时间顺序式
主语+kicked off with/began with ..., (which was) followed by ... afterwards, ...……以……开始,其次是……随后……
Then followed/came+另一活动,非限制性定语从句(解释活动)
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背 The event kicked off with a speech delivered by the schoolmaster. Then followed a short film. Afterwards, a speech contest was made to further promote the idea of safety.
活动以校长的讲话开始。接着是一部短片。随后,还举办了演讲比赛,进一步宣传安全理念。
仿 _______________________________ some folk music was played using traditional Chinese musical instruments.
然后到了用中国传统乐器演奏民间音乐的时刻。
Then came the moment when
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公式9 主语从句What appealed to/attracted/impressed sb. most was ...
(,+定语从句补充说明);倒装句 Most impressive of all/Especially amazing/Also of primary note+be... (,+定语从句补充说明)
背 What appealed to/attracted visitors most was the artworks combining painting, poetry and calligraphy.
最吸引游客的是集画、诗、书法于一体的艺术作品。
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背 Also of primary note is a collection of nearly 100 bronze objects from the Shang Dynasty (1600 BCE-1046 BCE). (人教B3U1)
同样十分重要的看点是一组近百件商代(公元前1600年——公元前1046年)青铜器藏品。
仿 ____________________________________________, among which the most popular was 3D printing.
同样值得一提的是许多动手活动,其中最受欢迎的是3D打印。
Also of primary note were many hands-on activities
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公式10 The highlight/One of the highlights of the event was ... 或Then came the highlight of ..., 同位语补充说明
背 A highlight was the “Heart-to-Heart Wall”, where students shared worries and received supportive notes from peers.
一个亮点是“心语墙”,学生们在墙上倾诉烦恼,并收到同龄人的暖心留言。
仿 _________________________________ the traditional dance performance, which held us entirely in its charm.
活动亮点之一是传统舞蹈表演,让我们完全沉浸于其魅力之中。
One of the highlights of the event was
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第4组 反响、评价、感受、收获、意义(报道、宣传稿、短文)
公式11 反响
The activity received positive responses/was well received/warmly embraced/was widely praised +which not only ... but also .../which ... and ...或as/because状语从句+...
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背 This activity was widely praised by all the participants, which not only enhanced students’ physical fitness but also inspired them to contribute to building a greener future.
本次活动广受参与者好评。它不仅促进了学生的身体健康,更激励他们为共创绿色未来贡献力量。
仿 __________________________________________, which not only stimulated/ aroused our interest in learning English but also added spice to our campus life.
所有的活动都受到了热烈的欢迎,不仅激发了我们学习英语的兴 趣,也给我们的学校生活增添了趣味。
All the activities were warmly embraced
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公式12 评价:活动参与者+think/speak highly of/sing high praise for ..., saying/thinking ...
背 We students all gave the project a thumbs-up, saying it sharpened our social skills and cooperation abilities.
我们学生都对这个项目感到满意,说它提高了我们的社交技能和合作能力。
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仿 _____________________________, which provided a chance for us to exercise and inspired our enthusiasm for sports.
这次活动受到了高度评价。活动不仅为我们提供了锻炼的机会,而且激发了我们对运动的热情。
The activity was highly spoken of
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公式13 意义:活动+proved rewarding/a success, which+not only ... (+个人层面) but also ... (整体层面)
It was/is+活动+that+“促进/鼓舞/培养”等动词(如 boosted、inspired、fostered) ...
背 This activity proved rewarding, which not only helped the seniors embrace new technology but also strengthened our bond with the community.
此次活动很有意义,既帮助老人们掌握新技术,更加强了我们与社区的关系。
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背 It was this inspirational campaign that sparked an interest in traditional Chinese handicrafts among the students.
正是这次鼓舞人心的活动激发了学生们对中国传统手工艺品的兴 趣。
仿 _________________________________________________________
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正是这次远足增强了我们的身体素质,加深了我们的友谊。
It was this hike that strengthened our physical fitness and deepened our friendship.
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公式14 收获(时态按文体确定)
The ... is worth expecting/visiting/viewing, as it ... +not only ... but also .../+... and/as well as ...
The ... provide/offer an opportunity to ...
The ... provide a platform where sb. ...
The ... benefit sb. a lot/is rewarding, because/as/for ...
