英语新教材人教版八年级下册Unit 1 Time to Relax 单元写作专练

Unit 1 Time to Relax 【单元话题】 在繁忙的学习生活中，你是如何度过宝贵的空闲时间的呢？有没有哪件事能够让你放松身心，给你带来乐趣和自信呢？请以“My Hobby”为题，根据提示和要求，写一篇短文。 提示： 你在空闲时间喜欢做什么事？为什么喜欢做这件事？收获是什么？ 要求： 短文须包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥；意思连贯，字迹工整。词数80-100词 参考词汇：relax 放松；discover 发现；explore 探索；challenge 挑战；free-time activity 闲暇活动；rewarding 值得的，有回报的；focused 专注的；confidence 自信 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【审题指导】 动笔之前，我们先来理清这篇作文的写作要点： 1. 人称： 本文要求介绍自己的爱好，因此应以第一人称"我"为主进行叙述。用"I"来讲述自己的经历、感受和收获。 2. 时态： ①介绍自己的爱好是什么、为什么喜欢、有什么收获——这些是一般情况，用一般现在时。 ②.讲述自己如何开始这个爱好、初学时的经历——这些是过去发生的事情，用一般过去时。 ③描述正在进行的动作（如"当我画画时"）——可用过去进行时或一般现在时。 3. 内容要点： 开头：点明自己的爱好是什么 主体：①如何开始这个爱好；②为什么喜欢；③从中的收获 结尾：总结爱好对自己的意义 4. 写作小技巧： ①运用具体事例让文章更生动（如"有一次我画了一幅画送给妈妈"） ②使用连接词使文章更流畅（First, Also, Besides, In a word等） ③适当运用形容词表达感受（happy, proud, peaceful, confident等） 【谋篇布局】理清文章要素，构建文章结构。 Beginning Hobbies are like ______ to our life. My favourite hobby is ______. Body I started this hobby when I was ______. At first, I ______, but I didn't ______. Now, I enjoy ______ because ______. I find it fun to ______. Ending This hobby not only ______ but also ______. It makes me feel ______ every time I do it. 【遣词造句】就结构图中的要点完成句子。 1. 爱好如同生活中的阳光。 Hobbies are like ______ to our life. 2. 我最喜欢的爱好是阅读。 My favourite hobby is ______. 3. 起初，我觉得很难理解书中的内容，但我没有放弃。 At first, I ______, but I didn't ______. 4. 这个爱好不仅让我放松，还教会我很多道理。 This hobby not only ______ but also ______. 参考答案： 1. sunshine 2. reading 3. found it hard to understand the stories; give up 4. helps me relax; teaches me many lessons 【参考范文】 My Hobby Hobbies are like sunshine to our life. They bring us joy and help us relax after a busy day. My favourite hobby is reading. I started this hobby when I was seven years old. My mother gave me a picture book as a birthday gift, and I fell in love with it. At first, I found it hard to understand the stories, but I didn't give up. I kept reading every day. Now, I enjoy reading all kinds of books, such as storybooks, science books and history books. I find it fun to explore different worlds through words. When I read, I feel like I am travelling to faraway places and meeting interesting people. This hobby not only helps me relax but also teaches me many lessons. It makes me feel happy and confident every time I open a book. 【范文赏析】 这篇范文结构清晰，语言流畅，值得同学们学习： 1. 开头精彩： "Hobbies are like sunshine to our life." 运用比喻的修辞手法，形象生动地表达了爱好的重要性。 2. 过渡自然： "I started this hobby when I was seven years old." 用时间状语自然引出爱好的起源。 3. 细节生动： "I find it fun to explore different worlds through words." "I feel like I am travelling to faraway places and meeting interesting people." 通过具体的感受描写，让读者感受到阅读的乐趣。 4. 句式多样： 简单句：My favourite hobby is reading. 复合句：When I read, I feel like I am travelling... 并列句：This hobby not only helps me relax but also teaches me many lessons. 5. 词汇亮点： sunshine, joy, relax, fell in love with, give up, explore, faraway, confident 这些词语既简单实用，又能准确表达情感。 【同主题练习题目】 练习一 题目： My Favourite Free-time Activity 提示： · 你最喜欢的闲暇活动是什么？ · 你通常什么时候做这件事？和谁一起做？ · 为什么喜欢做这件事？它给你带来了什么？ 要求： 词数80-100词，人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 练习二 题目： A Hobby That Makes Me Happy 提示： · 介绍一个让你快乐的爱好 · 你是如何开始这个爱好的？ · 描述一次让你印象深刻的经历 · 这个爱好对你的生活有什么影响？ 要求： 词数80-100词，注意运用一般过去时讲述开始爱好的经历。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 练习三 题目： Learning a New Skill in My Free Time 提示： · 你在空闲时间学会了什么新技能？ · 学习过程中遇到过什么困难？你是如何克服的？ · 学会这项技能后，你有什么收获和感受？ 要求： 词数80-100词，注意运用"At first... but now..."的结构对比前后的变化。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 练习四 题目： My Hobby and Me 提示： · 你的爱好是什么？ · 这个爱好对你来说有什么特别的意义？ · 如果没有这个爱好，你的生活会有什么不同？ 要求： 词数80-100词，尝试运用比喻的修辞手法，让文章更生动。