摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“Home”主题写作展开,从话题词汇(如east, relax)及易混辨析(in front of与in the front of)导入,通过佳句仿写(教材原句转化)夯实基础,再以经典范文模板(My dream home结构)搭建框架,形成从词句到篇章的学习支架。
其亮点在于通过“审、列”步骤(分析体裁、时态、人称)培养思维品质,结合范文赏析(如邀请信要点解析)和名师点评(指出not far away from等短语运用)提升学习能力,实战演练(My Home写作)强化语言能力。教师可直接使用结构化资源,学生能系统掌握写作策略,提升英语表达与逻辑思维。
内容正文:
英 语
七年级下册 YL
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Unit 1 Home
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课时同步训练
Period 6 Integration(Ⅱ)& Assessment & Further
study
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.东部;东方的 ______
2.自己的;本人的 _____
east
own
链接狂K
own的详细讲解见狂K重点P2。
3.放松;休息 _______
4.花园;菜园 ________
relax
garden
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5.在……前面 _____________________
in (the) front of
易混辨析
in front of与in the front of
(1)in front of 意为“在……前面”,前者在后者的范围之外。
(2)in the front of 意为“在……前部”, 前者在后者的范围之内。
6.躺在床上听音乐 ________________________
listen to music in bed
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】I live in a town 15 miles from London.(live in)
→ 仿写:韩梅住在离市中心5千米的一所房子里。
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Han Mei lives in a house 5 kilometres from the city centre.
8.【教材原句】The house is big, so my grandparents can live with us and we
can take good care of them.(take care of)
→ 仿写:她从不担忧,因为我们把她照顾得很好。
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She never worries because we take good care of her.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
My dream home
My dream home is very big. It’s in a quiet town (引出主题).
It has two floors, and it is a building with a garden and a swimming pool.
The garden is full of many kinds of flowers. There is a big kitchen and a dining
room on the ground floor.I can invite more than 20 friends to my home to have
dinner.On the first floor (按照ground floor和first floor介绍布局), there is a
computer room and a big living room. I can chat with my friends over a cup of
tea in the living room. It is also comfortable to watch TV in it. Of course, I
have my own bedroom. I enjoy listening to music in bed.
I love my dream home and hope to have a house like this some day
(总结全文).
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假如你是王琳,希望中学的学生将来你校交换学习,你想邀请其中一位学生
李红来你家居住一周。
请根据以下参考要点,给她写一封80词左右的邀请信,简单介绍你的安排。
1.Where your home is;
2.What your favourite place in your home is and why;
3.Where Li Hong can live and what activities she can take part in.
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Dear Li Hong,
I’m so glad that you will come to our school and I think it will be great
for us to live together for a week.
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I hope we can have a great time together.
Yours,
Wang Lin
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第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第一、三人称为主
内容要点:居住地址、最喜欢的房间及原因、能参加的活动等
写作框架:
邀请信 开头 提出邀请
主体 具体介绍家庭住址、自己最喜欢的房间及原因、李
红在家里能参加的一些活动等
结尾 表达期望
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第二步 列
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__________________________________
Dear Li Hong,
I’m so glad that you will come to our school and I
think it will be great for us to live together for a week.
My home is not far away from our school. It’s only ①
three miles away. It’s a little cottage. My favourite place in
my home is the big yard. My parents grow many flowers
in the yard to make it beautiful ② .I can enjoy a cup of tea
in the yard at weekends. ________________________________
①only表示离学校
很近;
②动词不定式作目
的状语;
③连词So在此处表
示结果;
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We have three bedrooms in my home. So ③ you
can have a bedroom of your own.After school, we can water
the flowers together.At weekends, we can have fun going
fishing with my dad, or we can have a BBQ with other
classmates in the yard. ④
④I hope we can have a great time together. ⑤
Yours,
Wang Lin ④此句为表示选择
关系的并列句;
⑤此句包含宾语从
句,表达了作者的
希望。
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这篇习作要点齐全,语言流畅,全面介绍了自己家的相关情况。文中not far
away from、enjoy a cup of tea、at weekends、of one’s own、have fun doing、
have a great time等展现了作者灵活运用所学知识的能力,这些是文中的亮点。
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第4阶 实战演练
有一句英语谚语叫“East or west, home is best.”。家是我们休憩的港湾,请
以“My Home”为题,用英文写一篇80词左右的短文来谈谈你对家的理解。文章开
头已给出,不计入总词数。要点如下:
1.家不仅是我们生活的地方,更是一个充满爱的地方(当开心或失意时……);
2.家也是一个学习之余放松的地方(一边品尝妈妈做的可口饭菜,一边交流学
习生活,使自己得到放松……)。
My Home
Home is not just a place where we live,____
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【参考范文】
My Home
Home is not just a place where we live, but a place where family
support or show their love to each other.When we have something happy,
we first look forward to sharing it with our family.Also, when we get
into trouble, home is the first place where we look for support and
comfort.In short, home is not only a house we live in, but also our
home of spirit.
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Home is also the place where we can relax ourselves after a busy
day.Sharing school life with family is what we often do at the dinner
table.Mum’s tasty meals can make us happy and relaxed.We are always
happy with ourselves at home.
Just as the saying goes, “East or west, home is the best.”I love
my home!
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