内容正文:
读后续写技首
一、高级词汇
1.bravery n.勇敢
2.challenge u./n.挑战
3.obstacle n.障碍
4.overcome u.克服
5.perseverance n.毅力;不屈不挠的精神
6.determination n.决心
7.conquer v.克服;攻克
二、高级语块
l.hardly wait to do sth.迫不及待地想做某事
2.without a second thought不假思索;毫不犹豫
3.hoping that希望…
4.see/feel a glimmer of hope看到一丝希望
5.breathe a sigh of relief松了一口气
6.to one's relief使某人欣慰/放心的是
7.but in vain但白费力气/徒劳
8.go through经历
9.be faced with面对
三、亮点句式
1.But what happened next was purely magic.
但接下来发生的非常奇妙。
2.I never thought that my little act of kindness
should light her up greatly,which,indeed,
encouraged me to carry on spreading kindness
under any circumstance.
我从来没有想过我的一个小小的善举会给她
带来巨大的鼓舞,这确实鼓励了我在任何情况
下都要继续传播善良。
3.With a burning desire to succeed,he pushed
himself to the limits and never gave up,even
when things got tough.
怀着对成功的强烈渴望,他将自己推向极限,
即使情况变得艰难,他也从未放弃。
4.Staying focused and persistent,he was able to
turn his weaknesses into strengths and achieved
great success in his career.
保持专注和坚持,他能够将自己的弱点转化为
优势,并在职业生涯中取得巨大成功:
5.Despite being told that he would never make it,
he remained resolute in his pursuit of success
and proved his critics wrong.
尽管被告知他永远不会成功,但他仍然坚定地
追求成功,并证明他的批评者是错误的。
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能之奋斗动志
6.With a clear vision of what she wanted to
achieve,she worked tirelessly to make it
happen,never losing sight of her goals.
她对自己想要实现的目标有着清晰的愿景,
她不知疲倦地努力工作来实现它,从未忘记
自己的目标。
7.Learning from her mistakes and remaining
resilient,she was able to achieve success in the
face of adversity.
她从错误中吸取教训并保持韧性,因此她能
够在逆境中取得成功。
8.With an unwavering commitment to excellence,
she worked tirelessly to achieve her goals,never
settling for mediocrity.
凭借对卓越的坚定追求,她不知疲倦地努力工
作来实现自己的目标,从不满足于平庸。
●情境应用
I.完成句子
1.直到那时,我才意识到,是勇敢才能克服一切
困难。
Only then did I realize that
could conquer whatever difficulty
came in the way.
2.无论生活中遇到什么困难,你都可以从书籍中
找到解决办法。
No matter
you can find solutions in books.
3.结果证明,只要我们保持冷静,就总有办法摆
脱困境。
there's always a way out of any plight
4.成功的道路上充满各种各样的困难和障碍。
The way to success
5.成功其实很简单:当你快要坚持不住的时候,
再坚持一下。
Success is actually simple:When you are about
to fail to hold,you just
Ⅱ.单句写作
1.正是决心和毅力帮助他解决了成功路上的
问题。
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2.不管发生什么,我会坚持追逐我的梦想,竭尽
全力。
3.只要永不放弃和奉献社会,每个人都能成为
个有用的人。
4.凭借对成功的坚定决心,即使面临无数挫折,
她也不知疲倦地朝着自己的目标努力。
5.尽管面临挑战,但是他拒绝放弃,继续朝着自
己的梦想努力。
Ⅲ.语段表达
Chris suffered some terrible illness when he
was born and went through years of regular
treatment.
(是他的父亲鼓励他保持积极(的心态),努力克
服困难).Once when he was suggested to participate
in one challenging race,Chris enthusiastically
replied,“Yes,let's do it!”
(尽管身体不好,他还是完成了极其艰苦的训
)Therefore,when the day of the race finally
arrived,Chris was fully prepared for whatever
would come.Eventually,he succeeded in crossing
the finish line
(如大家期待的
一样).
(克里斯笑了,那些激动人心的话语响亮而清晰
地在耳边回响),“Chris,you are a hero!We are
proud of take pride in you!"