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 Time to Relax 【参考范文一】 My Favourite Free-time Activity My favourite free-time activity is swimming. I usually go swimming with my father on weekends. I love swimming because it makes me feel like a fish in the water. When I swim, I forget all about my homework. It helps me relax and stay healthy. Last summer, I learned to swim freestyle, and I felt so proud. Swimming not only keeps me fit but also gives me confidence. Every time I finish swimming, I feel fresh and happy. 【好句积累与解析】 1. I love swimming because it makes me feel like a fish in the water. · 解析： 运用比喻手法，生动形象地表达出游泳时的自由和快乐。 · 仿写： I love reading because it makes me feel like a traveller in different worlds. 2. Swimming not only keeps me fit but also gives me confidence. · 解析： not only... but also... 结构连接两个并列的好处，使表达更有力。 · 仿写： Reading not only brings me joy but also opens my mind. 3. Every time I finish swimming, I feel fresh and happy. · 解析： Every time引导时间状语从句，强调每次活动后的感受。 · 仿写： Every time I finish reading, I feel peaceful and satisfied. 【参考范文二】 A Hobby That Makes Me Happy A hobby that makes me happy is baking. I started it when I was ten. My grandmother taught me to make cookies. At first, I often made mistakes. Some cookies were too hard, others burnt. But my grandma said, "Try again!" Now I can bake cakes and bread. I love mixing flour, eggs and sugar together. One day I baked a cake for my mother. Seeing her happy face made me proud. Baking brings me joy and teaches me to be patient. 【好句积累与解析】 1. A hobby that makes me happy is baking. · 解析： that引导定语从句，修饰hobby，使表达更丰富。 · 仿写： A hobby that helps me relax is reading. 2. At first, I often made mistakes. But I didn't give up. · 解析： 用At first和But形成对比，突出坚持的重要性。 · 仿写： At first, I found it hard. But I kept practising. 3. Seeing her happy face made me proud. · 解析： 动名词短语Seeing...作主语，表达具体事例带来的感受。 · 仿写： Hearing their words made me warm inside. 【参考范文三】 Learning a New Skill in My Free Time Last year, I learned to play the guitar in my free time. I always loved music, so I decided to try it. At first, I found it hard to press the strings. My fingers hurt, and I couldn't play well. But I didn't give up. I practised every day after school. Now, I can play many songs. This hobby brings me joy. When I play the guitar, I feel relaxed. It also teaches me that practice makes perfect. 【好句积累与解析】 1. I always loved music, so I decided to try it. · 解析： so连接因果关系的两个句子，交代学习动机。 · 仿写： I always loved drawing, so I decided to learn painting. 2. At first, I found it hard to... But I didn't give up. · 解析： 对比初学困难和坚持态度，体现成长过程。 · 仿写： At first, I found it hard to mix colours. But I didn't give up. 3. It teaches me that practice makes perfect. · 解析： 引用英语谚语，总结收获，提升文章深度。 · 仿写： It teaches me that where there is a will, there is a way. 【参考范文四】 My Hobby and Me My hobby is collecting stamps. I started when I was eight. My father gave me his old stamp album. Each stamp tells a story about a country or a famous person. When I look at them, I feel like I am travelling around the world. I also made friends with other stamp collectors. Without this hobby, my life would be less colourful. It teaches me to see beauty in small things. I will keep collecting stamps. 【好句积累与解析】 1. Each stamp tells a story about a country or a famous person. · 解析： 运用拟人手法，赋予邮票生命力，表达生动。 · 仿写： Each photo tells a story about my family and our happy times. 2. When I look at them, I feel like I am travelling around the world. · 解析： When引导时间状语从句，feel like表达想象和感受。 · 仿写： When I read books, I feel like I am meeting different people. 3. It teaches me to see beauty in small things. · 解析： 点明爱好的深层意义，升华主题。 · 仿写： It teaches me to find joy in everyday life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $