内容正文:
Section IV
Writing
写作方
写作指导
刻画人物形象的文章,属于记叙文范畴,可
以描写人的生平、简介、性格及某些方面的特点。
在写这类文章时,通常以事件为载体,通过一件
或几件事的描述来突出中心以及所描写人物的
某种品质。
一、基本结构
这类文章的常见结构为:“三段式”结构,即
简要刻画人物形象,再描述人物故事情节,最后
对主题升华,定性人物性格结局。
二、常用表达
1.The book by Oscar Wilde tells the story of
Dorian Gray.
奥斯卡·王尔德的书讲述了多里安·格雷
的故事。
2.He is a very handsome young man who
spends his life only concerned with his own
pleasure,regardless of the suffering he brings to
others.
他是一个非常英俊的年轻人,他一生只关心
自己的快乐,而不管他给别人带来的痛苦。
3.The story starts with young Dorian having
his portrait painted.
这个故事从年轻的多里安的肖像画开始。
4.Dorian wishes he could remain young and
good-looking always,with his portrait growing old
instead of him.
多里安希望他能永远保持年轻和英俊,他的
肖像越来越老,而不是他。
5.Soon afterwards,Dorian is surprised to find
his wish has come true,after he meets Sybil,an
innocent actress who falls in love with him.
不久之后,多里安惊讶地发现,他的愿望已
经实现,在他遇到西比尔,一个纯真女演员爱上
了他之后。
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文学名著中的经典形象
法指导
6.When he learns that Sybil has killed
herself,Dorian finds his face in the painting has
taken on a cruel look.
当他得知西比尔自杀时,多里安发现他在画
中的脸呈现出一种残酷的表情。
7.He hides the painting away so that no one
else may see it.
他把画藏起来,免得别人看见。
8.In the story,what matters most to Dorian
Gray is that he is good-looking,not that he has a
good heart.
在故事中,多里安·格雷最重要的是他长得
很好看,而不是他有一颗善良的心。
9.He sacrifices his true self in pursuit of
physical beauty and pleasure,which leads to his
destruction in the end.
他为了追求身体的美和快乐而牺牲自己的
真实自我,这最终导致了他的毁灭。
实战演练
假如你是李华,最近英语老师要求学生们阅
读一些英语文学作品并在班上进行介绍和交流。
根据你所阅读的Antoine de Saint--Exupery的《小
王子》的要点,写一篇英文介绍。
1.小王子来自星球B-612,在宇宙中寻找友
谊和真相;
2.小王子首先在B-328遇到贪婪的商人,一
心想把宇宙中的星星都据为己有。在地球上遇
到小狐狸,并且告诉他用内心去寻找真相;
3.本书的主题是友谊和真理。
要求:1.词数120左右;
2.故事情节过渡合理,有逻辑性。
一、审题构思
1.确定体裁:本文为记叙文中的书评;
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称为第三人称;
3.确定时态:以一般现在时为主。
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二、谋篇布局
第一段:作品的一般介绍;
第二段:作品的主要情节;
第三段:作品的中心主题。
三、组织语言
1.核心词汇
(1)characteristic特性,特色
(2)eventually最后;终于
(3)count计算,数
(4)belong to属于
(5)symbol象征
(6)obsessed迷住
(7)focus on关注
(8)essential基本的
(9)invisible看不见的
(10)inner内心的
2.高级句式
(1)他从行星B-612出发,穿越宇宙来到许
多不同的行星,在那里他遇到了许多具有不同特
征的成年人,然后最终到达地球并遇到了一只狐
狸。(动词-ing形式作状语;where定语从句;
before时间状语从句)
Coming from the planet B-612,he journeys
through the universe to many different planets
where he meets a number of adults with different
characteristics,before he eventually arrives on
Earth and meets a fox.
(2)这个商人非常忙碌,他把所有的时间都
花在数他认为属于他的星星上。(who定语从
句;that定语从句)
The businessman is very busy,who spends all
his time counting the stars that he believes belong
to him.
(3)我们意识到,商人是人类贪婪的象征,
因为他想拥有所有的星星,所以痴迷于数它们。
(that宾语从句;because原因状语从句)
We realise that the businessman is a symbol of
human greed,because he wants to own all the stars
and so is obsessed with counting them all.
(4)只有当小王子在地球上遇到狐狸时,他
才意识到寻找“真相”的重要性。(强调句型;
when时间状语从句)
It is only when the Little Prince meets the fox
on Earth that he realises the importance of
searching for the“tuth”.