V.片段续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开
头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024·浙江1月卷)
Eva spent the first week of high school trying
to keep her head above water.One of the major
headaches for her was finding her way in the huge
school building.It was a six-story building.On each
floor,hallways stretched in four directions,leading
to classrooms,laboratories,and teachers'offices.
Somewhere in the building,there was also a
library,a cafeteria,and a gym.
Having a poor sense of direction,Eva found it
impossible to get around in such a huge building.
All the different hallways and rooms were too much
to think about,let alone commit to memory.She
decided that she would memorize where her classes
were and then pretend that the rest of the place
didn't exist.
In her first P.E.class,Eva was shocked when
Coach Pitt announced that everyone had to run one
mile around the track outside.She searched the
faces of her classmates for signs of panic.There was
nothing she feared more than having to run a whole
mile.To Eva,“a mile'”was used to describe long
distances.It was ten miles from her home to her
grandfather's,and that always seemed like a long
way,even in a car!
When Coach Pitt blew his whistle(哨子),
Eva figured she would be left in the dust.However,
while some of her classmates edged ahead,others
actually fell behind."It's just the beginning,"she
thought..“I'll come in last for sure.”
Soon Eva began to breathe hard,with her
heart pounding and legs shaking.Feeling
desperate,Eva started using a mind trick on
herself.She stopped thinking about the word
“mile”.Instead,she focused on reaching the
shadow cast on the track by an oak tree up ahead.
Then she concentrated on jogging to the spot where
the track curved(拐弯).After that,.she tried to
see if she could complete her first lap.One lap
turned into two,then three,then four.
When Coach Pitt said“Nice work!”to her at
the finish line,Eva was surprised.In the vast
expanse of her school,a girl with poor directional
skills struggled to navigate and often got lost.One
day,during gym class,she observed a unique way
to find her way-following the shadows of trees.As
the sun cast its rays,the girl noticed how the
shadows created patterns on the ground,guiding
her path.She took a leap of faith and followed the
shadows,surprising herself with each turn and
stretch.Her efforts were noticed by the teacher,
who praised her innovative thinking.
注意:
续写词数应为100个左右。
单元
I.词汇评价
l.extend vt.扩展;使伸长;延长;伸出;提供,
给予
extend the life of
拓展到/延伸到…
extend one's gratitude/thanks to sb.
n.延长,延伸,扩展
ad山.广阔的;广泛的;巨大的
2.negotiate vt..商定;达成(协议)vi.谈判;磋商;
协商
negotiate trade deals
negotiate with sb.about/over/for sth.
通过谈判使某人做某事
n.协商,谈判
under negotiation
和…协商中
3.league n.等级;水平;联合会;联赛
in a league of one's own
in a different league from sb.
和…联合,和…勾结
in the same league
out of sb.'s league
4.withdraw vi.vt.withdrew,withdrawn)
(使)撤回;撤离
退出,撤回
withdraw sth.from
撤退到
5.channel n.航道;海峡;频道
change/switch channels
the active channel
the English Channel
channel v.
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Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with
the school building.
评价
6.bond n.纽带;关系vt.&i.增强信任关系;使
牢固结合
a/an...bond
a bond between A and B
增强与某人的信任关系;建立与
某人的互信关系
紧密结合
7.mixture n.混合;结合体;混合物
的混合体
mix ..
把…与…混合
mix...up with...
.使混合相协调;相容;调配;
配制
ad.混合的;混杂的
mixed feelings
8.applaud vt..&i.鼓掌vt.称赞;赞赏
为…鼓掌/喝彩
n.鼓掌;掌声
gain one's applause
burst into thunderous/storming applause
9.meanwhile ad,.与此同时
meanwhile
ad.同时n.其时
in the meanwhile
(与此)同时
I0.exploit vt.开发;利用;剥削
exploit sth.to do sth.
exploit sb.with sth.
n.开发;利用;剥削
n.开发者;剥削者
11.mercy n.仁慈;宽恕;恩惠
at the mercy of
仁慈地/无情地
show mercy to sb.
have mercy
sb.怜悯某人
a山.仁慈的;宽容的六、连句成篇
Is it necessary for humans to explore oceans?