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背 The event was instructional and educational. Not only did we get familiar with the plants surrounding us, but we also gained deeper insight into how to preserve them. (2023·浙江高考1月报道)
这次活动很有指导性和教育性。我们不仅熟悉了周围的植物,而且对如何保护它们有了更深入的了解。
仿 ________________________________________________________, but it also teaches me the importance of efforts and perseverance.
这场迷你马拉松不仅强健我的体魄、锤炼品格,更让我懂得努力与坚持的重要性。
Not only does this mini-marathon build my body and character
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满分语块补充
长
知
识 ①gain/acquire/obtain a deeper understanding of深入了解
②further/enhance/deepen one’s understanding of促进/加深某人对某事的理解 ③enrich one’s knowledge丰富知识 ④gain an insight into了解 ⑤get familiar with/be acquainted with熟悉 ⑥give/offer sb. a glimpse of让某人了解 ⑦improve academic performance提高学习成绩
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提技能/
能力 ①enable/allow sb. to solve ...使某人能解决……
②be equipped with ...具备…… ③improve oneself in all aspects全面提升自己 ④promote/enhance/strengthen one’s social/ communication/organisational/practical life skills促进/提高/增强社交/交流/组织/实用的生活技能 ⑤obtain/enhance one’s proficiency in能够充分掌握……/提高对……的熟练程度 ⑥inspire passion for激发对……的激情 ⑦encourage creativity鼓励创造性 ⑧showcase one’s talent展示才能
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促健康
(身体、心理) ①build up one’s body强身健体 ②boost mental and physical health促进身心健康 ③relieve/ease/reduce stress减压
④improve mood提高情绪 ⑤refresh ourselves放松
⑥benefit mental health有益心理健康
强自信/
提意识/
培精神 ①boost/enhance/improve one’s confidence增强自信 ②raise/
enhance/promote/arouse/strengthen/foster one’s awareness of 提高/增强/培养……的意识 ③foster/develop/cultivate/ promote/
boost teamwork培养/促进团队合作(精神) ④gain a sense of achievement获得成就感
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拓视野/激
兴趣/热情 ①broaden one’s horizons拓宽视野 ②arouse/stimulate one’s passion/enthusiasm for激发某人对……的热情
③arouse/stimulate/spark/develop one’s interest in激发/培养某人对……的兴趣 ④develop/form a good habit of养成……的好习惯 ⑤spark curiosity about激发对……的好奇心
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强关系 互动交流:①strengthen bonds增强关系 ②develop/build friendships培养友谊 ③get closer to each other更亲近彼此
集体氛围:④foster a warmer, more united class atmosphere培养更温暖、更团结的班级氛围 ⑤build a more united class建设更团结的班级 ⑥foster/cultivate a sense of community培养社区意识
丰生活 ①enrich campus life丰富学校生活 ②create a relaxing atmosphere创造轻松的氛围 ③give/offer sb. a hands-on experience给某人一次亲身体验 ④add spice to给……增添趣味;调剂
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仿练
用一个正确的词或所给词的正确形式或根据汉语提示填空,并注意黑体部分的含义
1.The English newspaper of our school is organizing an essay contest _______ the theme of “Travel Civilly, Go Green”. The aim is __________ (raise) our awareness of environmental protection during travel and encourage civilized behavior.
2.________ the purpose of arousing and cultivating students’ enthusiasm for learning English, our school is to hold an English speech competition.
with
to raise
With
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3.The city museum ____________ (witness) an exhibition themed “The Tea Road” last Friday, which ________________ (intend) to enhance students’ knowledge of Chinese tea culture.
4.A lecture __________ (theme) “AI and Tomorrow’s Education” is scheduled to __________ (hold) in our school auditorium from 1:45 pm ____ 3:00 pm on June 20th.
witnessed
was intended
themed
be held
to
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5.___________________________________________ (本次活动以一场鼓舞人心的演讲开始) emphasizing how reading enriched our lives and fostered a more knowledgeable society. ___________________________ __________________ (随后是一系列互动活动,倒装), like literary quizzes. ____________________________ (最使我印象深刻的是) the book-sharing session where people of all ages exchanged their favorite reads, from classic novels to insightful non-fiction.
The activity kicked off with an inspiring speech
Then followed a series of interactive activities
What impressed me most was
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6.All the students were amazed at our colorful culture, ___________ (say) that this visit was really a cultural feast. The visit was a great success,which ___________________________ (不仅丰富我们的生活), but also helped us learn more about Chinese painting culture.
saying
not only enriched our life
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把握高考微点,实现素能提升,完成练1~3
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