(5)狐狸告诉小王子“本质的东西是眼晴看
不见的”,你必须闭上你的外眼,用你的内眼去寻
找真相。(that宾语从句;what主语从句)
The fox tells the Little Prince that "what is
essential is invisible to the eye"and you have to
close your outer eyes and use your inner eyes to
find the truth.
(6)因此,正是通过小王子的旅程,我们也
开始意识到什么才是真正的“真理”。(强调句
型)》
It is therefore through the Little Prince's
journey that we too come to realise what is the real
“truth”
四、连句成文
夯基提能作业
请同学们认真完成练案[4]
素养等级测评
请同学们认真完成考案(一)重点句式
①to worry about②to get on with people③to live in
单元语法精析
语法达标训练
①That②Whether③Which④Where/When⑤what
⑥Whoever⑦Who⑧Why⑨Where 1Othat
①that②What 1Whoever④What⑤Who
随堂达标验收
I.1.psychology 2.welfare 3.finding
4.assumption 5.sensitive
Ⅱ.1.that众所周知,这些坚持传统饮食习惯的人数在缓慢下
降,并且大约有一半的英国消费者在某种程度上愿意改变或
者提高他们的烹饪技巧。
2.Where where引导主语从句,并在从句中作状语,表示“在某
处”。句意:李白,一位伟大的中国诗人,出生的地方是众所周
知的,但有些人不会接受它。
3.What我们发现的是仅从外表判断你吃了什么是不明智的。
4.whether句中it是形式主语,真正的主语是后面的从句。句
中的not a problem暗示空格处是“是否”的意思,故用whether
引导主语从句。句意:我们能否打赢这场战争不是问题,它只
是时间问题。
5.What what引导主语从句,并在从句中作宾语。句意:你需要
的是一个允许你犯错的好老师。
6.whoever whoever引导主语从句,并在从句中作主语,表示“无
论谁”。句意:每年,在风筝节上风筝做得最漂亮的人会赢得
奖品。
7.Whatever whatever引导主语从句,并在从句中作宾语,表示
“无论什么”。句意:你的支持对我们的工作很重要。无论你
能做什么,都会(对我们)有帮助。
8.Itit是形式主语,that引导主语从句。句意:通常情况下,对
于那些心存希望的人来说,一切皆有可能。
9.How how引导主语从句,并在从句中作状语,表示“如何”。
句意:我们如何理解事物与我们的感觉有很大关系。
l0.that It is reported that..意为“据报道…”,it是形式主
语,hat从句是真正的主语。句意:据报道,在一些西方国家,
76%的员工在工作中使用表情符号。
Section II Developing ideas Presenting ideas
课前自主预习
I.1.novelist 2.predicament 3.graceful 4.repulsive 5.defect
6.comprehension 7.melancholy 8.exclaim 9.heartfelt
10.compassion 11.exquisite 12.accent 13.utter 14.immense
15.resemble 16.savage 17.heartbreaking 18.expression
19.profound 20.motive
II.1.out of mercy 2.be sentenced to death 3.adjust to
4.in any case 5.feel a pity for 6.keep sth.at bay
7.regardless of 8.come true 9.take on 10.in pursuit of
IlI.1.the first to break 2.as though hesitating
3.There lay 4.Never have I viewed my ugliness
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W.(-)1.C2.A3.A4.B
()1.silently 2.comprehension 3.for 4.ugliness
5.resembled 6.a 7.what 8.to kidnap 9.words 10.making
课内要点探究
核心词汇
①express my sincere thanks②express herself
③beyond expression
重,点短语
l.①merciful②to③on④at the mercy of
⑤begging for mercy⑥It was a merey that
2.①living②to③adjusting to living in
④adjust herself to
3.Din case you forget to buy 2is anyone allowed to
4.①to②with/to
③compared句子的主语film与compare之间是被动关系,所
以要用过去分词形式。
④comparing句子的主语we与compare之间是主动关系,所
以要用现在分词形式。
⑤Compared with/to
5.①to get②to break③to join④to persuade⑤inan
attempt 6at the first attempt
重点句式
l.①to read②todo③to bear to enjoy
④to exchange⑤todo⑥to say
7had no chance to go to school
8the first person to think of the idea
⑨to put the things in
2.①living(②accepted(③left④waiting
⑤invited⑥doing⑦to say
难句分析
①C②do I go shopping by taxi,unless it rains
3have I read such an exciting report before
随堂达标验收
I.1.predicament 2.melancholy 3.exclaimed 4.compassion
5.immense
II.1.is desperate for 2.in pursuit of 3.adjust to
4.had mercy on
IlI.1.There stands 2.as she said 3.Never before has she seen
anyone 4.It is John who is to blame
Section IV
Writing-一文学名著中的经典形象
连句成文
参考范文:
The Little Prince by Antoine de Saint-Exupery is a magical
book about the importance of friendship and the search for the truth.
Coming from the planet B-612,he journeys through the universe to
many different planets where he meets a number of adults with
different characteristics,before he eventually arrives on Earth and
meets a fox.
Along the way he meets the businessman on planet B-328.The
businessman is very busy,who spends all his time counting the stars
that he believes belong to him.We realise that the businessman is a
symbol of human greed,because he wants to own all the stars and so
is obsessed with counting them all.He focuses on material things.It
is only when the Little Prince meets the fox on Earth that he realises
the importance of searching for the "truth".The fox tells the Little
Prince that"what is essential is invisible to the eye"and you have to
close your outer eyes and use your inner eyes to find the truth.
It is therefore through the Little Prince's journey that we too
come to realise what is the real“truth”.
Unit 2 A life's work
Section I Starting out Understanding ideas
课前自主预习
I.1.lens 2.pose 3.grocery 4.fascination 5.fashion
6.uncomplicated 7.faraway 8.celebrity 9.craft 10.anthropologist
II.1.nothing more than 2.pose for 3.have a fascination with/for
sth.4.belong to 5.put into 6.regardless of 7.an approach to
8.focus on 9.passion for 10.pass away
II.1.no matter how 2.it was within their reality that Cunningham
saw both beauty and potential
V.(-)A(二)1.C2.D3.B4.D
()1.whom 2.nor 3.On 4.inspiration
5.buying 6.which 7.that 8.that 9.living 10.focused
课内要点探究
核心词汇
l.①come into fashion②in fashion③have gone out of fashion
4Those who like following (the)fashion find what they have
thought fashionable out of fashion soon
2.①Devoted②studying devotion③devoted himself raising
devotion④devote yourself to do用来加强语气,强调谓语
动词。
3.①approaches②approaching③expressing④to
⑤approaching⑥took the wrong approach⑦the best approach to
4.①遵守②观察③看到④庆祝⑤playing
⑥togo⑦eaten⑧observation
重点短语
1.①nothing more than②nothing less than③no more than
(④no less than
2.①belongs to②belonging③belonging④belongings⑤to
3.①脱下②起飞③开始成功④休假⑤taking off
4.①escape②ride to ride③are④rather than go out to
communicate with others face to face
重点句式
①how②what③However//No matter how hard you try
④No matter where,/Wherever he is⑤whatever⑥Whatever
⑦whoever⑧whenever⑨However
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难句分析
①that②gives③that④lt⑤was⑥it was that/who
随堂达标验收
I.1.grocery 2.posed 3.fashion 4.celebrity
II.1.ranging 2.off 3.teaching 4.observation observed
5.into 6.for 7.how 8.that 9.to 10.to
IlI.1.we have a wide range of choices 2.came into fashion among
rich people 3.With Earth Day approaching/As Earth Day
approached 4.to start early rather than leave everything 5.The
man was observed to enter
Section II Using language
课前自主预习
I.1.trial 2.craftsmanship 3.atomic 4.acclaim 5.shun
6.spotlight 7.harsh 8.prosperous
II.1.by trial and error 2.be crucial to 3.allow for
4.contribute to 5.a combination of 6.respect for
7.participate in 8.be awarded for 9.devote oneself to
10.back down 11.keep on 12.the cutting edge (of sth.)
13.think outside the box 14.break new ground
15.be experienced in 16.a crack hand at doing sth.
17.seek no fame 18.shun the spotlight
IlI.1.that 2.when 3.where 4.whether 5.who 6.why
课内要点探究
核心词汇
①on trial②on trial③at④inm⑤under⑥on⑦under
重点短语
l.①contribution②to③a
2.①back out②backed up③back out
3.①break in②breaking down③break away from
重点句式
①with your mouth full(②with his head down
③with tears in her eyes④with the door locked
难句分析
①in which②about which③to which
单元语法精析
语法达标训练
①that②what③when④what⑤where⑥that⑦that
⑧whether⑨how
随堂达标验收
I.1.trial 2.craftsmanship 3.Atomic 4.shunned 5.harsh
6.prosperous
II.1.prosperous 2.harshly 3.the 4.outside 5.for 6.to
7.going
IlI.1.who could lead them to get rid of poverty
2.whether we will go for an outing tomorrow 3.as if I couldn't think
of the right word 4.why we can't get the support of the others
5.who we can get to replace her
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