摘要:
该高中英语课件围绕“人与社会——中外节日”主题,聚焦观点表达类信件写作,通过“中国春节全球化”现象导入,结合范文分析活动描述、高级句式等语言要素,搭建“现象引入-原因分析-观点表达”的写作支架,衔接仿写步骤(结构布局、语言规范、高级表达)及常用句型,帮助学生掌握观点信写作逻辑。
其亮点在于融合语言能力与文化意识培养,通过范文中的倒装句、while并列句等高级表达提升语言能力,对比中外节日现象增强文化意识,引导学生分析原因和影响以发展思维品质。采用“模仿-合成-应用”三步教学法,如用同位语从句、with复合结构合成句子,提供常用句型模板,助力学生规范表达。对学生提升写作逻辑与跨文化理解,对教师提供结构化教学资源,提高课堂效率。
内容正文:
Unit 2 Let's celebrate!
主题语境:人与社会——中外节日
Section Ⅴ Writing—写一封表达观点的信
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Chinese Spring Festival Going Global
Nowadays, more and more countries around the world are holding celebrations for Chinese Spring Festival. What's more, not only are these attended and enjoyed by Chinese citizens living abroad, but by many other nationalities, too.
With colourful decorations of lanterns and lamps, shopping centres have been organising events and activities to celebrate Chinese Spring Festival for years, while concerts and other performances are also proving a big success. Tickets for the 2017 Grand Chinese New Year Concert in St Petersburg sold out, with 90% of the audience local Russians.
People are also discovering the fun of interacting with the celebrations, rather than simply watching as part of an audience. To celebrate the 2017 festival, over 1,000 Ghanaian junior high school students got up on stage to perform Chinese songs and dances. Students in New York City, meanwhile, have since 2016 been able to enjoy an official day's holiday for Chinese Spring Festival.
It seems that Chinese Spring Festival is becoming a global celebration of joy and love. What do you think of this phenomenon? Write to us to share your opinion!
名师圈点
学语言
1.修饰语:副词simply
2.连接词:what's more, and, also, rather than,meanwhile
3.高级表达:倒装句、while连接的并列句以及非谓语动词作后置定语
4.句式:It seems that...
5.时态:现在完成进行时,现在进行时,现在完成时
学结构
第一段:引出现象;
第二段:活动介绍、原因分析或双方观点;
第三段:个人观点。
情景任务写作
假定你是李华,现在有不少人喜欢过西方的一些节日。请用英语给报社的编辑写封信来分析产生这种现象的原因,并就这种现象可能带来的影响简要阐述自己的看法,表达你自己的观点。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
仿写程序步骤
1.一仿结构布局合理
首段:____________________________
主体:________________________________________
尾段:__________________________
开门见山,引出这种社会现象;
阐述理由,分析产生这种现象的原因和影响;
总结全文,陈述自己的看法。
2.二仿语言规范美观
①许多人过去可能没有注意到这个事实。(fail to do)
Many people ___________________________.
②今天越来越多的中国人喜欢庆祝西方的一些节日。
______________________________________________some western festivals today.
③许多中国传统节日失去了它们的吸引力。
A lot of traditional Chinese festivals ________________.
④许多人倾向于在西方节日里寻找快乐。(tend to do)
Many people _____________________________.
may have failed to notice the fact
An increasing number of Chinese are fond of celebrating
lost their attraction
tend to find joy in western festivals
3.三仿句式高级表达
⑤请用同位语从句把句①和句②合成一句话
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⑥请用with复合结构把句③和句④合成一句话
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Many people may have failed to notice the fact that an increasing number of Chinese are fond of celebrating some western festivals today.
With a lot of traditional Chinese festivals losing their attraction,many people tend to find joy in western festivals.
Dear editor,
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Li Hua
Many people may have failed to notice the fact that an increasing number of Chinese are fond of celebrating some western festivals today.
A number of factors account for the phenomenon. On the one hand,due to the policy of reform and opening-up, Chinese people tend to know more about western culture and be influenced by it. On the other hand, with a lot of traditional Chinese festivals losing their attraction,many people tend to find joy in western festivals.
In my opinion,while enjoying the atmosphere brought by those western customs,we might also lose our own tradition and identity.
精彩素材积累
常用开头句:
1.Recently...had a heated discussion about whether...or not.
近来,……关于是否……进行了一次热烈的讨论。
2.Having read your article concerning..., I am writing to express my opinion about...
读过你的关于……的文章后,我想写信表明我对……的观点。
3.I was very much concerned to read that...
读过……后,我非常担心。
4.People hold different opinions about...
人们对……持不同的观点。
常用中间句:
1.I am in favour of/support...
我同意/支持……
2.I am against/disagree...
我反对/不支持……
3.In my opinion/In my view/Personally, I think.../As far as I am concerned...
在我看来/就我而言……
4.First of all, it would not be a good idea to...
首先,……不会是个好主意。
5.Consequently, I strongly object to the existence of...
因此,我强烈反对……的存在。
6.In my opinion, everything has its strengths and weaknesses.
在我看来,万事都有优缺点。
7.firstly; secondly; besides (this); in addition (to this); what's more; furthermore; moreover; in a word; in short; even worse...
首先;其次;除此以外;另外;而且;此外;而且;总而言之;简言之;更为糟糕的是……
8.Only in this way can we...
只有这样,我们才能……
常用结束句:
1.To sum up/Summing up/To conclude/In conclusion...
总的来说……
2.All the above considered, I believe that...
综上所述,我相信……
3.I would appreciate it if you could look into the matter.
如果你们能调查此事,我将不胜感激。
学以致用
某网站就“中国人该不该过洋节”进行了一次讨论。请你用英语写一篇关于这个话题的文章,介绍你们班学生们的不同观点,并表达自己的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:洋节 foreign festivals 地球村 global village
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Recently, our class held a discussion about whether Chinese people should celebrate foreign festivals or not. Opinions are divided on this issue.
60% of the students think that it is wrong to do so because people will waste a lot of money observing these festivals. Besides, people are likely to forget their own tradition and culture if they focus too much on foreign festivals.
However, 35% of the students argue that it's a natural trend to celebrate foreign festivals. As we all know, with the development of science and technology, the earth has, in fact, become a global village. Those festivals that were once foreign to us are now familiar to us.
As far as I'm concerned, if we can strike a balance between our own festivals and foreign ones, it's not a bad idea to have more festivals to celebrate.
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