摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“Stay Healthy”话题展开写作训练,通过话题词汇(如doctor, take one’s temperature)和佳句仿写(如教材原句转化)搭建基础,逐步过渡到范文模板、赏析及实战演练,形成从词句积累到篇章应用的学习支架。
其亮点在于分层递进培养语言能力与思维品质,如词句储备中解析lie down多义提升语言理解,范文赏析用“总—分—总”结构强化逻辑思维,实战演练结合消防征文情境增强学习能力。教师可编辑课件灵活教学,学生能系统提升写作,助力高效教学与能力提升。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级下册 人教版
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Unit 2 Stay Healthy
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.医生 ________
2.药 __________
3.喉咙 ________
4.给某人量体温 _________________________
5.戴口罩 ____________
6.发高烧 ___________________
doctor
medicine
throat
take one’s temperature
wear masks
have a high fever
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7.躺下 __________
lie down
【解析】知识拓展
lie作动词时,有三个含义:①躺;平躺;平卧,过去式为lay;②放置,过去式
为lay;③说谎;撒谎,过去式为lied。
8.得流感 ______________
have the flu
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】I’m suffering from a very bad headache.(suffer from)
→仿写:我正在遭受高烧。
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I’m suffering from a high fever.
10.【教材原句】You should take some medicine and drink enough water.
(should+动词原形)
→仿写:我们应该多吃蔬菜和水果。
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We should eat more vegetables and fruit.
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11.【教材原句】If you take good care of yourself, you’ll get better soon.
(take good care of)
→仿写:为了你的健康,你必须照顾好你自己。
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For your health, you must take good care of yourself.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Last week, I felt dizzy and suffered from a high fever.(开篇点题) My
mother took me to the hospital on Tuesday. The doctor examined me and said I
had a high fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to rest at home.
(医嘱) From Wednesday to Friday, I lay down in bed, took the medicine on
time, and drank warm water.(介绍做法) Slowly, I began to feel better.
This experience taught me that seeing a doctor early is very important.
Following the doctor’s advice helps us recover faster. For our health, we must
take good care of ourselves.(总结经验)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假定你是李明,你得知在英国的朋友Bob得流感生病了,请你写一封英文电子
邮件叮嘱他生病后的一些注意事项。
内容包括:(1)Share your experience of getting sick;
(2)Provide at least two suggestions on how to maintain good health.
要求:(1)不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名;
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右(作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
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Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to hear that you have a flu.
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I hope you will get better soon. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
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第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:一般过去时和一般现在时
人 称:第一人称为主
内容要点:自己生病的经历;提出建议
写作结构:总—分—总
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第二步 列
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Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to hear that you have a flu. I
also caught a cold last month. I had a high fever
and coughed. I drank a lot of water and took some
medicine. ① I realized the importance of health. So
it is necessary for us to know how to keep healthy
② . ________________________________
①本单元重点短语的使用
展现了作者学以致用的能
力。
②it is necessary for us to
know how to keep healthy
作为过渡句,由个人经历
自然引出建议,逻辑衔接
流畅,体现写作的连贯
性。
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First, it’s necessary for us to keep a balanced
diet. We should eat more vegetables and fruit which
contain lots of vitamins and less fat. We should
also try to eat less meat. What’s more, keeping a
positive attitude to our life is good for our
health. Last but not least ③ , take proper exercise
every day.
I hope you will get better soon. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming ③First、What’s more、Last
but not least的使用,使建
议部分层次分明,结构清
晰。
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这篇书信采用“关怀引入——个人经历——建议分享——真挚祝福”的递进结构,
情感温暖,逻辑清晰。首段以对Bob患病的关切开启,自然过渡到自身经历,通
过high fever和coughed等细节真实传递生病感受,再以realized the importance of
health引出保持健康的建议;中间段落用“First… What’s more… Last but not
least”分点阐述饮食、心态、运动三方面建议,内容具体可行;结尾hope you will
get better soon呼应开头,最后以祝福结束,情感真挚自然。
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025浙江杭州调研】“防火记心间,一生保平安”。近期,学校在开展防火
宣传和火灾消防演练周活动,校刊英语专栏为此开展主题征文活动。请你根据提
示和要求,结合自身实际,用英语写一篇短文,分享你的学习和演练心得,并向
专栏投稿。
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Should do Shouldn’t do
In our daily
life ☆turn off the gas after cooking
☆turn off lights when leaving the room ☆play with fire
☆set off firecrackers
(鞭炮) in the
crowd
In a fire ☆cover your nose and mouth with a wet
towel (湿毛巾)
☆keep down to the floor and leave the
building ☆take a lift
☆jump off a window
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写作要求:(1)文中须包含表格中提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3)词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Stop Fire, Save Life
It is important for us to keep away from fires.
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【参考范文】
Stop Fire, Save Life
It is important for us to keep away from fires.Here is some advice
for you to keep safe.
In our daily life, we should turn off the gas after cooking and
turn off lights when leaving the room.We mustn’t play with fire or
candles, or set off firecrackers in the crowd because they can start a
fire easily.
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If you see something is on fire, stay calm.Remember to call 119 as
soon as possible.Then, cover your nose and mouth with a wet towel to
stop smoke.Keep down to the floor and find the nearest exit to leave
the building.However, avoid taking a lift or jumping off a
window.They’re dangerous.
Fire safety is vital.Let’s always keep it in our mind.
【解析】链接狂K
safety的详细讲解见狂K重点P9。
Value statement: Health is not everything, but you have nothing without it.
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