Unit 4 写作专项：Introducing a Role Model 2025-2026学年北师大版八年级英语上册

北师大版英语八年级上册 Unit 4 写作专项 Introducing a Role Model 一、写作目标 结合本单元“榜样人物、反身代词、Verb + v-ing、used to”的核心目标，能写一篇短文介绍身边的榜样，内容包括：人物身份、优秀品质、具体事例以及对自己的影响。 1. 能正确使用反身代词（myself, yourself, himself, herself, themselves）和 Verb + v-ing 结构，并用 used to 描述过去的习惯。 2. 能运用本单元与人物品质相关的词汇（如cheerful, patient, hard-working, helpful）描述榜样的特点。 3. 遵循“总-分-总”的三段式结构，语言真挚、条理清晰，字数控制在80-120词，贴合八年级上册日常写作场景。 二、题目解析 1. 体裁：记叙文（短文），用于介绍身边的榜样人物，语气真挚、侧重叙事与评价。 2. 人称：主要使用第三人称（she, he, my mum）描述榜样，用第一人称（I）表达个人感受。 3. 时态：核心使用一般现在时描述人物品质，用一般过去时叙述具体事例。 4. 核心要求 · 内容：写清榜样是谁、他/她的优秀品质、具体事例，以及从他/她身上学到的东西。 · 格式：包含开头（点明榜样）、正文（具体事例）、结尾（影响与愿望）三部分，结构完整。 · 字数：80-120词，合理运用反身代词、Verb + v-ing和used to，贴合单元语法要求。 三、典型例题 你要为“People and Us”论坛写一篇文章，介绍身边的一位榜样。请你写一篇短文，介绍这位榜样。 要点： 1. 你的榜样是谁？ 2. 你为什么敬佩他/她？（他/她有哪些优秀品质？） 3. 你从他/她身上学到了什么？ 四、思路点拨 1. 第一段（开头）：用“My mum is my role model. She’s always cheerful about life, and makes herself an amazing person both at home and at work.”点明榜样，并总述其优秀品质。 2. 第二段（正文）：分别从家庭和工作两个方面，用具体事例（照顾家人、完成困难任务）来支撑前面提到的品质，如耐心、乐于助人、勤奋好学。 3. 第三段（结尾）：用“I’m lucky to have such a role model around me. Mum shows me how to be a positive person both at home and at work. I want to be just like her when I grow up.”总结自己的感受和愿望，升华主题。 五、写作模板（逐段拆解，贴合单元目标） 第一段：开头（点明榜样 + 总述品质） 写作目的：引出话题，总述人物特点。 必写要素：榜样身份 + 核心品质 基础句式：[人物] is my role model. She’s/He’s always [品质] about life, and makes [反身代词] an amazing person both at home and at work. 示例：My mum is my role model. She’s always cheerful about life, and makes herself an amazing person both at home and at work. 第二段：正文（具体事例 + 品质支撑） 写作目的：用具体事例证明人物品质，使文章更有说服力。 必写要素：家庭事例 + 工作事例 + 品质 基础句式：At home, she takes care of our family with great love. To me, she is [品质]. At work, she is always [品质]. When there is a difficult task, she never says “no”. Instead, she thinks of creative ways to complete it. 示例：At home, she takes care of our family with great love. To me, Mum is patient. At work, she is always helpful. When there is a difficult task, she never says “no”. Instead, she thinks of creative ways to complete it. 第三段：结尾（影响与愿望） 写作目的：总结全文，表达个人感受和未来的愿望。 必写要素：个人感受 + 学到的东西 + 愿望 基础句式：I’m lucky to have such a role model around me. [榜样] shows me how to be a [品质] person. I want to be just like him/her when I grow up. 示例：I’m lucky to have such a role model around me. Mum shows me how to be a positive person. I want to be just like her when I grow up. 六、范文（中英对照 ） My Role Model My mum is my role model. She’s always cheerful about life, and makes herself an amazing person both at home and at work. At home, she takes care of our family with great love. To me, she is patient and always listens to me when I need to talk. At work, she is helpful and easy to work with. When there is a difficult task, she never says “no”. I’m lucky to have such a role model around me. Mum shows me how to be a positive person. I admire her a lot and I want to be just like her when I grow up. 中文翻译 我的榜样 我的妈妈是我的榜样。她对生活总是充满热情，无论是在家里还是在工作中，都努力让自己成为一个了不起的人。 在家里，她用满满的爱照顾我们一家人。对我来说，她很有耐心，在我需要倾诉时总是认真倾听。在工作中，她乐于助人，也很容易相处。当遇到困难的任务时，她从不说“不”。 我很幸运身边有这样一位榜样。妈妈教会了我如何做一个积极向上的人。我非常敬佩她，长大后我也想成为像她一样的人。 七、素材积累 短语 1. be cheerful about life 对生活充满热情 2. take care of our family 照顾我们一家人 3. listen to me 倾听我 4. be easy to work with 容易相处 5. a difficult task 困难的任务 6. think of creative ways 想出有创意的方法 7. stay updated with knowledge 跟上知识更新 8. be a positive person 做一个积极向上的人 基础句型 基础句型 仿写句子 My mum is my role model. My teacher is my role model. She’s always cheerful about life. He’s always hard-working at school. When there is a difficult task, she never says “no”. When I have problems, he always helps me. I want to be just like her when I grow up. I want to be a doctor when I grow up. 好句集锦 1. She’s always cheerful about life, and makes herself an amazing person both at home and at work.（她对生活总是充满热情，无论是在家里还是在工作中，都努力让自己成为一个了不起的人。） 2. To me, she is patient and always listens to me when I need to talk.（对我来说，她很有耐心，在我需要倾诉时总是认真倾听。） 3. I’m lucky to have such a role model around me. Mum shows me how to be a positive person.（我很幸运身边有这样一位榜样。妈妈教会了我如何做一个积极向上的人。） 谚语 1. A good example is the best sermon.（身教胜于言教。） 2. Like mother, like daughter.（有其母必有其女。） 3. The best way to predict the future is to create it.（预测未来的最好方法是创造未来。） 4. Actions speak louder than words.（行动胜于言语。） 八、学生写作填空练习版 My Role Model [人物，如My dad] is my role model. He’s always [品质，如hard-working] about life, and makes [反身代词，如himself] an amazing person both at home and at work. At home, he [行动，如helps me with my studies] with great love. To me, he is [品质，如patient] and always [行动，如encourages me] when I need help. At work, he is [品质，如responsible] and never [行动，如gives up] when there is a difficult task. I’m lucky to have such a role model around me. [人物] shows me how to be a [品质，如responsible] person. I admire him a lot and I want to be just like him when I grow up. ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $