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英 语
八年级下册 YL
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Unit 3 The world at one click
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课时同步训练
Period 6 Integration (Ⅱ) &Assessment &Further
study
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.游览 ______
2.探索 _________
3.介绍 ______________
4.激动;兴奋 ____________
tour
explore
introduction
excitement
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5.以……而闻名 __________________________
6.奇妙的经历 _______________________
be well-known/famous for
an amazing experience
【解析】知识拓展
experience 意为“经历”时,是可数名词; experience 意为“经验”时,是不
可数名词。注意不要用错。
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】I got very interested and decided to explore it online.
(get interested; decide)
→仿写:我对线上旅行产生了兴趣,决定亲自体验一次。
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I got interested in the online tour and decided to try one/it myself/in person.
8.【教材原句】I felt like I was there in person.(feel like; in person)
→仿写:我感觉自己正在那座城市里行走。
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I felt like I was walking in the city in person.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
My Online Tour of Huangshan
I saw a beautiful picture of Huangshan in a book last week. I got very
interested and decided to explore it online.(介绍起因)
Huangshan, or the Yellow Mountain, is in Anhui Province, China.(介绍位置)
It is famous for its strange pines, hot springs, and sea of clouds.(介绍黄山奇观:
奇松、温泉、云海) Many people say it is the most beautiful mountain in
China.
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I took a virtual tour and saw many famous spots. I could see the steep
cliffs and grand views clearly. There were short videos showing the clouds
moving like a real ocean.(形象比喻,增强画面感)I felt like I was standing on
the mountain myself. (在线体验)
Online travel is wonderful. I enjoyed the fantastic views without any crowds,
and it didn’t cost anything.It was a special and exciting experience.. .
(感受总结)#1.4
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假如你校英语社团网站举办了以“My Wonderful Online Tour”为主题的征文活
动,请你根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文投稿,介绍你的武陵源线上之旅。
要点提示:
(1)你是如何知道并决定线上游览武陵源的;
(2)武陵源的地理位置和特色:位于中国湖南省,它以数千根高大的砂岩柱
(sandstone pillars)、清澈的湖泊和茂密的森林而闻名,人们称之为“现实生活中
的仙境(real-life fairyland)”;
(3)你线上游览的经过和感受;
(4)你对线上旅行方式的看法。
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作文要求:(1)词数:100词左右;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(3)内容连贯,逻辑清晰,书写工整。
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第一步 审
体 裁:记叙文
时 态:以一般过去时为主
人 称:第一、三人称
内容要点:起因;地理位置和特色;游览经过及感受;个人看法。
写作框架:#2.5
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My online tour of
Wulingyuan 起因 watched a documentary about Wulingyuan
位置和特色 in Hunan Province;tall sandstone pillars;
real-life fairyland
游览经过和
感受 took a 360-degree virtual tour;felt like
walking between…
看法 wonderful; relaxing and unforgettable
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第二步 列#3
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My Online Tour of Wulingyuan
I watched a documentary about Wulingyuan last
month. I got very interested and decided to explore it
online ① .
Wulingyuan is in Hunan Province, China. It is
famous for ② its thousands of tall sandstone pillars,
clear lakes, and deep forests. Many people call it a
“real-life fairyland”. ________________________________
①开门见山,交代事情
起因。
②用be famous for 引出
武陵源的特色。
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I took a 360-degree virtual tour and saw amazing
views. I could “fly” over the mountains and ③ look
down at the green valleys. There were also beautiful
pictures showing different seasons.I felt like I was
walking between those stone pillars ④ .
Online travel is wonderful. I enjoyed the natural
beauty without leaving home, and it didn’t cost
anything. It was a relaxing and unforgettable
experience. ③用and连接两个连续的
动作,还原虚拟游览的
动态过程。
④句子没有直接说 “虚
拟游览很真实”,而是通
过 “感受描写” 间接传
递体验,手法巧妙且感
染力强。
续表
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这篇习作运用了“总—分—总”的写作结构,要点覆盖全面,文章全面体现了四个
要点,全面写出了核心信息点。文章句式富于变化,简单句、并列句和复合句在
文中交替运用,体现了作者良好的语言功底。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
在一次课后英语自主探索学习中,你在线搜索了有关“Chinatown”的内容,进
行了一次有意义的在线游览。你发现那里有很多中式风格的建筑物,有中式餐馆
还有很多有中国特色的文化体验活动。你想将自己的发现通过给学校英语报投稿
的方式告诉同学们。请根据以下提示描述你的见闻和感受。#1
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建筑和氛围 文化体验 感悟与思考
具有中国特色
的建筑或装饰
(牌楼/红灯
笼……) 街道氛围
(热闹/拥挤/充
满音乐……) 中国特色活动
(书法体验/茶艺展示
/漆扇制作……) 唐人街保留了中国传统
文化特色
吸引你的商店
(中药店/工艺品店/
点心铺……) 让更多人感受到中国传
统文化的价值和魅力
品尝特色的中国美食
(饺子/月饼/奶
茶……) 为拥有如此丰富的文化
而感到骄傲
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写作要求:(1)请以“Exploring Chinatown: A Cultural Adventure”为题目;
(2)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(3)参考提示中的要点内容,并适当发挥;
(4)词数:100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(5)不得使用真实姓名和校名。
下面的词汇补充希望可以帮助到你:
archway (牌楼), souvenir (纪念品), charm (魅力), calligraphy (书法),
lacquer fan (漆扇)
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Exploring Chinatown: A Cultural Adventure
Last weekend, I visited the amazing Chinatowns in many foreign countries
online.
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【参考范文】
Exploring Chinatown: A Cultural Adventure
Last weekend, I visited the amazing Chinatowns in many foreign
countries online.
Every Chinatown starts with a beautiful archway, and red lanterns
hang everywhere. The streets are always crowded with people, and you
can hear lively music. It feels just like a little China abroad.
There are many interesting things to do. I saw people trying
calligraphy and watching tea art shows. Some were making lacquer fans
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too. The shops are great—there are Chinese medicine stores, souvenir
shops with nice crafts, and snack bars. I “tasted” delicious
dumplings and mooncakes, and even “tried” Chinese milk tea!
Chinatown keeps our traditional culture alive. It shows the world
the charm of Chinese culture. I feel so proud of our rich traditions.
It’s wonderful to see our culture being loved by so many people.
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