I am in favor of the view that it is essential for humans to
explore oceans.
Firstly,it can establish the basic information needed to
better understand environmental change,which helps scientists
to address current situations and to predict the future situations
that may emerge.Moreover,it can also give us knowledge about
what are available in oceans,how the life forms live,and find
out how humans can survive down there or make good use of the
deep-sea resources.In addition,it can help us keep track of the
climate changes that happen to the ocean and what might affect
our life.
In sum,sea exploration will be of great benefit to humans
读后续写技能之奋斗励志
情境应用
I.1.it was bravery that
2.what difficulties you meet with in life
3.It turns out that as long as we stay calm
4.is full of various difficulties and obstacles
5.need to hold on a little longer
II.1.It was determination and perseverance that helped him solve
the problems on his way to success.
2.No matter what happens I will insist on chasing my dream and
making every effort.
3.Everyone can be a useful person only if he doesn't give up and
does something for society.
4.With a strong determination to succeed,she worked tirelessly
towards her goals,even when faced with numerous setbacks.
5.Despite the challenges that lay ahead,he refused to give up
and continued to strive towards his dreams.
IlI.It was his father who encouraged him to stay positive and work
hard to overcome his difficulties
Despite his poor health,he managed to complete the training
which was extremely tough
as expected
Chris smiled,with those exciting words ringing loud and clear
IV.One possible version:
Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school
building.She used the shadows to navigate the school hallways,
find her classes,and even locate the school's various facilities.
This newfound skill not only helped the girl navigate her school
but also instilled in her a sense of confidence and adventure.She
learned excitedly that with a little creativity and observation,any
challenge could be overcome.And with each step she took,she
left behind a legacy of inspiration for those who followed in her
footsteps,knowing that even without a clear sense of direction,
there's always a way to find one's way.
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思路点拨:
1.通读全文,把握原文要领
(1)体裁:记叙文
(2)故事主线和线索:
①高中生Eva因为方向感不强,经常在学校里迷路,在
一次体育课上教练要求他们沿着校园跑步的时候,Ev发现
跟着树的影子能找到方向,她就跟着树影一圈圈地跑着。
②续写线索:方向感太差记不住学校建筑的位置—体
育课上绕着学校跑却找不到方向一害怕是最后一名心里
非常紧张—跟随影子找到方向—受到教练的赞赏—一
获得感悟
2.细读段首句,推测故事情节
由续写段首句内容“Ev决定用同样的手段来记住学校
大楼。”可知,本段可描写Eva通过记住影子的方法来记住学
校大楼及这件事之后的感悟。
单元评价
I.l.延长…的寿命extend to...
向某人表示感谢
extension extensive
2.谈判贸易协议就/为某事与某人谈判/协商
negotiate sb.into doing sth.negotiation正在商谈中
in negotiation with
3.独领风骚与某人不属于同一层次/级别in league with
同一档次/等级不在某人的能力范围内
4.withdraw from从…中提出某物withdraw to
5.转换频道活跃的通道或航道英吉利海峡传送;引导
6.一种…的关系A与B之间的关系bond with sb.
bond together
7.a mixture of with/and把…和…混淆;误以为…
是.mix mixed复杂的感情
8.applaud for applause赢得某人的掌声爆发出雷鸣般
的掌声
9.meantime in the meantime
10.利用某事做某事用…剥削某人exploitation
explorer
1l.任…摆布with/without mercy同情某人
on merciful to merciless
12.拥有;占有被…拥有/占有take possession of
13.因(做)某事逮捕某人(因…而)被逮捕
吸引某人的注意力arrested
I.1.set sail2.独领风骚3.under the command of
4.拓展;伸出5.for the benefit of6.withdraw from
7.in hand8.press conference9.形成…的基础
10.增强…和…的联系11.从一个…的角度来看
12.tell apart 13.take a picture of 14.mean doing sth.
15.be home to...16.take action 17.vast amounts of
18.使…流人19.搜寻,寻找20.残忍地;毫不留情地
21.记录新物种22.有更多选择