Unit 1 写作表达升格——想象类作文（教师版）-【创新教程】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第四册五维课堂同步复习（人教版）

世五维课堂 英语·选择性必修第四册 写作。表达升格 对应学生讲义P25 想象类作文 [素养提升] Perhaps some people will go to the moon for their 一、文体特点 holiday,and some scientists will live under 想象类作文是一种创造型写作，属于开放式作文 the sea. 的一种。想象类作文不但考查考生的语言能力，也从 Every day we can ask the robot to do the house- 很大程度上考查考生的思维能力。此类作文一般会 work,cook and so on. 给考生一定的素材或主题，属于提纲类作文的范畴。 If we can only get 3 hours of sleep a day,we will 二、写作指导 need a sleeping machine. 要写好想象类作文，应做到以下几点： This kind of machine is programmed and con- 1.观察生活，熟悉生活。想象不是胡编乱造，而要基 trolled by a computer.Once you press the button 于实际生活。只有熟悉生活，仔细地观察生活，才 it will... 能有想象的原材料。 3.结尾部分 2.明确中心思想，展开想象。动笔写想象类作文之前 This is the life that I am looking forward to. 要先明确中心思想，即写作目的。在这个基础上列 ..will come true sooner or later. 出提纲，写出段落主题句。写主题句时要注意：一 What an amazing trip to...! 个段落只能有一个主题句：主题句必须精练、具体 [典题指导] 化；尽可能选择恰当、高级的词语进行概括。 P[写作任务] 3.想象美好，立意深刻。想象类作文必须要有一个积 你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“未来的新型城 极的中心思想。如果只是编造一个热闹离奇的故 市”的英语讨论活动。请根据下列要点，发挥自己的 事，想象就失去了意义。 想象力，用英语写一篇发言稿。 4.前后照应，符合逻辑。不管想象的空间有多大，都 1.新型城市产生的原因； 要做到符合逻辑，条理清晰，这对于写好此类文章 2.新型城市的运作模式。 尤其重要。 注意： 5.语言规范，表达地道。选用自己熟悉的词汇和句型 1.词数80左右； 写作。 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 三、知识必备 3.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 常用表达句式 Good morning,everyone.I'm glad to share my 1.开头部分 view on“the new city in the future'”. It is really difficult for me to make predictions a- bout the future. The future life is beyond imagination. Welcome to the future by the Time Machine. It's possible/probable/likely that... I often dream about... 2.主体部分 With the development of science...,our life will surely be... In the future more and more...will appear. People will lead a carefree life. The living environment will be cleaner and more satisfactory. Thank you! ·36· UNIT 1 SCIENCE FICTION 五维课堂兰 ●[审题谋篇] [学以致用] 本篇书面表达形式上是一篇发言稿，内容上要求 你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“我的时光机器” 描述未来的新型城市，属于想象类作文，故时态应以 的英语故事分享活动。请根据以下要点，发挥自己的 一般将来时为主。另外，作为发言稿，应使用较为正 想象力，用英语写一篇小故事。 要点如下： 式的语言。 1.时光机器的样子与功能； 阐述新型城市产生的原因 第一部分 2.你乘坐时光机去了哪里，发生了什么，感受 (如海平面上升、土地稀缺等) 如何？ 文章 第二部分一介绍其运作模式 注意：1.词数80左右： 主体 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 第三部分一展望未来 ◆[佳作展示] Good morning,everyone.I'm glad to share my view on“the new city in the future.” As a result of the rising sea level caused by glob- al warming [1]and exploding population,our cities are becoming too crowded.Therefore,I've come up [参考范文] with the idea of constructing floating cities on the My time machine looks like a crystal ball with sea to solve the problem. two buttons.One can lead to the prehistoric period The floating city will be located on a man-made and the other one can lead to the future. island,which will be almost entirely covered by One day,after I pressed the button to the fu- ture,the time machine gave out colourful rays,and plants.[2]Besides,a huge tower in the city center carried me into the time tunnel.Overwhelmed with will act both as the workplace and housing for the excitement and nervousness,I closed my eyes tight- citizens,so that people will not need to travel to ly and held my hands firmly.I wondered what the work any more [3].What's more,the city will use so- future city would look like. lar,wind,and wave energy to keep it functioning [4]and When I opened my eyes,I arrived in a brand- use its large gardens to supply its citizens with food. new floating city,located on a man-made island, which was almost entirely covered in the vegetation. I believe it will come true with the development In the city,many strange carriage-like small planes of science and technology and people's consistent were floating above the ground.When I drove one to hard work. visit the city,I felt I went through a beautiful gar- Thank you! den.There was a huge tower in the city centre act- [名师点评] ing both as work place and housing for its citizens. 本文是一篇想象类作文，语言流畅，想象合理， The city used solar,wind and wave power to keep it functioning and used its large gardens to supply 涵盖了所有写作要点。除此之外，一些高级词语、结 food.In this city where robots were easy to see eve- 构及句式的使用使文章更加出彩。 rywhere,people were working busily at a rapid pace [1]过去分词短语作后置定语。 and AI,of course,became helpful assistants.After [2]which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词is hanging around the city for several hours,the time land。 machine transported me back to reality. 汇3]so that引导的目的状语从句。 It sounds a little fancy but in my opinion,with high technology developing,our society will become [4幻“keep十宾语+宾补”结构。 more and more intelligent. ·37