摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦八年级下册Unit 1 "Time to Relax"写作训练,涵盖话题词汇、佳句仿写、范文模板及实战演练等核心内容。通过话题词汇(如stress、manage)及辨析(take part in与join)、教材原句仿写(如allow sb to do sth结构)搭建学习支架,帮助学生从词句积累过渡到篇章写作,形成连贯的知识脉络。
其亮点在于采用四阶分层训练,融合语言能力与思维品质培养。如“高分词句储备”通过词汇拓展与句型仿写提升语言运用能力,“高分范文赏析”以“总—分—总”结构分析培养逻辑思维,“实战演练”的书信任务强化学习能力。学生能系统提升写作技能,教师可借助分层资料实现高效教学。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级下册 RJ
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Unit 1 Time to Relax
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.压力 ________
2.管理;完成(困难的事) ________
3.在业余时间 ___________________________
4.开心做某事 ____________________
stress
manage
in/during free/spare time
have fun doing sth
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5.参加 ______________
take part in
知识拓展
take part in主要指参与某项活动、事件,并在其中发挥一定的作用,强调参与
的过程和实际行动;join主要指加入某个组织、团体、人群等,成为其中的一员,
也可表示和某人一起做某事。
6.对……感兴趣 __________________
7.从事 _________
8.不仅……而且…… _________________________
be interested in
take up
not only... but also...
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】His latest app allows people around the world to find study
partners for learning Italian.(allow sb to do sth)
→仿写: 徒步旅行让我们全家能在周末一起享受大自然。
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Going hiking allows our family to enjoy nature together at weekends.
10.【教材原句】It gives me such a sense of achievement to see people using the
app… (a sense of)
→仿写: 我对绘画有一种强烈情感,并且我总是沉浸于创作美丽的艺术作品中。
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I have a sense of passion for drawing/painting, and I always lose
myself in creating beautiful artworks.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Good morning, everyone!
We all know that different people have different hobbies. Today, I want to
share one of my hobbies—playing the guitar (点明爱好) with you.I practise
for 30 minutes every evening (介绍具体活动)and my favourite song to play is
Yesterday by The Beatles.
This hobby brings me joy (介绍第一个好处).It helps me relax after busy
school days.Besides (用Besides介绍第二个好处), playing the guitar is a good
way to make friends with those who have the same hobby as me.
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Through this hobby, I’ve learnt not only patience but also the importance of
persistence (使用“not only… but also…”介绍别的好处).Music connects people,
and I hope to perform for our class someday!
That’s all.Thanks for listening.(表示感谢)#1.3
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025广东惠州期末]假如你是李明,三天后你将要在班级的英语课上进行
演讲,题目是“My Hobby”,请根据以下提示用英文写一篇短文。
提示:
(1)What is the hobby and how long it lasts;
(2)Parental attitude (support/oppose) and reasons (1—2 points);
(3)What you get from the hobby;
(4)What you’ll do for the hobby.
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注意:
(1)根据内容提示适当拓展信息;
(2)不得在文中出现真实校名、地名和人名;
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右(标题、开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
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My Hobby
Hello, everyone. It’s my honour to share something about my hobby with
you.___
That’s all for my sharing. Thank you for listening.
第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:爱好及持续时间、父母的态度及原因、自己的收获和后续做法
写作结构:总—分—总
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第二步 列#4
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My Hobby
Hello, everyone. It’s my honour to share something
about my hobby with you. My hobby is reading books
and I started to read books when I was a second-grade
student. ①
My parents are very pleased to know that I have a
hobby of reading books. Whenever I ask them to buy
books for me, they always take me to the bookshops
to pay for all the books I choose ②. They think reading
books is very helpful for my growth and studying. __________________________________
①并列句和时间状语从
句同时使用,句型多样
化。
②定语从句的使用展现
了作者深厚的写作功
底。
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Thanks to ③ the support from my parents, I keep this
hobby for six years. Reading helps me relax after a
day’s hard work and it allows me to know more about
the world.
Reading books is more than ④ a hobby, so I’ll keep
this hobby all my life.
That’s all for my sharing. Thank you for listening. ③Thanks to引出对父
母的感激,简洁有
力。
④more than强调阅读
的意义超越普通爱
好,简洁却有分量。
续表
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这篇习作采用“总—分—总”结构,层次清晰。首段点明主题;中间段落分述父母
的态度以及阅读带来的收获;结尾升华。作者通过I started to read books when
I was a second-grade student点明爱好起点,再用Whenever等词语细节刻画父母
的全力支持,并传递感恩之情,接着以it allows me to know more about the
world体现阅读的成长价值,最后用more than a hobby深化主题,情感层层递
进。
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025辽宁大连调研】体育运动使我们健康向上。假如你是李华,你的笔友
Tom想选择一项体育运动作为爱好,并改善他的健康状况,但是他在选择运动方
面拿不定主意。请你给他写一封信,向他推荐一项体育运动,并提出一些建议。
内容要点:(1)Recommended sport;
(2)Reasons for recommendation;
(3)Do’s and don’ts (注意事项) for doing this sport.
注意事项:(1)词数:80—100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know that you want to choose a kind of sport as your hobby.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know that you want to choose a kind of sport as your
hobby.I am going to share my favourite sport with you, and hope you
will take an interest in it.
My favourite sport is running.I am really keen on it because
running can not only make me healthier, but also help me reduce my
pressure.So why don’t you have a try?
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Before running, you’d better take a warm-up exercise to avoid any
injury.And there’s no need to run as fast as you can.In addition,
it’s necessary to wear a pair of comfortable shoes.
Wish you enjoy running!
Yours,
Li Hua
链接狂K
there be 结构的详细讲解见狂K重点P4。
Value statement:All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
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